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Epigene
Broken Wheel Mercantile and Trading Company Illusion of Solitude
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Posted - 2012.09.03 13:25:00 -
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Hi all,
I started a small fan-fiction project some time ago and have been adding chapters whenever RL permitted. This is my first such project and I take some liberties with the canon - less and less as I get more experienced, I hope but I could do with some feedback on style, direction, general commentary and such. For example, someone told me that I have the general tone set too "dark" and brutal and should throw in the occasional light episode.
Anyway, feedback is very welcome, maybe you even enjoy my foray into creative writing...
And here is the link
Fly safe
Epi
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AlleyKat
The Unwanted.
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Posted - 2012.09.06 15:22:00 -
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Vent finished reading yet but I am. GÇ£You go into combat, and itGÇÖs NOT going to be WagnerGǪindustrial techno or really hard drum and bassGÇ¥ Reynir Hardarson, founding member of CCP Games, 2002.
somethingjustgotreal.com |
AlleyKat
The Unwanted.
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Posted - 2012.09.08 10:54:00 -
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I think you can write, and it's better than some.
As for 'Dark' - nah, I didn't feel that, seemed fine in the New Eden fictional universe. GÇ£You go into combat, and itGÇÖs NOT going to be WagnerGǪindustrial techno or really hard drum and bassGÇ¥ Reynir Hardarson, founding member of CCP Games, 2002.
somethingjustgotreal.com |
Epigene
Broken Wheel Mercantile and Trading Company Illusion of Solitude
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Posted - 2012.09.08 23:09:00 -
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AlleyKat wrote:I think you can write, and it's better than some.
As for 'Dark' - nah, I didn't feel that, seemed fine in the New Eden fictional universe.
Thanks AlleyKat, I appreciate the feedback - its fun writing this and I hope that others enjoy it as well, of course. Brings up a topic, is there a blog somewhere where EVE fanfiction links are collated? I am having a hard time finding good fiction - but I know it exists.
Btw, I added the next chapter. Explosions ;-)
Thanks and fly dangerously...
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AlleyKat
The Unwanted.
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Posted - 2012.09.09 11:18:00 -
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Epigene wrote:AlleyKat wrote:I think you can write, and it's better than some.
As for 'Dark' - nah, I didn't feel that, seemed fine in the New Eden fictional universe. Thanks AlleyKat, I appreciate the feedback - its fun writing this and I hope that others enjoy it as well, of course. Brings up a topic, is there a blog somewhere where EVE fanfiction links are collated? I am having a hard time finding good fiction - but I know it exists. Btw, I added the next chapter. Explosions ;-) Thanks and fly dangerously... Epi
I guess people just create blogs and stuff, but yeah, harvesting community content is a good idea.
Maybe Chribba has or should put something together for this. GÇ£You go into combat, and itGÇÖs NOT going to be WagnerGǪindustrial techno or really hard drum and bassGÇ¥ Reynir Hardarson, founding member of CCP Games, 2002.
somethingjustgotreal.com |
Nashuar Attor
Atomic Production
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Posted - 2012.09.10 00:28:00 -
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I quite like it. Sure there are some inconsistencies but in general I thinks it's a good read. I haven't finished but it's got me wanting to read more. Keep up the writing. |
Epigene
Broken Wheel Mercantile and Trading Company Illusion of Solitude
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Posted - 2012.09.13 01:27:00 -
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Nashuar Attor wrote:I quite like it. Sure there are some inconsistencies but in general I thinks it's a good read. I haven't finished but it's got me wanting to read more. Keep up the writing.
Thanks! I finished the latest chapter - but I have the draft for the next one out. Its been a fun project so far...
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Alice Saki
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Posted - 2012.09.13 09:32:00 -
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Been through the first 2 chapters, Liking it so far
Good Work ^_^ Scottish Interweb Spaceshippy Person, Very Easily Confused. I like to show my Love by Smashing people in the face with a big Hammer.
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smokeAjoint
Orbital Dominance Malefic Aspects
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Posted - 2012.09.13 13:25:00 -
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i liked it good read -álegalize it |
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