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Altrue
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Posted - 2012.05.23 17:36:00 -
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@Generals4 Intimidating style, but perhaps a bit too classic :)
7.5/10
Do we have to rate the small picture or the large as it can be seen with a few clicks ? Because the difference can be huge !
@Mina Sebiestar You for sure achieved to make an amazing facial expression. |
Altrue
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Posted - 2012.05.23 22:09:00 -
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@Celdren Draelor
So much kindness for a wild universe like EvE ! This avatar looks pretty innocent, but staring at him (high rez version) during a long time made me find a slight perverse gaze, very fun :D
8.25/10 :) |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.05.24 16:00:00 -
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@Markus Reese :
Common and a bit exaggerated in the pose but overall looking is fine.
6.5/10 |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.05.26 17:12:00 -
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@Sahara Wildcat : 9/10 I love the style and the name. |
Altrue
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Posted - 2012.05.27 07:30:00 -
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@BoSau Hotim : 7/10, good job but perhaps a bit too common :)
@Tiberius Amzadee : I definitely agree with EVE Alphonse Elric. |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.09 00:09:00 -
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@Torneach : The deadly commander planning his next attack ! I could have been a great succes if he wasn't a bit mad aswell :p 8/10 |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.20 06:49:00 -
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@Hermia :
I like the char, what are you looking at ? 9/10 |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.20 10:13:00 -
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@Serena Serene
I love the character, but in my opinion there is too much neck visible. It's probably just an illusion but the result makes the feeling of something quite unatural.
I also note that a lot of people loves to look on the side obviously ! 8/10
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By the way thanks for the detailed feedback :) Without the shades it may seem wax doll-like. |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.22 21:26:00 -
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@Trin Xi : Pose could be good, lighting and background not original but correct. But... Look at this chest ! It's size is accentuated by the absence of details in this part of the portrait.
You can do better, no doubt :) 6/10 |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.23 09:43:00 -
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@Indahmawar Fazmarai :
As someone else said before, this is pro work. I especially love the background that fits perfectly with the rest of the picture. However I'm wondering if you haven't turned too much her body compared to the head. It's fesible but in my sense it leaves an odd feeling.
8.5/10
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Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.23 15:50:00 -
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@Lin-Young Borovskova : Perhaps a bit too 'clean' but everything is very good : background, lighting, shape..
Now you may try something more 'original' perhaps. I suggest you other clothes.
8.5/10
@Sarah Schneider : The picture haven't changed for a while but I don't remember if I already had the opportunity to comment your character. I like yours, especially the expression, but she seems somehow deformed imho.
7/10 "Let's survive together !" |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.23 20:20:00 -
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@Markus Reese : This one says "I am a winner !". Funny :p You're a bit too common however
7.5/10
@Sarah Schneider : I was talking about the face. That's a feeling, not something specific. I think that it comes from the eyes and the direction the char is facing.
Edit : And the nose seems a bit weird too. "Let's survive together !" |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.25 06:20:00 -
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@Sahara Wildcat : As beautiful as always. 9.5/10 "Let's survive together !" |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.26 12:09:00 -
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@ Mizhir :
I love you char despite the glasses (Altrue was wearing glasses a few days ago before I understand how bad it is ! - Yet I never loved yours).
Seriously, imho if you remove the glasses and work on her eyes she would be near perfect.
7.5/10 "Let's survive together !" |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.27 07:41:00 -
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Not boring, but if you have a resculpt available you should try to use it, I find the face a bit odd. That's not bad already, there is just some work needed. In my opinion again :)
6/10 "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.28 08:56:00 -
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@Mizhir : I agree :) And now you can try different mix of expressions that might be very interesting. This one works well, perhaps a bit too sad however. 8.5/10
@pussnheels : Please ma'am don't whip me ! 8.5/10 as well. "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.06.28 23:09:00 -
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@Number 874 : I love your avatar. You are in the more serious and less young category, which is something uncommon yet not rare (for females). And that works very well ! (Well.. she is not old, she just looks mature)
I know that I don't share everybody's opinion, but if I can find a char boring, it's not the case when the picture shows some gravity.
So.. what do you think of a 9.5/10 ? :)
I don't know if it can work, but you could perhaps try another background to fit better with her clothes. That's the only thing I can suggest. "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
10
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Posted - 2012.06.28 23:44:00 -
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... said the Sith.
Ok I'm not the most legitimate to say this, but how can I rate a face if I can't see it ?
