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Zephyr Mallory
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Posted - 2006.04.06 03:48:00 -
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I got the basic parts set up. This is just a dry run to see what kind of response I get from the community here. If it goes over well I'll clean it up and add another episode in a day or two, proper subpages, navigation, etcetera etcetera.
Oh, and if I do a strip involving specific real players I will try to contact them before it's published. if nothing else to at least warn them.
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Raven Aure
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Posted - 2006.04.06 03:55:00 -
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From my point of view, so so. The humour felt a bit predictable for me. But hey, I'm just one voice! Don't let me get you down...
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Zephyr Mallory
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Posted - 2006.04.06 03:57:00 -
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well, most of us have been there.
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Efbiai Ehgent
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Posted - 2006.04.06 04:20:00 -
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It better than what i woulda made.
try making some more. i espcially like how one of the ibis' is up-side down
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Eternal Fury
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Posted - 2006.04.06 04:24:00 -
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It's hard to get a feel for it from one comic.
The title of the site catches the eye, and sticks in the mind.
As long as you can make the humor reletive tot he game and .. well... funny, then you should be OK.
I'd suggest make 4 more, all of them a way of introduceing your comic, showing peopel what it's going to be about, and so on. You gotta hook people :)
Looks clean though, images look good, no border on your comic though.. kinda expect it, but it could be something unique(ish) to your comic.
keep going....
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Slavaski D'tover
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Posted - 2006.04.06 05:01:00 -
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It definately has potential, worth a bookmark from me :) Good luck, hope this turns out well.
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Micia
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Posted - 2006.04.06 05:08:00 -
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Hehe, that was exactly what my first undocking was like. 
Yah, try out some more. 
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LWMaverick
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Posted - 2006.04.06 06:44:00 -
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 Not bad.
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Qalten
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Posted - 2006.04.06 06:50:00 -
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Definitely potential here... I encourage you to make another four or five to flesh it out a bit. Much, much better than all the other comics that have been attempted in recent months, the exception being WDA, naturally. (when Winterblink updates it, that is  ).
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Testy Mctest
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Posted - 2006.04.06 06:54:00 -
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Going by the humour and your sig humour, I think you're probably going to need a writer.
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Gungankllr
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Posted - 2006.04.06 07:03:00 -
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I actually laughed out loud when I saw that.
I had to go to Kisogo for some skillbooks the other day, and I was awestruck by all the noobships bouncing around the exits of the station. 
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Vincent Gaines
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Posted - 2006.04.06 07:12:00 -
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lol that's EXACTLY what I saw when I came out of Kisogo the first time
then a charon flew by me and I felt very, very small.
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Karn Edge
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Posted - 2006.04.06 07:25:00 -
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It's definitely got potential! Keep going, and you'll be up there soon enough. I gotta say though, you need to seperate the segments a little more though, I kept looking at the picture instead. It kinda ruined the punch line, but not totally.
:D All in all, good job!
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Chai N'Dorr
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Posted - 2006.04.06 07:43:00 -
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Made me smile
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Necrologic
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Posted - 2006.04.06 08:13:00 -
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I agree that it has potential. If i may offer some advice i'd say don't try to make it like another Warp Drive Active. It doesn't look like you really are based off that one, but i don't know what you are planning.
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Scorpyn
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Posted - 2006.04.06 08:15:00 -
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Bookmarked 
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Revara
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Posted - 2006.04.06 10:14:00 -
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i'll look at it most days when i'm at work mate - keep em coming first one was funny :)
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FFS CCP do something against suicide ganks in empire,u cannot transport stuff in empire worth 200mil since you just get blown up by a lame suicide BS
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Valkazm
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Posted - 2006.04.06 10:25:00 -
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will bokmark if i see more of it preferebly faster update aswell spit it out and dont bother with the critics nice work .
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Flyyn
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Posted - 2006.04.06 10:36:00 -
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Yes, its a little dry, but thats Eve. As for your Sig...Thats also the CCP dev team all the way...They give us a new toy and make it hard to get with out a dozen new skills.
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Usul Faust
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Posted - 2006.04.06 10:39:00 -
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i didn't think it was very funny, but don't let that put you off.
Humour is very subjective and i regularly **** myself laughing at children falling over in the street, so my sense of humour is a bit suspect to start with.
no skills, just luck.
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Captain Tightpants
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Posted - 2006.04.06 11:32:00 -
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Winterbliiiiiiiiiiiiiiink!
Look at what you've started!
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AlvynNevins
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Posted - 2006.04.06 11:36:00 -
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yay.. i like it
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Gaelzor Falmite
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Posted - 2006.04.06 11:44:00 -
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Looks amusing, would like to see some more.
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Helplessandlost
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Posted - 2006.04.06 13:04:00 -
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I like the idea that I see this following - I envision it following the same format of another web-comic I like called "the noob" If this is what your planning I would definetly follow it.
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HippoKing
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Posted - 2006.04.06 13:15:00 -
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not bad at all
Win a Cerberus!!
sigs of the 23/24/25 hijack just as well -eris
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Winterblink
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Posted - 2006.04.06 13:16:00 -
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Originally by: Captain Tightpants
Winterbliiiiiiiiiiiiiiink!
Look at what you've started!
If I've inspired someone to try something like this then that does nothing but make me happy. :)
Profanity is not allowed in signatures, regardless of language used. --Jorauk
Profanity? What profanity?
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mirel yirrin
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Posted - 2006.04.06 13:39:00 -
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Originally by: Zephyr Mallory
I got the basic parts set up. This is just a dry run to see what kind of response I get from the community here. If it goes over well I'll clean it up and add another episode in a day or two, proper subpages, navigation, etcetera etcetera.
Oh, and if I do a strip involving specific real players I will try to contact them before it's published. if nothing else to at least warn them.
Click here
I love it, I absolutley-****in-love it :D
More, MORE. NOW NOW!
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Gericault m0id
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Posted - 2006.04.06 13:47:00 -
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I liked it a lot
One (constructive) criticism. Try to use fewer words. e.g. the last image could do with only the picture with a n00b painted on each ship
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Winterblink
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Posted - 2006.04.06 13:50:00 -
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Originally by: Gericault m0id
I liked it a lot
One (constructive) criticism. Try to use fewer words. e.g. the last image could do with only the picture with a n00b painted on each ship
Less words, more pictures? What are you, part Minmatar? :)
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Profanity? What profanity?
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M3ta7h3ad
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Posted - 2006.04.06 14:09:00 -
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Originally by: Winterblink
Originally by: Gericault m0id
I liked it a lot
One (constructive) criticism. Try to use fewer words. e.g. the last image could do with only the picture with a n00b painted on each ship
Less words, more pictures? What are you, part Minmatar? :)
ROFL! :D The above quote is funnier than the comic and the sig combined.
I give it two meh's  . Doesnt get a rofl or a lol but.. could in future.
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