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jam6549
SubMerc Inc.
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Posted - 2007.05.24 20:19:00 -
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Hi guys. Here is the start of a video I am making at the moment, and I wanted to see what others thought of it. The quality is shoddy because I wanted to make it size efficient, so obviously the quality will be much better and the video will also be longer.
Genesis Unfinished
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Bashiri
Point-Zero
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Posted - 2007.05.24 21:10:00 -
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Edited by: Bashiri on 24/05/2007 21:09:31 pretty cool i like the music
edite: good luck with your war
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jam6549
SubMerc Inc.
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Posted - 2007.05.24 21:57:00 -
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Originally by: Bashiri Edited by: Bashiri on 24/05/2007 21:09:31 pretty cool i like the music
edite: good luck with your war
Thanks very much :-). My corp mates begged me to stick that specific piece at the beginning of our corps first movie ---------- JOIN SMI CORP FOR THE BEST HARDCORE ACTION IN EVE! |
Buhhdust Princess
SubMerc Inc.
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Posted - 2007.05.25 16:26:00 -
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Well done jam, Nice vid :) Enjoyed watching SMI pwning stuff :P Hope to see more good vids from you :) _______________________________________________
-SMI- We don't just War Dec.. We get paid for it. |
Helen
STK Scientific Rule of Three
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Posted - 2007.05.25 18:24:00 -
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Looked like gank action to me, nice resolution for the video but can I ask was this a merc contract or just boredom?
Killed 15 for no loss is great but over the course of a week it seems abit well boring to be honest.
To be more constructive you needed for a video like this some sort of narration as to why you were killing these guys and why was taking down a T2 fitted Raven such a big deal? Did he often outtank you guys? It needs some fleshing out as it seems to only make sense to your corpmates.
Camera angles needed some work and possibly you could use a intro to it that explains who you guys are and what you do. Hope this helps with your next video.
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Pawiie
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Posted - 2007.05.25 18:27:00 -
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The intro kinda anoyed me with that scream.. liked how you introduced your corp members, sadly this also means those you are at war with now can add you to thier buddylist, see when you are online and use an agent to track you down.. liked how you got a PvP part in the end, sadly we never saw any finish, no explotions..
the best part was the graphic i truly envy that... dont know what you were thinking when you put in the music for the pvp though, I dont think it fitted in in anyway.. and the song from pirates of the carrabien was a little misplaced, but nice choice..
/Pawiie
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Kraven Dragonis
Minmatar SubMerc Inc.
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Posted - 2007.05.25 18:29:00 -
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YAY i got my music and i wish they track us down more kills for us :P -------------
Warring this man's Ego is bigger then yours expect bragging. |
jam6549
SubMerc Inc.
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Posted - 2007.05.25 18:33:00 -
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Originally by: Helen Looked like gank action to me, nice resolution for the video but can I ask was this a merc contract or just boredom?
Killed 15 for no loss is great but over the course of a week it seems abit well boring to be honest.
To be more constructive you needed for a video like this some sort of narration as to why you were killing these guys and why was taking down a T2 fitted Raven such a big deal? Did he often outtank you guys? It needs some fleshing out as it seems to only make sense to your corpmates.
Camera angles needed some work and possibly you could use a intro to it that explains who you guys are and what you do. Hope this helps with your next video.
Thanks for the criticism . None of the combat scenes in that movie were ganks, they brought the fights and we just happen to win them :). And yes it was boredom to war dec these corps, as the flow of merc contracts arn't very gd...so by doing this and doing some cheap work for people, we wanted to build our reputation for being a fantastic fighting force.
Yes, your right that it will probably make more sense to my corp mates, and I should probably go into more depth in the story more. This was my first attempt at creating a movie in EvE to which there was an active storyline to it. However, I will try to explain things more next time,
And that T2 fitted raven was a big deal to us as it had elluded our capture more than once before, and took 2 of us with over 600 dps (not much for 2 i know, but hey) 5 minutes to take him down. And yes, that obviously should of been explained more.
Again thankyou for your comments ---------- JOIN SMI CORP FOR THE BEST HARDCORE ACTION IN EVE! |
jam6549
SubMerc Inc.
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Posted - 2007.05.25 18:36:00 -
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Originally by: Pawiie The intro kinda anoyed me with that scream.. liked how you introduced your corp members, sadly this also means those you are at war with now can add you to thier buddylist, see when you are online and use an agent to track you down.. liked how you got a PvP part in the end, sadly we never saw any finish, no explotions..
the best part was the graphic i truly envy that... dont know what you were thinking when you put in the music for the pvp though, I dont think it fitted in in anyway.. and the song from pirates of the carrabien was a little misplaced, but nice choice..
/Pawiie
I HATE YOU PAWIIE. for some reason i always turn fraps off BEFORE the explosions happen. and the music fitted perfectly cos i don't care wat u think ---------- JOIN SMI CORP FOR THE BEST HARDCORE ACTION IN EVE! |
bardje theminer
Gallente SubMerc Inc.
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Posted - 2007.05.25 20:47:00 -
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I realy love this vid espacialy the part where you introduce the members and the battle with the raven only hope you would have showd it when it EXPLODED i can't wait for the next 1 and BTW: do you fraps everything?
with friendly greeds, your corp member, bardje ----------------------------------------------
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woRt HoG
Minmatar Omega Fleet Enterprises Executive Outcomes
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Posted - 2007.05.25 23:47:00 -
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\o/ im downloading....gonna take me 45mins though wtf chribba??
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Akane Miyamoto
Coreli Corporation Corelum Syndicate
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Posted - 2007.05.26 04:24:00 -
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Wobble.. Wobble.. 360 giga spin.. Ah the camera work was annoying with accelerated speed. Otherwise? Awesome.
Good entertainment mate. Now start using T2 crystals on your absolution :P
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The Miyamotos, Chaper #1
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valerydarcy
Pre-nerfed Tactics
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Posted - 2007.05.26 09:59:00 -
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dl.
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jam6549
SubMerc Inc.
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Posted - 2007.05.26 10:11:00 -
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Originally by: Akane Miyamoto Wobble.. Wobble.. 360 giga spin.. Ah the camera work was annoying with accelerated speed. Otherwise? Awesome.
Good entertainment mate. Now start using T2 crystals on your absolution :P
yeh, it looks very ecstatic cos i sped it up. its alright when its at normal speed, but obviously the action isnt as fast.
Yup, I should really shouldn't I ---------- JOIN SMI CORP FOR THE BEST HARDCORE ACTION IN EVE! |
valerydarcy
Pre-nerfed Tactics
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Posted - 2007.05.26 10:43:00 -
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well, although it was a lot better than that scorp vid i just (shouldnt have) watched i still wouldnt rate this all too highly. The intro went on a bit too long, and it gives the view the impression that theyre about to witness multiple deaths in succession- with the end result being being a somewhat premature end when that raven dies- i must say i was expecting a whole lot more.. I personally would have reduced the length of the fights by about 3 times and added much more diversity and much more action. the soundtrack seemed a bit disjointed and didnt alltogether fit the video. some of the cam action was also a bit shaky and made it a bit hard to watch. still, i know im being a pretty critical, but not bad all in all- keep it up.
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