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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.04.02 17:31:00 -
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9/10; The expression, hair, and the toughness in your eyes all go well together. Also, the bacground and the tattoo match very well |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.04.23 13:31:00 -
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All of the clothing and your hair, as well as your expression and face, match nicely; and you're even wearing a jacket over the Quafe shirt (without anything else, it looks so plain!). Perhaps if your face and eyes were facing more towards the camera, and the background may look even better if you use a green color.
It is a very nice Avatar overall; 8.5 out of 10 |
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Posted - 2013.05.30 01:51:00 -
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Eurydia Vespasian: Very nice, the colors all match, the hair looks great, and the expression suits you very well!
Altrue: Obviously, you put a lot of work into making this avatar; the effort shows, and everything you put on the character helps to give the same great effect. The expression and background match it just as well!
I say 9.5/10 for both of you
(And as for Anyanka Funk... good luck with that clone; I think it just may be defective ) |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.07.02 19:53:00 -
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Simple and effective, and quite realistic as well; very nice composition, clothing, expression and background.
9.5/10 |
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Posted - 2013.07.03 02:50:00 -
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DremDorun:
Very nice avatar; it all fits together perfectly. Your expression, face, hair, clothes and background all match very well.
9.9/10 |
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Posted - 2013.07.25 18:36:00 -
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Kioke Mio wrote:You look like a man with power. Someone who could make his enemies disappear... <.< You look like you put a lot of time into your avatar:
-Very nice expression: you look happy! -Your hair compliments the skin tones! -You have freckles! -Your clothes match the background, too!
Overall a very nice avatar; you look like someone you'd meet accidentally somewhere but get along with well
10/10 |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.08.25 20:05:00 -
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You look tough but intelligent, and the lighting gives a nice look to your clothes and face
9/10 |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.08.27 02:32:00 -
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That's an... expressive face :P It's an interesting character and it doesn't look much like many others
8.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2013.08.29 00:01:00 -
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@ CCP That's a very "I'm in your face and don't say anything about it because I don't want to move" face You take up almost teh entire window, and it doesn't look bad- evil Amarr crazy priest, I see.
And this was found from reverse-image searching:THIS 8/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.09.14 22:51:00 -
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Lysanne Reqetta wrote:Sir Jack Falstaff wrote:reviewsnip Not bad. There's something funky going on with the beard rendering which is a shame, because it draws the eye, but the parts you actually have control of are well-done. Good use of freckles, and the expression is nice. I think it might be worth making the eyebrows...I don't know. More...forcefully expressed? Not sure how to put it. Overall 8.5/10. There's a lot of cool contrast in the hair and face (makeup, tattoo, etc.), and your clothes match well (the star looks cool in there too )
9/10
(By the way, look at my full-sized portrait :P) "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.09.17 02:24:00 -
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Ariel Dawn wrote:The sideways bar through the top of your nose looks painful! Nice face and expression; the glasses look great too (those have been nearly impossible to use well) and you have the very top of the tattoo showing- great Job, Ariel!
9.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2013.10.21 22:41:00 -
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Your avatar looks really light, and it almost looks like you're in water I like how all of the colors basically match-and the tattoo is a nice touch!
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2013.10.31 04:24:00 -
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Shadow Love wrote:It's kind of scary how shadowy and beady your eyes are, especially with the black lipstick. I like the fullness of your avatars face too, but the rest of you looks a little skinny!
Overall though, pretty distinctive as that hair isn't used that often compared to others. I'd say 7.5/10 You used a LOT of detail- tattoo, piercings, even the eye patch (nice ) It has a nice composition- and the colors ALL match- I'd say 9/10: just look at the camera! "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.11.12 03:40:00 -
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Nachshon wrote:7.5/10. Pretty good, although I actually find her breasts distracting. And not in a good way. Quote: @ Nachshon There was a character in the EVE novel Empyrean Age (spelling?), he was a Gallente officer/capsuleer that later reappeared as a character in Templar One (I think). Anyway, your avatar is basically how I envisioned him looking down to the shirt... and despite having a Matari background that shatters my reverie I'm still liking your avatar more than I do most "officer" shots.
Nice. I've actually tried to show Nachshon's character evolution in his image. He's a Caldari who went native with the Minmatar, then joined the military (hence the uniform). Good lighting and a nice smile, a great beard and a cool uniform! Also, mini-mohawk (or Minnie-Mohawk) 9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.11.13 21:45:00 -
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Naomi Tichim wrote:7.5/10. Nice, but the face and the uniform just don't go together. Something seems off. 9/10
Has a great lighting, and all of the colors complement each other very well. Also, looking to the side at the viewer is great "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2013.11.25 04:15:00 -
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Commissar Kate wrote:Sheimi Madaveda wrote:I really like this version of Kate. 9/10 Dark hair really works with you. Kate was originally dark hair anyway, the old character creator did not have blonde hair for achur. But I have always had the green eyes. As for Sheimi. I've always loved your avatar 9/10 for you. I love the eyes and the expression- it works perfectly
it's a really awesome avatar- 9.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.11.25 23:06:00 -
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Winter Phell wrote:@Ishtanchuk
well, funky pose never hurts! Its a sarcastic frown, lol, at least thats how I see it. I love the composition- the eyeshadow and the eyes, as well as the overall expression just rock
9.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.11.30 02:57:00 -
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Cpt Tirel wrote:Lysanne Reqetta wrote:Ishtanchuk Fazmarai wrote: 8/10 Very elegant, yet simple. Quite pretty, though admittedly not to my tastes. I think a slightly different angle might improve it a bit. Your avatar is average, but i like the red. Id try match the background with that. Id also move/zoom out the camera so the top of your head is visible. And also the face tattoo kinda overlaps with the red around your eye. 5/10 I love all of the white in the picture- and all of it goes really well together. The positioning/posture could probably be touched up a little though- maybe the face could be more towards the camera?
