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Zarch AlDain
The Establishment
Establishment
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Posted - 2008.01.18 14:16:00 -
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Edited by: Zarch AlDain on 18/01/2008 14:16:02
This is an ongoing story, written exclusively for weekly issues of the Eve Tribune. To read from the beginning use the links below. Book one has been complete for a while, the first part of book two is released next week.
Profit û Book One
1.1Vultures
1.2Veldspar
1.3Investigation
1.4Trouble
1.5Exposure
1.6The Delivery
1.7Meeting Caitlyn
1.8Drifting in Wait
1.9Lab 17 Alpha
1.10The Plan
1.11Surprises
Profit û Book Two
2.1Reflections - Coming Soon
Zarch AlDain
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Zarch AlDain
The Establishment
Establishment
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Posted - 2008.01.18 14:16:00 -
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Space reserved.
Zarch AlDain
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Zarch AlDain
The Establishment
Establishment
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Posted - 2008.01.22 01:52:00 -
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2.1 has been released...
Zarch AlDain
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Zikka
Hematite Rose
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Posted - 2008.01.31 14:40:00 -
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2.2 released...
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Zarch AlDain
The Establishment
Establishment
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Posted - 2008.02.13 12:19:00 -
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2.3 and 2.4 are both out now :)
What do people think so far?
Zarch AlDain
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Ksidyn
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Posted - 2008.02.20 01:22:00 -
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Awesome job so far! Just found this and read it all in one sitting. Can't wit for the next one to come out. Keep up the great work!
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Zarch AlDain
The Establishment
Establishment
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Posted - 2008.02.20 14:30:00 -
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 Originally by: Ksidyn
Awesome job so far! Just found this and read it all in one sitting. Can't wit for the next one to come out. Keep up the great work!
Glad you liked it :)
I didn't get a chance to get an episode out this week (so one of Eve Tribune's other fiction writers got in with an excellent piece) but it should be resuming next week.
Zarch AlDain
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Todd Jaeger
Caldari
Sharks With Frickin' Laser Beams
Mercenary Coalition
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Posted - 2008.02.23 20:09:00 -
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Good stuff, keep it comin
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Zarch AlDain
The Establishment
Establishment
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Posted - 2008.02.26 11:40:00 -
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Things are heating up - in more ways than one ;)
This weeks issue has been released...
Zarch AlDain
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Firkragg
PREDATORS OF DESTRUCTION
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Posted - 2008.02.29 16:33:00 -
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more pleaaassseeee
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.03.18 11:54:00 -
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Two more episodes are out since I last posted...and next week's is written already.
You still need to wait for next week's to be released though 
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.03.25 16:21:00 -
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Next issue released...
...the plot thickens :)
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.04.15 11:03:00 -
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I've not had time to write much recently but another episode was released last week and hopefully will get one done this week too.
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.04.22 13:33:00 -
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New episode released :)
So...who saw that coming?
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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Ksidyn
Freelancing Corp
Confederation of Independent Corporations
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Posted - 2008.04.25 02:24:00 -
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Excellent work as always! Saw the Jay situation coming but definitely not the issues with Caitlyn.
Can't wait for the next one.
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.04.29 18:55:00 -
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Originally by: Ksidyn
Excellent work as always! Saw the Jay situation coming but definitely not the issues with Caitlyn.
Can't wait for the next one.
:)
Ask and ye shall receive.
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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Zikka
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.05.12 11:36:00 -
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Sorry I missed last week, things have been a bit mad IRL - got an episode in for this weeks edition though so it should be online in the next few days.
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.05.22 11:23:00 -
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New episode released.
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.05.28 15:36:00 -
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So is anyone still reading? :)
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.06.04 09:56:00 -
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Sorry guys, illness and suchlike means I missed the deadline for this week's issue. It's already in though so you will definitely get an episode next week.
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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Qanael Radlari
Kinetic Vector
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Posted - 2008.06.05 05:08:00 -
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You seem to have missed the link for "Numb", the episode between "Regrets" and "The Seed of Chaos".
I love the stories, by the way. Keep it up!
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.06.05 09:52:00 -
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Originally by: Qanael Radlari
You seem to have missed the link for "Numb", the episode between "Regrets" and "The Seed of Chaos".
I love the stories, by the way. Keep it up!
You are right - I've fixed it now...and thanks for the nice words.
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.06.11 09:56:00 -
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Another article released, and next weeks is already written so that will be out on time.
The plan is unfolding, only a few more episodes to go...
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Ksidyn
Freelancing Corp
Confederation of Independent Corporations
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Posted - 2008.06.14 00:23:00 -
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Only a few More? 
I'll be glad to see what's going to happen but I'll miss the series. You planning to keep writing?
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.06.16 12:41:00 -
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Originally by: Ksidyn
Only a few More?
I'll be glad to see what's going to happen but I'll miss the series. You planning to keep writing?
In some form - almost certainly. It's unlikely to be with these characters though as their story will be told (unless something specific occurs to me of course).
I am planning to take these stories and compile them together in a PDF with a bit of editing, maybe some screenshots etc and release that once book two is finished.
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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Yaar Podshipnik
Paxton Industries
Paxton Federation
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Posted - 2008.06.19 08:10:00 -
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Zarch, this is the single best EVE story I have read. I love how you develop the characters and make them just a small part of the great intrigue.
Also, you are a cruel and twisted bastard for doing what you did to Rula
I sure hope you will write more after you are done with this story!
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.06.19 12:13:00 -
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Originally by: Yaar Podshipnik
Zarch, this is the single best EVE story I have read. I love how you develop the characters and make them just a small part of the great intrigue.
Also, you are a cruel and twisted bastard for doing what you did to Rula
I sure hope you will write more after you are done with this story!
Me? Cruel and twisted?!? :o I'm shocked that you should say such a thing.
Anyhow, if you think that's evil you should read this week's and next week's!
Speaking of which, this week's has been released.
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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Yaar Podshipnik
Paxton Industries
Paxton Federation
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Posted - 2008.06.19 13:38:00 -
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I replied to this topic AFTER reading this week Tribune... So you did mix Hardin and Rula unintentionaly it seems - that's where the twisted and cruel comment came from my part.
I guess I fail at reading comprehension, not being able to spot such mixup but you use Rula's name very coherently in the last part.
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.06.19 14:12:00 -
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Edited by: Zarch AlDain on 19/06/2008 14:13:11
Originally by: Yaar Podshipnik
I replied to this topic AFTER reading this week Tribune... So you did mix Hardin and Rula unintentionaly it seems - that's where the twisted and cruel comment came from my part.
I guess I fail at reading comprehension, not being able to spot such mixup but you use Rula's name very coherently in the last part.
Yes I know, somehow they flipped names in my head and I didn't spot it when proof reading either. It makes no sense for Rula to be in that situation though and its not like the two characters are very similar so I've no idea how I did it! It's actually wrong in both the last two sections and in the one before the very end it makes even less sense. (Deliberately being vague to avoid spoilers!)
I started doing the same when writing next weeks actually but realized and fixed it so now I am kicking myself for not going back and checking this one.
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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Zarch AlDain
Hematite Rose
Bionic Dawn
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Posted - 2008.06.19 14:27:00 -
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Edited by: Zarch AlDain on 19/06/2008 14:30:37
Originally by: Yaar Podshipnik
If you need advanced proof-reading, sanity-checking or anything else related to the story - I volunteer! Anyway, keep up the great work!
Lol, thanks :)
Well there are only 3 or 4 more eps to go. Just to torment you I will say that the next one is already written but won't be out until next week's issue.
Zarch AlDain
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My corp is recruiting. See the recruitment thread here.
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