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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
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Posted - 2016.09.25 02:11:01 -
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Bellanea Rajanir wrote:The arm is somewhat weak looking, like a twig. I think you only push buttons and receive bacon with this musculature. But you threw away the bacon like those millions of ISK you won. And where is that carrier you supposedly won? Not in your hands.
You look somewhat funny in those goggles. with that serious pose. I see a small, fragile girl in too large and heavy boots that is operating a heavy machinery, but is very delicate in that. Contrasts. But interesting.
8/10, not the best, but not the worst
I don't need to point out why; it's obvious that this is a tour de force of an avatar, hurt only by the loose framing that also defines.
Catch-22, sorry about that.
9/10
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Morrigan Nighe
239
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Posted - 2016.09.25 08:30:37 -
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Well, it's Kate. Good version of her. Definitely has a Graygor vibe going. It's not December yet, is it? What I don't like is the haircut. It seems like every Achura and their mother has that hair cut. 9/10
Are you in love with a vacuum cleaner? Your lips suggest so. 7/10
Nice one.
I did like the old one better, though. The lighting and pose in combination with the eyes that seemed to observe someone or something else worked better in that shot. Had more of a casual snapshot feeling.
Any ways, I genuinely like this one as well. Just a not as much as the old one 9.9/10
Rate me or this. Don't want to change yet, but wanted to get an opinion. |
Kaaeliaa
Tyrathlion Interstellar Rote Kapelle
95938
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Posted - 2016.09.25 18:01:54 -
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Morrigan Nighe wrote:Well, it's Kate. Good version of her. Definitely has a Graygor vibe going. It's not December yet, is it? What I don't like is the haircut. It seems like every Achura and their mother has that hair cut. 9/10 Are you in love with a vacuum cleaner? Your lips suggest so. 7/10 Nice one. I did like the old one better, though. The lighting and pose in combination with the eyes that seemed to observe someone or something else worked better in that shot. Had more of a casual snapshot feeling. Any ways, I genuinely like this one as well. Just a not as much as the old one 9.9/10 Rate me or this. Don't want to change yet, but wanted to get an opinion.
Since I expect vaguely creepy was the look your current portrait was aiming for...it's a smashing success. If I woke up to you standing over me, I'd be reaching for the gun under the pillow quickly. Or thinking, "What the **** did I drink last night?"
Shadows are a bit funky, but as someone who often struggles with them, I blame CCP for not enough lighting options. Sometimes there's just no choice but to hope no one else notices as much as you. Neck shadows in particular are a personal bugbear. You also managed to make the funky shadows work for you in a couple of places with the augmentations, adding to a bizarre transhuman look. Again, I get the feeling that was the intent. If there's one complaint I have that would be in your control, I tend to think that less is more when it comes to primary colors. In this case, 3 almost feels like too many. Blue eyes, red makeup, green clothing. It strikes me as busy.
Test server one is particularly interesting in that it reminds me of a friend of mine, albeit a much 'darker' version. I can't say I'm sold on the background, drawing the focus towards the center sometimes doesn't always work when your pose and positioning is off-center. In this case it's like drawing focus towards her right shoulder...and CCP's godawdul low-res tattoo textures at the arm -> shoulder transition point. However, there is one very interesting good thing I noticed. Tattoo on the left shoulder actually looks like it has relief, like one of those "3D" tattoos, with how the pose and lighting work with the rest of the exposed skin and the capsule plugs. Almost like looking different in context.
I always do enjoy your portraits.
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Jaqen-H'ghar of Braavos
Imperial Academy Amarr Empire
124
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Posted - 2016.09.26 01:29:23 -
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Kaaeliaa wrote:Morrigan Nighe wrote:[quote=Commissar Kate] -snip- [/ramble]
9/10, a man believes you resemble Taylor Swift. |
terzho
Zebra Corp Goonswarm Federation
351
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Posted - 2016.09.27 07:25:16 -
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8.5/10
I like the dark brooding Sith lord look you have going but I wish I could see just a little bit more of your face. Maybe the lift the head up a tiny bit more? |
Lasisha Mishi
Ministry of War Amarr Empire
38
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Posted - 2016.09.28 15:29:50 -
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terzho wrote:8.5/10
I like the dark brooding Sith lord look you have going but I wish I could see just a little bit more of your face. Maybe the lift the head up a tiny bit more? 5/10 sorry but with the exception of your background, i couldn't tell the difference between you and the mission generic NPCs.
no offence intended. just...not someone who stands out much |
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
536
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Posted - 2016.09.28 20:56:21 -
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I never did like this avatar. I get that you really want to show your abs and therefore you've got to be zoomed out, but frankly, the framing sucks, the lighting's lazy, and the expression and figure is... mediocre.