3/10 non-original and ugly. "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
10
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Posted - 2012.06.29 00:01:00 -
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@Jax Bederen & Mina Sebiestar : You two end in my folder of fame :p
Jax, you made a good use of these tatoos and cosmetics. That's an original and pretty portrait, but you could perhaps work on the expression because for the moment she seems a bit... blank. Background adapted, but easy choice (sometimes the best) 8.5/10
Mina, at first sight you are more classical, but the expression is good, a good point for the mouth slightly open without beeing ridiculous or caricatural. Another good point for this awful hair, it render pretty well on you. I usualy don't like non-realistic background but this one is adapted. You could eventually work to reduce the exposure of your cheek. 9/10
(all imo of course) "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
10
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Posted - 2012.07.02 08:00:00 -
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@Jax Bederen : Very nicely done, especially the mix tatoo/maxe-up but the rest is very well done too, I may add that it's a character full of details when you take the time (as I always do) to look at her in 1024. And they are good details.
9.5/10 "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
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Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.07.08 00:41:00 -
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@Serena Serene : Interesting picture ! I like it, except her.. let's say, jaw. 8/10 "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.07.11 11:38:00 -
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@Quora Fields : Nice but too much contrast. Overall appearance could be improved to look more.. human.
7/10
Edit : @Halete : Good choice of background, but a too small proportion of the picture is reserved to the head, and her cheeks are too slim.
But that's an original one and it renders pretty well. 8.5/10 "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.07.11 14:36:00 -
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I will comment @Han Hyo Joo because I already rated Ishtanchuk Fazmarai and Mizhir :)
I found the picture very fun, your char seems to have a childish style, and she obviously pouts. However the way you positionned her body makes the head very disproportionated, unbalancing the picture. The colors choosen are quite good, except for the background that I find rather inappropriated, a bit.. blank. But that's a personal taste, as I don't like 'non-realistic' backgrounds.
8/10
"- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.07.12 19:33:00 -
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So many beautiful faces in this page ! Serena Serene, Mizhir, Jax Bederen, Henry Kaine, Adalynne Rohks, Estheria Quintessimo you all desserve in my opinion a rating between 8 and 9 / 10 :)
@Quora Fields : I'll be a bit more precise here, as this is the avatar I'm supposed to rate :)
That's not a very courageous choice of background but it is appropriated, then why not. You've done a good work with her eyes, a rare thing for the one you used. (Usually these eyes seems 'unreal') Good lips, good overall face, except perhaps for the nose but it also acts as a contrast to prevent your char from becoming some kind of unrealistic perfect doll. That gives a lot of humanity to your picture. I like the tatoo and I must say that if usually I'm agaist these so simple clothes, here it works pretty well.
So... 9.5/10 :) Good job ! Or, as we shoud all say with such a mark, your avatar is accorded to my tastes and with the points I find important for rating an avatar. "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.07.13 10:40:00 -
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@Adalynne Rohks :
Very beautiful character, overall shape, expression etc... the only thing I can recommend you, is to wonder if the colors of your avatar are according well between eachothers (green eyes, red cheecks, brown background, etc).
Again this is all a matter of personal tastes, but I know that inside the corporation I'm not the only one appreciating you :)
9.5/10
@Jax Bederen : The problem with Altrue is that when I edit her, I'm almost stuck and can only move of a few pixels. Because you can easily destroy the picture by making odd shadows, mostly on her neck. "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.07.18 07:02:00 -
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@FloppieTheBanjoClown :
You badass ! A bit perverse or friendly with this little smile, I don't know.
I'm not very good at giving advices for that type of avatar, but in my opinion the only thing you could improve is your clothing, too gray. In the other hand, I'm almost certain there is no brown version of what you're wearing.
8.5/10 "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.07.20 10:41:00 -
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@Goremageddon Box : Original mix of common elements. (Maybe we are all doing the same somehow, but that's what came in my head when I saw you, sorry :) )
8/10 "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.08.03 08:33:00 -
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@Ivy Romanova :
I love that character, nice face, lighting and expression. The background just seems odd.
9/10 "- What is the end-game content of EvE ? -á- The New Unified Inventory. Every player dreams of using it comfortably, but only a few hardcore gamers achieve to do so." |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.08.14 14:19:00 -
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@Med'an Medivh : On a first feeling I would say quite common, but it works perfectly. The expression especially is very well done, as it may be hard to make a character smile without feeling dumb.
Too much piercings however.