I love it overall though- 8/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2013.11.30 19:48:00 -
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Molson wrote:8/10
You look like you are somewhere between a hero and a villain You look like a tough but intelligent older warrior- I like the look a lot
9.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.12.04 22:30:00 -
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Echo Echoplex wrote:@ Kate-serene countenance + knowledge behind the eyes = 10/10 Really unique expression and face- yours has a ton of personality, and it looks amazing
10/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2013.12.04 23:58:00 -
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Zoe Kaltana wrote:@Kistina: Can definitly compete with cute-kittens from imgur! 9/10 @Chiore: Nice composition, face and ponytail of course \o/ 9/10 That's a very unique face- it's a really good look- and the ponytail looks great on it!
Also, the lipstick with that face works perfectly
9/5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.12.06 23:09:00 -
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Bagrat Skalski wrote:All great avatars on this page. PS: Back from vacation. Oi, it's Jove Jack Frost
8.5/10, because nobody ever uses that skin tone (P.S., I forget- can you change that again without re sculpting?) "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.12.06 23:15:00 -
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Tollen Gallen wrote:Second rate Mr Fab 3/10 :(
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.12.22 04:31:00 -
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8.5/10
Simple but effective "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2013.12.30 00:58:00 -
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Simple- I like how the side of the face is the definite focus.
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.01.02 03:01:00 -
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You look more realistic and shiny than most
8.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.01.08 04:16:00 -
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I like the expression! The picture doesn't seem to be focused on YOU though, so
7/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.01.12 17:48:00 -
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Eerie lighting and an eyepatch, combined with crossed arms, a smirk, and red hair- a ginger pirate!
9.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.01.16 23:57:00 -
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Maybe a better angle and a little more light would help- otherwise it's a good one.
8/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.01.17 00:49:00 -
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That's a great avatar- it's very realistic looking, somehow- and you look very happy
10/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.02.15 21:45:00 -
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Healthy Mary wrote:[Valkin Mordirc] Good grumpy ginger. 8/10 Good composition, and a nice face- sort of simple, but it's good: 7.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.02.15 21:46:00 -
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Plastic Psycho wrote:Well, whatever mental image your handle brought up, you're not that. So, just for breaking my expectations, 8/10. I see you there nice face and eye- and the shadows work well- 8.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.02.23 04:16:00 -
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Kinda reminds me of The Bride in Kill Bill for some reason. And the lighting gives you boob highlights
8.5/10
(My Big Picture) "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.02.23 18:16:00 -
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I've never seen an avatar that makes that hair and glasses work- and all of the colors go really well together
9.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.02.25 02:00:00 -
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Really simple, but it works- it could have a better expression/light/angle, though:
7/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.02.27 04:53:00 -
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You look smug and a little annoyed with me... I like it a lot! 9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.04.21 02:19:00 -
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Changing the angle and expression would help a lot
6.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.05.02 21:13:00 -
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@Drem
Everything's angled in a really cool way- and everything matches really well; the tattoo looks great too!
10/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.05.20 21:35:00 -
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Damn creepy- i love it!
Everything goes well together- and do you not have eyebrows???
10/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.06.05 20:19:00 -
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A little bland, but overall good concept- matching colors (well maybe a different background) and a good face- change the pose up a bit and give it a better angle, maybe.
7/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
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Posted - 2014.06.17 04:19:00 -
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I like the expression- especially the eyes!
Nice Avatar- 8.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.06.19 23:09:00 -
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That's really good for an Amarrian avatar- it's unique looking, which doesn't happen often there:
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.06.20 02:43:00 -
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Look at the damn camera!
But it's good:
7.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.06.27 01:03:00 -
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7/10
A little generic- it's kind of just the base avatar with stuff thrown on
It could do well though "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.06.28 04:19:00 -
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Maybe a more angular pose and facial expression- and the colors kind of clash
6/10, it could easily get a lot better though "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.06.28 14:55:00 -
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@Mizhir
Last time I saw you you had a tattoo on your forehead- it looks better now!
Also, Maybe the eyes could point towards the camera.
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.06.29 05:21:00 -
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Awesome composition, pose and expression
10/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.07.02 15:26:00 -
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Pretty good- maybe look at the camera slyly- overall pretty nice, nice and simple.
