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Kitoba
Minmatar Legion of Dynamic Discord
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Posted - 2008.08.05 00:35:00 -
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"I've been waiting for you."
A thousand thoughts rose in my mind as I heard this. Half a minute before, back in my Rifter, surrounded by fellow Militia and a big bunch of pirates, I instantly hit warp as I noticed a lock on. I swore as
"Feel at home."
the ship ID showed "Interceptor". What seemed like an eternity passed: The lock time of three Battlecruisers, superimposed on this unnerving
"It's nice to finally have you here."
feeling of initiating warp while being scrambled. Blaster, Laser and Autocannon fire. More unnerving feelings, the confusion of a ship change intermixed with the reluctance of my pod's stressed systems to let my will in.
"Don't be surprised when you open my eyes."
I did not intend to. What I wanted to do was to recollect and firm the rest of what happened, organise my thoughts.
"Don't let me bother you, I'm fine."
I did not even listen, I knew I would hear that. Yes. More scrambling, the ignorance only a pod can have when you wish it to hell for failing to obey you in time. Acceptance.
"You don't need me any more."
Letting go, arriving. Peace. A thousand thoughts: My memories. Silence.
"You will hear the same from me when it's time."
I felt my forehead being gently pushed back from the inside, as if someone wanted to make sure I'm listening.
"Please don't breathe when you open my eyes. There's liquid all around. Do you feel it?"
Yes. I smiled, opened my eyes and smiled even more. I'd have to loose my virginity all over again, again.
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Kitoba
Minmatar Legion of Dynamic Discord
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Posted - 2008.08.17 17:07:00 -
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Did I flabbergast everyone or does it really suck?
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Veron Daerth
Amarr Blood Meridian
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Posted - 2008.08.18 06:27:00 -
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Well, I thought it was good. I just, I dunno. I liked it, but in the same way that I liked Neon Genesis Evangelion. (if you dont know what that is, you dont need to know, it WILL melt ur brain) It confused me and made me actually look at it again and think. Very surreal in a way.
All in all, its very very good.
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Tobias Xiaosen
Gallente The Perfect Storm The Red Skull
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Posted - 2008.08.19 05:31:00 -
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now THAT was a cool little story, exactly what i wanted to read atm tbh! thank you! |
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