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Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.09 08:45:00 -
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I think the pose needs a slight adjustment so that your right eye doesn't look, umm.. off. And maybe some different lighting. Not bad. |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.10 10:59:00 -
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Sarah Schneider wrote:Nina Hayes wrote:You have a good base to work from Natalie, but it needs something to give it a bit more life 8.5 Interesting pose, but gives out that broken neck impression, so it doesn't quite work (for me at least). Needs a stronger eyeliner too imo. Overall 8/10 for effort and being original.
Nice color, lighting, everything's just polished up good. The only gripe I'd have (being picky) is that the eyes need a bit more life/personality. 9/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.12 17:41:00 -
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Considering that you're using one of my least favorite hairstyles and a huge face tatoo, your avatar actually looks pretty slick. I think you actually pull it off pretty well. Me thinks me likey. 7.5/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.13 08:24:00 -
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@ Jax I really like the face structure/hair/overall look. But the overly fake baked look distracts from the good too much. Maybe some different lighting or poses could minimize that...? Maybe throw in a little contrast, I'm not sure. 8/10
@Arakkis From that angle, your avatar reminds me of a goofy skinny villain type from cartoons. Maybe you could play that up some? As it is, it's a little bland. 6/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.13 20:02:00 -
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Really pretty, natural looking face. I like the light and lipstick. Too bad you had to wear your helmet for the picture :-)
8.5/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.14 06:54:00 -
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It's nice and lifelike, but seems a bit generic otherwise, and there's a shadow covering any eye expression. 7/10.
Somebody throw me some feedback on my new avatar before I change it again in a couple hours. |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.14 07:10:00 -
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I thought I was, lol. Maybe you're seeing the old one. How about this? Latest
Nice eyes, and nice smile. 7.5/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.15 07:27:00 -
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So... incredibly... white... Nice face and expression, but the brightness with black hair is a little jarring. Looks nicer after looking at it for a minute. 8+/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.15 16:16:00 -
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@Xinivrae Yep. It's grown on me. I think I love you, now. Dammit. I told myself I wouldn't let this happen again...
@Noffozz Decent face, but dreadlock hippies shouldn't be so expressionless 7/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.16 07:21:00 -
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@Traejun I really like the lifelike skin and wrinkles/imperfections. Makes it stand out in a good way, I think. Maybe a different background, but no big thing. 9/10
@Serena feels like the expression you're going for is "almost there" but not quite. Not sure if it's the lips, eyes, or what. Maybe the incredulous look doesn't go with a bright airy background? :-) Blue hair looks too plastic with the way the light shines on it. (Sorry for sounding too negative. It's got potential) 7/10
Oh yeah... and here's my latest (final?) avatar for rating, since most of you probably haven't cleared your caches in the last couple hours Final Draft |
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Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.16 18:03:00 -
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Doesn't look terrible, it's just completely forgettable and the hood hides any individuality. 5/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.17 07:02:00 -
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Don't remember if I rated yours before, so I had to say that yours is one of my favorites. The shadow works great for what you're doing, features are very nice. Everything just meshes well. Only fault I'd say is that it kinda looks too airbrushed (like mine), but that's as critical as I can get. 9+/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.17 19:57:00 -
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Can't really say anything bad about it. Maybe slightly too yellow...? That's getting pretty picky. I think it rocks. 9.5ish/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.18 17:02:00 -
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I'm glad I caught you. Yours is one of the more distinctive avatars to me, for some reason. The confidence with the slight boobage sticking out seems just right. Lighting might be a little flat, but I really like it, overall. 8.5/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.19 02:40:00 -
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I'll have to go with a 2/10, because your avatar doesn't look very nice.
