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Shahira
Imperial Academy Amarr Empire
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Posted - 2016.08.23 18:10:36 -
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Neph wrote:Recognisable and beautiful at a small size, flawless at a large. A rare 10/10.
High praise, thank you. As for your avatar, I love how the framing, the lighting, and the background being out of focus around the eyes makes the intense expression jump out. Also, there's plenty of detail at the zoomed in level. 9/10. |
Ralph King-Griffin
Devils Rejects 666 The Devil's Warrior Alliance
17612
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Posted - 2016.08.23 18:26:33 -
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Shahira wrote:Neph wrote:Recognisable and beautiful at a small size, flawless at a large. A rare 10/10. High praise, thank you. As for your avatar, I love how the framing, the lighting, and the background being out of focus around the eyes makes the intense expression jump out. Also, there's plenty of detail at the zoomed in level. 9/10. Very clever, I Love that you managed to disguise how the monocle butchers the cheek and brow bone structure. Which is Legitimately the only reason I don't have one .
Colours are great, gives a good tone , lighting and composition are quite good also which feeds into it.
I don't normally do this but a solid 9/10, well done.
Edit: revised score of 8/10 to offer a point and a half for tweaking the composition some more.
This is one of my current favourites though I would like to be clear on this.
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Aen Clarke
State War Academy Caldari State
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Posted - 2016.08.24 21:26:04 -
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Ralph King-Griffin wrote:Shahira wrote:Neph wrote:Recognisable and beautiful at a small size, flawless at a large. A rare 10/10. High praise, thank you. As for your avatar, I love how the framing, the lighting, and the background being out of focus around the eyes makes the intense expression jump out. Also, there's plenty of detail at the zoomed in level. 9/10. Very clever, I Love that you managed to disguise how the monocle butchers the cheek and brow bone structure. Which is Legitimately the only reason I don't have one . Colours are great, gives a good tone , lighting and composition are quite good also which feeds into it. I don't normally do this but a solid 9/10, well done.Edit: revised score of 8/10 to offer a point and a half for tweaking the composition some more. This is one of my current favourites though I would like to be clear on this.
Charles Xavier went darkside. 8/10. Jokes aside, one of the better avatars i've seen so far. |
Shahira
Imperial Academy Amarr Empire
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Posted - 2016.08.25 10:01:54 -
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Aen Clarke wrote: Charles Xavier went darkside. 8/10. Jokes aside, one of the better avatars i've seen so far.
The lighting is interesting. Nice usage of the SoE armor pattern. However, perhaps too reliant on that armor to provide interesting features; it could do with more. 7.5 / 10 |
Lan Wang
C.Q.B Snuffed Out
3412
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Posted - 2016.08.25 10:21:20 -
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looks cute, not really a fan of the monecule or whatever its called but looks like a prestigious char with the gold accents on the unform look good. 9/10 would date
Loyalist to Angel Cartel
Your killboard reads like a "how to get farmed 101" - Noah Reese
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Morrigan Nighe
184
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Posted - 2016.08.25 10:50:44 -
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I know you're loyal to the Angel Cartel - it even says so in your signature (Yay, I can read!) - but I think too much effort went into showing the badges. The actual character came second and the pose looks a bit cramped up into the frame.
Maybe try a mirrored version of Shahira's pose. Because of the viewing angle it might be easier to get the chest badge visible or zoom out and go for more of a body shot.
Rest - glasses, haricut, face - are A o.k.
8/10 |
Solecist Project
32460
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Posted - 2016.08.25 11:01:25 -
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Morrigan Nighe wrote:I know you're loyal to the Angel Cartel - it even says so in your signature (Yay, I can read!) - but I think too much effort went into showing the badges. The actual character came second and the pose looks a bit cramped up into the frame. Maybe try a mirrored version of Shahira's pose. Because of the viewing angle it might be easier to get the chest badge visible or zoom out and go for more of a body shot. Rest - glasses, haricut, face - are A o.k. 8/10 freakish, mentally disturbed look. Definitely traumatized during childhood. 10/10 would marry, have children with and raise them to take over the city's government.
That ringing in your ears you're experiencing right now is the last gasping breathe of a dying inner ear as it got thoroughly PULVERISED by the point roaring over your head at supersonic speeds. - Tippia
8 Golden Rules of EVE
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Alma Torran
Dark Angel Reconnaissance
0
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Posted - 2016.08.25 11:21:35 -
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you 2 would make a perfect match, both look mental, not too keen on the face tattoo but everything else is decent. pirate from the heavens 9/10 |
Lulu Lunette
Savage Moon Society
476
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Posted - 2016.08.25 12:02:07 -
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I love the hair! I like rock nroll too! 10/10
@lunettelulu7
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Dom Arkaral
Bite the pillow Archetype.