8/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.07.02 15:52:00 -
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But baby, it's an eyepatch
And you have an awesome image- great colors, lighting, pose, the makeup and tattoos work PREFECTLY, and it's all-around a great look-
11/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
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Posted - 2014.07.02 17:10:00 -
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I'll say easily another 11/10
Seriously, yours is probably the best avatar I've ever seen!
I wanted to say that sometime "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.07.04 23:17:00 -
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Sly, good-looking
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.07.05 20:56:00 -
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Great pose and lighting- plus the head position and hairstyle works well with it all
8.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.07.09 15:05:00 -
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Great avatar- but the eyes look a little spacey- maybe change that up a little
8/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.08.23 14:58:00 -
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Love it- close-up with a great little smirky expression, good colors- they all match- and good shadows!
10/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.08.27 01:57:00 -
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A very 'real' looking avatar! simple but really nice! Good pose, good shirt, good everything
10/10
Plus I love the poem in your bio "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
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Posted - 2014.08.28 00:19:00 -
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Lovin' the new/old headpiece!
And the avatar looks great- I like the expression!
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.08.28 03:14:00 -
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You look pretty damn smug.
I like it
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
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Posted - 2014.08.30 04:45:00 -
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@Mizhir
I like this one! it's darker and more distant, but everything matches really well!
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
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Posted - 2014.08.30 22:25:00 -
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'Message from Starfleet, Captain'
I love the look- and the face matches the portrait really well!
10/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
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Posted - 2014.09.03 01:37:00 -
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I like the 'real person' type picture! Maybe simple pose and lighting fixes could be done, but it's great otherwise!
8.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Umbrarum Paradisi
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Posted - 2014.09.03 23:15:00 -
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Nice eyes- like you're hiding something
You look like you're thinking about something none of us know and thinking 'hah hah, they don't know'
8.5/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Umbrarum Paradisi
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Posted - 2014.09.05 00:18:00 -
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Tough
Maybe more blue instead of green though
8/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Umbrarum Paradisi
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Posted - 2014.09.05 04:27:00 -
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That's a GREAT 'realistic' avatar- great attitude! And everything matches, too! (Need to see more of that haha)
10/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Umbrarum Paradisi
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Posted - 2014.09.06 20:23:00 -
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I love your avatar whenever I see it
But maybe you could be glaring at the camera from the darkness or something- looking right at it with a scowl
Regardless, I still love it-
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.11 03:28:00 -
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Lookin' dark and cunning- what're you thinking about?
10/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.11 03:38:00 -
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Eurydia Vespasian wrote:i've always had mixed feelings about this avatar. on the one hand it is original and creative...on the other hand it's a little bit creepy and robotic. just a little off putting and weird in a visceral sense. lol. hard to explain. 6.5/10 Not that I mind- that's an interesting reaction- I appreciate it
And you're pretty great-looking, yourself! I love the attitude in your face, and the tattoo matches really well with everything else
another 10/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.09.13 03:37:00 -
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@Mashie:
That's a really unique avatar- I love the look the tattoo, headgear and jacket give together, along with the lighting- great avatar
10/10
@Tilde:
Still lovin' that pose and lighting, as well as all of the little things about the avatar- it's REALLY well put-together!
11/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.09.18 00:48:00 -
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Nice lips, nice jacket, nice hair and nice pose 9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.19 01:27:00 -
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I like the 'generic' look on you- maybe mix it up a bit with a different shirt or maybe a tattoo, but overall good
8/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.21 16:40:00 -
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Valk- you're one of the few male avatars that can pull off a profile shot- nice job
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven." -Jovian Proverb-á
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.22 20:06:00 -
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The Cyber Tunnel background looks great with your avatar- and I love the pose, outfit and expression- one thing though, the eyes are looking away slightly
Overall Awesome!
9/10 "A City made of Wood is built in the forest; A City made of Stone is built in the mountains; But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven." -Jovian Proverb-á
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.23 21:37:00 -
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Good sly playful look- maybe a more angular pose- it's pretty good overall!
7.5/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.25 01:33:00 -
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8/10- angle and lighting could use some work, but the rest is good
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.26 02:55:00 -
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Looks good! but maybe a more dynamic pose/different background (more red-themed, like the rest of you!) could help
8.5/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.26 13:09:00 -
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Simple, but it works really well- I especially like the lighting on the face and body- and nice expression!
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
1934
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Posted - 2014.09.27 01:32:00 -
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Nice attitude- and maybe a different position for the eye and light could help
8/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.28 02:57:00 -
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You look really relaxed and wise- a great portrait
10/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.28 16:04:00 -
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Nice eye- maybe have him look straight at us all scary-like
9/10
(cool/10)
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.09.30 02:20:00 -
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Nice angle and face- it just seems to be a little off-focus
8/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.01 11:18:00 -
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I still like it a lot- I do wonder what it'd look like if you'd look at us though
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.01 19:44:00 -
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Shadowy, mysterious tattooed man- but somehow you look like a shady overlord at the same time
10/10
EDIT: Man, you sniped me
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.01 19:45:00 -
[82] - Quote
Avio Yaken wrote:DAFUCKHAPPENEDTOYOU/20 Stern, irritated navy captain
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.02 03:57:00 -
[83] - Quote
He looks like Ming to me
And as for you- I still say 8/10- it's good
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.04 01:07:00 -
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I love the new jacket- and you have a good pose and a strong jawline
I like it a lot- it's simple, but really good
10/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.04 05:01:00 -
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Wat/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
3385
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Posted - 2014.10.07 02:04:00 -
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Maybe a better pose for the head would help- the shiny-ness is pretty great- and pointing the eyes at the camera adds a lot to some avatars!
