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4rc4ng3L
Gallente C R Y O
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Posted - 2008.08.14 23:02:00 -
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Define Mistake
Coming Soon
I'm happy to finally be able to tell you all about eves first graphic novel soon by be released for the fans, by the fans.
Define Mistake, covers the adventures of three pod pilots, Arc, Laz and Thor, and their adventure through 0.0 space shipless and alone in pods. How they get there, how they get out, and everything in between.
Here are a few samples of the early versions.
Please bare in mind all of what you see are pages from work in progress stages and may/will have changed in the final release:
Sample Page 1 Sample Page 2 Sample Page 3
Initially volume 1 will be released in 2 parts. With plans for more volumes already being worked on provided we get a good response part one.
-- To give even more back to you guys a competition will be held on release giving away Copies of E-ON, EvE posters and one(maybe more?) signed printed versions of Define Mistake. --
The people behind this project are:
Myself: Art/Story Saint Lazarus: Story Thorexion Lynch: Story
Expected release date for Volume 1: part 1 is early november.
Did i mention its FREE :)
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MotherMoon
Huang Yinglong
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Posted - 2008.08.14 23:06:00 -
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cool good luck, most projects even those put in EON fail to ever materialize.
Originally by: Dapanman1 Terrible idea, you're an idiot
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4rc4ng3L
Gallente C R Y O
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Posted - 2008.08.14 23:08:00 -
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Originally by: MotherMoon cool good luck, most projects even those put in EON fail to ever materialize.
Thats why most of it was completed before we even mentioned it :)
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Locke DieDrake
Human Information Virus
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Posted - 2008.08.14 23:14:00 -
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Nice art. Hope the story is as good.
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Saint Lazarus
Spiorad ag fanaiocht
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Posted - 2008.08.14 23:18:00 -
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Actually have NOTHING to add but figured I should post.
Will say it is taking awhile but the artwork 4rc is making is pretty spiffy and storys gone through alot of changes but for the most part its coming along great -----------------
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Flamewave
Crimson Moon Society
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Posted - 2008.08.14 23:22:00 -
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Promising. The artwork is looking good. Looking forward to seeing the final product. __________
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4rc4ng3L
Gallente C R Y O
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Posted - 2008.08.14 23:57:00 -
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The story is rubbish, you'll hate it, its all about how shiney it looks!
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Neth'Rae
Gallente Decorum Inc Tygris Alliance
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Posted - 2008.08.15 08:14:00 -
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The art looks really good, but... It looks just like ingame, and I mean, you might aswell have taken screens from ingame.. That's a compliment in one way but bad in another way.. because I personally was expecting some more exclusive things like inside the pod, faces, people inside stations or inside of ships, stuff that you can't see ingame that adds more depth. Basically stuff behind the scenes of the current game, stuff that you can't see ingame but which you could draw in a comic.. It's what I'm interested in the most at least :)
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Scagga Laebetrovo
Ammatar Free Corps
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Posted - 2008.08.15 08:21:00 -
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Pretty pictures.
If you'd like some collaboration with the storylines, hit me up
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Drak Nijoba
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Posted - 2008.08.15 08:21:00 -
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Work on the dialogue boxes... like Thor: Blahblah Arc: Ahaha Laz: Duhh.
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CCP Whisper
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Posted - 2008.08.15 08:25:00 -
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Looks good! I really like the first page with the pod conga line. The style of the dialogue boxes spoils things a bit though. They just feel slapped on and are really jarring. Get those right though and I think you're on to something really epic here.
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sg3s
Battlestars GoonSwarm
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Posted - 2008.08.15 09:19:00 -
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I love the look of those pictures... Especially the last one with the 2 pods. Asuming those are in warp?
Cool story as well :) However a decent hurricane pilot would hit frigates, and tank them. Interceptors is a different story.
Originally by: Tarminic Because even when EVE sucks, it sucks less than every other MMO out there.
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4rc4ng3L
Gallente C R Y O
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Posted - 2008.08.15 09:22:00 -
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Originally by: Neth'Rae Edited by: Neth''Rae on 15/08/2008 08:23:28 Edited by: Neth''Rae on 15/08/2008 08:18:21 It looks just like ingame, and I mean, you might aswell have taken screens from ingame.. That's a compliment in one way but bad in another way.. because I personally was expecting some more exclusive things like inside the pod, faces, people inside stations or inside of ships, stuff that you can't see ingame that adds more depth. You can also add stuff like circuits or machinery inside the ship or cables inside the pod along with all the goo.. It's stuff like that which I'm interested in at least :)
Very simple reason for this. This project is my way of teaching myself how to use Painter X and Photoshop CS3, i'm more than happy to tell you that i simply dont have the skillset to start doing those as yet, thats the point of this learning project.
Also a big thing that needs to be remembered, im a full time college student, with a job that i work at any free day that i have off. If this thing has any chance of ever being released i have to limit how much time i spend on each panel/page etc.
Originally by: Neth'Rae Edited by: Neth''Rae on 15/08/2008 08:23:28 Edited by: Neth''Rae on 15/08/2008 08:18:21 Also, I see no speech bubbles, thought bubbles or any variation in the boxes? If it's radiochatter then add some spikes..
Originally by: CCP Whisper Looks good! I really like the first page with the pod conga line. The style of the dialogue boxes spoils things a bit though. They just feel slapped on and are really jarring. Get those right though and I think you're on to something really epic here.
As was mentioned, all the images are from 'work in progress' stages, basically a test phase for me. In particular, the dialog boxes shown were just a test to see how the conversation flowed on the page, nothing more.
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4rc4ng3L
Gallente C R Y O
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Posted - 2008.08.15 09:25:00 -
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Originally by: sg3s I love the look of those pictures... Especially the last one with the 2 pods. Asuming those are in warp?
Cool story as well :) However a decent hurricane pilot would hit frigates, and tank them. Interceptors is a different story.
The story has been changed slightly, certain eve mechanics had to be changed in order to make this story appeal to people outside of eve who have no idea about things we take for granted.
And example is the warp engines on the pods, i had to remove the truster effect cos it looked too similar the the 'out of warp' movement thrusters, so i turned some sections of the pod into 'in warp' engines. It adds an element of change, but makes it easier for the general reader to know whats happening. Also looks pretty dam cool XD
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