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leptooners
Caldari Radiant. Imperial Radiant Empire
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Posted - 2011.03.23 19:06:00 -
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I'm working on a new album. Please voice your opinions, positive or negative. Thanks in advance for any input.
Turmoil http://soundcloud.com/dj-andee-1/turmoil I wrote this about a guy I've had this off and on thing with for a while. Before you ask, yes, I'm a dude talking about a dude. I'm a flaming homo. lol
Imagine http://soundcloud.com/dj-andee-1/imagine I got the idea for this one whilst smoking a fat blunt. I think you can hear that in the music actually haha.
Until we die, the hatter
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Mirabi Tiane
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Posted - 2011.03.23 19:44:00 -
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I don't like techno with words in it, but I did enjoy the first few seconds of Turmoil. _____________________________ [Sebiestor tattoos and Intaki hair: NEVER GIVE UP, NEVER SURRENDER.] |
Laperaropity
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Posted - 2011.03.23 19:52:00 -
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Edited by: Laperaropity on 23/03/2011 19:52:24
Originally by: Mirabi Tiane I don't like techno with words in it, but I did enjoy the first few seconds of Turmoil.
The vocals stop at 0:25. Did you listen past that? Only two vocal clips in the song and I was wanting to get some feedback on the levels. It's hard to tell with these crappy headphones.
EDIT: *sets default character to leptooners* lol
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EddieRio
Minmatar Time Bandits. Waterboard
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Posted - 2011.03.23 19:57:00 -
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Edited by: EddieRio on 23/03/2011 19:58:17
Originally by: Laperaropity Edited by: Laperaropity on 23/03/2011 19:52:02
Originally by: Mirabi Tiane I don't like techno with words in it, but I did enjoy the first few seconds of Turmoil.
The vocals stop at 0:25. Did you listen past that? Only two vocal clips in the song and I was wanting to get some feedback on the levels. It's hard to tell with these crappy headphones.
EDIT: *sets default character to Leptooners* lol
both sound bad through my monitors,, the vocal part also sounds like it has nothing to do with the track. scrap it all and start again, dont make music on your headphones...
this forum is turning into my (crappy) music forum. dont get me wrong I produce and mix music myself and love hearing new sounds... but arnt things supposed to have a vague eve relation in this channel...
EDIT: i did like that guy who was selling his album for isk and was stereotypical hip hop style (that was funny good)
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leptooners
Caldari Radiant. Imperial Radiant Empire
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Posted - 2011.03.23 20:00:00 -
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Edited by: leptooners on 23/03/2011 20:02:00
Originally by: EddieRio Edited by: EddieRio on 23/03/2011 19:58:17
both sound bad through my monitors,, the vocal part also sounds like it has nothing to do with the track. scrap it all and start again, dont make music on your headphones...
this forum is turning into my (crappy) music forum. dont get me wrong I produce and mix music myself and love hearing new sounds... but arnt things supposed to have a vague eve relation in this channel...
EDIT: i did like that guy who was selling his album for isk and was stereotypical hip hop style (that was funny good)
By both, do you mean both songs or both vocal clips? Thanks for the input.
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Don Pellegrino
Pod Liberation Authority
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Posted - 2011.03.23 20:31:00 -
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I agree that the vocals on Turmoil sound out of place. That song is pretty cool, but for some reason, it sounds a bit "muddy", like if all the tracks were trying to be on top, if you know what I mean.
Imagine sounds better than Turmoil but the drums (just like Turmoil) get in the way of the keyboard tracks. They sound very artificial, too, for some reason.
Anyways, great work, and I hope that you'll manage to tweak them into something as good as the latest Warp Drive Active version. ____________________________________________
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Hiram Alexander
Caldari The Night Crew
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Posted - 2011.03.23 20:41:00 -
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Originally by: leptooners Edited by: leptooners on 23/03/2011 20:25:16 <snip> ...Before you ask, yes, I'm a dude talking about a dude. I'm a flaming homo. lol
<more snip> ...I got the idea for this one whilst smoking a fat blunt. I think you can hear that in the music actually haha.
EDIT: Keep in mind, they're still works in progress.
I really should have paid far more attention to the 'homo' bit of what you typed there, 'cause my brain just went "WTF!?!?" listening to that...
Okay, that said - I really don't approve of unconstructive critiques, so here's what I have to say...
1. Your levels - they're not good, at all. Whatever it is that your layering, there's too much of it. The overall sound is like mud (to my ears). 2. Where's the "Eve" in this? - If it's not really Eve-ish, it should be in the "Out of Pod" section, really... 3. Stop smoking "fat blunts" your 'Imagine' track has drums so badly out of sync with the bassline it gives me shivers. Sorry. 4. 10/10 for giving it a go. It's been a long time since I had the motivation to make/mix tunes of my own.
