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Persephone Alleile
Tartarus Covert Operations
360
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Posted - 2017.03.24 17:36:19 -
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9/10, love me some metal arms
Trying out a new look (business exec chic) |
Liafcipe9000
ShekelSquad Interhole Revenue Service
37905
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Posted - 2017.03.26 10:20:42 -
[15212] - Quote
no less than 8.5 for a business woman. looking good.
Tilde Duchateau wrote:10/10, looking like a proper inquisitor in space.
Nice armor too. Easy to get out of or no? very much so. |
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
768
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Posted - 2017.03.27 02:30:21 -
[15213] - Quote
Design's good. Expression's better than most; and while I personally think you're showing far too much torso for the interest your face holds, you've got a good grasp of proper framing and the background trick is pulled off better than most.
But the lighting. Oh, Maker, the lighting. You make that perfectly good skin look like plastic. Or wax. Or both. And that gorgeous armor? No depth to it at all. Besides, the grey on grey is already questionable, and the utter lack of color or contrast makes it even worse. Even the saturation in what could be healthy skin color is gone. Your avatar is so uncomfortable to look at right now.
Try different lights. Try different angles. Anything's got to be better.
7/10, better grasp of the mechanics than most, but painfully executed.
EDIT: bumped it from 6 to 7 upon review because of the glow on the back cheek. That's not bad. I would try toning down the gloss of the lips? It gives it a shine that could work well normally, but the whole effect is to make the lighting look much worse at first impression than, perhaps, it appears upon closer review.
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn."
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Lord Harrowmont
Quantum Decoherence
26
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Posted - 2017.03.27 08:14:51 -
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Neph wrote:Design's good. Expression's better than most; and while I personally think you're showing far too much torso for the interest your face holds, you've got a good grasp of proper framing and the background trick is pulled off better than most.
But the lighting. Oh, Maker, the lighting. You make that perfectly good skin look like plastic. Or wax. Or both. And that gorgeous armor? No depth to it at all. Besides, the grey on grey is already questionable, and the utter lack of color or contrast makes it even worse. Even the saturation in what could be healthy skin color is gone. Your avatar is so uncomfortable to look at right now.
Try different lights. Try different angles. Anything's got to be better.
7/10, better grasp of the mechanics than most, but painfully executed.
EDIT: bumped it from 6 to 7 upon review because of the glow on the back cheek. That's not bad. I would try toning down the gloss of the lips? It gives it a shine that could work well normally, but the whole effect is to make the lighting look much worse at first impression than, perhaps, it appears upon closer review.
9/11 |
Liafcipe9000
ShekelSquad Interhole Revenue Service
38001
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Posted - 2017.03.28 05:02:50 -
[15215] - Quote
I don't even... 4 / 20
also: changed portrait. r8 me out of 8. |
Clair lunski
Angel's Legion
4
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Posted - 2017.03.28 05:41:40 -
[15216] - Quote
Liafcipe9000 wrote:I don't even... 4 / 20 Neph wrote:You make that perfectly good skin look like plastic blame CCP for this awful character editor, not me. also: changed portrait. r8 me out of 8. you look like sum kind of military guy lookin all dominant n stuff but dat nose >.> 7/10 heyyyy that's pretty goood (Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci ur Purdy as hell to me luv me <3) |
Sipovich
The Dozen Bright Side of Death
9
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Posted - 2017.03.28 07:54:05 -
[15217] - Quote
Very cute. 7/10 |
Liafcipe9000
ShekelSquad Interhole Revenue Service
38005
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Posted - 2017.03.28 09:14:42 -
[15218] - Quote
moonface / potato
Clair lunski wrote:you look like sum kind of military guy lookin all dominant n stuff but dat nose >.> 7/10 heyyyy that's pretty goood As the Lord Inquisitor to the Church of Tilde, I thank you for your kind words. |
Faulker Gath'nor
Templar Directorate Holdings United Interests
720
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Posted - 2017.03.28 19:38:20 -
[15219] - Quote
Overall, a good portrait. The armor looks good with the background, pose and expression work hard, and send a no nonsense message... which will go unheeded by non-sense generators, to their own undoing.
8.5/10
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Liafcipe9000
ShekelSquad Interhole Revenue Service
38065
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Posted - 2017.03.29 11:02:36 -
[15220] - Quote
I can say similar things to you, my friend. you sure aren't fooling around; a respectful and respected outlook if I ever saw one.
8.5 / 10. |
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Dom Arkaral
The Conference Elite CODE.
1115
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Posted - 2017.03.30 03:26:26 -
[15221] - Quote
I feel like I saw a bazillion of those dudes with the armor and the poor's man monocle (#nopoors) So all you get is a low 3/10
Tear Gatherer. Quebecker. Has no Honer. Salt Harvester.
