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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2013.09.16 20:19:00 -
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Don't like the pout or the glasses....or the lipshtick.
It is however a well constructed avatar in a well lit pose Soo I'm give a 5/10 If in doubt...do...excessively. |
Ralph King-Griffin
Var Foundation inc.
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Posted - 2013.09.16 20:40:00 -
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Aerethir El-Kharisti wrote:Ralph King-Griffin wrote:Don't like the pout or the glasses....or the lipshtick.
It is however a well constructed avatar in a well lit pose Soo I'm give a 5/10 Love the smirk. Also points for not hiding in that hooded thing like everybody else, 9/10 Love the balance between the background and char, pallet is rather nice.
Don't like eve hair but can't really hold that against you. 8/10 If in doubt...do...excessively. |
Ralph King-Griffin
Var Foundation inc.
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Posted - 2013.09.17 14:03:00 -
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Ariel Dawn wrote:The sideways bar through the top of your nose looks painful! Having had one Irl,yeah they do. Not something you can expect to keep if you are seeking employment through. Hense the past tense If in doubt...do...excessively. |
Ralph King-Griffin
Var Foundation inc.
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Posted - 2014.05.01 20:40:00 -
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Ralph King-Griffin
Var Foundation inc.
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Posted - 2014.05.20 23:38:00 -
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5/10 Pirate Ken doll taking a selfe Nice jacket. "CAKE CANNOT HOLD UP TO BEING A CHARACTER DAMNIT."
Unsuccessful At Everything |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.06.19 23:01:00 -
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that's actually a really nice smile, 10/10 "CAKE CANNOT HOLD UP TO BEING A CHARACTER DAMNIT."
Unsuccessful At Everything |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.06.22 15:33:00 -
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There's something funky going on with the shadow on your left cheek, and the very tip of your hair on the same side is clipping into your head. the lighting could be a lot better.
That said she's a healthy looking Minmatar woman, she's well made, not to my taste but I'd certainly expect a good price for her provided she's house trained. "CAKE CANNOT HOLD UP TO BEING A CHARACTER DAMNIT."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.06.22 17:45:00 -
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Really like how your toon looks like a teenager despite being as old as eve. love it, you get balance 8/10 "CAKE CANNOT HOLD UP TO BEING A CHARACTER DAMNIT."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.06.27 09:50:00 -
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Well suited pose (not a favorite of mine but it suits) Your head looks a little bit small,but that's just the angle of your torso. I like the mech hands, I'm not a fan of showing them off though, you can't see either of mine .
Regardless, well lit pose, gruff expression, 8/10 "Confirming EVE is hot, batshit crazy, and puts out." -Omar Alharazaad "CAKE CANNOT HOLD UP TO BEING A CHARACTER DAMNIT." --áUnsuccessful At Everything |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.06.27 15:32:00 -
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Matilda Cecilia Fock wrote:Will say 8/10 because of the shine on the chest, as it looks wrong. I was actually thinking that aswell, maby twist the torso slightly while watching that sheen as you go, as it stands , sure it picks up the detail on the chest but the actual shapes it's forming are rather garish and a bit ugly.
Clearly put effort in and it shows, nearly there. "Confirming EVE is hot, batshit crazy, and puts out." -Omar Alharazaad "CAKE CANNOT HOLD UP TO BEING A CHARACTER DAMNIT." --áUnsuccessful At Everything |
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.06.27 16:13:00 -
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It's the one on your left boob , the shape is telling me something other than I'd expect to see, It maby needs the tiniest of tweaks. Bear in mind, the only reason I'm nitpicking this much is the portrait is quite good I.e. you're demonstrating an understanding of lighting so all I can recommend is to tweak the angle a bit until something jumps out at you. "Confirming EVE is hot, batshit crazy, and puts out." -Omar Alharazaad "CAKE CANNOT HOLD UP TO BEING A CHARACTER DAMNIT." --áUnsuccessful At Everything |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.06.27 19:20:00 -
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It has been, 7/10 lighting would help. "Confirming EVE is hot, batshit crazy, and puts out." -Omar Alharazaad "CAKE CANNOT HOLD UP TO BEING A CHARACTER DAMNIT." --áUnsuccessful At Everything |
Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2014.07.06 12:32:00 -
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upwards-look best look. you look mildly perplexed, politely though. 9/10 "Confirming EVE is hot, batshit crazy, and puts out." -Omar Alharazaad "CAKE CANNOT HOLD UP TO BEING A CHARACTER DAMNIT." --áUnsuccessful At Everything |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.07.14 20:18:00 -
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Your use of lighting shows promise, Interesting, I'd keep going but I'd say 6/10, just for the lights/composition "Confirming EVE is hot, batshit crazy, and puts out." -Omar Alharazaad "CAKE CANNOT HOLD UP TO BEING A CHARACTER DAMNIT." --áUnsuccessful At Everything |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.08.17 11:51:00 -
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5/10, fine for a head shot, well sculpted toon but lacks any personality or character . =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2014.08.19 19:08:00 -
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Too much chest ,not enough expression, that jacket has a fantastic collar you don't seem to be utilising. I have seen some really cool looking avatars with that jacket and the collar is usually a factor.