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
3518
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Posted - 2014.10.09 21:08:00 -
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Dealer/10
Got any crash?
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
3798
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Posted - 2014.10.12 18:18:00 -
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Maybe light intensity/position and pose angle could be improved- but otherwise it's great
8.5/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.16 01:00:00 -
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Sweet (read: intimidating and playful) expression, awesome bg and tats, awesome lighting, awesome everything!
10/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
5485
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Posted - 2014.10.18 17:47:00 -
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There's something awesome about your skin and hair- and your eyes are great
Simple and perfect: Kate/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.20 05:24:00 -
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I like the creepy note to the portrait- it could be creepier though
2spooky/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.23 00:15:54 -
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I see you used something from every category
It looks good- but the pose and lighting leave something to be desired- and the camera angle could use some work-
7/10
"A City made of Wood is built in the forest;
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains;
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven."
GÖâ Jovian Proverb GÖâ
Project Galileo
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.26 06:25:54 -
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I still love that angry Caldari super-villain look
10/10
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A City made of Stone is built in the mountains;
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven."
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Project Galileo
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.26 20:44:09 -
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You do the 'collected, calm, yet superior' look perfectly
11/10
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A City made of Stone is built in the mountains;
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven."
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.27 12:05:09 -
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Nice! There's something... Alien about your eyes- and the only suggestion I'd make is to give it a little more light, maybe have the eyes stare us down
9/10
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A City made of Stone is built in the mountains;
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven."
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.28 00:51:44 -
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The colors on you match really well- but the background doesn't really match- I'd go for a more yellow-black one- and the lighting could use a little love
And I feel like your eyes could be quite striking if you accentuated them!
Great potential-
9/10
(Also, next person- rate Oberine along with me, if you please- I hate 'stealing' the rating the person above me should get )
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A City made of Stone is built in the mountains;
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven."
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.10.28 03:24:15 -
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I'm loving the new look- contrasts work well for you! It's just a little dark for my tastes though
Maybe a different shirt could help- or maybe not- just experiment! And I like the arm
9.5/10
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A City made of Stone is built in the mountains;
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven."
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.10.30 03:07:35 -
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Great composition and lighting, with a subtle head tilt and a great expression:
11/10
"A City made of Wood is built in the forest;
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains;
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven."
GÖâ Jovian Proverb GÖâ
Project Galileo
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.11.02 16:12:07 -
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@Neurale
You look like a blend of races, somehow- and it's great
8.5/10
@Violet
Maybe smile just a little more? But regardless, you're great! That resculpt came out perfectly
9.5/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.11.05 03:36:09 -
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Interesting jawline
I like it, but it could be improved- adjust pose, lighting, and eye position if you'd like:
7/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.11.07 00:28:24 -
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There's something really great about your eyes! And all I'd suggest is a different background:
10/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.11.08 05:36:57 -
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A great mix of features:
On Fire/10
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A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.11.09 23:42:54 -
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In the small portrait, it looks like you don't have eyes- I love the look of the sansha jacket- but maybe a slightly different angle could help.
Overall AWESOME.
10/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.11.11 01:59:31 -
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Liam Antolliere wrote: It's hard to describe, but I see sort of an innocence that betrays a quiet wisdom. Perhaps a pensive nature.
Excellent job on the features and modeling as well.
10/10
I like it a lot- but maybe you could have darker eyelashes and more menacing eyebrows- and maybe a different eye color:
9/10 though
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A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.11.13 14:59:36 -
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Vaechel wrote:haha
7 camels/ 10 unicorns There's something I really like about your pose And the face could be improved a little, but it's great overall:
8/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.11.16 23:49:42 -
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I love it! the only thing I notice is that the eyes could be more focused on the camera and there could be a more intense look going on on the eyebrows:
9/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.11.25 05:15:00 -
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Nice attitude Maybe a little brighter of a light and a more matched background would work well- and I feel like the 'Drone' sleeves could look nice on you, but that's not related:
9/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.12.03 08:06:09 -
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There's something really good happening there- maybe a lighting fix and a slightly different mouth-y expression could help to perfect it
7.5/10
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A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.12.09 04:15:36 -
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Definitely better- we can see your face now! However, a different background (more matching) would do you well
8/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.12.12 04:03:48 -
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Maybe a different lighting scheme and darker background could do well:
8.5/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Posted - 2014.12.13 17:43:51 -
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Cynter DeVries wrote:So they do have DMV's in space, eh? 7 / 10. That's one powerful set of torpedoes I like it a lot overall- maybe a more dramatic camera angle and a more contrasting background would help - also, I feel like the 'Phanca' arms would look really good on that outfit
8/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.12.14 21:02:11 -
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Nice and tough- I like the facial expression a lot
One thought on a thing that could improve it: move camera so that the head is closer to the top of the picture and angle it so you're looking down on people (only slightly). It could increase your 'power' factor a lot (that's just my opinion though )
Really nice though- 9.5/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.12.15 01:09:50 -
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I'll say 9/10 - the lighting is just a little off, and maybe having a visible pupil would add to intimidation
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs Jovian Enterprises
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Posted - 2014.12.19 21:16:41 -
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Recognizable and confident- maybe a different background would help with uniqueness
10/10 though
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2014.12.19 23:14:22 -
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Anatole Abre-Kai wrote:Jawline of real man, smile of child.