--HA
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leptooners
Caldari Radiant. Imperial Radiant Empire
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Posted - 2011.03.23 21:06:00 -
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Edited by: leptooners on 23/03/2011 21:13:00
Originally by: Hiram Alexander
I really should have paid far more attention to the 'homo' bit of what you typed there, 'cause my brain just went "WTF!?!?" listening to that...
Okay, that said - I really don't approve of unconstructive critiques, so here's what I have to say...
1. Your levels - they're not good, at all. Whatever it is that your layering, there's too much of it. The overall sound is like mud (to my ears). 2. Where's the "Eve" in this? - If it's not really Eve-ish, it should be in the "Out of Pod" section, really... 3. Stop smoking "fat blunts" your 'Imagine' track has drums so badly out of sync with the bassline it gives me shivers. Sorry. 4. 10/10 for giving it a go. It's been a long time since I had the motivation to make/mix tunes of my own.
--HA
Yeah I tried to warn people lol.
Thanks for the review.
1. Yup. Totally agree. 2. I thought it was like a blog section for anything. A mod will prolly move it. 3. Hmm... http://soundcloud.com/dj-andee-1/imaginedemo It doesn't sound out of sync to me really. I'll play around with it. 4. Thanks.
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Hiram Alexander
Caldari The Night Crew
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Posted - 2011.03.23 21:22:00 -
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Originally by: leptooners Edited by: leptooners on 23/03/2011 21:13:00
Originally by: Hiram Alexander
<snip> ...stuff I wrote
Yeah I tried to warn people lol.
Thanks for the review.
1. Yup. Totally agree. 2. I thought it was like a blog section for anything. A mod will prolly move it. 3. Hmm... http://soundcloud.com/dj-andee-1/imaginedemo It doesn't sound out of sync to me really. I'll play around with it. 4. Thanks.
I meant this one....
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leptooners
Caldari Radiant. Imperial Radiant Empire
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Posted - 2011.03.23 21:39:00 -
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Originally by: Hiram Alexander
I meant this one....
It's the same thing, I just took it out of the song and increased the volume of the bass a little for comparison.
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rodensteiner
Amarr OMGROFLSTOMP
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Posted - 2011.03.24 00:24:00 -
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-Stop being gay -Stop using illegal drugs -Stop putting lyrics in electronic (for lack of better words) music -Don't stop making music. If you enjoy it, keep at it, you'll only improve _____________________________________________
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leptooners
Caldari Radiant. Imperial Radiant Empire
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Posted - 2011.03.24 01:01:00 -
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Originally by: rodensteiner -Stop being gay -Stop using illegal drugs -Stop putting lyrics in electronic (for lack of better words) music -Don't stop making music. If you enjoy it, keep at it, you'll only improve
-Stop being you
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leptooners
Caldari Radiant. Imperial Radiant Empire
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Posted - 2011.04.15 04:56:00 -
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Edited by: leptooners on 15/04/2011 04:56:36 Updated the thread with a new work-in-progress. Let me know what you think. Don't mind the beep at the beginning, it won't be there on the final version.
http://soundcloud.com/dj-andee-1/new-stuff-rough-draft
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Xercodo
Amarr Daj'Juntar
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Posted - 2011.04.15 06:38:00 -
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Well i loved the first one, felt deadspace/mission-y to me
Second one a little bit too. ^^
i didn't hear lyrics in either of them so im guessing im listening to editied version from after the feedback...
-------------------------------------------------- The drake is a lie
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leptooners
Caldari Radiant. Imperial Radiant Empire
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Posted - 2011.04.15 19:34:00 -
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Thanks. Yeah, I removed the song that had vocals. I plan to update it eventually.
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leptooners
Caldari Radiant. Imperial Radiant Empire
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Posted - 2011.04.16 00:53:00 -
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Updated.
http://soundcloud.com/dj-andee-1/new-stuff-update-4-15-11
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leptooners
Caldari Radiant. Imperial Radiant Empire
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Posted - 2011.04.20 04:12:00 -
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This is prolly the best song I've ever made, imo.
http://soundcloud.com/dj-andee-1/no-name-yet-update-04-19-2011
Comments are appreciated.
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leptooners
Caldari Radiant. Imperial Radiant Empire
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Posted - 2011.04.20 22:36:00 -
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Edited by: leptooners on 20/04/2011 22:36:35 Oops, double post. lol
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