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Hohenheim OfLight
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Posted - 2006.04.06 14:39:00 -
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lol, nice try tack your time get it right and so what if teh first few a crap i wont hold it against you, practice makes perfect. ----------------------------------------------
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Rikkard Strofeldt
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Posted - 2006.04.06 15:55:00 -
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I like. Not the greatest, but I'm sure you'll be able to give us more.
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Gericault m0id
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Posted - 2006.04.06 17:05:00 -
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Originally by: Winterblink
Originally by: Gericault m0id I liked it a lot
One (constructive) criticism. Try to use fewer words. e.g. the last image could do with only the picture with a n00b painted on each ship
Less words, more pictures? What are you, part Minmatar? :)
Now there you have a good comic
Although the minmatar jokes are getting really, really old + I'm just French.
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Kurren
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Posted - 2006.04.06 18:21:00 -
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How about saying "Finally! Wide open space!"... and then say nothing in the last picture... --- --- --- ---
SobaKai.com
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Solant
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Posted - 2006.04.06 19:29:00 -
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Web comics _always_ suck when they first start up. There are few exceptions. If you have time ti make a comic every week or two, your skills will build up... if you doubt that simply go to any webcomics site, read the first 10 comics, then read the latest 10. There is always a very distinct difference in quality.
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Steve McHorn
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Posted - 2006.04.06 21:03:00 -
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Originally by: Gungankllr I actually laughed out loud when I saw that.
I had to go to Kisogo for some skillbooks the other day, and I was awestruck by all the noobships bouncing around the exits of the station.
Go to hageken and watch all the mission runners coming out of the Caldari Navy station, makes the noob station look like a you have all the room in the world.
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Zephyr Mallory
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Posted - 2006.04.06 23:22:00 -
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Thanks for all the replies guys. It means alot. Especially from guys like Winterblink.
My intention is to make it an ongoing story, not just one or two strip story arcs.
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Zephyr Mallory
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Posted - 2006.04.07 02:54:00 -
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And there's a new one. ---
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Arkanor
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Posted - 2006.04.07 03:04:00 -
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The comics create a very large gap (around a page or two in size) between the title of the strip and the actual strip. Is this intended? (This happens with Firefox.)
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Raven Aure
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Posted - 2006.04.07 03:13:00 -
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Originally by: Arkanor Edited by: Arkanor on 07/04/2006 03:04:49 The comics create a very large gap (around a page or two in size) between the title of the strip and the actual strip. Is this intended? (This happens with Firefox.)
Good stuff though
Ahhh! Was wondering where it was!
Still not quite to my tastes but again - could just be me
One thing on a non-humour note that will be of more use; please make the text bigger in the comics. I can hardly read it on a 1920*1440 screen. ______________________
"Ahh, Raven Aure. Your reputation precedes you." "Uh oh. Which one?" |
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Zephyr Mallory
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Posted - 2006.04.07 03:20:00 -
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Edited by: Zephyr Mallory on 07/04/2006 03:20:59 odd.. Firefox is what I use, and I don't see the problem. At any rate I'm trying a couple things that may fix it. ---
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Raven Aure
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Posted - 2006.04.07 03:56:00 -
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Originally by: Zephyr Mallory Edited by: Zephyr Mallory on 07/04/2006 03:20:59 odd.. Firefox is what I use, and I don't see the problem. At any rate I'm trying a couple things that may fix it.
Fixed. ______________________
"Ahh, Raven Aure. Your reputation precedes you." "Uh oh. Which one?" |
Zephyr Mallory
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Posted - 2006.04.07 03:58:00 -
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thanks for the confirmation Raven. I'll see about making the next strip's text a little bigger so you don't have to strain to not find it funny. ^^ ---
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Raven Aure
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Posted - 2006.04.07 04:11:00 -
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Edited by: Raven Aure on 07/04/2006 04:11:23
Originally by: Zephyr Mallory thanks for the confirmation Raven. I'll see about making the next strip's text a little bigger so you don't have to strain to not find it funny. ^^
Awww, thank you. In return I will start the "Zephyr Mallory Eyebrow Realignment Fund". Will anyone pledge? ______________________
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