7/10 Death to trees !!! *Axe* *Chop, chop, chop...* You may understand what I'm talking about ;) |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.08.15 06:23:00 -
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@Vertisce Soritenshi :
Basic character, nice result but not a lot of risks taken. The mechanical eye is underexploited in my opinion.
6.5/10 Death to trees !!! *Axe* *Chop, chop, chop...* You may understand what I'm talking about ;) |
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Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.08.15 19:59:00 -
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@Adalynne Rohks :
You've changed a lot of things recently on your picture if I'm correct, but in the meantime you kept what's working for a result that remains good anyway. (I use this last word on purpose, because I loved the precedent versions as well, and found these changes more like 'transformations' than 'upgrades', but that's my opinion).
So the result remains fine, but I always though that somehow, your avatar is a bit too... wide, compared to it's height. I don't know exactly from where it comes from. (edit : And she might be a bit too 'clean' eventually. Eventually.)
.. But that's definitely a good result anyway. Good and original.
9/10 Death to trees !!! *Axe* *Chop, chop, chop...* You may understand what I'm talking about ;) |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.08.16 00:57:00 -
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@Toko Too : A very strange style we don't see everyday.
For originality 8/10 :) Death to trees !!! *Axe* *Chop, chop, chop...* You may understand what I'm talking about ;) |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.08.16 08:38:00 -
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Adalynne Rohks wrote: you look like a can flipper. Pure evil incarnate, right there.
I wouldn't say that can flipper actually represents 'pure evil incarnate', more like nasty people racketeering pocket money of defenseless children but that's another debate
@terzslave : Not my style, but assuming that the cadaver side is intended I don't see anything to say. 9/10
It works better in 200 than in 512 px though. (but like a lot of us, me first ^^')
Edit : thinking of it... I'm not sure that a cadaver can be 'the style' of anybody... Death to trees !!! *Axe* *Chop, chop, chop...* You may understand what I'm talking about ;) |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.08.16 09:45:00 -
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Your mouth should be locked for no content. Death to trees !!! *Axe* *Chop, chop, chop...* You may understand what I'm talking about ;) |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.08.21 11:05:00 -
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@Mizhir :
As unique as always. 8/10 Eyes are a bit strange though, but I know you've done your best, if I remember well.
@Brandon Starrk :
Good background, original pose and face. I won't say that it is too dark, but you could use a better lighting on the eyes in my opinion. I understand what you tried to do but I have big troubles distinguishing them.
Also, but that's your personal part, I'm not sure about what you tried to make : the avatar is physically 'clean' while his expression shows something darker. That's a good idea, but I think you're relying too much on the lighting for the second part.
That's my opinion :)
8/10 [Hapiness I blueprint]
Whine less - [1] Enjoy more - [1] |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.10.19 15:54:00 -
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@Jandice Ymladris :
I don't remember the name but you may be the same person that I've seen a few months ago, with approximately the same expression, face, and pose. The clothes were different, though.
Whether it is a coincidence or not, I'm fan of the mix between your pose and your facial expression :p But you might consider touching a bit to your lips so that in 512 I don't have to hesitate to tell if your smile seems predatory or not :D
8/10
*Yelling "Manticooore !" on teamspeak* |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.10.23 21:12:00 -
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@ Mizhir : I'll be short, as we already discussed a lot I do like this new picture ! 8.5/10
@ Teinyhr : The face or perhaps the camera angle make the overall picture a bid odd, perhaps too wide. Eyes and nose are a bit strange as well. Except that, it is a nice avatar, 7/10
All in my opinion of course. *Yelling "Manticooore !" on teamspeak* |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.12.05 20:01:00 -
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@Alice Saki :
Please don't kill me, I was only borrowing this donut !
8/10
*Yelling "Manticooore !" on teamspeak* |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.12.05 22:14:00 -
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Mizhir wrote:@Altrue
TBH I liked your previous avatar more. This one seems a bit bland and I dont like your background. I think it is a matter of tweaking details to make it shine.
7/10
Oh ! I know what's wrong : I forgot to update the tatoo to have it on the visible side ! (It might not be enough in your opinion, though)
Don't laugh, it's more critial than you think as I'm living inside a wormhole. *Yelling "Manticooore !" on teamspeak* |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.12.08 00:40:00 -
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@Pulivin Motic :
"May I offer you a stool ?" :D
Your avatar made me laugh, his hair and proud expression matching perfectly with his size. An original creation that deserves a...
8/10 *Yelling "Manticooore !" on teamspeak* |
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Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.12.14 11:21:00 -
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Let's do a whole page-rating !
