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jongalt
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Posted - 2007.11.13 19:33:00 -
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Originally by: Shadarle
We can all hold hands and wish for world peace too...
lol. cynical.
too bad theres a kernel of cowardice in cynicism.
-jg.
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Shadarle
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Posted - 2007.11.13 19:55:00 -
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Originally by: jongalt
Originally by: Shadarle
We can all hold hands and wish for world peace too...
lol. cynical.
too bad theres a kernel of cowardice in cynicism.
-jg.
Here are two replies, you pick which you like more:
1. Right... if you say so.
2. As opposed to the naivety in those lacking cynicism
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StarCrash
Minmatar The Graduates Brutally Clever Empire
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Posted - 2007.11.13 20:09:00 -
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Ok guys
Let me resay this for you as i m not 14 years old and the way i write is fine in england as 75% of people do it but never mind
There's a say were i m from if you dont ask you dont get i never ASSUME as that is a mistake because that would make a ASS out off YOU and ME so i never ASSUME
The reason i asked about the implants is because they are not in my head they are in my hanger
Yeah i can take your money and guess what to do but no i have come here for advise as i dont want you to invest in a idea that i m guessing at i know a mooning mining it the whole IPO that i dont understand to well its all right for those cutting my B***s off you been here and done that but we all have to start some were wouldnt you agree
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McRuder
Gallente Magnets and Duct Tape
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Posted - 2007.11.13 20:23:00 -
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Starcrash: A word of advice to you. Your first mistake was to ask a question in this forum. Any questions in this forum will be answered by thinly veiled insults. Your second mistake was to try to ask further questions, which only got you more insults. This Market Discussions forum is not the place to ask questions, unless you are known by the clique inhabiting this place. This forum is based on the Jerry Springer Show principles of discourse - a lot of chest beating, e-peen comparisons, shouting insults, and a very thin line of truth.
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Shadarle
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Posted - 2007.11.13 20:24:00 -
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Originally by: StarCrash Ok guys
Let me resay this for you as i m not 14 years old and the way i write is fine in england as 75% of people do it but never mind
There's a say were i m from if you dont ask you dont get i never ASSUME as that is a mistake because that would make a ASS out off YOU and ME so i never ASSUME
The reason i asked about the implants is because they are not in my head they are in my hanger
Yeah i can take your money and guess what to do but no i have come here for advise as i dont want you to invest in a idea that i m guessing at i know a mooning mining it the whole IPO that i dont understand to well its all right for those cutting my B***s off you been here and done that but we all have to start some were wouldnt you agree
I'm just curious, did punctuation do something horrible to you when you were a child?
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StarCrash
Minmatar The Graduates Brutally Clever Empire
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Posted - 2007.11.13 20:30:00 -
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Originally by: McRuder Starcrash: A word of advice to you. Your first mistake was to ask a question in this forum. Any questions in this forum will be answered by thinly veiled insults. Your second mistake was to try to ask further questions, which only got you more insults. This Market Discussions forum is not the place to ask questions, unless you are known by the clique inhabiting this place. This forum is based on the Jerry Springer Show principles of discourse - a lot of chest beating, e-peen comparisons, shouting insults, and a very thin line of truth.
Now the best thing to do is to stop posting in this thread. You will only incite them further.
understood.
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Matalino
Gallente Datacore Harvesting
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Posted - 2007.11.13 20:36:00 -
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Originally by: StarCrash The reason i asked about the implants is because they are not in my head they are in my hanger
In that case, there is no point talking about the implants as they will not help directly. Sell the implants, then state how much ISK you will be putting into the venture yourself. Originally by: McRuder Starcrash: A word of advice to you. Your first mistake was to ask a question in this forum. Any questions in this forum will be answered by thinly veiled insults. Your second mistake was to try to ask further questions, which only got you more insults. This Market Discussions forum is not the place to ask questions, unless you are known by the clique inhabiting this place.
Saddly this is true. There are a few that will still try to help you get your footing. I recommend that you ingor the hecklers, and focus on those who are helping you until you get your proposal finished.
You will need to prove your plan when it is ready, so make sure that the finished product is finished and viable before you announce it.
Apparently, some of those responding to your questions don't know the difference between IPO advice and a finished IPO. So you have gotten more critism so far than is warranted.