It's not bad, though. I don't like shades too often, but it still looks alright. |
Adalynne Rohks
Federal Navy Academy Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.19 05:22:00 -
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@Henry Kaine I really like your avatar alot better in the big version. In the forum version you lose that cool glare that really finishes the look. I don't know if it can be zoomed in w/o losing the vibe. 8.5/10
@Fiona I see you changed your look a little while back. Not too glamorous, but it looks good and "all business". So if that's what you're going for, you nailed it. 7.5/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.20 22:58:00 -
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It seems pretty run of the mil and ordinary to me. Nothing really good or bad to say. It just IS :) 6/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Tax Evasion Anonymous
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Posted - 2012.07.21 09:11:00 -
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Rainbow Rogue wrote:Naughty 11/10
Hoodie 2.4/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.23 09:39:00 -
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I'm not a big fan. The wide, flat lips with the round face kinda don't work for me. The colors and everything else seem alright, but that face isn't doin it. 5/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.23 18:23:00 -
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Count me in as a fan, then. Yours is one of the ones where I can't explain exactly why I like it so much, but you've done a real good overall job with it. The only nitpick would be that the face looks slightly plasticky in the bigger version. 9/10 |
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Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.24 06:52:00 -
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It's kinda hard to get past the hand that's become a part of the opposite forearm. I don't like those backgrounds very often, but it seems alright there. 5/10? |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.24 19:16:00 -
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I like how you used lighting to really perfect the "emaciated Ethiopian with access to hair dye" look. Just need to find a way to put an AK-47 in that picture and it'd be perfect. 2/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.24 23:17:00 -
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Not bad. The expression is a little blank, to me. And I'm not a big fan of that hair, but it looks alright on you. 8/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.25 08:30:00 -
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I really love this avatar. My only problem is that I think it looks lots better in the small version. When it's zoomed in, the freckles and largish nose/mouth seem to stand out too much, taking away from the glam look you've got going. Still, very very nice. Might be in my top 5 or so, now. :-)
9+/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.26 17:47:00 -
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I like it overall. The color and lighting seems to blend pretty well.
It feels like there's too much space between your eyes and your mouth/chin area though. I don't know if a different tatoo would help, or adjusting the pose, but that's the main issue that sticks out to me. 8/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.27 01:01:00 -
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Awesomo. I can't think of one thing I don't like about it. Maybe that there's not much color? Nah. It's awesome. 9+/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.27 22:40:00 -
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Looks like a pretty avatar, but I'm not sold on the yellow lighting with white eyes. Colors aren't matching up too well, and your eyes look messed up, at least in the small version. That hairstyle is hard to pull off, but it looks alright on you. 7.5/10
edit: I really do like it much better in the larger version, but it doesn't look the same at all when it's smaller. |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.28 17:23:00 -
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It's much better than a couple days ago. Right now, the worst part is having your left pupil dragged over too far. Makes the avatar look cross-eyed. And the background is kinda meh. 8/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.28 21:56:00 -
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I don't remember getting to do yours, officially, so here goes... It's one of my favorites, too, so any nitpicking is just attempting to be constructive.
I think that you could go with a different iris color to make the eyes really pop. Right now they look good, but in the small version especially, they're just kinda black. Also, if there was a way to rotate your pose/head to eliminate the funky shadow on your shoulder, that would clean it up to just about perfect. Easier said than done, eh? :-)
9+/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.29 10:22:00 -
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@ Ishtanchuk
Lookin alot better now. The angle hides the eye and mouth flaws alot better, and the skin tone looks right in that light. Main knock on this one is that the black top combined with that background makes your head look disembodied. It's a nice head, floating there, but hard to see the shoulders. 8+/10 |
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Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.29 18:39:00 -
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I think it's tons better than before. The lighting makes your skin look alot more natural, and you don't have that wierd lip thing going on any more either. The thing I'd consider tweaking is your eye/mouth expression. Maybe change something just slightly enough to give you more expression. Right now the face is kindof a blank stare. 8+/10
Also, this is the avatar I was forced to save about 10 seconds before maintenance, so we'll see how this one goes :-)
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Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.30 16:27:00 -
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I like the work you're doing with shadows. But maybe they need just a tiny bit more work to get rid of some of the lines? The eyes might be too dark, maybe something that pops a little better against the dark light and background. Good stuff, though. 9/10
And this might be the last chance for somebody to rag on my avatar before it changes dramatically, again :-) |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.30 17:57:00 -
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I really like the look you're going for. I can't help but feel like something's missing, though. Is there a background with a bridge in it? Maybe one that has a bag of troll food next to it? If you had those, plus tweak the lighting, it'd probably be perfect. Bus as of now.... 2/10
edit: dammit... I think my lighting's bugged out. That shadow on the cheek refuses to go away... |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.30 21:04:00 -
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NOOOO!!!!!
Ok... I still love you, but can you please change back to the way you were before?
Still looks alright, but not the same avatar I fell in love with...