7/10 EVE doesn't let us have real toothy smiles
Interesting composition!
9/10
(PS Next person rate him as well! I feel bad rating the person who just did mine )
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Luna Ironmind wrote:Laken Starr, You have an innocent look around you. Shy and modest, as if you have endured hardships that would have broken most. 8/10 Luna: there's a certain desaturated look to your portrait- having a more contrasting background and maybe having a more active head position/eyes would help
8/10
A City made of Wood is built in the forest
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains
But a City made of Dreams...is built in heaven.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Rhanna Khurin wrote:Luna Ironmind You look like you're watching TV just off camera, something possibly mildly amusing.. something like Good mythical morning perhaps.
7/10 Haha, we both posted within 30 seconds of each other
Looks like the next person has to do us both
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Johan Civire wrote:Quarra Shepard wrote:You look like you are looking up at the camera, as if it were directly above you. You are also wearing a very common hairstyle, giving you a very generic look. 7/10 Don`t know about me but are you old enough to fly a ship? There's a concise greatness to this one
Very Caldari- I like it a lot!
9/10
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Posted - 2014.12.31 19:33:42 -
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I like the dark brown theme- the colors match well- but the lighting could be adjusted. Also, nice jacket
9.5/10
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Posted - 2015.01.01 18:45:29 -
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As always, the only guy who manages to take the Amarr look and turn it into a believably creepy character -
10/10
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Posted - 2015.01.06 03:45:33 -
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@Tisiphone OH MY GOD
Keep this forever
101/10
@Kate:
I like this one! The only thing is that the hair color doesn't match perfectly with the rest. Still awesome though
9.5/10
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Posted - 2015.01.07 17:59:41 -
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Ah, the Vulcan Super Villain strikes again!
Love this- 10/10
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Posted - 2015.01.15 06:22:03 -
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A seriously unique expression and a recognizable face- good job, Colonel o7
10/10
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Posted - 2015.01.21 04:13:08 -
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Eyes and lighting are the slightest bit bland, but it all matches quite well!
9/10
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Posted - 2015.01.25 01:29:01 -
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You look a tad curious, like you're peeking around a wall looking for a funny sound you heard
Maybe a little more "attitude" would help, but I like it!
8.5/10
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Posted - 2015.01.25 02:31:48 -
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Ah, the Viscious Vulcan Villain is Verily a Vision of Vivaciousness with his Voluptuous Vest
10/10
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Posted - 2015.01.27 01:41:02 -
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Tilde Duchateau wrote:Interesting expression and color coordination. I think there's a background that would work better, though. 8/10 There's a really awesome contrast between the right and left sides here- and all of the colors match really well! Plus, your expression rocks
Honest 10/10
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Posted - 2015.01.28 07:04:15 -
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Dr Ron wrote:Ishtanchuk Fazmarai wrote: Mysterious. Yet alluring. The ambiance is dark enough to leave the viewer with a sense of intrigue, yet light enough to let them know who they're running from. 10 /10 There's something really nice about the red hair and background- contrast that with the dark expression and character and you have a great portrait! The only thing that could be really fixed is the lighting, perhaps
9/10
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Posted - 2015.01.29 13:09:34 -
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Aladar Dangerface wrote:@Dyzem
you look like a bond villain
7/10 Interesting look- but you could probably do with a darker jacket or something to match the background.
7.5/10
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Posted - 2015.01.31 05:00:22 -
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Whew, almost fell off the first page:
Nice composition, nice features, but the position seems just a bit low and angled a little funny- and maybe a harsher expression could help
7.5/10
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Posted - 2015.02.02 04:41:12 -
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Azda Ja wrote:Very nice!
Usually I'd advocate a different hair color to contrast with the background, but this works very nicely on yours.
9/10. You look like a tough merc with a good heart, looking forward to a new light in the future I love it!
10/10
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Posted - 2015.02.02 15:42:35 -
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Sivney Quincannon wrote:@Mina
I've always liked your avatar. Shame there aren't more backgrounds to choose from because I think the right one could enhance the look. Ignoring the background - 10.01/10 Looks better in the full-sized portrait than the small one- and it's very nice
The one thing I'd fix would be the mouth position and, possibly, the pupil dilation.
9/10
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Posted - 2015.02.06 03:56:00 -
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Swiggity composition- and nice eyepatch
I think the eye color could be adjusted to match better, perhaps
10/10 though!