I do like the way the lighting is hitting the avatars left cheek though.
6/10 5 for a well sculpted toon, +1 for ok lighting. =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.08.20 11:53:00 -
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Kinda looks like you're checking over your shoulder, very eve. 8.5/10 =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2014.08.21 13:08:00 -
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very cool, love it 8.5/10 =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2014.08.28 10:52:00 -
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solid 9/10 for the sci fi pirate ken doll, that skin.. =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.08.28 19:18:00 -
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Not fond of this one sol, you can do better. =][= |
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.08.29 01:49:00 -
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much better 7/19 =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2014.08.29 08:39:00 -
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Solecist Project wrote:Ralph King-Griffin wrote:much better 7/19 uhm... That's around 4/10 .... -.-' Yeah, because it's boooooobsbobsbooobs. You're better than that. =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2014.09.03 11:01:00 -
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nice Adam Jenson impression.
6/10
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.09.03 12:00:00 -
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Marcus Gord wrote:Ralph King-Griffin wrote:nice Adam Jenson impression.
6/10
i didn't ask for this. but i'll take a 6/10. what didn't you like, to give only a 6 though? the hair (i dont know whats with me today, everythings about hair) =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.09.03 12:06:00 -
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Marcus Gord wrote:Ralph King-Griffin wrote:Marcus Gord wrote:Ralph King-Griffin wrote:nice Adam Jenson impression.
6/10
i didn't ask for this. but i'll take a 6/10. what didn't you like, to give only a 6 though? the hair (i dont know whats with me today, everythings about hair ) bad hair day? apparently =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.09.06 08:52:00 -
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8/10 distinctive toon, love the pale effect,
those eyes are unsettling (which i love)
the lighting is a little uninspired but could be dame cool if you found something interesting to do with it .
composition of the portrait could be a little better.
That said,one of my favourite lookers here.
Edit: god dame it Derric!! =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2014.09.10 15:05:00 -
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exemplary 9/10 =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.09.11 17:07:00 -
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boobs/10 =][= |
Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2014.09.17 16:52:00 -
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9.haven't decided yet/10
not keen on the eyepach but the rest of the toon is solid and one of my favorites...even if it makes me think of Sinead O'Connor =]I[= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.09.21 12:46:00 -
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Carmen Electra wrote:Cuci Cairi wrote:The character model is good, though it seems like an odd choice of background. But perhaps that was the point. 8/10 cleavage/10 hawt 7/10 love the recent changes
the light on your face is a bit intense though. =]I[= |
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.09.24 11:47:00 -
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Adam Jenson...is that you? 7/10 Background and lightning could synergies better, I'd tweak the pose a but.
Solid toon though . =]I[= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.09.28 12:30:00 -
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9 / Blue Steel =]I[= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.10.02 14:24:00 -
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**** all of you above me i have to give a big AWESOME / 10 to Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci, for repeatedly (and hilariously) telling nullsec (in its entirety) to Harden The Feck Up, for 4+ hours.
glorious, absolutely glorious =]I[= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.10.03 12:41:00 -
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love it, 9/10 =]I[= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.10.12 17:38:00 -
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8/10 great toon just needs a bit of ballance thers a bit much chest and not enough face(which is awesome btw) =]I[= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.10.19 16:58:00 -
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needs working over.
with a bat or something heavy. "I'm also quite confident that you are laughing and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."-á-á=]I[= |
Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.10.26 02:47:36 -
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you can do better, i have seen you do better.