8+/10 Stalk you later |
Adalynne Rohks
Tax Evasion Anonymous
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Posted - 2012.07.31 04:30:00 -
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I like the "idea" of what you're doing here, but unfortunately, that pose combined with that hairstyle makes you ALL forehead. So now, you look more like a black martian than a minmatar. Frankly, I don't find black martians to be very intimidating... Looks like it wouldn't take much to make it look great, though. 6/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.31 15:34:00 -
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Your pose has always been more memorable than your face, but I'm wondering if the new hair takes away from the attitude a bit...?
Not sure, but it's kinda meh to me. It's too zoomed out to really see details on the face very well. And the rockets are always front and center. 7.5/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.07.31 20:57:00 -
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Seems like alot of red going on around here. I think that's my biggest hangup with this one. Avatar's face seems alright, but very forgettable. 6.5/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.01 10:17:00 -
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You look like an evil version of somebody I know.....
Guess I'll have to give you a 8/10 for that. |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.02 05:35:00 -
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Since yours is a work in progress, I'm gonna have to give you a 9/10. For your wonderful personality, of course..... :-P |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.03 03:59:00 -
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Looks alright, but I think it's too far from the camera, and slightly too dark to show any real features. Tatoos end up just looking like a brownish blur on your face. 7/10 |
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Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.03 04:44:00 -
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@Ivy Face seems to be alright. My main issues with it now are lighting (too many random and not helpful shadows cast around your face) and the background. It seems to focus all the light to the center on your face, but not in a good way. Maybe something a little softer...? Looks like it can be a pretty good one, though. 8/10
@Noko The sunglasses actually aren't as bad as most peoples' are when they wear em. My main gripe would be with that smile thing. It doesn't look very natural, and too plasticy. Still looks alright overall, though. 8/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.03 19:03:00 -
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I like the face itself alot. But I think it's too far away, and the headspace is off. Makes the picture more about the background than the avatar. 7.5/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.03 19:22:00 -
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I really like your overall look quite a bit. I just don't like the eyeliner/eyeshadow combo. May just be personal taste, but it doesn't sit right with me. 8.5/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.04 05:46:00 -
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Dammit! You stole my new shirt?!
Yours seems to be taking small steps in the right direction each time. Maybe trying some facial expression next would be helpful? Or trying a different background? Looks like it's getting there, though. 8+/10
And BTW... does anybody know how to make your avatar in the forum match the one ingame? My hair is wrong, here, and doesn't match what it looks like in game. If anybody has any pointers, that'd be wonderful. |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.04 18:05:00 -
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It's intended, I just have to overcompensate when I'm in the creator for what it's going to look like on the forum. The biggest problem is that the hair (in forum) sits 1 or 2 inches higher on my head than it does in game. Not a deal breaker, but it throws everything off for me, especially when I get sooooo close to great. Really drives me nuts knowing that my ingame avatar is getting closer to perfect, and on forums it just looks like 8.5 or less
So, anyway... I like your avatar. It's kinda on the colorless side, but that can be alright. My biggest gripe would be that the skin tone seems off, maybe from lighting, I dunno. But everything else looks good to me. 8.5/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.05 02:12:00 -
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I'm gonna rate you again, since I think I'm finally done tinkering with my own avatar, and it might be ready for rating... :-P
Nayadh: I like the face, and you even pull off that hair pretty well, but if feels like there's too many shadows on an already dark face and background. Then, having that glossy lipstick there kinda clashes with the rest of it. So, I guess bottom line is I prefer more light :-) I like it overall, though, so not trying to be too negative. Just too dark, with some clashing elements. 7.5/10
Shalua: After looking at it for a bit, the green makeup combo isn't as bad to me. In the small version, you're looking alright, but in the large version, the avatar seems very lifeless and expressionless. Maybe adding some squint or frown/smile would help? Very nice overall, though. 8.5+/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.05 07:38:00 -
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I like the face, but the hair/background/everything seem to be working together to make it look pretty generic. That, and the slightly awkward pose makes me think that this one could be alot better. 7/10 for potential |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.05 16:17:00 -
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Looks pretty stock. The sunglasses don't seem to help. 6.5/10
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Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.05 19:21:00 -
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I think the lipstick you're using accents the upper lip issue too much. Maybe a consistent color, or at least a lighter color for the strip. And maybe trying a slightly "edgier" hairstyle would do some good(?) 8/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.06 02:39:00 -
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8.5 for the one on the left. 7.4 for the one on the right.
