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Constantinee
Caldari
Omerta Syndicate
Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2007.06.30 01:02:00 -
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Edited by: Constantinee on 30/06/2007 01:04:53
Well...this is the video that ive been working on for a while.
Its about 10 minuets. Contains alot of stabber footage and alot of vindicator footage. including the recent loss of the vindicator i was currently rebuilding (doesent matter to me thats my playstyle i have fun go diaf if you flame)
good fights here.
some feedback and constructive criticizm (not on my spelling please :P) would be nice.
This is my second major movie released to the eve public.
I hope you enjoy.
Insanity Reborn
const
edit oh btw the credits were supposed to be kinda funny linked with the song but well premier ***ed on me and i couldent be arsed to re edit and comress so what you get is what you see and hear....enjoy
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Yuki Li
Caldari
Omerta Syndicate
Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2007.06.30 01:26:00 -
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LERN 2 SPEEL.
Nice video, though I find the use of comic sans MS offensive, and wish you'd shown the rest of the last fight, if you have the fraps :p
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Constantinee
Caldari
Omerta Syndicate
Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2007.06.30 01:29:00 -
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 Originally by: Yuki Li
LERN 2 SPEEL.
Nice video, though I find the use of comic sans MS offensive, and wish you'd shown the rest of the last fight, if you have the fraps :p
dam,n you dl and watch fast...
i dont actually i was trying to save the ship and fraps was lagging me so i had cut it half way through dident really make a difference. i sorta wish i never let off that domi before backup came back but was trying to play that safe.
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WildSide
Infinitus Odium
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Posted - 2007.06.30 09:13:00 -
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nice vid.....specialy the fight on the gate agains several bs was thrilling(those who later popped u).
But some quotes and that music made it kinda wanna-be Pho or Farjung. U prob bether off using ure own "stile". just my humble opinion though.
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AlleyKat
Gallente
The Avalon Foundation
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Posted - 2007.06.30 11:32:00 -
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Originally by: WildSide
But some quotes and that music made it kinda wanna-be Pho or Farjung.
Agreed.
"What happens next remains unchanged", bit of a non sequitur for me, and later "However my can was successfully popped and it saved billions from falling into enemy hands", this is straight from Vindication III, and in your translation it is poorly worded - sorry.
I can handle the odd typo here and there in a video, we're not professionals after all, but at the very least don't take from others and mis-quote them. It's not easy finding your own style, I'll be the first to say it, but at least try and do something which is all your own work.
The same could be said for the font usage as this, once again, is from someone else's vid and it shows. There are thousands (millions?) of fonts out there, and gazillions of ways to put them on the screen - experiment, see what looks good to you, not what works on some other guys vid.
You choice of music, again, feels tired and used before - no originality, and certainly no sequencing or synching (that I could see) being used anywhere.
All of the above is a real shame, because the footage you had in the video was good stuff and you picked and Fraps it well. There is nothing wrong with your editing skills, as you have shown in the past, but you need to do things your way.
On your next vid, think about what you want to achieve with the message / story you are trying to tell, before you attempt to edit the film - because I fear you will fall into the trap of either copying someone else or the content descending into what you think is passe.
Your fights and your corp-mates are worth more than that.
Regards,
AK
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Constantinee
Caldari
Omerta Syndicate
Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2007.06.30 16:28:00 -
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Originally by: AlleyKat
Originally by: WildSide
But some quotes and that music made it kinda wanna-be Pho or Farjung.
Agreed.
"What happens next remains unchanged", bit of a non sequitur for me, and later "However my can was successfully popped and it saved billions from falling into enemy hands", this is straight from Vindication III, and in your translation it is poorly worded - sorry.
I can handle the odd typo here and there in a video, we're not professionals after all, but at the very least don't take from others and mis-quote them. It's not easy finding your own style, I'll be the first to say it, but at least try and do something which is all your own work.
The same could be said for the font usage as this, once again, is from someone else's vid and it shows. There are thousands (millions?) of fonts out there, and gazillions of ways to put them on the screen - experiment, see what looks good to you, not what works on some other guys vid.
You choice of music, again, feels tired and used before - no originality, and certainly no sequencing or synching (that I could see) being used anywhere.
All of the above is a real shame, because the footage you had in the video was good stuff and you picked and Fraps it well. There is nothing wrong with your editing skills, as you have shown in the past, but you need to do things your way.
On your next vid, think about what you want to achieve with the message / story you are trying to tell, before you attempt to edit the film - because I fear you will fall into the trap of either copying someone else or the content descending into what you think is passe.
Your fights and your corp-mates are worth more than that.
Regards,
AK
hmmm that seems true as ive heard it before. ok i have a way to change this. Since i really am not pleased im going to take the vindeo down for a day and re do it and see how it turns out. main reason for those songs was not to try and copie far anf pho as i know em both in game and they are awsome dudes. was mainly cause infact they matched the fraps speed. also about the text i thought that looked best against the black background. i agree afterwatching vindi 3 again that my wording is far to similar and i cannot have somehting like that reflecting my copr or myselfe as a video producer.
the video will be taken down and re released within the next day or 2 with my own style. i will take more time as i took very little time on this one and will hopefully make it better for yoiu all..
regards
const
and thank you for the goiod imput.
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Constantinee
Caldari
Omerta Syndicate
Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2007.07.02 04:17:00 -
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ITS RE RELEASED PEOPLE. LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU ALL THINK PLEASE!
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Wrayeth
Shiva
Morsus Mihi
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Posted - 2007.07.02 08:05:00 -
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Not bad. Needs more blurbs describing who the fight is against and what the circumstances leading up to them were.
-Wrayeth
n00b Extraordinaire
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Krychton
Omerta Syndicate
Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2007.07.02 16:32:00 -
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sweet vid Const, as always.
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If this is all a dream, don't wake me up.
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Constantinee
Caldari
Omerta Syndicate
Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2007.07.02 16:49:00 -
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Originally by: Wrayeth
Not bad. Needs more blurbs describing who the fight is against and what the circumstances leading up to them were.
let me clear this up...
good old fashiond im bored and i need to see a big boom :P
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AlleyKat
Gallente
The Avalon Foundation
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Posted - 2007.07.02 18:32:00 -
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Nice,
The changes you made were worth it - it did feel more individual this time.
Not sure if I mentioned this in another thread, but the standard text color Premiere gives you is not white, its very very close to white (RGB values are 229, not 255).
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chris lares
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Posted - 2007.07.04 01:56:00 -
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Dont watch this const eats little baabies and molestes poor defencless yuki :[
other wise hes all cool 
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Constantinee
Caldari
Omerta Syndicate
Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2007.07.04 02:29:00 -
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chris you know me all to well
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WildSide
Infinitus Odium
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Posted - 2007.07.05 07:08:00 -
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very nice now constantinee:)
btw it should be much cheaper to replace the reps now...amarr navy gives out the excact same reps now for about 50k lp and some tags+20mill isk:)
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Constantinee
Caldari
Omerta Syndicate
Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2007.07.06 01:29:00 -
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sweetness
Omerta Syndicate |
gerku
Priory Of The Lemon
R0ADKILL
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Posted - 2007.07.06 12:13:00 -
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downloading.... <3 constantinee
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Darth Nourphisous
Amarr
Omerta Syndicate
Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2007.07.07 17:13:00 -
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Great Movie Const
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Professional gamers
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Posted - 2007.07.11 09:56:00 -
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Viper ShizzIe
Coreli Corporation
Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2007.08.21 18:12:00 -
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Enjoyed it.
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