584
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Posted - 2016.08.25 12:11:16 -
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Them tats :D Defo would gank lol 9/10 (10/10 don't exist for me sorry )
Merc. Tear Gatherer. Quebecker. Has no Honer. Salt Harvester. #b4r
Gù+Nitshe's favorite
Gù+Bane of Holeysaltmountain
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Noragen Neirfallas
Rabble Inc. Rabble Alliance
3038
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Posted - 2016.08.25 13:42:26 -
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Looks like the wind changed while you wern't having a good day Would pop 5/10 (I don't have standards)
Member and Judge of the Court of Crime and Punishment
Confirming that we all play in Noragen's eve. - BeBopAReBop RhubarbPie
ISD Max Trix favourite ISD
'"****station games" - Sun Tzu' - Ralph King-Griffin
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Junivera
State War Academy Caldari State
0
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Posted - 2016.08.25 17:41:25 -
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Noragen Neirfallas wrote:Looks like the wind changed while you wern't having a good day Would pop 5/10 (I don't have standards)
Your avatar suffers from poor framing; most of the image space has nothing much going on, which means the confident pose and flashy jacket go unnoticed. Also, the sunglasses are just a black blob; perhaps try a lighter shade. For now, 5/10. |
Aen Clarke
State War Academy Caldari State
11
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Posted - 2016.08.26 11:22:35 -
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6/10. Would like to see more of that armor. Because it is one, right? |
Jovian Death
Atomic Battle Beavers
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Posted - 2016.08.26 11:35:55 -
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You look like one of the action men from the 80-90s. Have you got a slot in the back of your head that makes your eyes go all googlie
7/10
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Alma Torran
Dark Angel Reconnaissance
1
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Posted - 2016.08.26 12:02:55 -
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you look a bit basic, maybe get a nice jacket and dye your hair, the pose could use some work too, maybe a closer to the head shot i dunno, 5/10 |
Shahira
Imperial Academy Amarr Empire
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Posted - 2016.08.26 13:37:54 -
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Alma Torran wrote:you look a bit basic, maybe get a nice jacket and dye your hair, the pose could use some work too, maybe a closer to the head shot i dunno, 5/10
Very nice, lots of character. I especially like the hair highlights. 8/10 |
Big Lynx
7099
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Posted - 2016.08.26 14:38:39 -
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Asian version of a hot Seven of Nine. Monocle love. 10/10 |
Morrigan Nighe
197
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Posted - 2016.08.26 14:43:44 -
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She is pretty and the combination of her wardrobe and accessory works well. I also like that you used a bit of scaring to make her skin feel a bit more natural, going away from that very artificial look that many avatars share because there can be no wrinkle found in their face but what I value most in an avatar is, if it transports any kind of emotion, a feeling or a mood.
Sadly there is none with your avatar. She still looks very lifeless and doll-like. Which I find a bit boring, sorry.
Could be a really good avatar if you could incorporate that. Like this, it "just" a good one.
8/10
and too slow again...Vordr+ñngler!
BigLynx
10/10 always like your stuff. |
Aen Clarke
State War Academy Caldari State
12
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Posted - 2016.08.26 15:36:56 -
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Morrigan Nighe wrote:She is pretty and the combination of her wardrobe and accessory works well. I also like that you used a bit of scaring to make her skin feel a bit more natural, going away from that very artificial look that many avatars share because there can be no wrinkle found in their face but what I value most in an avatar is, if it transports any kind of emotion, a feeling or a mood. Sadly there is none with your avatar. She still looks very lifeless and doll-like. Which I find a bit boring, sorry. Could be a really good avatar if you could incorporate that. Like this, it "just" a good one. 8/10 and too slow again...Vordr+ñngler! BigLynx 10/10 always like your stuff.
I love your avatar. 11/10. |
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
441
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Posted - 2016.08.27 18:08:40 -
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Some may call the pose lifeless, but it's not. I get what you're going for.
But your lighting... oh, your lighting. It makes your image look dead. The first things that 'stand out' (nothing really does because of the blue-grey pallor you're cast in) are the lack of contrast in the armor and the dark, oddly-shaped shadows obscuring your eyes. But really, it's the color that kills your portrait. Your skin is bleached out and toneless, and the background doesn't contribute towards a unified whole. I don't think I've ever seen an photo so grey. Even Morrigan and Griffin aren't that grey, and they're going for drab and lifeless!
4/10
The sad thing is, your framing/style/pose all work quite well! You just need to tweak your light to take a far, far better shot of yourself. Have you considered getting a different photographer?
Anyways, 1) find a different color of light, pair it with a better background. The dark blue in the distance just doesn't fit. Maybe a station interior or something more... tactile? 2) consider changing the lighting's angle to make the shading more vivid.
That's all; I look forward to rating you again much higher~
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Solecist Project
32599
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Posted - 2016.08.28 01:32:45 -
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I really like it.
The blurry background fading into details fits the position of your head. Just above the eyes it starts getting blurry ... ... and even tiny eyehair... whatstheword ... can be seen.
I like the whole colour composition as well and the tattoo fits greatly!