7 for the avatar. Unfortunately, your avatar doesn't seem to be a very important part of your portrait. |
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Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.07 06:07:00 -
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I've think your avatar looks pretty good, but the lighting has always made the skin and overall appearance look pretty artificial. The goggles kinda hide some of that, but I think that maybe trying new lighting might help. 8.5/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.08 05:25:00 -
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That doesn't look like a very flattering angle for you. The way the shadow hits the chin and mouth seems to accent them in the wrong way. 7.5/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.08 07:11:00 -
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Your bizarre expression is growing on me :-) The avatar doesn't seem as polished as it could be, but it definitely has personality.
8/10
And I'll get back to messing with my avatar again in the next day or so :-) I agree, the lighting makes mine look kinda artificial. Hard to change very precisely, because it doesn't match what I make in game. |
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Posted - 2012.08.08 20:57:00 -
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I think the green light with blue background makes wierd much. And in the smaller forum version, your pupils don't stand out at all. Just white eyes. Pretty face and an extremely nice shirt, but it's not my flavor. 7.5/10
And yeah. I factor in small versions of avatars also, since they're all that most people will see. |
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Posted - 2012.08.09 19:35:00 -
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Just looking at your avatar makes me want to go and troll somebody intensely. The look suits the persona muy good. 9/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.09 19:44:00 -
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2/10 Hair too plastic. Would not allow to bang. |
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Posted - 2012.08.10 04:51:00 -
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You have alot of funky shadows going on. Also, the smirk seems a bit overdone, and it doesn't match the rest of the face. Looks like it wouldn't take much to make it a very good one, though. 7.5/10
p.s. I really don't like my new avatar..... :) So don't try to be nice, whoever's next :) |
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Posted - 2012.08.10 06:36:00 -
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DremDorun wrote:The first thing that appears to be wrong is bone structure of supraorbital foramen. It does seem to look unnatural. Stands out too much and makes your eyes look like they are set too deep. The jaw shape is abnormal too. Previous version worked better for you, sometimes shadows do help. Not talking makeup here :) i'll have to go with 7/10
I appreciate good feedback on subtler details, but I can't help but ask... you do realize your head isn't connected to your neck properly, right...? That's kindof a big one :-)
oh yeah... 7/10 for the guy I almost skipped... Nothing really stands out, good or bad. Just kinda meh. |
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Posted - 2012.08.10 18:17:00 -
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Ders dat plastic hair again... 7/10. |
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Posted - 2012.08.10 22:02:00 -
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The hoodie is done better than average, but that's not saying much. Hard to give hoodies higher than a 6/10. So I'll give 6.5/10. |
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Posted - 2012.08.11 06:43:00 -
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We're allowed to rate random avatars now? Awesome! I choose Katsumi.
10/10!
I'm gonna start stalking her when I figure out how to make better use of my free time. |
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Posted - 2012.08.11 18:48:00 -
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Distinctive. I'm not sure the background matches your avatar, but I like it. 8+/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.12 00:22:00 -
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I see what you're going for, but yeah, the cheeks are gonna throw people off. If you're going for the tense officy guy, why not put him in front of a more officy background, instead of some warehouse/shack thingy? 7/10
And btw... this is my new ninja face, so have at it :) This is the expression I'm giving folks when I take all their battleship wrecks. |
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Posted - 2012.08.13 08:01:00 -
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I like it.
But not too much...
8/10
Needs something extra to make it stand out from the crowd. |
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Posted - 2012.08.14 04:28:00 -
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Well, it seems like you keep going all over the place with your avatar. First it gets better, then a whole lot worse, and back and forth. My main thing is it's too far from the camera to give off any personality besides, "hey, I gots boobs". The lighting doesn't match the background, and your outfit clashes with everything, including the hair, somehow....?
It's a pretty enough avatar, and I know you can do something good with it. But I feel that the last move was a big step in the wrong direction. Unless, of course, you don't care too much, (like me, lately :-P ). Soo... 6/10.
(I hope my new one's showing up...) last one was getting obnoxious. |
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Posted - 2012.08.15 11:00:00 -
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I think it's a little too "busy", combining that background with the tattoos on your face. And it's zoomed out far enough to where all that stands out is your lips. 6/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.15 15:18:00 -
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Old Zombie!!
