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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2014.09.06 08:36:00 -
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@ Tomiko
I like how your face is sculpted, I would have zoomed out a little bit more though.
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Posted - 2014.09.06 08:55:00 -
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Ralph King-Griffin wrote:8/10 distinctive toon, love the pale effect,
those eyes are unsettling (which i love)
the lighting is a little uninspired but could be dame cool if you found something interesting to do with it .
composition of the portrait could be a little better.
That said,one of my favourite lookers here.
Edit: god dame it Derric!!
Cheers .
I like your a lot for similar reasons, I dig the creep factor. Only thing I'd do is remove the faceial tatoo, I think it'd enhance said creep factor more.
9/10
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Posted - 2014.09.08 11:29:00 -
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Dig the pose, and the tattoo works well with the background and lighting. And most importantly, for some reason the portrait reminds me of Tank Girl. So, win.
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Posted - 2014.09.18 06:38:00 -
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Love the blue. Don't like the forehead jewelry (only flaw).
9.5/10
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Posted - 2014.09.24 18:46:00 -
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@ Lell
I really like the face, but I would change the hair, maybe the lighting could be reworked too.
9/10 for the face.
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Posted - 2014.10.04 10:11:00 -
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Dig the theme, maybe a new haircut though.
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Posted - 2014.10.04 21:21:00 -
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@ Sol
One of your better ones, my favorite. Now, stop changing every 5 seconds .
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Posted - 2014.10.11 04:16:00 -
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Definitely like this more than the previous one, the lighting works well with the background and the weird turtleneck jacket thingermagig suits you. Also, bald \o/. I'm just not a fan of the tattoo to be honest.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2014.11.22 10:13:02 -
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Hubba hubba/10
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2014.12.09 12:25:00 -
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The face sculpt and overall look is very nice. Jacket color doesn't jive well with the background in my eyes though. Maybe a new background?
8/10
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2014.12.09 23:33:11 -
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Iconic/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2014.12.12 00:07:25 -
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Kind of bland, the jacket, pose and lighting don't work with the background either. Play around with the lighting and switch the background and it'd all work better.
5/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2014.12.12 11:31:54 -
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Very nice. I'd just switch the background to the one Uriel is using at the moment I think. I think it will compliment the Guristas outfit better.
8/10 9/10 with the other background.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2014.12.14 12:58:51 -
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I like it. Personally, I'd change the facial expression and **** around with the lighting, but it's a solid look over all.
8/10
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2014.12.16 18:50:40 -
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I really like this one. The face in particular is nice and ghostly, the hint of smile make it a little creepy too which work wonderfully.
I'm not a fan of the pose personally, the shoulders kinda droop too low. I'd zoom more on the face too I think.
Still, it's a great look, background and cyberarms (the white ones would work well too) all complement the ghostly look "I'm an android" vibe I'm getting.
9/10
10/10 with my nitpicky suggestions though.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2014.12.21 00:04:04 -
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Only time I've seen that face tattoo used well. I like the angle, the look, color and lighting. Probably one of my favorite portraits. Great taste overall here, and I'll be sad if you change it to something not as good.
10/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.01.18 16:37:32 -
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I'm not a fan of the "Hooded, hide my face because I am an eeeeevil sith lord" look.
Yours however is probably the most original version of that I've seen. The blue lighting on the creepy toothy smile and the red halo thing on the right give it some character.
6/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.01.26 19:17:13 -
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Stern personified. I'd mess around with the camera angle personally, maybe looking from below. I like it.
8.5/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.01.27 01:42:09 -
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Tilde Duchateau wrote:Interesting expression and color coordination. I think there's a background that would work better, though. 8/10
My favorite of yours so far. I'd zoom in a bit more personally, that's a very minor nitpick in this case however.
9.5/10
EDIT: Damnit Uriel!
I'll do you too then.
As awesome as the character creator is, making good facial expressions with it is hard as hell. Smiles in particular. Yours is the most natural looking one I've seen wrestled out of the CC. Kudos!
9/10
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.02.02 02:56:20 -
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Very nice!
