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Daniel Borealis
Minmatar Rionnag Alba Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2009.03.26 23:17:00 -
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Edited by: Daniel Borealis on 26/03/2009 23:20:00 Edited by: Daniel Borealis on 26/03/2009 23:18:42
Making a movie? Writing a guide? English not your first language? Scottish?
- What to do: Send me the dialogue of the movie/guide/project. I will proofread it and send it back.
- Cost: Whatever you think is appropriate. Be generous :D
- Reason: I'm tired of seeing badly structured sentences in the movies I download, because it takes away from the quality of the project.
How/Where to send the dialogue/script: If the dialogue is relatively short, send to this character in game using the EVE mail system. I will promptly reply or convo if online. If the guide/script is too long for that, upload it to a hosting site (such as eve-files) and link it to me in an EVE mail. I will proofread it and host my own version, linking it back.
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Daniel Borealis
Minmatar Rionnag Alba Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2009.03.26 23:19:00 -
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*reserved
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2Bad4Ux2
Dark Star Cartel Molotov Coalition
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Posted - 2009.03.27 00:39:00 -
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/me takes pride in me badly formed sentence strukshure and speeling. TBH wtf needs gud grammer n werds. Wee shoot intranet space vessicles w/ imajinery beems of lite. IMO of course. ------- UTS!(New) WB2A! OOF! W2A!
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Wussie
4S Corporation Morsus Mihi
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Posted - 2009.03.27 00:49:00 -
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I endorse this service and/or product, broken sentences are so 2008. lovesauce |
2Bad4Ux2
Dark Star Cartel Molotov Coalition
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Posted - 2009.03.27 00:56:00 -
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Originally by: Wussie I endorse this service and/or product, broken sentences are so 2008.
/me beleafs that teh former statemint is in fakt 2 cumpleet sentinces, that r put together umproperly n r not good enuff. ------- UTS!(New) WB2A! OOF! W2A!
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Lady Karma
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Posted - 2009.03.27 01:59:00 -
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*grammar
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Gneeznow
North Eastern Swat Pandemic Legion
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Posted - 2009.03.27 02:03:00 -
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Originally by: Lady Karma
*grammar
:superslam:
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Osiris Occido
The Nightshift Rough Necks
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Posted - 2009.03.27 02:20:00 -
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I cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal pweor of the hmuan mnid, aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it deosn't mttaer in waht oredr the ltteers in a wrod are, the olny iprmoatnt tihng is taht the frist and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl mses and you can sitll raed it wouthit a porbelm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Amzanig huh? yaeh and I awlyas tghuhot slpeling was ipmorantt!
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Lady Karma
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Posted - 2009.03.27 02:29:00 -
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Originally by: Osiris Occido I cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal pweor of the hmuan mnid, aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it deosn't mttaer in waht oredr the ltteers in a wrod are, the olny iprmoatnt tihng is taht the frist and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl mses and you can sitll raed it wouthit a porbelm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Amzanig huh? yaeh and I awlyas tghuhot slpeling was ipmorantt!
It does explain dyslexia. There seems to be a second scan for most people, they scan the sentence and understand it, then go back and scan it a second time to be sure of its meaning, in this scan, most people will see the spelling mistakes.
But yes, I managed to read what you wrote in one scan, I have seen that before, and it's amazing how true it is, it also explains how some people read what they want to see ;)
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Daniel Borealis
Minmatar Rionnag Alba Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2009.03.27 05:51:00 -
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Edited by: Daniel Borealis on 27/03/2009 05:54:29 *bump, this is a valid service and not a just a joke (though it's that too :D)
Someone saw the "grammer" you win
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Tsumei Meyren
Creative Cookie Procuring
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Posted - 2009.03.27 15:24:00 -
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I'll bump this, people usually care about their outward appearance, other than when they're doing the "look at my ePeen guys, I can mock the guy who spells nicely" thing~
It's just so original, it makes me bleed internally <3
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seliana tanis
Rionnag Alba Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2009.03.28 11:48:00 -
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Originally by: Lady Karma
*grammar
Bump for DB even though he got owned.
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Rukia KuchikiSan
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Posted - 2009.03.28 14:24:00 -
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Hi rely ton'd ned tis, mi inglesh his perffechkt holreaty.
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Eressa
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Posted - 2009.03.28 15:18:00 -
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Edited by: Eressa on 28/03/2009 15:19:49
Originally by: Lady Karma
But yes, I managed to read what you wrote in one scan, I have seen that before, and it's amazing how true it is, it also explains how some people read what they want to see ;)
Qtiue oouivbs taht one can aallctuy uaennrstdd it. Tshee senenetcs are berokd bescaue the lterets are in a shwmaoet fiiaalmr oedrr. Slitl its pbioessle but alactuly mroe cllnaeihggg if you do ir pplrroey
And biran filas ocne it gtes ssctthpoiiaed
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Daniel Borealis
Minmatar Rionnag Alba Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2009.03.28 22:07:00 -
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Edited by: Daniel Borealis on 28/03/2009 22:10:26 Qtiue oouivbs taht one can aallctuy uaennrstdd it. Tshee senenetcs are berokd bescaue the lterets are in a shwmaoet fiiaalmr oedrr. Slitl its pbioessle but alactuly mroe cllnaeihggg if you do ir pplrroey
And biran filas ocne it gtes ssctthpoiiae ___________________________________________________
Quite obvious that one can actually understand it. The sentences are (broked?) because the letters are in a somewhat similar order. Still it's possible but actually more challenging if you do it properly.
And brain fails once it gets sophisticated.