Your character looks alright, but the jaundiced/undead look could use some different lighting. And that blue background really contrasts with that skin color to make the undeadness really "pop". 7/10 :-) |
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Posted - 2012.08.15 19:12:00 -
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Your expression is alot more memorable than most peoples' avatars around here. I think it could use some more dynamic lighting, though. Maybe a different background too, but I think that better light would help add some extra life to it. 8+/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.15 22:28:00 -
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Traejun: I kinda liked your earlier one better, even if it wasn't perfect. It had a sort of quiet strength to it, and wasn't trying too hard to be anything. This one isn't bad, I just feel like it lost some subtle personality. 7/10
Ishtanchuk: I like the direction the new one's going in. It seems to have more life and personality to it. The old one is more polished and cleaned up, but I think the new one has better potential to stand out from others. Plus, the hair on the old one gives me angry feelings :-) No likey oldy as much.
edit: and since jizloobber ninja'd me... I kinda like yours. the lighting and everything aren't bad. But since you forced me to type out that stupid avatar name, you get -3 points. 4.5/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.16 03:22:00 -
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I'd say 9/10, because you look like a can flipper. Pure evil incarnate, right there.
BUT.......
Those sunglasses messed it all up. Authentic, nice lighting all jacked up by fake looking sunglasses. 8/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.18 10:00:00 -
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Been awhile. I likey lots. I think your skin/makeup/hair/etc would do pretty well with some interesting lighting and shadows. but looks really nice, as is. I don't like the chin tatoo, (makes the chin look kinda off), but it fits. 9/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.22 03:19:00 -
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It's alright. Too dark and far away to be really distinctive, as is, though. 6/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.24 18:33:00 -
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Unfortunately, not much to say or see here. No distinction. Bland background. Can't see any features at all. Nice shirt :) 3/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.25 23:40:00 -
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Looks alright. Too much black though. The hair, the background, and the shirt all just sorta muddle together and lose distinction. And the face doesn't look quite good enough to justify muddling everything else out, methinks. 7.5/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.27 22:41:00 -
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Ishtanchuk Fazmarai wrote:Well, the issue is that the jaw itself is wide, if you make the chin narrow, then it looks detached and causes the "hanging chin" effect like with Adalyne Rokhs.
I think it's more about the jaw, and transition into the chin, than the chin itself. slightly too narrow jaw, + slightly too narrow/long chin really exaggerates it too much. And having a slightly too long nose just amplifies it that much more. Been holding off on a resculpt, til I really know for sure what I want to do to fix it. I think it's about time to give it a try. Just 4 very subtle changes, and I think I'll have about nailed it. Hope I don't screw it up.....
And yeah... I've been too caught up in the ninja pew pewing lately. Kinda forgot to keep checking back to the forums. I'm sure I'll be back to obsessive avatar changing in no time |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.08.27 22:51:00 -
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Surfin's PlunderBunny wrote:I can't open this can of spam... may I borrow your razor sharp chin?
Well, my chin is temporarily unavailable, but I believe that if you smash your eye socket on the edge of the can enough times, it might just break open eventually
And for the bread muncher...
I like the lighting, except for what it's doing to your eyes. In the small version especially, you end up looking cross eyed and "special". Facial structure doesn't suit my personal preferences, but it's not bad. Just needs something less bland for background and hair to make it stand out. 6.5/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.28 21:35:00 -
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I like it overall, but something about that outfit, or background, or something... makes your head look 2 sizes too small for your body. 8/10
And I think my little resculpt's done. Tried not to evercompensate, and just slapped this portrait together real quick. Not sure what to make of it, yet. |
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Posted - 2012.08.29 06:45:00 -
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It's too bad they didn't get those arms to look right...
On the bright side, instead of looking like an old zombie, now you look like a disapproving old zombie dad, disappointed in his zombie children :-) 7.5/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.29 21:03:00 -
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I kinda like it, but at the same time something just seems off. Might be the lighting? Combined with lotso grey, for blandness? Not 100% sure what it is that seems wrong. Maybe adding a more natural light, and/or more color would help. 7.5/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.31 05:58:00 -
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Gotsta agree with the other folks. The goggles are workin. Only knock on it, for me, is that the hair looks a bit too plasticky in that light. 9/10 |
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Posted - 2012.08.31 22:01:00 -
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@Sahara
I really like the way you're working the blue colors here. I don't like that background too much, specifically, but the colors work, at least. I just think that this portrait emphasizes the empty space under your eyes/around the nose too much. |
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Posted - 2012.09.01 02:30:00 -
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For a not too beautiful type character, I like it. Conveys businesslike pragmatism. I wish there was a way to do it with a better hairstyle, though. It's one of me least favorite ones. So... for pageant queen'ishness, I'd go 5/10.