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northwesten
Amarr Trinity Corporate Services
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Posted - 2007.11.13 20:39:00 -
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Edited by: northwesten on 13/11/2007 20:42:21 sadly I think you biting more than you can chew! If you dont understand how to up a buisness plan together then I lower your target more simple.
I been asking Questions about stuff here but I have an Idea what i will do with the cash. Problem is tho I not sure how to make a business plan because i cant give figures how much people will earn from an ipo per month.
Moon mining with 4 towers to me is a big Project and a very large risk and alot of work. my of my old corp had hassle on logistic dealing with this and he spent more of his time dealing with the pos than drinking with nacked dancers. I really think you need to work on your research on this get your figure and info about your idea. See what you need ot maxs out your profits etc.
Sadly for you I think you shot your self in the foot and i wont be investing in your plan.
I have Ideas but I not very confident. So what I done I sold shares to EVE friends and trying it out (trade, T1 Production). This way if it fails I buy there shares back but I pay them 100% for the shares. Least my name wont be damaged. I cant do figures tho until I seen how much I getting out of trade / Production. Mining will boost the Profits tho as i use that cash to upgrade the ships and mods and sell more mins/ore. My income will be missions and wages from IPO I was thinking. I think this is a good way to start with IPO and gain Experiance from it.
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Dr Slurm
General Commodities
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Posted - 2007.11.13 20:42:00 -
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Originally by: McRuder Starcrash: A word of advice to you. Your first mistake was to ask a question in this forum. Any questions in this forum will be answered by thinly veiled insults. Your second mistake was to try to ask further questions, which only got you more insults. This Market Discussions forum is not the place to ask questions, unless you are known by the clique inhabiting this place. This forum is based on the Jerry Springer Show principles of discourse - a lot of chest beating, e-peen comparisons, shouting insults, and a very thin line of truth.
Now the best thing to do is to stop posting in this thread. You will only incite them further.
How wrong you are. I'm not denying there are springer like personalities here. Personally I just try to ignore them these days.
But the reaction the OP received was well deserved. He put little to no research into his proposed idea. He doesn't seem knowledgeable on any of the topics discussed and has no real business trying to get investors for his "experiment".
This is basically what I flipped my lid about back a month or two ago. People exactly like the OP get an idea into their head and see all these other people issuing IPO's. Then they see people literally throwing money at these IPO issuers for investment. It totally reminds me of the internet bubble back in the 90's. Any idiot could get investment on the dumbest idea if it involved the internet back then. This is becoming the case with this forum and it really should not be tolerated. The slap down in this respect was well deserved.
What you get out of something is exactly proportionate to how much you put into it. The OP put little effort into his post and got back exactly what he deserved.
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northwesten
Amarr Trinity Corporate Services
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Posted - 2007.11.13 20:44:00 -
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Originally by: Dr Slurm
Originally by: McRuder Starcrash: A word of advice to you. Your first mistake was to ask a question in this forum. Any questions in this forum will be answered by thinly veiled insults. Your second mistake was to try to ask further questions, which only got you more insults. This Market Discussions forum is not the place to ask questions, unless you are known by the clique inhabiting this place. This forum is based on the Jerry Springer Show principles of discourse - a lot of chest beating, e-peen comparisons, shouting insults, and a very thin line of truth.
Now the best thing to do is to stop posting in this thread. You will only incite them further.
How wrong you are. I'm not denying there are springer like personalities here. Personally I just try to ignore them these days.
But the reaction the OP received was well deserved. He put little to no research into his proposed idea. He doesn't seem knowledgeable on any of the topics discussed and has no real business trying to get investors for his "experiment".
This is basically what I flipped my lid about back a month or two ago. People exactly like the OP get an idea into their head and see all these other people issuing IPO's. Then they see people literally throwing money at these IPO issuers for investment. It totally reminds me of the internet bubble back in the 90's. Any idiot could get investment on the dumbest idea if it involved the internet back then. This is becoming the case with this forum and it really should not be tolerated. The slap down in this respect was well deserved.
What you get out of something is exactly proportionate to how much you put into it. The OP put little effort into his post and got back exactly what he deserved.
Agreed!