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Posted - 2015.02.07 23:43:45 -
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Vector Symian wrote:your toon is a mix between a Super Villain and a hardened Battle Commander
very nice
o7
10/10 A little bland, but that could be fixed with moving the eyes and making the colors match up better- you have red BD, blue eyes, blonde hair, and a grey outfit- a theme usually makes a portrait come together really well.
5.5/10
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Posted - 2015.02.09 02:30:03 -
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StarLite wrote:Kaely Tanniss wrote:Interesting expression...brings to mind "Oh no he didn't....wtf did you just say mf?" lol...8/10 I'm not that fond of full body shots, but the tattoo is nice. 7.1435/10 :) Hey! I've never seen a True Amarr that I can say is sincerely good looking
The strong blue eyes and the expression, along with the hair (which you rock) go really well together- and you're smiling! It's hard to pull that off!
Maybe going fully clean-shaven and changing up either the BG to match your clothes or vice-versa would improve the picture even more.
10/10
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Posted - 2015.02.11 01:39:06 -
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If you're going for something comedic (I'm sorry if it isn't meant to be), then adjusting the lighting to be more forwards, getting a little sun, and making the colors more vivid/match-y would help
8/10 though
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Posted - 2015.02.13 23:21:32 -
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Amanna Ibruin wrote:8/10 Shade, is a bit to strong for my liking, but all in all very solid work
Awesome! I love that pattern for the makeup- and everything comes together really well- it's a coherent and recognizable portrait! I love the expression too, haha
10/10
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Posted - 2015.02.16 02:29:54 -
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Lookin' just a little more pouty than potent in the small view- angle and lighting could probably be changed up a little, but the expression is great and you're looking right at us with a great grin
8.5/10
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Posted - 2015.02.27 14:12:44 -
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Easily recognizable and elegantly simple maybe a differently colored background could add to it, or adjusting the lighting position somewhat- but it's basically perfect!
9.5/10
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Posted - 2015.03.01 23:39:38 -
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The SpudGun wrote:Looks blind and doesn't smile 7/10 An attitude that kind of looks like a space rapper- I like the expression a lot, and maybe a different jacket could help (don't change that lighting or expression/pose!)
10/10
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Posted - 2015.03.04 03:12:02 -
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Eros, I'm gonna call you "King Shoulders"
Kaely Tanniss wrote:Character has confidence, almost looks as though he didn't want his picture taken but went along with it anyways. 8/10
I really like this one- the face and eyes look very unique- and the tattoo matches the rest very well! The only things that come to mind are that the background could have a more complimentary color, and the lighting could be a little brighter (also, maybe a smirk could do well)
9.5/10
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Posted - 2015.03.08 11:39:18 -
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Jian-Mai Ling wrote:This is one of the more unique avatars. Ordinarily, I don't like the use of harsh front lighting, but it is perfect here because it accentuates the stern coldness of the character. Just so good.
10/10 Dark overall, but it works! I like the eyes especially- it could be a little more lit though
8/10
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Posted - 2015.03.10 13:40:15 -
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Hengle Teron wrote:a pleasantly calming figure
should have purple hair available
10/10 Well-composed, but the lighting is a little off and the camera is too far from your body
Really good though: 9/10
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Posted - 2015.03.14 17:20:48 -
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This is a perfect portrait- perfect skin tone, lighting, and background- and to add, the clothing matches really well!!
10/10
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Posted - 2015.03.21 15:21:24 -
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Aerinbiorn Haubogi wrote:While I like the choice of clothing with the facial structure, and although the monocle is a decent touch, I feel like the earrings distract from what would be a strong looking character. There is also something too... pink in the face. It might be just the lighting choice, though. 7.5/10. I like it- his nostrils look a little flared and his eyes are kind of wide, but it's good- also, lighting!
8/10
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Posted - 2015.03.23 04:46:23 -
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Thilos wrote:Very nice color coordination throughout. Eyes. Top. Background.
I usually don't like off-center shots, but that one certainly works. Diamond shadow under the chin is a bit distracting, but that's an issue with how shadows are rendered.
8.5/10 all day. I like it!
Angle and lighting could be shifted, but it's good
(and oh god, I'm sorry but I looked and imagined this: you just stepped in something nasty, now you're looking at us angrily)
9/10!
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Posted - 2015.03.23 14:36:21 -
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A really good one- the only adjustment I imagine is moving your body upwards more - again, really good still [:d]
9/10
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Posted - 2015.03.24 12:25:11 -
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Reminds me of some sort of dark, annoyed space Elvis- not bad!
8/10
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Posted - 2015.03.27 03:32:49 -
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Interesting composition!