@ Gallentian Shadow : Nice lighting ! I like this one. You could eventually try to 'fix' the eyes, they look sad when you look at the picture in high res imo. 8.5/10
@ Wu Spacey : I like what you made with this hair, and the overall picture is nice. Perhaps lacking a bit of originality, though. 9/10
@ Eurydia Vespasian : I really like the risky color mix of hair and the way it fits with these clothes, there is also a good expressiveness. Parts of her face seem a little too "sharp" though. 9/10
@ Sriracha Nighthawk : On a first look I would say "common", but his expressiveness and some details on his face are worth a closer look. 7.5/10
@ Sahara Wildcat : Beautiful as always, except that her lips are a bit swollen imo (I don't know if other lips would work that well, though). 9/10
@ pussnheels : As always, you seem to be about to whip me ! Assuming it's intentional, your avatar is perfectly matching what we would expect. Except for the lipstick eventually, as I don't understand how such strict character would wear a somehow excentric lipstick. 8.5/10
@Saede Riordan : Original and beautiful. I don't see anything bad to say about her. Good background, good face, good expression. 10/10
@ Cynthia Gallente : You made me laugh ! Very original and quite expressive character. 8.5/10
@ Mizhir : We already rated eachothers many times so... I like yours :p
@ Calico-Jack Daniels : Not my favorite character, but the picture works. You took the easy-way by using glasses. 7/10
@ Baby ChuChu : With her famous hair reminding me a giant ice cream :D 9/10
@ Unit XS365BT : Not that original, but well done. 8.5/10
@ Zimmy Zeta : You're trying to freak me ! .. And it works ;) Original and expressive, 9/10 *Yelling "Manticooore !" on teamspeak* |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.12.17 23:57:00 -
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@Calico-Jack Daniels : Interesting lighting effect, the absence of unatural reflection on your glasses makes them somehow realistic and, FINALLY, they fit perfectly with the rest of a portrait, for once. (It's still the easy way of rendering eyes, though :p)
Background, clothes, pose and expression are nice too.
9/10
Edit : Eurydia Vespasian, referring to a previous conversation you had, ALTRUE's nose is big. Yours is nothing compared. :p After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.12.21 11:56:00 -
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@Mikel Westen : Again glasses, but that's an interesting nice-but-not-badass style, a good choice of colors and lighting.. You could have moved the camera a bit though, as the upper part of the picture is almost empty.
8.5/10 After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.12.22 00:57:00 -
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Baby ChuChu wrote:@Calico
err...I am not a fan 6/10
Me too, but this picture is fun, somehow that's an anti-badass and just for that it desserves a 7/10. (You should consider putting more clothes on)
@Baby : Interesting, this new version ! I don't see anything to say. 9.5/10
@Zimmy Zeta from far above : I'm glad you enjoyed the freckles :) But don't worry anyway, Altrue has never been designed to be original or anything on a first look, she was made in a way so that you have to look at her in 512 or 1024px to see the details bringing her to the best she can offer.
Edit - slow typing !- : @Elo Spektrum : I'm affraid but your picture is not a succes, imo : You need more lighting, the background is rather boring and carries no interest for the picture, the shape of her eyes could use more attention, as well as her clothes. Oh, and I'm hesitating about the facial expression, you could take a look at it, too.
4/10, but that's only my opinion. After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.12.22 14:18:00 -
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Comey Calla wrote:@Nayadh
Overworking natural blonde Barbie with unnatural tan... 7.29/10!
It's fun you say that, because Nayadh specifically tried to make feel the opposite :D After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
Altrue
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Posted - 2012.12.23 09:35:00 -
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@Sid Afraldir : Imo, because the of successful use of many risky elements like this hair, tatoo, piercing, and the not-seen-that-much background, and because it renders well finally, I will give him a 8/10.
@Liam Li : I'm affraid, I only rate characters, not monocles. Here, the camera's position and the overall lack of personality of your character (that's just a big package of flesh behind the said-monocle) are suggesting that the important part of the picture is not Liam, but the monocle. After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
Altrue
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Posted - 2012.12.24 10:08:00 -
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@ Sgt AngelWisper Mortis : Mmh, she is smiling isn't she ?
That's a good looking character on the average, but there is a few key points that could probably be improved, imo : First of all, you need to make your picture more interesting. I mean, facing the camera is all right, but there is nothing original about it, plus avatars in EVE don't like to face the camera :p I would also recommend to take a look at her eyes, they seem a bit wide-opened and my first though was that she seemed a bit mad or something. That's an interesting point however, and you can keep it if you want to dig it. Take a look at the lighting as well, as it's very common here. You might want to use the light as a whole, not just trying to "deal with it". Finally, a more personal taste, but I would suggest you to try something else than the red lipstick.