But for the overall effect, I think I'd do 8/10. |
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Posted - 2012.09.02 00:09:00 -
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I'm not diggin it, too much. Too many unmatching colors, including background. The light makes the hair look a little too plastic, and then... there's the sunglasses... of course. This might suit others' preferences pretty well, but I'm not a big fan. 5/10
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Posted - 2012.09.03 01:38:00 -
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I don't like sunglasses on avatars very often, and this one isn't an exception. With that square chin and jaw, and the big lips, it looks like a cross dresser. To each their own :-)
4/10 |
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Posted - 2012.09.04 22:36:00 -
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Your avatar looks extremely cross eyed, especially in the big version. The left eye's looking at me, and the right eye's looking at that hot chick waaaaay over there. And the shadows are doing funky stuff to your face. 6/10 |
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Posted - 2012.09.05 06:09:00 -
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I really like it. But it's sooo close to being even better. I theorize that it's the eyes that make you look a little artificial. If you find a way to add some life to em, I think you'll have a winner. 8.5/10
p.s. I've already changed the avatar, since this "new" one came up, but maybe somebody'll get to rate my interim version :-)
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Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.09.05 06:34:00 -
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Yeah. This one was mostly an accident. I accidentally saved it, when I was hitting "finalize" to preview the avatar. My new one is very..... different..... :-)
I think it's gonna be one that people either love or hate.
But onto you, now.....
I'm not diggin the vest/ formal dress uniform. The styles don't mesh at all. But at least you've hidden most of the damage with the zoom and pose :)
I also don't think you need to worry as much about your ears as you seem to be. Every style I've seen you pick lately has you almost going out of your way to cover them up.
Overall, I think you're going in the right direction, though. Gotta branch out and try new stuff from time to time. 8+/10
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Posted - 2012.09.05 14:56:00 -
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Bette Cruz wrote:(In depth post about an avatar and stuff)
3/10
Well, then I'll give you a Zero!! Muahaha!!! Because... Yeah!
@Tinja
The face seems alright to me, but the hair, background, and outfit all seem to clash against eachother. 7.5/10 |
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Posted - 2012.09.05 17:56:00 -
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Yes. That was a terrible abomination of an avatar. It was sooo far different than the one in-game, it was ridiculous. So now I have my "not sure, but I think I'm getting moderately irritated" face on.
I like yours a bit more each time I look. Still don't like the vest, but other than that, the only thing holding it back is eye expression. Maybe doing something with the eyes would make it pop. Oh yeah. and let's see those ears... :-) 8.5+/10
edit: Actually.... after looking at my own avatar, I'd say it's more of a "don't you dare steal my cookie" face. |
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Posted - 2012.09.07 03:18:00 -
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You ears don't look nearly that bad to me. Just pick an earring that doesn't exaggerate the flaws, and don't use the worst possible angle to let them hang out, there.
Akire: Really good. I can get get nitpicky now that it's been up for awhile. That particular shadowing makes you look a bit pig-nosed. 9/10
Serena: I think yours is about to take over my #1 favorite spot. You can pull off such a nice variety of poses and looks. Shows that you have a real good foundation for an avatar, when you can pull off so many different things. (even though this one isn't my favorite that you've done) 9+/10
And this is last chance to rate my grumpy avatar. I think I have a good one incoming, but we'll see. The way the in-game vs forum avatar has been lately for me, I don't know what to expect any more. |
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Posted - 2012.09.07 15:15:00 -
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Excellent stuff. I don't think the earrings go with it, but that's just a minor thing. Only thing I don't like are the iris color. 9+/10
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Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.09.07 17:13:00 -
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See... ears aren't so bad :-)
Now, about those sunglasses.......
8/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
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Posted - 2012.09.09 00:00:00 -
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Me no likey. It's too drab, all around. No standout features. Just... meh. 6/10 |
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Posted - 2012.09.17 08:14:00 -
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Kinda hard to rate it high, when your head looks so violently (and cleanly) separated from your body. Maybe a more forward leaning pose would help :-) Nice ear you got there, though
5/10 |
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