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Aria Kasalovich
Minmatar Assisted Genocide
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Posted - 2010.07.26 17:28:00 -
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Oh, I'm a good ol' rebel Now that's just what I am. For this northern carebear nation I do not give a damn. I'm glad I fought against 'em, I only wish I'd won. I ain't asked any pardon For anything I've done.
I hates the NC nation And everything they do, I hates them Razor bastards in Providence, too; I hates the CVA union Id love to drink their blood And I hates their filthy minions I fought them all I could.
I flew with pink-man Molle and Evil Thug too I popped Darius Johnson and ran his ass through I caughts the rheumatism of camping M-O, But I killed a bunch of Goonies And I'd like to kill some more.
Three hundred thousand NCs float stiff in Southern space We got three hundred thousand Before they all ran back to base They died to southern lasers And southern hulls and shot. I wish they were three millions Instead of what we got.
I can't take up my laser And fight 'em now no more, But I ain't going to love 'em, Now that is certain sure; I don't want no pardon For what I was and am, I won't be reconstructed And I do not give a damn.
signed Me
NOW EVERYBODY SING ALONG!
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stevieisbest
Caldari Pilots Of Honour Aeternus.
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Posted - 2010.07.26 17:50:00 -
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first in a thread that noone cares about
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Sidsolis
Gallente Therapy. Wildly Inappropriate.
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Posted - 2010.07.26 18:00:00 -
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turn it into a WI. thread and then everyone will care about it!
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ChaeDoc II
Gallente Sigillum Militum Xpisti R.A.G.E
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Posted - 2010.07.26 18:21:00 -
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Originally by: Sidsolis turn it into a WI. thread and then everyone will care about it!
suddenly i'm caring a whole lot more for the thread, just as it is.
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Vox Forvana
Amarr BESTIAL CARNAGE Wildly Inappropriate.
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Posted - 2010.07.26 18:54:00 -
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Originally by: Sidsolis turn it into a WI. thread and then everyone will care about it!
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Shamblingform
Gallente Reliables Inc Majesta Empire
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Posted - 2010.07.26 22:25:00 -
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Poasting in a WIDOT. thread!
also 50 days until my CAOD unban, apparently the universe is too big for 2 EVE related magazines!!
German Giggles R
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Darth Kailyn
Minmatar Navy of Xoc Wildly Inappropriate.
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Posted - 2010.07.26 22:27:00 -
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We seriously need jabber alerts for new WIDOT threads....
Just saying
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Proclus Diadochu
Caldari Varion Galactic OWN Alliance
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Posted - 2010.07.27 03:49:00 -
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First of all, your meter is horrendous. Go through each line and calculate the syllables, ensure that the rhythm is correct in accordance with one of the meters, whether you decide iambic, dactylic, or ballad. Those are my recommendations.
Originally by: Aria Kasalovich
For this northern carebear nation
Originally by: Aria Kasalovich
I'm glad I fought against 'em, I only wish I'd won.
Consider the content of your poem, since you should like your poem to flow seamlessly. Writing a line about a ôCarebear Nationö and then a line about you losing to said nation seems to reveal ignorance within the content of your poem, unless your intent was to insult your own internet spaceship skills. This is more a suggestion than an actual critique.
Originally by: Aria Kasalovich
of camping M-O, ... And I'd like to kill some more.
Go through each couplet and ensure the words rhyme. "M-O" and "more" do not rhyme. Try to emulate Snoop, Luda, or Diddy and change the word to moÆ.
That is really all I have to offer this attempt at Troll poetry. Stick with Emo-raging, Aria.
NC <3 BFF
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FOEHAMMER006
Caldari Macabre Votum Morsus Mihi
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Posted - 2010.07.27 05:23:00 -
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Originally by: Aria Kasalovich
Three hundred thousand NCs float stiff in Southern space We got three hundred thousand Before they all ran back to base They died to southern lasers And southern hulls and shot. I wish they were three millions Instead of what we got.
It was funny till this part, were my then smoked out brain couldn't grasp at it. --------------------------------
my posts reflect me. g0t w34d?
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Aria Kasalovich
Minmatar Assisted Genocide
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Posted - 2010.08.01 18:46:00 -
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Yes, of course
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Betty Boom
Caldari SPECTRE Syndicate
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Posted - 2010.09.18 11:47:00 -
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Pretty cool lyrics.
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Daisuke Aoki
Gallente Independent Coalition OWN Alliance
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Posted - 2010.09.18 12:59:00 -
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Edited by: Daisuke Aoki on 18/09/2010 13:07:10 Edited by: Daisuke Aoki on 18/09/2010 12:59:45 I see your poorly-done rebel song spoof, and raise you a poorly-done patriotic song spoof:
If tomorrow all the ships were gone, I'd ground for all my life. And I had to start again, with just my Ibis and my gat,
Id thank my lucky stars, to be flyin' here today. 'Cause NC still stands for BFF, and they can't take that away!