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Corrected: (First sentence is a bit messy originally, changed) It's quite simple how one can understand it. The sentences are (broked? hrm.. put in-->) comprehensible because the letters are in a somewhat similar order. Still, it's possible but more challenging if done properly. The brains fails once the scrambling of the letters becomes more sophisticated.
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Daniel Borealis
Minmatar Rionnag Alba Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2009.03.28 22:07:00 -
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Payment to this char!
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atrophocy
North Eastern Swat Pandemic Legion
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Posted - 2009.03.28 22:51:00 -
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a serious suggestion about spelling and grammar where grammar is spelt wrong in the title? maybe there's better ways of making isk DB, but you can watch my video if you want, pretty sure i got everything right.
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Daniel Borealis
Minmatar Rionnag Alba Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2009.03.28 22:54:00 -
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diaf atro!!! I've all ready had one person mail me with a bit of dialogue (only 3 lines), and they paid me 2 mil. It's fun and constructive. Translation And Grammar Service
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Daniel Borealis
Minmatar Rionnag Alba Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2009.03.28 22:54:00 -
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oh and I'll check out your vid for sure. Come back to r a : ( Translation And Grammar Service
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Daniel Borealis
Minmatar Rionnag Alba Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2009.03.29 06:14:00 -
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Nice video, there wasn't a lot of text but "myrmidon," "harbinger," and "stabber" were all spelled correctly. That'll be 5 bil. Translation And Grammar Service
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Huyai Tsukurit
Caldari Distillery
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Posted - 2009.03.29 17:39:00 -
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Edited by: Huyai Tsukurit on 29/03/2009 17:43:34
Originally by: Lady Karma
Originally by: Osiris Occido I cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal pweor of the hmuan mnid, aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it deosn't mttaer in waht oredr the ltteers in a wrod are, the olny iprmoatnt tihng is taht the frist and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl mses and you can sitll raed it wouthit a porbelm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Amzanig huh? yaeh and I awlyas tghuhot slpeling was ipmorantt!
It does explain dyslexia. There seems to be a second scan for most people, they scan the sentence and understand it, then go back and scan it a second time to be sure of its meaning, in this scan, most people will see the spelling mistakes.
But yes, I managed to read what you wrote in one scan, I have seen that before, and it's amazing how true it is, it also explains how some people read what they want to see ;)
Having majored in psychology I could explain this, but I can't spell myself so nobody would understand me.
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Daniel Borealis
Minmatar Rionnag Alba Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2009.03.31 00:55:00 -
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Day of Darkness II:
This movie is incredible, superlative, innovative, hell it's divine, but still, here are some grammatical/ changes that would have made it just a tad bit betteer.
Example: Orginal-> Corrected, Changed->
1. ...an extreme right-wing government grabbed the power reins in the gallente federation... --> an extreme right-wing government seized the reins of power of the Gallente Federation. --> Better yet say: An extreme right-wing faction of the government seized control of the Gallente Federation.
2. ..the gallente war machine grinded into gear... --> the Gallente war machine GROUND into gear...
3. ..instead the high command... --> either say just "high command" w/o "the" or say "Caldari High Command"
4. ...soon millions of the caldari... --> soon millions of Caldari. One doesn't say millions of "the Americans", one says millions of "Americans."
5. ...was still on the planet... --> remained on the planet
6. ...gallenteans... --> similar to 4. Say "Gallente."
This movie was no doubt the culmination of a ridiculous amount of work, but these small errors take away slightly from its greatness. Shameless plug for my service, you only need to pay if you feel compelled to do so, I just want to help! :D Translation And Grammar Service
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Daniel Borealis
Minmatar Rionnag Alba Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2009.04.21 21:52:00 -
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Seen a few movies lately that could have really used this service, don't be shy!
Evemail me with script/link etc and I'll do my best to aid you in your endeavours!
ISK is appreciated but not required. I enjoy reading eve related material. Translation And Grammar Service
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Outtou DeGaybarr
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Posted - 2009.04.22 04:05:00 -
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Edited by: Outtou DeGaybarr on 22/04/2009 04:05:52
Originally by: Daniel Borealis Day of Darkness II:
This movie is incredible, superlative, innovative, hell it's divine, but still, here are some grammatical/ changes that would have made it just a tad bit betteer.
grammatical/(why's there a slash here)changes that would have made it just a tad bit better.
I prefer better over betteer to be honest. Would you please pay me isk for proofreading your post?
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Galvin Troupe
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Posted - 2009.04.22 13:05:00 -
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Originally by: atrophocy a serious suggestion about spelling and grammar where grammar is spelt wrong in the title? maybe there's better ways of making isk DB, but you can watch my video if you want, pretty sure i got everything right.
confirming that atro is a gay bear
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Minerva DeMar
All your ISK are belong to us
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Posted - 2009.04.24 15:31:00 -
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all your earnigs are belongs to us |
Ashnazg
Armageddon Day
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Posted - 2009.04.25 17:14:00 -
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Originally by: Outtou DeGaybarr Edited by: Outtou DeGaybarr on 22/04/2009 04:05:52
Originally by: Daniel Borealis Day of Darkness II:
This movie is incredible, superlative, innovative, hell it's divine, but still, here are some grammatical/ changes that would have made it just a tad bit betteer.
grammatical/(why's there a slash here)changes that would have made it just a tad bit better.
I prefer better over betteer to be honest. Would you please pay me isk for proofreading your post?
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Mr Ignitious
R.E.C.O.N. Dara Cothrom
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Posted - 2009.04.27 03:46:00 -
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Originally by: 2Bad4Ux2 vessicles
when i saw this word i lol'd
I read the forums assuming there are no trolls, only really stupid people.
Originally by: CCP Zulupark
WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU?
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