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Potamus Jenkins
The Lucky Bible Company
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Posted - 2011.12.07 05:47:00 -
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I used to get a weird bug where when moving probes around i couldnt "grab" the top or side, even with my mouse hovering over the top space only the arrows would light up. It would then be impossible to do anything but click the arrows until i moved the probe around via arrows. Anyways it was annoying as hell and now whatever you did to the probing screen I can easily grab the probes and move them. I noticed they dont light up any more with the mouse I guess thats part of it.
anyways
yey |
Alyssa Yotosala
School of Applied Knowledge
Caldari State
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Posted - 2011.12.07 20:54:00 -
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Cool story bro!
Slow build up, but well rounded at the end, with interesting character development and a storyline that keeps you guessing right until the absorbing climax at the end. Some authors like to drag out a story to enhance the feeling of conflict between the major characters, but this author has shown excellent self control and pulled back from that common error.
Grammar and spelling needs another once over by the Editor, but otherwise, not a bad body of work.
6/10 for effort
7/10 for the "wow factor"
4/10 for originality
Verdict: recommended reading, must buy. |
Michus Danether
Immortalis Silens
Intrepid Crossing
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Posted - 2011.12.07 21:34:00 -
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Alyssa Yotosala wrote:Cool story bro!
Slow build up, but well rounded at the end, with interesting character development and a storyline that keeps you guessing right until the absorbing climax at the end. Some authors like to drag out a story to enhance the feeling of conflict between the major characters, but this author has shown excellent self control and pulled back from that common error.
Grammar and spelling needs another once over by the Editor, but otherwise, not a bad body of work.
6/10 for effort
7/10 for the "wow factor"
4/10 for originality
Verdict: recommended reading, must buy.
You used Scathing Rebuke, it hits for wrecking damage and is super effective. |
Potamus Jenkins
The Lucky Bible Company
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Posted - 2011.12.07 21:59:00 -
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Alyssa Yotosala wrote:Cool story bro!
Slow build up, but well rounded at the end, with interesting character development and a storyline that keeps you guessing right until the absorbing climax at the end. Some authors like to drag out a story to enhance the feeling of conflict between the major characters, but this author has shown excellent self control and pulled back from that common error.
Grammar and spelling needs another once over by the Editor, but otherwise, not a bad body of work.
6/10 for effort
7/10 for the "wow factor"
4/10 for originality
Verdict: recommended reading, must buy.
this was funny. |
Ammzi
Imperial Guardians
Blazing Angels Alliance
169
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Posted - 2011.12.07 22:49:00 -
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Alyssa Yotosala wrote:Cool story bro!
Slow build up, but well rounded at the end, with interesting character development and a storyline that keeps you guessing right until the absorbing climax at the end. Some authors like to drag out a story to enhance the feeling of conflict between the major characters, but this author has shown excellent self control and pulled back from that common error.
Grammar and spelling needs another once over by the Editor, but otherwise, not a bad body of work.
6/10 for effort
7/10 for the "wow factor"
4/10 for originality
Verdict: recommended reading, must buy.
I google'd parts of your reply and to my surprise I couldn't find exact matches elsewhere.
Did you seriously write this just now? If so 9/10 for troll factor.
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Potamus Jenkins
The Lucky Bible Company
16
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Posted - 2011.12.07 22:50:00 -
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ya i was impressed. that had to have taken much longer to come up with than my drunken glee filled ramblings. |
St Mio
Imperial Academy
Amarr Empire
164
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Posted - 2011.12.08 05:38:00 -
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An instant classic! |
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