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Shadarle
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Posted - 2007.11.13 21:08:00 -
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Edited by: Shadarle on 13/11/2007 21:09:20 I am quite hopeful that I am one of the main people that is being referred to as being a heckler/harsh/etc. If generalstarscream here ever actually gets around to releasing an actual business plan and it has punctuation then I will have helped him far more than people coddling him and letting his horrid grammar slip.
Babying someone and holding their hand is not what I'm here for. If you want that then call for your mommy or daddy. If someone is giving forth an honest effort and seems to be on the right track then I'm happy to give some helpful tips. I've done so countless times before. But if someone has absolutely 0 clue what they are doing then it's time for them to sit down, read a bunch of threads, read through the stickies and do some research on their own. And once this is done if they have a few questions still, then it is time to ask them.
It is very easy to tell the difference between someone who has done their research and those who can't be bothered to and instead want others to do it for them.
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northwesten
Amarr Trinity Corporate Services
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Posted - 2007.11.13 21:16:00 -
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Originally by: Shadarle Edited by: Shadarle on 13/11/2007 21:09:20 I am quite hopeful that I am one of the main people that is being referred to as being a heckler/harsh/etc. If generalstarscream here ever actually gets around to releasing an actual business plan and it has punctuation then I will have helped him far more than people coddling him and letting his horrid grammar slip.
Babying someone and holding their hand is not what I'm here for. If you want that then call for your mommy or daddy. If someone is giving forth an honest effort and seems to be on the right track then I'm happy to give some helpful tips. I've done so countless times before. But if someone has absolutely 0 clue what they are doing then it's time for them to sit down, read a bunch of threads, read through the stickies and do some research on their own. And once this is done if they have a few questions still, then it is time to ask them.
It is very easy to tell the difference between someone who has done their research and those who can't be bothered to and instead want others to do it for them.
hehe when i get to the states 2moro i be on these forums later ot ask some more questions. I do agree with you tho! EVE harsh and IPO is harsh! grammar tho not an issue tho as nothing to do with ipo. Tho when it comes to putting the plan foreward then yes. lol
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Dr Slurm
General Commodities
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Posted - 2007.11.13 21:29:00 -
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Originally by: northwesten
Originally by: Shadarle Edited by: Shadarle on 13/11/2007 21:09:20 I am quite hopeful that I am one of the main people that is being referred to as being a heckler/harsh/etc. If generalstarscream here ever actually gets around to releasing an actual business plan and it has punctuation then I will have helped him far more than people coddling him and letting his horrid grammar slip.
Babying someone and holding their hand is not what I'm here for. If you want that then call for your mommy or daddy. If someone is giving forth an honest effort and seems to be on the right track then I'm happy to give some helpful tips. I've done so countless times before. But if someone has absolutely 0 clue what they are doing then it's time for them to sit down, read a bunch of threads, read through the stickies and do some research on their own. And once this is done if they have a few questions still, then it is time to ask them.
It is very easy to tell the difference between someone who has done their research and those who can't be bothered to and instead want others to do it for them.
hehe when i get to the states 2moro i be on these forums later ot ask some more questions. I do agree with you tho! EVE harsh and IPO is harsh! grammar tho not an issue tho as nothing to do with ipo. Tho when it comes to putting the plan foreward then yes. lol
I disagree. If you want investors to have confidence in you then you should make the simple effort to conjugate and punctuate your sentences properly. Spelling words like what as "wot" is just plain and simple lame. You are forcing your reader to think harder just because you couldn't be bothered to spell correctly.
If you can't bring yourself to communicate on the common level, why should I be bothered to read it?
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Ricdic's Hoe
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Posted - 2007.11.13 21:40:00 -
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hehe northwestern has been popping up in a lot of threads these last few weeks. It smells like he is about to start his own IPO. But by being here and reading how others are going I hope he will take on the advice given to other's when doing so or risk walking the same path.
I feel comfortable in the busineses that have thus far gone through. There are obviously a couple that are in a questionable state right now, Bluedice and PSI corp, but I think those are pretty good percentages compared to those available.