Maybe the lighting and angle could be shifted somewhat to give a more dramatic look- but the character looks great
8/10
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Posted - 2015.03.30 12:54:49 -
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Really really good- the only thing I'd suggest is a different background- maybe that green-brown-dark-with-a-light nebulous one- I just see the colors matching well- but it's great anyhow :)
9.5/10
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Posted - 2015.04.01 18:03:20 -
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It's dim and the colors sort of clash... There's a lot of improvement to be made, but there's a ton of potential with the way you look already
7/10
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Posted - 2015.04.06 01:45:52 -
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Fal Shepard wrote:very plain charecter and background. Lacking in both posture and creativity. 1/10 Gotta say, I still love your portrait- maybe just shift yourself up-left slightly (a little more up than left)
It's really basically perfect - 9.9/10
Tilde Duchateau wrote:Love the sculpting and posing. Perhaps zoom in just a bit to pull more focus towards the face? 8/10
Again, seriously great- maybe just turn your body slightly to the right (your left) to give a more looking right at you" face - 9.5/10
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Posted - 2015.04.13 12:04:36 -
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Dave Viker wrote:2sexy4me/10.
rawr Unique, for sure :P It honestly isn't bad- save for the blue-red contrast- if the background matched the light better I'd like it more
8/10
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Posted - 2015.04.28 14:18:50 -
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And that's a pretty badass male portrait maybe you could grin with teeth- I love it though:
10/10
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Posted - 2015.05.03 06:52:46 -
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Nice attitude, nice eye and sweet expression!
Love this one- maybe the BG could be switched up, but that's not necessary :P
9/10
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Traejun DiSanctis wrote:@Cesha Xenon
8.25/10
Attractive and yet 'ard looking. I am generally not a fan of the peroxide hair, but it works as a nice offset to the skin ton. The head positioning needs a little adjustment, make it look like you have no neck. Overall, very nice. Deep tan and tough-looking! I love the contrast with the bright eyes- though the lighting/positioning could be adjusted some :)
9/10
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[EDIT] Woohoo, 700 pages!
Commissar Rain wrote:AWESOME! Is the only way to rate you. I see you and I think "Chocolate", which is awesome
Seriously nice avatar: it's a favorite of mine!
9.5/10
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Posted - 2015.05.26 18:20:24 -
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There's something nice about it- simple and coherent.
Not much to say, but I like it
8/10
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Posted - 2015.06.14 04:04:31 -
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Reminds me of some movie promo image: it's up-close, but angled really well with a nice pose and a great expression. The hair even "flows" in a good direction!
9/10
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Aerethir El-Kharisti wrote:Kaaeliaa wrote:Lan Wang wrote:I like, would defo pixel date.
9/10 Lighting emphasizes the pale skin + dark skin combo well, which is always a look I've been fond of. If I may, the way the angle and pose plays out makes your head look unnaturally large, a fairly common problem with that particular hairstyle. It would definitely be possible to tweak the zoom and camera angle a bit to minimize the effect without compromising the overall "look" you have now, I think. Otherwise, the colors coordinate well and I like the light/dark balance for the most part, and that shiny hair...I wanna stroke it. :3 Interesting profile and composition 8/10 Angle is a little high, and lighting is somewhat iffy, but you look like a genuine Legion pilot
8.5/10
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Crimson Draufgange wrote:Lovely. 9/10. Kinda looks like you're posing for a photo, but a small dog or something off to the bottom caught your eye a second before
I like it though! Nice coat, pose, and background: everything matches well.
8.5/10
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Fal Shepard wrote:Well slaver, you look like you are looking into a holding cell to inspect your merchandise, but do not seem to be aware that the door is unlocked... Before I kill you, I'd give you a 8\10 for matching the typical slaver stereotype of being a scary creeper. Definitely one of my favorites - there's a nice attitude, and the red-brown-dark theme works wonders on the portrait Frame is a little high, but not a problem whatsoever.
9.5/10
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Posted - 2015.07.01 21:02:50 -
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Nice clothes and lighting- colors too! I like the professionalism of it, and the military Mohawk rocks
9/10
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Freya Sertan wrote:The Guristas look is good for you. The eyes and the aggressive stance. Yeah.
You can visit ME at night, if'n ya wanna.
9/10 Nice color scheme and lighting - you also used something from just about every category in the creator, which is risky - but it works for you
8.9/10
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Posted - 2015.08.04 21:39:06 -
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Crimson Draufgange wrote:Kooshti wrote:You look a little naughty for me, however you do make me slightly moist. 8/10 Perfect. 10/10. Simple and Smoldering - nice background (matches your name) and pose, too
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2015.08.17 14:49:26 -
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@Teinyhr
Seriously great - your theme is really unique, and the lighting angle/color matches your face-on pose perfectly! Awesome: 10/10
@Azad Ja
Interesting - very smooth looking, and I like the glasses and scar - the hair is interesting, too! My only complaint is the angle - imo it would look better with a higher angle and more stark light-shadow, but that's just me :) Overall great: 8.5/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2015.08.26 06:08:49 -
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Seriously great - gritty, complimentary colors, a very unique pose (that you totally rock~) makeup and style
I love it - 10/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2015.09.24 21:25:54 -
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The look is unique, to say the least
I'm not ranking beauty, but as far as using the creator goes, this one stands out - though I would consider changing some angle/background and the jacket/lip color to match, perhaps!
