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Tonkin
Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.15 00:28:00 -
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Edited by: Tonkin on 15/03/2007 00:24:26
vid of black lance. put together with a few roaming gangs and a allince op.
contains strong language in the music so if you very sensative person DONT WATCH
there a few spelling mistakes which i only noticed after i did the rendering, i aint rendering it again, 6 hours it took.
this is my FIRST ever vid so im still a noob using acdobe and gathering fraps footage.
comments would help me make the next one better
580 meg heres the link, enjoy my vid! BLACK LANCE VID
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dalman
Finite Horizon
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Posted - 2007.03.15 00:42:00 -
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Eeek, nerf your oversized banner and I'll watch it. Am I forced to have any regret? I've become the lie, beautiful and free In my righteous own mind I adore and preach the insanity you gave to me |
Tonkin
Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.15 00:49:00 -
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Originally by: dalman Eeek, nerf your oversized banner and I'll watch it.
sory dude, i got a 22inch widescreen monitor it looked fine,
hehe dunno how i could shrink it robbed it of one of my corp mates
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Shadowfax2121
Gallente Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.15 01:01:00 -
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Yarr
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Brisi
Veto.
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Posted - 2007.03.15 02:04:00 -
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A few comments from me.
Firstly, your editing and music choices are great. It's nicely edited together, and you give us little remarks regarding what's going on. Intro was a bit long in my opinion, but that's a minor detail. Good job overall.
However, as with so many, many movies here, your movie lacks interresting fights. Boom gank, boom gank, boom capital ship, boom gank. I'm sorry, but people see enough lone Myrmidons being ganked by 22 ceptors/Hacs as it is, it's just not movie-material. And ofcourse you write, that the big gang that was just there left him alone to die, and while that may be true, it doesn't matter to the rest of us. I actually fast-forwarded through most of it
Anyway, as you say it's your first movie, and trust me I know good fights just don't come along 20 times a day. But my advise is that you are more selective in what material you put in your next one. Don't just put any random cruiser gank in there, simply because you have it on fraps. Quality > Quantity by a long shot, and I'd rather watch 7 mins of great fights, than 25 mins of fluff.
Don't be discouraged though, it's all meant as construtive. Hope it shows
Oh, and fix that banner
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Dr Nightmare
D00M. Triumvirate.
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Posted - 2007.03.15 02:36:00 -
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I guess it was good for a first timer, the editing was nice.
1) Music didnt do it for 2) Ganking Velators FTL 3) Needs more interesting stuff
The film with Evil Thug's titan was pretty much the main "attraction" in this video. During that fight you guys killed a carier and dread, but tbh I was looking at the titan half the fight.
Overall 6/10 for a first time vid. gJ
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Sephirot
Minmatar Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.15 03:13:00 -
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Very nicely done ,loved the editing.
Keep it up m8.
/Seph
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Aymo Bjorn
Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.15 04:47:00 -
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Great stuff, Tonk! I thought the music and editing were great. And i don't know what these guys are talking about saying there wasn't enough content -- maybe they missed the titan...
-aymo [url=http://kb.black-lance.com/?a=pilot_detail&plt_id=38915][/url] |
John MacCoy
Amarr Arcana Imperii Ltd. The Cartel.
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Posted - 2007.03.15 04:48:00 -
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Yeah its a cool movie. Good editing and good music (you gotta love the halo soundtrack) but I've just gotta pick one thing that wrong. I you catch us with our pants down on the carrier kill but I was not willing to warp in a 35 man fleet of Tech2 fitted battleships to a titan with Evil Thug itch to press the button with the "Big Boom!"
But the one thing that really annoys me is that we are not a bobbett alliance. We have not standing with them nor with coalition. Just dont like being branded something we are not.
Otherwise really good movie. -------------------- John MacCoy Arcana Imperii Ltd. The Cartel
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Syath
Caldari Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.15 06:17:00 -
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omg i hate the eve d/ler its freaking so slow!!! ahhhh i have FIOS what is with this slow downloading!
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The Beatnuts
Rage and Terror Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.15 09:57:00 -
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Originally by: Dr Nightmare I guess it was good for a first timer, the editing was nice.
1) Music didnt do it for 2) Ganking Velators FTL 3) Needs more interesting stuff
The film with Evil Thug's titan was pretty much the main "attraction" in this video. During that fight you guys killed a carier and dread, but tbh I was looking at the titan half the fight.
