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Terianna Eri
Amarr
Scrutari
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Posted - 2009.04.19 17:55:00 -
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 Originally by: WilliamH Bonney
You don't have to make people people laugh with comedy, especially now a days.
>don't have to make people laugh
>comedy
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destinationZERO
Minmatar
Pain Management Services
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Posted - 2009.04.19 23:17:00 -
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honest comment - you should learn to speak & spell correctly first in order to try and use the language to do something more with it.
and man, 'yo mama is so fat jokes' ?
i watched the vid for 30 seconds and then turned it off.
it's not hard to swear and look like a douchebag that we can see hundreds of on the streets today. Originality is what sells comedy.
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WilliamH Bonney
Lyonesse.
KIA Alliance
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Posted - 2009.04.20 01:57:00 -
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well, again, no sweat off my nose. And with 30 seconds, of the first video, that I even admit to being pretty bad man. The introduction video is like the hardest, trying to introduce and still keeping in character. That's right, I don't actually speak like that... I am playing a character, one that I came up with. You know, costumes, props and stuff.
But the real "genius" that someone pointed out to me today of my own comedy, something I didn't even realize, is that I'm not really changing much. My personality is a blend of all these Billy's. All I have to do is change a word, or use different words just a little bit more, or act a little bit more spacy then I already am, and it's done, gold man.
So, I mean, you can keep on being the way you are, close-minded I'm sorry to say. Or you could give me a real shot, wait a day or two, when I have all my videos edited and fixed and stuff. I was all excited, got too carried away, and released stuff before I was ready, my bad, jumped the gun. Releasing premature has never been my problem before, guess this time though I'm really disappointing all the chicks.
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WilliamH Bonney
Lyonesse.
KIA Alliance
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Posted - 2009.04.20 04:34:00 -
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Update:
I just finished converting all of my videos, was total of about 2 hours of it, to .wmv format. They were originally .mov, and I guess a lot of people's media players can't read the codec, so I converted 'em for everyone.
Also working cutting them up a bit, so that I can put more of them up on YouTube, because I just don't like the one that's up there. It doesn't make much sense without the other vid's.
So, hope at least some Eve people enjoy them.
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Cing Liberdanis
Fear Inc
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Posted - 2009.04.20 04:50:00 -
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This is one very good troll....
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WilliamH Bonney
Lyonesse.
KIA Alliance
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Posted - 2009.04.20 13:15:00 -
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Edited by: WilliamH Bonney on 20/04/2009 13:16:02
Eh, I'm the OP, don't read my post if you don't want to.
Now, if people want to continue a bit, and see where I was going with my "comedy special" so to speak, since so far it's 2 hours long and still going, well, I put another exerpt on youtube. It's only 5 minutes long, and skips an important chapter, but see if you get a bit more. There's a lot of lead up to the big shabang when your comedy sketch is 3 or 4 hours long...so yeah, some of the early ****'s gonna be a bit dry.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3YYTdPZU5A
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Giannamichaels
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Posted - 2009.04.20 14:39:00 -
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Edited by: Giannamichaels on 20/04/2009 14:40:15
Edited by: Giannamichaels on 20/04/2009 14:39:48
Sorry OP but if i see the words man and sh it ever again i am going to kill somebody (ingame ofcourse)
I could not manage to read more than a paragraph or 2 it pained me to see man and sh it used so often.
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dracozna
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Posted - 2009.04.20 17:35:00 -
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Originally by: WilliamH Bonney
Now, if people want to continue a bit, and see where I was going with my "comedy special" so to speak, since so far it's 2 hours long and still going, well, I put another excerpt on youtube. It's only 5 minutes long, and skips an important chapter, but see if you get a bit more. There's a lot of lead up to the big shabang when your comedy sketch is 3 or 4 hours long...so yeah, some of the early ****'s gonna be a bit dry.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3YYTdPZU5A
I watched it (i'm a miner in EVE, I've got time). The storytelling part is getting better. No swearing and stuff. But still not funny, only a story.
So yes, there's improvement. Now work on the funny bits.
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Jago Kain
Amarr
Ramm's RDI
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Posted - 2009.04.20 20:33:00 -
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I think the OP made a spelling mistake in the thread title; you don't spell "Appalling" like that.
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Cing Liberdanis
Fear Inc
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Posted - 2009.04.20 22:34:00 -
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Originally by: Jago Kain
I think the OP made a spelling mistake in the thread title; you don't spell "Appalling" like that.
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WilliamH Bonney
Lyonesse.
KIA Alliance
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Posted - 2009.04.20 23:13:00 -
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Originally by: dracozna
Originally by: WilliamH Bonney
Now, if people want to continue a bit, and see where I was going with my "comedy special" so to speak, since so far it's 2 hours long and still going, well, I put another excerpt on youtube. It's only 5 minutes long, and skips an important chapter, but see if you get a bit more. There's a lot of lead up to the big shabang when your comedy sketch is 3 or 4 hours long...so yeah, some of the early ****'s gonna be a bit dry.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3YYTdPZU5A
I watched it (i'm a miner in EVE, I've got time). The storytelling part is getting better. No swearing and stuff. But still not funny, only a story.
So yes, there's improvement. Now work on the funny bits.
you really have to see it all, start to ending, to really get the "funny" out of everything.
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ReaperOfSly
Gallente
Zetsubou Corp
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Posted - 2009.04.21 13:43:00 -
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Then you're doing it wrong. If you don't grab people's attention early on, they will get bored and close the video.
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