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2015.09.29 18:36:14 -
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Cool composition and nice uniform - I love the expression and angle. The only thing I'd change is the slightly clashing bg, but that's just me
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2015.12.01 14:13:27 -
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The black/grey/white scheme works great - though I think it would look perfect if your eyes looked toward the camera all creepy-like. That, or maybe matrix sunglasses
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.01.12 05:38:52 -
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Eyes, color and composition all look nice - though some angling could help
8.75/10
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Posted - 2016.03.11 10:24:22 -
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@Big Lynx, you're terrifying. that lighting is insanely extreme and your neck looks enormous in the small pic. 7.3/10
@Fal Shepard, love the avatar as usual - there's a coherent color scheme and theme, and the lighting+composition is spot-on. 9.9/10
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Posted - 2016.03.11 12:30:28 -
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Yo lynx, I like the coat~ That and the subtle changes make me say 8/10 now
And Dom, I like it - the color theme is well-done, and if only we could see that tattoo on the eye a little better ;P The background could be adjusted, as could anything else, really - but it's solid! 9/10
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Posted - 2016.03.23 20:51:16 -
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Armor/10 - didn't know you could get it to be that extreme, haha
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Posted - 2016.03.30 22:25:59 -
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Character is put together well, but the angle and lighting makes the smile/face look hella creepy - 7/10 also, nice augs
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Posted - 2016.04.15 20:15:14 -
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@Cosma Karma: Smooth and eerie - though I might suggest changing eye color to blue or auburn to match the rest of the portrait's scheme! 9/10
@Omega Jovakko: Interesting expression and pose, kind of oddly framed - a different angle could really do the blue backlight justice! 7/10
@Lukas Flamesword: Looks like we're two peas in a pod(capsule?) - combat suit, eyepatch, augmentations and all I like the tough guy look and the tattoo above the eyepatch - maybe involving some shadow or looking at the camera could help? Either way, nice~ 8.5/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.04.22 16:55:44 -
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Loving the aesthetic, Dom~ the portrait looks like it could be a standard-type corporate portrait, if more groups did that, and the first version goon background is great for you
I like the angle and composition for the avatar too - there's a nice general attitude with it and it works well!
9/10
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Posted - 2016.04.25 05:04:35 -
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Gorgeously chiseled w/ the augs, and an eyepatch+cyber arms to boot - nice smoldering expression too
Super hot avi, 9.5/10 easy
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.05.06 19:04:13 -
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Menacing! I love the expression + the augmentations ! Makes you look pretty intense, haha
pose could do with a bit of change, and hair color or BG could be changed to bring a color scheme together, but it's all good~
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.06.15 00:30:20 -
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Closed eyes, that's new I like the whole thing, but my only complaint is that the color of the tattoo doesn't match the makeup/background of the portrait
8/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.06.24 03:02:02 -
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Interesting portrait! Nice angle/clothing choices - and my only real issues with it is that the expression looks a little too "neutral", and that a couple colors mismatch - other than that, good job~
8/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.07.26 01:53:28 -
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Overall, pretty much perfect imo~ My only suggestion is to maybe change the lighting angle in order to accentuate the face more against the background.
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.09.05 14:09:29 -
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It's hard to do a good profile shot - but yours is good! The hair frames the face well, and the colors and shadows work - my only suggestion is that the background might be a little light in comparison to the rest of the shot.
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.10.14 15:49:19 -
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Very distinctive, with a great use of colors and framing - the tattoo and augmentations all go along with it really well and the whole thing just looks great~~
10/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.11.02 08:05:24 -
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Humble in a good way, professional and very calmil style while still expressive~ I might suggest lowering the frame a bit, & maybe some change in lighting, but the light angle already matches the background perfectly as well
9/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.11.02 09:40:39 -
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Red, red, red! Usually that look's used by edgy characters and detracts from them, but in your case you've framed a strong scene with the red-on-black motif. The positioning makes sense, the lighting matches the background (the simple ones rarely work so well), and the character's expression is spot on. The only suggestions I could make might be to get matching arm enhancements, maybe the matte black 'vice' arms, and maybe play with the hair a bit (it's already good tho)
9.5/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.12.04 00:35:43 -
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This is a really interesting one! Usually, this combat suit looks out-of-place against the rest of an avatar, but yours matches you real well- good use of the goggles too, with a nice pose and lighting/angle, interesting pale skin and bald head with a tattoo that works with the style. Maybe the background could be changed up to see what looks better?
Regardless it's great~~ 10/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2016.12.15 21:55:39 -
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A really interesting one~ Nice use of the scar to bring focus to that side of the face & the tattoo, and it adds a lot to the feel of the face itself. The hair also goes great with the look, and it's cool how the tat extends into the hairline - the Mohawk part really adds some good dimension. The combat suit also gives some great lower detail and makes the whole thing come together in an almost soldier look. All around great, honestly, especially in the full version (not all portraits translate well to the shrunk version)
10/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2017.02.14 04:06:45 -
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Interesting one~ I like the expression and the color scheme, they both work well - I'll complain that everything looks wicked "smooth" though, between the flawless face and the jacket, & lighting could be messed with a bit, but it's overall very well put-together :)
8.5/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2017.03.21 01:12:25 -
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You've got a seriously great smile/sneer going on~ could maybe be a little more zoomed in, but overall it's real nice~
8.5/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
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Posted - 2017.04.20 15:47:33 -
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Nice attitude in the pic~ it's well-done & the expression really sells it, along with the blue eyes & lighting - can't make any suggestions haha
9.5/10
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