Overall 6/10 for a first time vid. gJ
think we have someone who will soon release some rly nice footage of that titan
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Liet Traep
Minmatar Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.16 06:12:00 -
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I liked it. There's something missing though.... Hmm, oh yes me! Put me in the next one! It'll be movie magic!
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Opan santel
Gallente Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.16 06:50:00 -
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I'm loving it, loving it very much. Nice edit going on to. TMPL ftw yaaaaarrrrrr!!!!1111oneone *cough
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Doktor Soet
The X-Trading Company Dusk and Dawn
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Posted - 2007.03.16 07:54:00 -
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TMPL Banner smaller
@ tonkin: banner a bit smaller. should fit better for e-o forum ;)
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Ace Frehley
Minmatar Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.16 13:58:00 -
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oh a black lance- wounder if i star in it... I¦m usually in a skincolored ship
Girljerms is more lethal then a fleet of 1000 Tempests Yeah I¦m nude, I¦m a swede and I¦m armed with bad jokes
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ollymac
Gallente Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.16 14:26:00 -
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i loved the music u use m8 and the editing was first rate and what a classic to end it with yarrrage i hope to c more of yur fraps m8 as u can only get bigger and better fights from here and they mean much better fraps to hush up justa few critics
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WackyRMa
Caldari Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.16 19:45:00 -
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For more great Black-lance vids, check http://www.black-lance.com/vids/
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Andargor theWise
Collateral Damage Unlimited Insomnia.
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Posted - 2007.03.16 21:20:00 -
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Can't wait to see it. After a long slugging match against our adversaries, ET jumping in on top of them w/friends was definitely a highlight of my weekend.
Respect to all. o7
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Tonkin
Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.17 04:42:00 -
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Originally by: Doktor Soet TMPL Banner smaller
@ tonkin: banner a bit smaller. should fit better for e-o forum ;)
thanks mate updated it
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Orin Fatch
The Collective Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.17 10:54:00 -
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Nice work mate, keep it up! ---- ALL YOUR LOOTZ ARE BELONG TO US! |
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Bailian Moxtain
Toys R Us
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Posted - 2007.03.17 14:16:00 -
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try not to be 20 vs 1 on the next vid
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AnarkiTheStorm
BloodBath 'N Beyond The Cartel.
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Posted - 2007.03.17 14:34:00 -
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agree with bailian, we also didnt have 3 times your number...
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aggro
Minmatar Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.18 00:42:00 -
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very good quality graphics and good editing.
must be some machine you are running tonkin to get that quality
8/10 i say
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Trinity Faetal
Gallente 0utbreak
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Posted - 2007.03.18 04:00:00 -
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a lot of smack in local, a lot of unnecessary profanity in the song lyrics, a lot of ganking followed by smack, annoying editing the whole video was blurry at some parts. and at some point it would just stop no vid or audio, omfg your killing noobships, learn to play!, 600MB wtf is this lotr part 4.
this movie sucks.
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Betty Rubble
Caldari Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.18 08:25:00 -
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Nice! I liked it :) [url=http://kb.black-lance.com/?a=pilot_detail&plt_id=41336][/url] |
Thut'ankh Amon
Exit 13
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Posted - 2007.03.18 08:45:00 -
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Editing was nice, i liked the music, but as for the fights ive seen only ganks, oh and erebus looks cool
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Oscar Fedora
FM Corp Insomnia.
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Posted - 2007.03.18 22:06:00 -
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Edited by: Oscar Fedora on 18/03/2007 22:03:12
Originally by: AnarkiTheStorm agree with bailian, we also didnt have 3 times your number...
30 Cartel 30 of the Fm pps and 30 of you douches
uhm so...we didn't run!!!
ohw btw check my banner :) isn't it lovely :P _________________________________
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Tonkin
Black Lance Against ALL Authorities
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Posted - 2007.03.19 03:52:00 -
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yea defo first, vid, and guys it was only on weeks worth of fraps, up to now i have collected 200 gig more of fraps, and alot of 1v1 stuff. now om working out on a new intro, ive seen more videos from the forums and found more editing techs i want to try out.
next one will be a month away
and talking about ganks, in 0.0 thats what is normally there getting people off guard.
only in low sec where u get the best 1v1s
and with the velator i thought that was comedy hehee,
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RiotRick
Black-Sun Insomnia.
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Posted - 2007.03.19 08:33:00 -
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Great video. I really liked the editing and the music you put into it. And I'm in it as well Even though my myrmidon went down fast :p
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Bailian Moxtain
Toys R Us
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Posted - 2007.03.20 15:59:00 -
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U all die fast. Thats why u allways need blobs to kill us
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