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CCP Abraxas
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Posted - 2007.06.04 15:02:00 -
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Hello,
This story is brought to you by the coughing Content lads, including a pneumonic yours truly. We didn't have time to get the artwork done, but we're working on that. As for the story itself, it's a museum trip, and a historical reference, and bit more besides. Once the art gets up, you may notice some familiar faces, particularly if you've been to earlier Fan Fests.
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Alex Bester
Gallente Aeon Foundation - Science and Research Division
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Posted - 2007.06.04 15:46:00 -
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As always a good read and a little else. I must go into space again, to the lonely stars and the endless sky, and all I ask for is a fast ship and a star to steer her by... |
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Eldo Davip
Forum Moderator Interstellar Services Department
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Posted - 2007.06.04 16:42:00 -
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Nice read Abraxas ___
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Louis DelaBlanche
Cosmic Odyssey YouWhat
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Posted - 2007.06.04 17:47:00 -
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Good read. didnt expect, or for that matter really understand, the ending. But none the less a good read.
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Jimer Lins
Gallente Sanctuary
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Posted - 2007.06.04 20:07:00 -
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Now that is interesting. Very recursive, the external story describing the internal one, in turn depicting the real story.
Thumbs up, a great read.
(minor nit: First paragraph refers to the three major Caldari "blocks" which I think should be "blocs", based on context.)
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Ifni
Applied Eugenics
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Posted - 2007.06.05 08:23:00 -
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A nice piece, although you're making me more and more curious to see where you are taking the prime fiction these days.
Interesting times!
You take what is offered. And that must sometimes be enough. |
hUssmann
Caldari Veto. Veto Corp
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Posted - 2007.06.05 15:36:00 -
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Interesting indeed.
Ginger Magician > You are merely an effective ganker of haulers who runs at the first sign of combat. |
Dei
Amarr Khanid Aerospace Group Khanid Provincial Authority
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Posted - 2007.06.05 15:45:00 -
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Wouldn't happen to have any of those Seituoda logos hanging about, would you? ---
The true master paralyses his opponent, leaving him vulnerable to attack |
JADE DRAG0NESS
Native Freshfood
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Posted - 2007.06.05 20:27:00 -
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Originally by: Dei Wouldn't happen to have any of those Seituoda logos hanging about, would you?
LoL beat me to it.
"Kill one man, and you are a murderer. Kill millions of men, and you are a conqueror. Kill them all, and you are a god." -- Jean Rostand |
Max Teranous
Body Count Inc. Mercenary Coalition
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Posted - 2007.06.06 09:21:00 -
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That's a pretty good looking guy in the background of the picture there
Max
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Elise Masutra
The Department of Justice
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Posted - 2007.06.07 09:32:00 -
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again a very nice story! i'm impressed. maybe some fine day we will get a printed book with your stories
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Barbaro55a
Caldari Os Lobos Ethereal Dawn
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Posted - 2007.06.07 14:49:00 -
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Oooh, that was good.
.......................................... We come in peace - My sig and your sig would make cute baby sigs. |
Ngwee
Gallente 7 SAI
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Posted - 2007.06.07 16:31:00 -
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Another ripping good read.
Keep them coming.
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Luigi Thirty
Caldari Dark Knights of Deneb
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Posted - 2007.06.08 03:02:00 -
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So only *** people use things with curves? ---- DOMINIX IS INVINCIBLE:(((( |
James Duar
Merch Industrial We Are Nice Guys
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Posted - 2007.06.08 13:17:00 -
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Very clever. I liked it.
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LoxyRider
Body Count Inc. Mercenary Coalition
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Posted - 2007.06.09 08:32:00 -
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Originally by: Max Teranous That's a pretty good looking guy in the background of the picture there
Damn I had forgotten all about that . Sweet pic!
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Cyberman Mastermind
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Posted - 2007.06.09 16:17:00 -
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Originally by: Louis DelaBlanche Good read. didnt expect, or for that matter really understand, the ending. But none the less a good read.
Neither do I understand the ending. Since no one did, IŠm asking: What does the ending mean?
I know IŠm not good at reading people, but the sudden change of attitude(the old man) doesnŠt make sense to me.
Also, someone said there was a biblical reference in that story? DonŠt see it either, could someone enlighten me, please?
Aside from that, the story is great, I really enjoyed reading it.
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CCP Abraxas
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Posted - 2007.06.12 16:37:00 -
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Originally by: Ifni A nice piece, although you're making me more and more curious to see where you are taking the prime fiction these days.
Wait for Black Mountain
Originally by: Max Teranous That's a pretty good looking guy in the background of the picture there
Isn't it just.
Originally by: Elise Masutra maybe some fine day we will get a printed book with your stories
Who knows? I've got several pieces far too long to publish on the Chronicle page...
Originally by: Cyberman Mastermind Since no one did, IŠm asking: What does the ending mean? [...]Also, someone said there was a biblical reference in that story? DonŠt see it either, could someone enlighten me, please?
Jimer Lins mentioned it, but in short, this is a layered story. One of the storylines is about a young man going to a museum and encountering a museum guide that gives him some private time and, at the end, fires the young's man suspicion that the guide may be after a bit more. Another storyline is about the two Caldari lovers and what they went through. A third storyline, implied but obviously never stated outright, is that of David and Jonathan, two lovers from biblical times. You may recognize David from the myth of David and Goliath.
During the chronicle, all three of these storylines - the young man and the guide, the Caldari men, and David & Jonathan - reflect each other in various ways.
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Icome4u
Caldari Dark and Light inc. D-L
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Posted - 2007.06.19 02:03:00 -
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Love your stuff Abraxas :)
Keep them comming, i need more ______
Originally by: Vyger If I lose connection while walking around a station will my avatar run off in a random direction and go hide in a corner?
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