Usually I'd advocate a different hair color to contrast with the background, but this works very nicely on yours.
9/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.02.15 05:35:50 -
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You're rocking the 'Ralph'. Good pose, works well with the lighting and the background fits in as well.
Solid overall.
8/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.02.23 15:01:36 -
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Potential is there, but I'm not a fan of this. I find the eye implant thingamabob and background jarring, and the lighting could use some work.
6/10
Could be much better with some work though.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.02.26 18:33:42 -
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Mmm, chocolate.
Up there with cybernetic arms and blue hair Motoko Sibyyl from some month back.
10/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.03.13 11:41:13 -
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One of the few Achura that doesn't look creepy and dead inside (it's those eyes!). I quite like it, perhaps a lighter hair color for more contrast with the background, but it's very solid, and the face sculpt is fantastic.
8.5/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.04.01 00:46:32 -
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Vherocool. I would play with the lighting a bit personally, it seems a little flat. Otherwise It's pretty cool.
8.5/10
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.04.18 22:39:14 -
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Your neck seems to be under way too much stress. I like the color choices though.
7/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.05.26 05:20:03 -
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woooooooooooo wrote:8.85/10
Just Awesome. Cool lighting, (the blue is a nice touch) though seeing the eyes a little more would be nice. Decent smile/evil grin too.
8/10
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.05.30 00:15:53 -
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Vherocool.
Think I liked your previous one more though (if I remember it right).
Still, 7/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.06.13 03:20:41 -
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That'd be quite the chest bump.
I like it overall, though I'd personally prefer the makeup be toned down a bit and the sexualititty (I'm hilarious) be a little less, eherm, "in your face".
Still the face is well built and the pose is good, though again a little tweaking on the lighting would be nice.
Overall though a solid 7/10, with room to become an easy 9 IMO.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.06.22 00:09:37 -
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/10
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.06.26 10:23:20 -
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Ralphtasmagoriffinic. It's like Ralphtastic, but better-er.
I do maintain that the tattoo is out of place. Still, one of my favorites.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.07.06 13:26:02 -
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Lighting and pose could use some work. A little bland I find, but the sculpt is alright.
5/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.07.08 12:03:55 -
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Pretty cool. I'd change the background for something with a bit more pizzazz. The blue lghting is a nice touch, but like I said, doesn't work with the background IMO.
6.5/10 potentially more.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.07.26 03:50:53 -
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Very nice, though I'd prefer a closer zoom, and a slightly more contrasting background. Nitpicking aside (again), I like.
9/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.08.09 16:47:43 -
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Ohh, I like. A kind of creepy nobility going on here. I'd angle the face a little more to the left or right to either hide, or give more of a view of the right eye, it being cut in half like that irks me a little bit.
9.5/10 though, a great one.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.08.17 10:56:31 -
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Love it. Colors are good, light is good, framing is good.
10/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.09.09 12:05:08 -
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Too much chest, not enough ass.
6/10.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.11.24 16:32:30 -
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Awesome.
Seriously, very nice.
10/10.
Grrr.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.11.30 09:08:13 -
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I like that you have themes in your pictures. I really like this one, wasn't a fan of the brown on brown stuff before, but this is quite nice. I do however prefer a more zoomed picture.
7/10. 9/10 if zoomed in more.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.11.30 17:07:44 -
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Yes.
8/10. Moar zoom, and center it (like it was an hour ago but closer).
Grrr.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2015.12.17 23:40:29 -
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Needs more sparkle. Maybe some glitter?
7/10. I like it, there's just something, 'missing' I can't quite put my finger on. Maybe lighting? Or perhaps positioning. I don't know. The headgear + monocle is cool though, and the smile is creepy.
Grrr.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2016.01.04 17:08:44 -
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I like the blue theme going but don't really like the face piercings. The lighting goes very nicely with the background too.
7/10.
Higher w/o the piercings.
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Azda Ja
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Posted - 2016.02.14 15:39:50 -
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Colors and background work well, but it's a little bland, perhaps a different angle or pose?
7/10, potentially higher with a better composition.
Grrr.
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