Broadcast 4 Reps -- YOU ARE NOT ALONE, EVER
Instigator of the First ISD Thunderdome
CCL Loyalist
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Liafcipe9000
ShekelSquad Interhole Revenue Service
38091
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Posted - 2017.03.30 04:42:09 -
[15222] - Quote
and I can swear I saw a bazillion characters with the same positioning, pose and poor lighting as that. 0/10
poor man's monocle?! this is a limited edition, actually functional 'Torch' laser sight, available only via Second Decade Collector's Edition Preorder! |
Chevy Caputtos
Shadow Legion X Fidelas Constans
0
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Posted - 2017.04.01 20:43:29 -
[15223] - Quote
7/10 |
Liafcipe9000
ShekelSquad Interhole Revenue Service
38190
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Posted - 2017.04.02 20:28:04 -
[15224] - Quote
6/10 not bad, but nothing I can say... sorry bro. |
Tsao Aubbes
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
74
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Posted - 2017.04.03 19:08:42 -
[15225] - Quote
8/10 - The outfit and lighting fits the pose and attitude, though I am not a fan of the eye implant :P
No Longer a Drone Region Resident
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Liafcipe9000
ShekelSquad Interhole Revenue Service
38261
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Posted - 2017.04.04 15:30:16 -
[15226] - Quote
Military veteran with a sad face... 6/10. |
Val Kaleth
Realm of Mischief
1453
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Posted - 2017.04.04 19:14:00 -
[15227] - Quote
The lighting and colors are really nice, but the armor is kind of blah. The only thing that seems fun about it is his face.
I give it a 6.
Feel free to join me in game in the "Realm of Mischief" channel.
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disappears in a cloud of rust
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Dom Arkaral
The Conference Elite CODE.
1154
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Posted - 2017.04.04 19:16:33 -
[15228] - Quote
I like the overall "come at me bro" attitude that comes from you 8.5/10
Tear Gatherer. Quebecker. Has no Honer. Salt Harvester.
Broadcast 4 Reps -- YOU ARE NOT ALONE, EVER
Instigator of the First ISD Thunderdome
CCL Loyalist
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Rachael Holt
Deep Core Mining Inc. Caldari State
0
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Posted - 2017.04.05 00:35:19 -
[15229] - Quote
The background works well with your pose and clothing, add the shades onto that and you look like you're ready for a fight, although it does have somewhat of a generic feel to it.
7.5/10 |
Liafcipe9000
ShekelSquad Interhole Revenue Service
38315
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Posted - 2017.04.05 12:13:52 -
[15230] - Quote
nice.
7.5 / 10 |
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Yiole Gionglao
16935
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Posted - 2017.04.08 22:08:56 -
[15231] - Quote
Why you pouting? Sumbuddy ate the last muffin?
The pose and setting works well, but the mouth gives me a weird impresion, as if you were sad rather than stern. In the context of the pose, scarrs and et cetera, it looks funny. In addiiton to the mouth, maybe you could do something with the eyebrows, moving the inside corners towards the nose makes for a interesting range of expressions, from angry to ironical to focused.
Would say 8/10 for the concept and being recognizable, but it losses when seen bigger so will say it's more like 7.5/10.
Roses are red / Violets are blue / I am an alpha / And so it's you
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Faulker Gath'nor
Templar Directorate Holdings United Interests
720
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Posted - 2017.04.11 13:55:59 -
[15232] - Quote
The dress, that would cost the fortunes of 100 planetside rich men... you wear it as casually as if it were a tee-shirt, portrait not over done, good colors and a faintly cat like attitude seems to peek out. Perhaps Jin-Mei? Maybe tweek the background for a better silhouette, but again the soft edges are kind of nice too.
Pretty good! 9/10 |
Drinky McDrunk
Pandemic Horde Inc. Pandemic Horde
3
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Posted - 2017.04.11 18:04:57 -
[15233] - Quote
Pretty good :D
I think shoulders slightly more angled away from camera would help, but apart from that, it's pretty groovy ! Does give the toon a suitable amount of character though
8.75/10 |
Dom Arkaral
The Conference Elite CODE.
1171
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Posted - 2017.04.11 18:43:18 -
[15234] - Quote
I like it, very dark 8/10
9/10 if those are Nightstalker goggles :P
Tear Gatherer. Quebecker. Has no Honer. Salt Harvester.
Broadcast 4 Reps -- YOU ARE NOT ALONE, EVER
Instigator of the First ISD Thunderdome
CCL Loyalist
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Sipovich
The Dozen Bright Side of Death
9
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Posted - 2017.04.13 08:42:53 -
[15235] - Quote
Why so serious 8/10 |
Rufus Black-heart Maulerant
Deep Hole Cleansing Deus Vult.
21
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Posted - 2017.04.13 16:06:43 -
[15236] - Quote
Nice... if a bit too much of an extreme closeup. Could have probably backed off a bit and framed the entirety of your head suitably. Still, 8/10
:D |
Luna Cie
Hedion University Amarr Empire
1
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Posted - 2017.04.13 18:23:01 -
[15237] - Quote
Awesome look ! Great positioning of your eyes, it's great to be able to see them behind the glasses. You look young, are not serious, great :D
9/10
PS : First message ever on Eve forums :D Edit: just figured out we can zoom on the portrait by clicking on it :D |
Avio Yaken
Akagi Initiative Ishuk-Raata Enforcement Directive
2285
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Posted - 2017.04.13 18:38:01 -
[15238] - Quote
7/10
Got a rather powerful pose but a blank expression. Could change it to show more confidence.
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Luna Cie
Hedion University Amarr Empire
1
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Posted - 2017.04.14 13:58:20 -
[15239] - Quote
It should be better now :D |
Kelly Weaver
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
0
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Posted - 2017.04.15 08:21:06 -
[15240] - Quote
Avio Yaken : Good job on the terrorist style and a very good light/shadow choice.
10/10 |
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