For the moment, 7.5/10.
Edit : Why do I ALWAYS post right after someone else ? :( Luckily I've already rated you a while ago Ceq. And you haven't changed since that time. (A long while ago) After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
Altrue
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Posted - 2012.12.24 14:34:00 -
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TImora Fosty wrote: @ Baby ChuChu You've got an icecream on your head, don't you?
AHA ! See ! I'm not the only one to say that !
@ TImora Fosty : I'm not conviced about the background and the camera, but I have to admit that it's quite original and not bad-looking.
8/10 After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.12.25 17:09:00 -
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@ Comey Calla : I see that you tried to make your character look more "alive" somehow, but in my opinion, not your eyes nor your mouth are performing the job, and they are rather making the whole looks odd.
The eyes because they are not aligned in the same direction, you're not the only one, but here this is clearly visible, and therefore somehow put forward. The mouth because even if these partially parted lips are commonly seen for regular behaviour, even in real life, they are not adapted to a picture, and nobody would ever keep his/her mouth half-opened when a camera is around. Another detail about the mouth, both sides are not exactly smiling the same way and it makes the whole mouth looks.. tilted.
7/10
After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.12.25 18:22:00 -
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You should talk to Jandice Ymladris if you want to make a good smile :p
Edit : Her picture is not her best currently imo, though. After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
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Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
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Posted - 2012.12.26 12:06:00 -
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Zimmy Zeta wrote:I was drunk and friend shanghai'd me into EvE online (first character). He chose the name for me because I couldn't think of one (maybe because I was already comatose at that point). I found out about the webcomic several days later... Apparently this friend thought that whatever I was going to do in eve, it would be fitting the play style he expected of me. He doesn't play Eve anymore, so I am not sure if this character lived up to his expectations...
Thanks for all those nice comments and feedback, and this nice story :p I indeed modified my portrait almost four days ago, the changes you've seen are the good ones ;)
I've already rated you before, with a comment like "I was only borrowing this donut !" :D. And again, the only thing that might be improved is her mouth, her upper lip is a bit odd on the sides. It might be because you're smiling. 9/10
Other than that, I appreciate to realize that our eyes are working the same way :p After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
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Sriracha Nighthawk wrote:I feel like I've rated you already. 9/10
@Saede Riordan : I feel like I need to reaffirm my 9.5/10 because it's apparently not shared by everyone.
@Sriracha Nighthawk : Your skin is very freaky, too yellow and granulated imo. The camera is not highlighting your character, rather his lack of size, which is not good for charisma. :D
Both background and clothes are very common, but they do their job, so... 7/10 After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
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@Ivy Romanova : Wonderful work ! But give me back my eye ! :p
No, I'm kidding. Your gaze is different, perhaps less threatening, but that's another good style anyway.
I really love what you've done. Everything is good, so let's focus on tiny details : -Your hair is going through your clothes, you should fix that. -Your eyebrows are almost camouflaged before your skin. -And imo the lighting is too bright compared to your background. -Still about lighting, you're not playing with it, you're dealing with it. It doesn't have to be a negative point, but it can't be a positive one. So, currently all it makes is small dark spots on your pale skin. Discreet but not very aesthetic.
9/10 After years and years of research around ice mining, they finally found how to make snowballs again :D |
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Double post for Mizhir :
Woh, what a change ! I like the overall colors of your picture, everything from the background to your hair, including your tatoo, is quite matching together.
Somehow you've managed to adapt your (imo) odd gaze to make something interesting and original.
However, there is a few points that I would highlight :
-The lighting is doing something very strange on one side of your face, not sure that this is a good thing. -The upper part of Mizhir's right eyelid is clearly offset forward compared to the lower part. Now that you're showing her profile, it's quite distinct. -The upper part of her lips are odd as well, you could try making the upper part thinner than it's lower part.
8.5/10 Look at my eye... |
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@Reiisha : Beautiful. This avatar is full of little details and is quite original in it's overall style. I'm a bit so-so about the background, and her clothes. These are correct but you could imo do something even better with more complicated ones.
9.25/10 Look at my eye... |
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@Ivy : I like your new look, but there is too many wrinkles on your clothes :) 8.5/10 Look at my eye... |
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@Sydolfus : My my.. What an interesting character.