Only thing that pokes my eye is how the left side of the fact isn't lit ... ... even though background would hint at that, but loght is really limited, so ...
9/10 :D
And now ...
Roast me.
That ringing in your ears you're experiencing right now is the last gasping breathe of a dying inner ear as it got thoroughly PULVERISED by the point roaring over your head at supersonic speeds. - Tippia
8 Golden Rules of EVE
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Morrigan Nighe
201
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Posted - 2016.08.28 05:13:13 -
[14902] - Quote
Black or white, you can always tell it's Sol, so the uniqueness is given.
For a lack of better words, she feels big/massive. At least in the forum sized pic. The larger the picture gets, the less this seems to be a problem. I think, it is because - just like Lan - you reserved too much of the shot for your torso. The cut off and tilt head only add to the feeling, that the character doesn't really fit into the frame. I think just a little bit less torso would help there already. Move her down a bit and zoom a little.
Lens flare is also o.k.. I'm a sucker for that.
I dig your smile. It seems super friendly, although it is also a bit overdrawn but not creepy. Because of that overdrawn nature, I made the botox joke. Hope it didn't go down the wrong way.
What I don't like are your piercings. Only lip and chin. They look like you got them out of a bubblegum machine. They have a very generic plastic feel.
I feel indifferent about the hair. It's fitting, but all that little micro clipping would drive me nuts. That's why I never use it myself.
I'd roast 9 out 10. |
Darth Terona
Black Rebel Rifter Club The Devil's Tattoo
278
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Posted - 2016.08.28 18:59:32 -
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You look like someone who is up to no good.
A lass with a particularly sad upbringing... damaged but not broken.. now out for vengeance!
You also look like a loner.. someone who trusts no one. You have no need for men. They are tools to be used and cast aside.
10/10 |
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
447
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Posted - 2016.08.29 00:22:59 -
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Wow. This a very good one. Like, very good. The combination of scars, implants, and tattooing produces the effect of blood smeared on your cheek, but I feel that's not an accident. Only two complaints here: it's just a little bit *too* dark, and I feel as though there's just too much background for that much character. Basically, I just want to be able to see more of you.
9/10, although I suspect that if you centered the image a little bit and maybe shifted the lighting (perhaps moved the camera to a lower position? I feel that looking down on you spoils the menacing effect, I don't know), it'd be an handy 10/10.
Great work.
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Moon Goodblood
Elite Amarr Navy Academy Varangon Tagma
0
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Posted - 2016.08.29 01:46:51 -
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You remind me of jack. From riddik
9/10.
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Shahira
Imperial Academy Amarr Empire
10
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Posted - 2016.08.29 15:52:28 -
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Moon Goodblood wrote:You remind me of jack. From riddik
9/10.
Massive Caldari State emblem. The composition isn't too bad. Physics seems to be missing, though. 6/10 |
Jacques d'Orleans
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Posted - 2016.08.29 18:32:35 -
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Obviously a woman of wealth and exceptionally good taste, as the monocle fits perfectly with the hairstyle and the chosen clothes. The lipstick, which is without doubt "Douleur d'esclave" by Jean Claude Bidet founder of Amarrs finest beauty products line"Amarior", just accentuates this even more. The tattoo behind the monocle is a sign of a freethinker and , for Amarr, almost rebellious. 10/10.
Let me say it this way.
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Shahira
Imperial Academy Amarr Empire
10
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Posted - 2016.08.29 19:33:10 -
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Jacques d'Orleans wrote:Obviously a woman of wealth and exceptionally good taste, as the monocle fits perfectly with the hairstyle and the chosen clothes. The lipstick, which is without doubt "Douleur d'esclave" by Jean Claude Bidet founder of Amarrs finest beauty products line"Amarior", just accentuates this even more. The tattoo behind the monocle is a sign of a freethinker and , for Amarr, almost rebellious. 10/10.
Clearly a man of class and distinction. The low offset position in the frame, combined with the wall feature, suggests a seated position and a military office. Clever.
And "douleur d'esclave".. that alone is worth 10/10. |
motoko Akiga
Black Rebel Reapers
6
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Posted - 2016.08.29 19:55:03 -
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Good lighting
Nice facial features. I personally don't like the implant, but it seems to go really well with your skin tone and outfit. Hints of gold reflecting your personal acomplishments 10/10 |
Leotie
11
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Posted - 2016.08.29 20:13:55 -
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She wants to be rebellious, but doesn't have the attitude it seems like. Very lacklustre expression. I also don't know if the clothes would compliment the rebellious face if they were more visible.
Lose the chin piercings, they generally look quite fake and bad. I'd move her up in the frame to show a bit more of your body. It doesn't look very good, if there's only head and a bit of of neck visible.
What I really like, is the lighting on your cheeks. It is already a have way decent effect with the current background. You could expand on that.
Has potential, but you need to do some more work for it to be outstanding.
6.5/10 |
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