Like seriously, find some interesting clothes/hair colors you like and make the most of your belly. I bet you could get it up to a 8/10 with just a bit of work.
Anyways, it's not the *worst*, and the Caldari background is a huge plus for me.
5/10
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn."
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Ralph King-Griffin
Devils Rejects 666 The Devil's Warrior Alliance
18346
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Posted - 2016.09.29 04:41:00 -
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not bad, but not fantastic either, its a portrait that much i can say. i do like what your trying to do with the lighting but i dont think its there yet.
6/10, as shes looking cute though.
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Darth Terona
Black Rebel Rifter Club The Devil's Tattoo
295
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Posted - 2016.09.29 06:44:58 -
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Ralph no!
you do come off as an evil Picard though.
Never cared for the monocle and don't understand the pricetag.. but if you have to have an eye patch, its better than the other thing. |
Alma Torran
Dark Angel Reconnaissance
4
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Posted - 2016.09.29 07:54:49 -
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preferred your last portrait without the hood, still proper looking pirate and cool name, 8/10 only because the hood. |
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
537
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Posted - 2016.09.29 12:33:48 -
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You pull that hair off very well, and your shadows are pretty nice I guess. I'm not the biggest fan of the lighting--it's very flat and rather textureless, but altogether it's quite good if not stellar. 7/10
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn."
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Lasisha Mishi
Caldari Strike Witches
40
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Posted - 2016.09.29 17:23:52 -
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Neph wrote:You pull that hair off very well, and your shadows are pretty nice I guess. I'm not the biggest fan of the lighting--it's very flat and rather textureless, but altogether it's quite good if not stellar. 7/10
delightful tattoos, though the lightning isn't the best to see them in detail.
8/10. |
Ralph King-Griffin
Devils Rejects 666 The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2016.09.29 17:41:28 -
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Interesting pose, head tilted just right, bit central and flatly lit. Could be fabulous with a bit of tweaking, more interesting light and playing with the composition could be enough.
7/10 Has a heap of potential though.
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Vortexo VonBrenner
Raumfahrer Spiff Rakett Piloot Anslutning
2485
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Posted - 2016.09.29 18:33:10 -
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Bald guy with some sort of artificial eye thing? Obviously you are a man of style and taste. :D 9/10
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Shahira
Imperial Academy Amarr Empire
12
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Posted - 2016.09.29 18:35:21 -
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Ralph King-Griffin wrote:
While a good portrait in its own right, compared to your old portrait, some effect is lost. Ralph used to have this awesome "release the hounds" vibe going which doesn't really work with the monocle (even though it should.. so much). Still, 8/10.
Vortexo VonBrenner wrote:
Android? Very nicely done.. 8/10 |
Ralph King-Griffin
Devils Rejects 666 The Devil's Warrior Alliance
18361
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Posted - 2016.09.29 18:59:54 -
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Shahira wrote:
While a good portrait in its own right, compared to your old portrait, some effect is lost. Ralph used to have this awesome "release the hounds" vibe going which doesn't really work with the monocle (even though it should.. so much). Still, 8/10.
its the eyebrow that gave that effect, wanted the left monocle as that would have retained the right eyebrow but those things are obscenely expensive, which is saying something given were talking about excessive displays of wealth to begin with so ...
ill be playing with this further though
i can be ignored now , do Shahira
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Commissar Kate
NulzSec
407473
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Posted - 2016.09.29 19:26:25 -
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Shahira, only thing I really don't like about yours is the dark shadow below your chin but I know how difficult the lighting can be to work with. And maybe have your head slightly rotated so it's not directly looking into the camera.
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My Fanclub
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Shahira
Imperial Academy Amarr Empire
12
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Posted - 2016.09.29 21:53:50 -
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Commissar Kate wrote:Shahira, only thing I really don't like about yours is the dark shadow below your chin but I know how difficult the lighting can be to work with. And maybe have your head slightly rotated so it's not directly looking into the camera.
I like that change, thanks!