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Shadarle
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Posted - 2007.11.13 21:41:00 -
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Originally by: Dr Slurm
Originally by: northwesten
Originally by: Shadarle Edited by: Shadarle on 13/11/2007 21:09:20 I am quite hopeful that I am one of the main people that is being referred to as being a heckler/harsh/etc. If generalstarscream here ever actually gets around to releasing an actual business plan and it has punctuation then I will have helped him far more than people coddling him and letting his horrid grammar slip.
Babying someone and holding their hand is not what I'm here for. If you want that then call for your mommy or daddy. If someone is giving forth an honest effort and seems to be on the right track then I'm happy to give some helpful tips. I've done so countless times before. But if someone has absolutely 0 clue what they are doing then it's time for them to sit down, read a bunch of threads, read through the stickies and do some research on their own. And once this is done if they have a few questions still, then it is time to ask them.
It is very easy to tell the difference between someone who has done their research and those who can't be bothered to and instead want others to do it for them.
hehe when i get to the states 2moro i be on these forums later ot ask some more questions. I do agree with you tho! EVE harsh and IPO is harsh! grammar tho not an issue tho as nothing to do with ipo. Tho when it comes to putting the plan foreward then yes. lol
I disagree. If you want investors to have confidence in you then you should make the simple effort to conjugate and punctuate your sentences properly. Spelling words like what as "wot" is just plain and simple lame. You are forcing your reader to think harder just because you couldn't be bothered to spell correctly.
If you can't bring yourself to communicate on the common level, why should I be bothered to read it?
I take it even worse than you do Slurm. When I see someone unable to even use punctuation or to use "wot" instead of what I actually question their intelligence. It is not clear to me if the person even knows better.
At least if I saw them write an entire post correctly then I'd know they were just lazy and not stupid. But then I'd be in the place you're in now... questioning why I should waste my time reading something if the person won't spend time to write it correctly.
A tip to anyone thinking of issuing an IPO: When you're unknown and asking for people to give you money, the last thing you want to do is to give them a reason not to invest in you or to instill a sense of doubt in your abilities. Being unable to write at a decent level scares the hell out of me. I give some slack to people who are not native English speakers, but it's not a blank check to abuse the language and communicate poorly.
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Shar Tegral
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Posted - 2007.11.13 21:53:00 -
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Originally by: Matalino Just cut him a little slack in trying to understand what the template should contain.
On my first post and my third post I was being dispassionate. I honestly suggested to him to speak with Fastlearner via alliance venues. This would have actually spared him the commentary that was provided here. He could've been guided to more information and knowledge and then returned with a more robust offering worthy of his desires. My second post was a mistake I'll admit. I honestly could've sworn that he was simply winding us up. I'm not infallible and I'm not against investing in him. Currently, as I see it, he's not given any cause to be confident in his grasp of the basic business plan not to mention the wherewithal to attempt running a fund. (The second imho is not as important.) In closing, you'll simply note that I provided the young man with links to research and learn and points for him to address with action, not with counterarguments. It is up to him to try to put his best face forward, not you. If he doesn't try, for his own sake, why are you trying for him? I'm not unsympathetic mind you... I just don't make decisions based on any sympathy I may feel. In the words of Asmiov's famous character, "Never let your sense of morals get in the way of doing what's right."
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Shadarle
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Posted - 2007.11.13 22:05:00 -
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Originally by: Shar Tegral In the words of Asmiov's famous character, "Never let your sense of morals get in the way of doing what's right."
I've never seen that quote before but I love it!
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McRuder
Gallente Magnets and Duct Tape
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Posted - 2007.11.13 22:24:00 -
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For those that can not be bothered to read:
Thread Topic: IPO help needed.
Quote: I wanna get in to the IPO business and would like some advice
Quote: But if i m to be honest i m not really sure on how to write an IPO up and wot i should put in one
Quote: can anyone help me wiv this
Please tell me where in this thread do you see an IPO? Where is this IPO you are discussing?
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northwesten
Amarr Trinity Corporate Services
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Posted - 2007.11.13 22:25:00 -
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Originally by: Dr Slurm
Originally by: northwesten
Tho when it comes to putting the plan foreward then yes.
I disagree. If you want investors to have confidence in you then you should make the simple effort to conjugate and punctuate your sentences properly. Spelling words like what as "wot" is just plain and simple lame. You are forcing your reader to think harder just because you couldn't be bothered to spell correctly.