I'm not sure about the eyes cosmetics but the rest looks fine and original. Background, clothes and hair are not matching together though, so that's a 7.5/10 Look at my eye... |
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@ Ishtanchuk Fazmarai : Not that bad, but you're imo suffering of a lack of expressiveness, and your eyes seems to be squinting somehow. Or perhaps is it something else, but they seem wrong.
I find your background very appropriate.
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Ila Dace : Interesting face, full of expressiveness, altough a bit disdainful somehow :)
That's because of her lower lip being slightly bigger than the upper, it gives, imo, a strange pouting expression
Background and clothes are working just fine, but I'm affraid I have to add that they are both quite common.
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@ Rooster Montoya : Original and disturbing.
I can guess what you wanted to do by making a partially nude avatar, but I would honestly advice you to put more clothes on, and remove this tatoo as it's overcharging a bit the head. Because then you could be disturbing and cool. :p
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I'm truly sorry for skipping your rating Eurydia, so feel free to rate her instead of me :)
But Ivy Romanova, you've made a great portrait ! 9.5/10. (-0.5 because the lighting doesn't match the background) G££ <= Me |
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@ Fredfredbug4 : Interesting expression, and even though the colors are not matching the clothes (which seems to be intentional), the overall picture remains quite good and, most important, original at the same time.
Eventually, you could think about your background because it seems rather unadapted to the character.
9/10 G££ <= Me |
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@Sky Sheriff : He looks a bit mad on a closer look, but that suits him ! 8/10
@Eurydia Vespasian : One of the best zoomed out avatars so far. 9/10 G££ <= Me |
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*appears* Skipping all of you, simple mortals, to give Sahara Wildcat a 10/10 :D (No need to rate me) *dissapears* G££ <= Me |
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@Bella
... As opposed to me who, after a closer examination of your portrait un high rez, can give a full 8.5/10 for the facial expression and the choice of colors.
The background somehow, for the small part we see, seems adapted as it creates a good contrast with the hair.
However, I will agree with Mizhir and say that you could find a way to fix your hair, as well as trying to eliminate the shadow spot at the right of your nose.
That's an original avatar and you desserve your 8.5/10, Good luck !
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@ Cesha Xenon : Not my style but the picture is good, with a nice overall tone and a face quite exotic.
7.5/10 G££ <= Me |
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Commissar Kate wrote:I have to say Altrue is one of my favorites 9/10
Nadia Fey not bad but I think I like some of your older portraits better 8/10
It's reciprocal :p (around 9.5/10) Thanks for all these positive comments in the end of the last page.
@Ivy : I like this new version of you, better than being blonde, imo. The expression, especially your eyes, is original and makes a well done 9/10.
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@Nadia : Nice ! Everything is well made, except perhaps the evil expression, not enough "subtle" for my tastes, and your clothes, somewhat common. (These "flat texture" clothes are ugly imo) 8.5/10 G££ <= Me |
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7.5/10
Original and nice style, but imo you have too many piercings :) It leaves me a feeling of being "too much". G££ <= Me |
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I already rated you Fred, you and your wet eyes :D (At least they do look wet in low res, in high res he is more dumb and thus, fun :D) Well let's rate again ! 7/10
About Lazarus Valkarov however... Very good job, badass and original. 9/10 G££ <= Me |
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@Thetabetalpha : Original face and expression. Colors are good, and for the most part it works perfectly.
Eventually, I would try less freckles. :)
8.5/10 G££ <= Me |
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@Akirei Scytale : Perfect
It means 10/10
And I like the new Alice too, 9/10 G££ <= Me |
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Actually I spent a few hours today but nothing interesting came out of her :)
By the way your character is fascinating. 9.5/10 G££ <= Me |
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For those I haven't rated before :
@ Aspalis : Perfect face, perfect expression (I love all its shades when you look at her in HD), background and colors correct. 10/10 so far, I can't find something to change.
@ Riot Girl : The portrait is nice but the camera is not that good, imo. It makes the overall picture somewhat "uncomfortable" to look. And her expression is in the middle of a lot of things without really settling anywhere, could be improved, but still imho only. 8.5/10
@ Tronnic Rhodan : You remind me a RL friend. The face is very nice, but you're lacking something to make you unique. And your gaze is, I think, a fail. 8/10
@ Zimmy Zeta : Imo, before you were prettier than now. And I still find your mouth very odd :) 8/10 G££ <= Me |
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Commissar Kate wrote:@Alice
*shivers* 10/10?