And I'm proud to fly for the NC, where at least I know I'm free. And I wont forget the ships that died, who gave that right to me.
And I gladly sit down, next to you And defend it of my own volition. 'Cause there ain't no doubt I love this space, God bless the Coalition!
From the belts of Branch and Tenal to the pilots of Pure Blind Across the moons of Tribute, From Deklein down to Fade
From Tenal down to Tribute, and from Vale to Geminate. Well there's pride in every Northern pod, and its time we stand and say...
And I'm proud to fly for the NC, where at least I know I'm free. And I wont forget the ships that died, who gave that right to me.
And I gladly sit down, next to you And defend it of my own volition. 'Cause there ain't no doubt I love this space, God bless the Coalition!
Thank you, I'll be here all week
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Spurty
Caldari D00M. Northern Coalition.
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Posted - 2010.09.18 14:07:00 -
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Originally by: Daisuke Aoki Edited by: Daisuke Aoki on 18/09/2010 13:07:35 I see your poorly-done rebel song spoof, and raise you a poorly-done patriotic song spoof:
If tomorrow all the ships were gone, I'd ground for all my life. And I had to start again, with just my Ibis and my gat,
Id thank my lucky stars, to be flyin' here today. 'Cause NC still stands for BFF, and they can't take that away!
And I'm proud to fly for the NC, where at least I know I'm free. And I wont forget the ships that died, who gave that right to me.
And I gladly sit down, next to you And defend it of my own volition. 'Cause there ain't no doubt I love this space, God bless the Coalition!
From the belts of Branch and Tenal to the pilots of Pure Blind Across the moons of Tribute, From Deklein down to Fade
From Tenal down to Tribute, and from Vale to Geminate. Well there's pride in every Northern pod, and its time we stand and say...
And I'm proud to fly for the NC, where at least I know I'm free. And I wont forget the ships that died, who gave that right to me.
And I gladly sit down, next to you And defend it of my own volition. 'Cause there ain't no doubt I love this space, God bless the Coalition!
Thank you, I'll be here all week
Yelp!
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Gistatis Tribunus
Minmatar The Unknown Bar and Pub
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Posted - 2010.09.18 16:31:00 -
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Originally by: Aria Kasalovich Oh, I'm a good ol' rebel Now that's just what I am. For this northern carebear nation I do not give a damn. I'm glad I fought against 'em, I only wish I'd won. I *ain't *asked any pardon For anything I've done.
I *hates the NC nation And everything they do, I *hates *them Razor bastards in Providence, too; I *hates the CVA union *Id love to drink their blood And I *hates their filthy minions I fought them all I could.
I flew with pink-man Molle and Evil Thug too I popped Darius Johnson and ran his ass through I *caughts the rheumatism of camping M-O, But I killed a bunch of Goonies And I'd like to kill some more.
Three hundred thousand NCs float stiff in Southern space We got three hundred thousand Before they all ran back to base They died to southern lasers And southern hulls and shot. I wish they were three millions Instead of what we got.
I can't take up my laser And fight 'em now no more, But I ain't going to love 'em, Now that is certain sure; I don't want *no pardon For what I was and am, I won't be reconstructed And I do not give a damn.
signed Me
NOW EVERYBODY SING ALONG!
*didn't *ask *hate *hate *the *hate *I'd *see previous hate correction *caught *a
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Aria Kasalovich
Minmatar Black eagles CORP Care Factor
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Posted - 2010.09.18 18:06:00 -
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*Gistanus Assholius *The Very Known Blue Oyster Bar and Pub
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VALICSHADOWRAT
Minmatar BRO SQUAD Maru Ka'ge
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Posted - 2010.09.19 02:15:00 -
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This is surely a MK thread. What kind of music is this song?
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Noir Avlaa
Amarr Therapy. Wildly Inappropriate.
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Posted - 2010.09.19 22:36:00 -
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Originally by: Sidsolis turn it into a WI. thread and then everyone will care about it!
Originally by: CCP Navigator
I do want to take this opportunity to make it clear that posting "This is now a WIDOT thread" is considered spam and is likely to generate a warning for anyone doing so in the future.
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Meno Theaetetus
Gallente Wildly Inappropriate Wildly Inappropriate.
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Posted - 2010.09.20 05:41:00 -
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posting song lyrics on caod is a forum bannable offence, unless mods have double standards, we'll see.
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Crias Taylor
Gallente GoonWaffe Goonswarm Federation
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Posted - 2010.09.20 20:20:00 -
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Did not care for thread Then a WI Dot thread it came Made much care for thread
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