If you can't bring yourself to communicate on the common level, why should I be bothered to read it?
you missed that bit
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Selene D'Celeste
Caldari The D'Celeste Estate
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Posted - 2007.11.13 22:27:00 -
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Edited by: Selene D''Celeste on 13/11/2007 22:34:14 This thread is amazing. I was having a ****ty day and this thread made it all better. I love you guys.
But ahh, just to add something (arguably) useful via the ancient art of the directionless rant.
The harshness from most regulars here may come off as abrasive or hostile, but this is a trial by fire locale. I don't even think we're particularly harsh. And an IPOs success is certainly not just about documentation. There are some weird-ass poorly-documented IPOs that will reach their limit in 10s of billions within a day or two, and there are massively documented IPOs that are only asking for 2-5b that fail outright.
I agree with Dr Slurm when he wrote "What you get out of something is exactly proportionate to how much you put into it.". I will also say that the basic rule around here is: know how to communicate, know what the hell you're talking about, know how to handle criticism, and know how to communicate. Oh, and know how to be a witty ass. =D
I had more crap to say about cliques being a bunch of crap, but then I got tired of listening to myself write (what the hell?) and am just stopping here.
Let's end with this: if you fail at semi-professional communication, you will fail in this forum.
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Matalino
Gallente Datacore Harvesting
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Posted - 2007.11.13 22:27:00 -
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Originally by: Shar Tegral My second post was a mistake I'll admit.
I actually thought that your second post was fair. Harsh perhaps, but fair. StarCrash did come here notably unprepared, as such I think it best that we send him back to the drawing board before giving him any ISK.
He came to us stating that his plans were still on the drawing board, so we should be focusing on the information we expect to see. He asked us a question about what assets he should list in the IPO.
It was Shadarle's comment that I found to be over the top.
I quoted your list so that StarCrash would know what to focus on. He needs to cover all of those points.
Shadarle's response to an honest question about what StarCrash should state as his assets, was not constructive.
The guy basicly asked if he should list his personal assets as well as the corp assets in the IPO, and Shadarle's response is that nobody should invest in him because he had the nerve to ask such a simple question.
It is total fair to rip apart his business plan or lack of plan. Send him back to the drawing board until he gets it right, if he ever can.
But to chastise him for asking if we wanted to know about his personal assets as well as the corp assets in the IPO, come on, we shouldn't be that hard on the guy.
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Dr Slurm
General Commodities
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Posted - 2007.11.13 22:31:00 -
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Originally by: McRuder For those that can not be bothered to read:
Thread Topic: IPO help needed. [translation]Could someone please write an IPO for me?[/translation]
Quote: I wanna get in to the IPO business and would like some advice
[translation]I see a chance for some easy money, can you tell me how to get it?[/translation]
Quote: But if i m to be honest i m not really sure on how to write an IPO up and wot i should put in one
[translation]Mommy, do you think you could do my homework for me, otherwise I might miss the bus?[/translation]
Quote: can anyone help me wiv this
[translation]Please flog me with a copy of Oxford English dictionary[/translation]
Please tell me where in this thread do you see an IPO? Where is this IPO you are discussing?
There is none, but that's hardly the point. First impressions are everything. This one just leaves a bad taste in your mouth.
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Shadarle
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Posted - 2007.11.13 22:50:00 -
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Originally by: Matalino But to chastise him for asking if we wanted to know about his personal assets as well as the corp assets in the IPO, come on, we shouldn't be that hard on the guy.
Actually, this is not what I was doing. In fact I could barely even figure out what he was asking due to the horrendous nature of his grammar. Until you just explained what he was asking I still didn't know what he was saying in the quoted section.
When I read it initially and a few times afterwards I was sure he was intentionally writing as poorly as possible in order to further pull the leg of posters here. I was sure no one could possibly write that badly after being told that he should stop using slang and abbreviations, etc.
Honestly, this comes down to a question of "Is he too lazy to write better or not intelligent enough to know better?"
Neither is a good answer, but at least if he is just lazy that could possibly change. We'll see if he is going to take it more seriously in the future or not.
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Shar Tegral
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Posted - 2007.11.13 23:05:00 -
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Originally by: Shadarle I've never seen that quote before but I love it!