Casual Kate is back. No more dress clothes and makeup.
It can't exactly put my finger on it, but since a week or so, you've changed your eyes isn't it ? G££ <= Me |
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7/10 promising face, naive prey pose. G££ <= Me |
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ChuChu, I see that you achieved somehow to remove your top, again. You are probably hunting for every exploitable bug possible, hahaha :p
Again, the ice cream on your hair almost hypnotizes me :D 8.5/10
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Kate,
Your avatar is still pretty, blablabla. However, your new hair/clothes are more in line with the regular caldari style, and thus less original. That's sad ! Also I miss a little spark of something to transforms your character into something else than the usual pretty-and-calm pose.
Edit : 8.5/10 G££ <= Me |
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@ Kate : The background is odd imo, and this pose makes strange shoulders.
However, now your character is less common, and your eyes are expressing something ! 9.25/10 G££ <= Me |
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@Baby Choo-Choo : Amazingly nice ! The eyes are highlighted by the tatooes, overall the character is pretty and original. 9.5/10 G££ <= Me |
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Hood, Monocle.
So clich+¬. :(
7/10, because the portrait is clean. For both its colors and the facial expression. G££ <= Me |
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@Socrata Z : Original expression and face, slightly strange lips. 8.5/10 G££ <= Me |
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@ Kuonu Agalder 9/10, because :
Alice Saki wrote:Nice Facial structure, Looks great with the tattoos
I like the hair colour
Your Eyes GÖÑ
@ Alice Saki 9/10 as usual \o/
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@Tollen Gallen : Original and beautiful. 9.5/10 G££ <= Me |
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@Shadow Love : Original pose, matching colors and pretty character. That's a very good result you have here ! 9.5/10
Edit : Kate if you're reading this I'm glad to see that this version is back :o Alice, and Ariel Dawn, nice too :) G££ <= Me |
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@Kristina Volkanov : I like the character, its expression (quite subtle though), and the overall originality of the portrait !
9.5/10 G££ <= Me |
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@Luna Pryde : Sorry but... This kind of avatar, done and redone before you. Plus the glasses are hiding a good part of the face, leaving less room for your own creativity. 5/10
@CptBipto : I like what you've done with this portrait. Redhead, robotic hand, black. 9/10
@Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci : Less esthetic but still quite original. 8/10 G££ <= Me |
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@Kristina : Pretty and imperfect in a very good way. Good color match, everything is nicely done, and the portrait is full of details. There might be a lack of expressiveness though.
Did you try the full lipstick ?
9/10 Signature Tanking - Best Tanking. |
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@Valkin Mordirc : Nice camera position, nice character too, with a good attention to detail. I'd just try to move the camera away a bit, too close, characters get ugly very quickly. i.e hair clipping with the shoulder.
So thats a 9/10! Signature Tanking - Best Tanking.
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@Commissar Kate : Nice portrait still, although in my opinion the hair makes it too round, the background could be better, the pose and clothes are.. meh. :(
7.5/10
In two words, I preferred the previous versions!
@Aspalis : I really like what you did there, the red coat is in my opinion adding a nice color tone to the whole picture. You could maybe try to improve the lighting but other than that it seems perfect to me 9.5/10. Signature Tanking - Best Tanking.
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Lysanne Reqetta : To my tastes the avatar is overcharged by piercings, but otherwise there is a nice use of lighting, expression and makeup/tattoes. Background and clothes are okay.
8.5/10 Signature Tanking - Best Tanking.
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@Bobble Hat: Nice angle, character, pose, camera, and lighting. But you should consider shrinking this chest a bit 9/10 Signature Tanking - Best Tanking.
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I would rate you, buy you're too damn not classy
@Kairavi Mrithyakara : 9/10! Me like, yum yum yum! Signature Tanking - Best Tanking.
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Posted - 2014.03.22 17:55:00 -
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@Kristina Volkanov : Nice combinaison of pose / character.
9.5/10 Signature Tanking - Best Tanking.
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Kristina Volkanov wrote:@Kate
Perfect :3 10/10
Kate is not the only one :p
@Kristina Volkanov 9.5/10 Signature Tanking - Best Tanking.
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@Chovana Gremory : Awesome, 9/10. I just dislike the eyebrows :D Signature Tanking - Best Tanking.
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Kristina Volkanov wrote:@ selket
Quite a fierce look you have going on there :p but you've pulled it off quite nicely. The smile/sneer could use some work though 8.5/10
You are beautiful.