As for yours, very nice composition and expression. There's some clipping and some shadow issues with the hair in the neck area, but that seems to be inherent with the hairstyle, and it's really only apparent on closer inspection. +1 for making that background work. |
Taishoku Mayaki
Black Scorpions Inc Circle-Of-Two
3443
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Posted - 2016.10.04 09:19:20 -
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A 9/10, purely because I think a lighter eye colour would be better for this portrait.
Only criticism I have, rest is great.
Yer the hair glitch is annoying, I keep trying to fix it but I just get another glitch.
"Right-O, lets get undocked and see what falls off the ship"
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Linda MacGill
RED GUARD.inc Da Imbalance
1
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Posted - 2016.10.06 22:22:43 -
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10/10 Pretty cool ava, i like the composition of the scene and style over all. Looks like a battle scientist at the adge of blade :) |
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
543
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Posted - 2016.10.06 22:35:59 -
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I've never been a huge fan of that tat, just because it makes the eyes so hard to see. And, zoomed in, I see what you're trying to do with the bangs, but that's completely invisible at range. The Sansha jacket's a nice one, but all that too-dark-to-distinguish chest does nothing for the portrait. I like the choice of background--it provides great contrast esp. with the white rim of the jacket. Shame about the spikes, I can't see them at all.
A lot of potential, esp. with that pose--it's cool, I think. 7/10
What kills it is the framing. Zoom in a lot. Zoom in until I can see that peering eye and your neck looks normal and your dark-on-dark jacket doesn't eat up over half of the shot. Zoom in so I can see all that great face detail and the piercings. Look at Shahira for a lesson in good framing and lighting.
(oh, yes, I like your lighting. Makes you look quite uncanny and blue/green, although all that blush kind of cancels it out--tone down that makeup imo)
EDIT: @ Taishoku: I love the way you framed yourself with that background. Nice work.
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn."
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Pleasure Hub Node-514
Pleasure Hub Hotline
112
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Posted - 2016.10.07 02:47:50 -
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7/10 Face model is lovely, however the angle of a thin neck on the angular twist of your torso is a bit jarring. Fault of the unnatural character poses in the editor.
This is what happens when taken to the extreme.
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Fal Shepard
School of Mabon
106
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Posted - 2016.10.07 04:21:46 -
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You have a unique appearance, one that is well lit, close up, and at a good angle. Your background matches your appearance,and sets the mood well, however I often find featureless backgrounds somewhat boring. 8/10
From the ashes of our defeat, we will be reborn. With these chains with which we are bound, we will become indivisible. To those who showed us no mercy, we will give no sympathy. For the flames that burn our cities, we will douse in injustice's blood
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Jadek Kin
Incorruptibles
56
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Posted - 2016.10.07 04:56:52 -
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8/10 Battle hardened and a bit of hard living.
@JadekMenaheim
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Dusty Sparkles
9
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Posted - 2016.10.07 05:23:43 -
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Definitely one of my favourites. One of the very few good uses of that eye augmentations. Usually looks like complete crap.
10/10 |
Jadek Kin
Incorruptibles
57
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Posted - 2016.10.07 16:45:50 -
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9/10 reminds me of a mysterious clock (or bomb) maker. Augs look great with the color coordination of the headpiece and monocle.
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/61/0c/06/610c069c86d3244d09f271247744a9fa.jpg
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Shahira
Imperial Academy Amarr Empire
12
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Posted - 2016.10.07 18:29:35 -
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The face is very well done, and the facial augmentations are a good match. Unfortunately the avatar suffers a bit from the low-res textures that are apparent on the body even in the smaller images. The overall effect is very good, though. 8/10 |
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
544
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Posted - 2016.10.10 02:49:39 -
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I love it so much. Except for the fact that the eyes seem to be looking up until you zoom in. They should be glancing up. Looking down/straight forward is so boring; peering up from under your eyelids is far better. Beautiful as always but for that, 9/10
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn."
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Naimh
0
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Posted - 2016.10.13 13:31:24 -
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Cute face, not keen on that tattoo though. Well lit though so points for that.
7/10
Knock Knock
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Dusty Sparkles
11
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Posted - 2016.10.13 13:54:33 -
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I have been working on a similar avatar on the test server and while trying out different backgrounds I came to the conclusion, at least in my opinion, that putting a wall directly in front of the characters face has very little charm.
With that view on the character you want to create space in front of the character. Also most poses lead to a very twisted body from that angle (your hips)
Character itself with the tattoos and so forth is ok.
7/10 |
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