Then you really should read the foundation series. The first book is the best one imho but the entire series is seminal to all sci-fi that followed it.
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Dr Slurm
General Commodities
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Posted - 2007.11.13 23:27:00 -
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Originally by: northwesten Edited by: northwesten on 13/11/2007 22:40:45
Originally by: Dr Slurm
Originally by: northwesten
Tho when it comes to putting the plan foreward then yes.
I disagree. If you want investors to have confidence in you then you should make the simple effort to conjugate and punctuate your sentences properly. Spelling words like what as "wot" is just plain and simple lame. You are forcing your reader to think harder just because you couldn't be bothered to spell correctly.
If you can't bring yourself to communicate on the common level, why should I be bothered to read it?
you missed that bit
I didn't miss it at all. I think you should present a respectful form of communication when you are using a board like this. I think it is acceptable to use slang when you are chatting with someone, but not when you are posting to what is essentially a public record. I think this is even more important if you ever plan on presenting an IPO.
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Benvie
Benvie Enterprises
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Posted - 2007.11.13 23:30:00 -
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Originally by: Shadarle When I read it initially and a few times afterwards I was sure he was intentionally writing as poorly as possible in order to further pull the leg of posters here. I was sure no one could possibly write that badly after being told that he should stop using slang and abbreviations, etc.
I honestly and truly believed this as well for most of the first page. I know we can't be alone. The slang and grammar is so atrocious that surely someone asking for 10 billion ISK or whatever couldn't be writing like that. To me, giving this person a significant amount of ISK is similar to giving a teenage street thug a bunch ofmoney, after all they talk the same.
Dr. Slurm is correct, first impression are important. After this showing I personally wouldn't give him ISK no matter what else he wrote so giving him advice is nearly pointless. I think that view is shared by others here.
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northwesten
Amarr Trinity Corporate Services
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Posted - 2007.11.13 23:39:00 -
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Originally by: Benvie
Originally by: Shadarle When I read it initially and a few times afterwards I was sure he was intentionally writing as poorly as possible in order to further pull the leg of posters here. I was sure no one could possibly write that badly after being told that he should stop using slang and abbreviations, etc.
I honestly and truly believed this as well for most of the first page. I know we can't be alone. The slang and grammar is so atrocious that surely someone asking for 10 billion ISK or whatever couldn't be writing like that. To me, giving this person a significant amount of ISK is similar to giving a teenage street thug a bunch ofmoney, after all they talk the same.
Dr. Slurm is correct, first impression are important. After this showing I personally wouldn't give him ISK no matter what else he wrote so giving him advice is nearly pointless. I think that view is shared by others here.
mm Well i hope the impression of me not damaged to my spelling and grammar. Tho I not that good at it but it doesn't really say about the person intelligence. When it comes to talking about it and such it doesn't matter to me tho but when the Reaease an business or IPO plan with bad mistakes then yer I wouldn't touch it because to me just rushed. I get someone to cross check it in my case to make sure you guys understand it :) What he says or lack of is what important. In Op chase he just hast looked into this very well and asking for what 5 bill for a 4 pos chain that didn't impress me at all.
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Benvie
Benvie Enterprises
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Posted - 2007.11.13 23:42:00 -
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You're missing some punctuation and some words but at least you're not using a bunch of dumb slang, AND you haven't published a business plan. The prospectus needs to be semi-literate.
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northwesten
Amarr Trinity Corporate Services
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Posted - 2007.11.13 23:45:00 -
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Originally by: Benvie You're missing some punctuation and some words but at least you're not using a bunch of dumb slang, AND you haven't published a business plan. The prospectus needs to be semi-literate.
yer its 23:44 and i been up since 2am this morning! so missing words = tired! anyhow i off to bed :) up in an hour O.o
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Kirjava
Lothian Quay Industries Zzz
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Posted - 2007.11.13 23:57:00 -
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Originally by: Benvie You're missing some punctuation and some words but at least you're not using a bunch of dumb slang, AND you haven't published a business plan. The prospectus needs to be semi-literate.
Ironicaly he wants advice at the moment, not to sell his shares. I suppose he might possibly have read my IPO that was sold out fast, and thought "that's what I want to do" and is now trying to make it seem like it is his idea..... Ohwell, if his works better I deserve it.
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