9.5/10
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Posted - 2014.06.07 20:27:00 -
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Eurydia: Nice new portrait :) 8,5/10 Signature Tanking - Best Tanking. Beware the french guy!
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@Mizhir : Something about your clothes looks familiar to me... 8/10
@Jay Foucalt : Quite original and "clean" I'd say. 8/10 as well Signature Tanking - Best Tanking. Beware the french guy!
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@Amyclas Amatin Its not bad, but I feel like your avatar lacks some personality or something... 6/10 Signature Tanking - Best Tanking. Beware the french guy!
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@Teinyhr : what's wrong with your eyes people
Every time I want to reply in this thread, I stumble upon a character with... disturbing eyes
6/10 - I know that the flash is very bright when you take the picture... But make an effort! Signature Tanking - Best Tanking
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@Teinyhr : Special mention for this new portrait, 8.5/10
@Zimmy : Nice attempt at using the new hair, I was unable to see or make 100% satisfying results so far. This one is no exception. Its clean, its nice, but I'm not sure that it fits the rest of the character. 8/10 though, still pretty. Signature Tanking - Best Tanking
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@Mizz Sunshine :
Miss, get ready for the picture!
Yes! ...wait, is that the smell of cookies?!
Flash
I like it! 8.5/10 Signature Tanking - Best Tanking
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@Cyberdyne: The shape of these glasses makes you look almost sad Its not a bad portrait, but I think that you could work on it to make it more.. hmm.. Less common?
You know, give it the extra peps that makes it likely to be remembered
I'd suggest to maybe work on the facial expression and/or remove the glasses. I know glasses are tempting, but hiding 40% of the face with a black wall is not the way to go when you want to be original
Also, I'm not sure so maybe this is a bad idea, but you could try to darken your facial hair to make it more visible, and give more expression to your character.
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Jace Sarice wrote:Nice job getting one of the more unmanageable hairstyles to work well. 8/10
Damn right!
However, I'm sorry to ask that but... Is your character squinting?? It looks like he IS, in high-res portrait.
Apart from that, I'd describe your portrait as being rather "boring" (sorry! :( ) : - Common Background - No expression - Standard Pose
I know everyone cannot stand out, otherwise nobody stands out, but still! Efforts can be made, don't despair! Of course I may also have impossible expectations when it comes to character portrait. 6/10 Signature Tanking - Best Tanking
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@Lorelei : Nice pose and picture in general. Its nice, its original, and the avatar is pretty without too much make-up / implants / piercings / tatooes / glasses.
I'd however suggest you take a second look at the rotation of the body, and the shape of the face below nose.
But its still worth a solid 8.5/10 imo. Signature Tanking - Best Tanking
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@Commissar Kate: As beautiful as ever, but I have to say that this iteration is even better. 9/10
@Tilde Duchateau: I really like the effort put into having an original portrait, with a nice pose, facial expression, and overall shape. Its quite unique, and nice looking! 9/10
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Move the camera a bit upwards and I'll truly wonder male or female.
Good job, 8/10 for the performance.
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9/10 would abduct and keep for myself
I'm just worried that the head tilt and facial expression looks like she had a Transneural Burn Scanner failure and is actually drooling, but that's a detail
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8/10 beautiful, but, and that's a big but (no doubt ): The avatar creator's engine weaknesses are especially apparent on your character.
The choice of lighting makes the shadow abruptly cut the neck of your character, which impacts the portrait in a negative way. It's only a detail, but you can't unsee it once you notice it!
Second thing, I'd have gone with a bit more clothing, a simple shirt really accentuates how its just a mere texture applied on the skin, and that doesn't look very nice, especially with the way the shirt blurrs with the skin.
So overall it's still a very successful portrait, but the bottom part of the image could use some improvement.
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One of the rare times where I've seen the forehead piercing work well. It nicely contrasts with the coloring surrounding it, and it pays off! Bonus point for the freckles too, its a nice detail. The face is almost flawless.
I would however consider changing that eye orientation given how it makes the pupils look slightly out of sync. I'd also reconsider this jacket and this background if I were you, they are not bad, but they do not feel like they have any synergy with the character. Kinda feels like a missed opportunity to do something awesome with those! :)
8.5/10
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Simple and efficient, but I'd have picked another pose, crossed arms in EVE are rendered in an horrible way, and it shows. I'd also suggest working a bit more on the lighting, the luminosity seems a tad too bright compared to your background.
Still it's not a bad portrait :)
6/10
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