7/10
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.10.26 13:55:33 -
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sorry for the vague put down last time i figured out why i don't like this one
the negative shapes are ugly, and the composition is ok nor is the avatar to my taste. 4/10
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.10.28 02:33:00 -
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great boobs expression, kinda says "why did you warp to the cloaky scout at 0" or something like that, nice boobs top, goes well with the background.
boobs 7/1o
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.11.11 19:32:54 -
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*steps out of the shadow ominously* Light, for having a lot of it its under utilised in your portrait. theirs very little contrast in yours and that's a shame because shes got one of the better looking faces iv seen around here. And im nit picking here but the negative shapes behind her are a little boring. good job but could be great with a bit of tweaking.
7/10
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2014.11.13 11:33:37 -
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^^ "im a little tea pot short and stout , here is my handle...." interesting pose...
o.0 / 10
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.11.15 12:14:09 -
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10/10 for the returning madame.
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2014.12.03 18:27:24 -
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Oooh! i like this.
Fantastic use of light
makes me think of Caravaggio
8/10
very nicely done.
Edit: Damit! now i want wine
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.12.05 14:17:31 -
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6/10 for the same reason, great face.
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2014.12.07 09:37:03 -
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Tollen you actually remind me of someone i had immense trouble talking to because she was soo dam beautiful i never knew how to handle it (and iv never had trouble talking to women).
i managed it in the end and after a glorious six months(and a failed engagement) we went our separate ways on good terms. your portrait always reminds of that though.
so yeah, you get a 10/10 from me and cheers for the good memories.
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.01.01 17:13:41 -
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4/10, 4 for the lighting
nothing else compliments it though.
kind of creepy though(which i like)
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.01.07 13:19:47 -
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Meh, 2/10. Iv seen the cloak look badass, and it's not that hard either.
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.01.11 14:18:34 -
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i don't like your face.
the lighting isn't bad though.
5/10
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.01.11 20:52:59 -
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I like this one sol, kinda reminds me of one of E1's alts , in a fond way.
8/10, the shadows are a little busy for my liking and might benefit from a little tweek but that's just me. I'm a sucker for good shadows.
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.01.18 17:04:47 -
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i woudent say weaker , just less interesting than usual.
as for yourself 6/10 getting threre
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.01.26 19:46:57 -
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oh thats cool
9/10
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.02.06 11:05:40 -
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8/10 because I know you're going for the stoner look, which is achieved fairly well.
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.02.13 01:50:28 -
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interesting nose, i like it.
the pose can work but you might want to play with the lighting to show off some of the angularity of the face.
i dont like the background
4/10
"I'm also quite confident that you are laughing
and it's the kind of laugh that gives normal people shivers."
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Ralph King-Griffin
Lords.Of.Midnight The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.04.17 16:16:28 -
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Isaiah Bishop wrote:Distinctive. 8/10 Boobs!
actually rather like this one, 7/10
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2015.04.25 22:24:26 -
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have a feckin sandwich love.
however thers a startling resemblance to someone i was engaged to about 10 years ago so
(conflicted)10/10
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2015.05.28 23:41:33 -
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*heavy breathing*
Rather pretty, well lit , not feeling the hair though. 8/10
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2015.06.10 09:12:14 -
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That's the look I used to get when chatting girls up , I think we can guess how that went.
I don't like the colour of the lipstick and I don't like the vest .
Might just be the composition but the vest isn't doing anything for this otherwise great pose.
Love the hair and the colour but the lipstick clashes with it (in a bad way). Which is a pity because it's a rather well sculpted face with a very real expression in a good pose with solid lighting (actually quite good lighting, accentuates the pose and the expression)
I'll give a 5/10 but have it noted that I would give an 8 or 9 but for a couple of the details annoying me. lots of potential here I quite like it.
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Ralph King-Griffin
Devils Rejects 666 The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.06.21 17:07:43 -
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composition is a little off, i don't like the way the tip of your head goes out of frame, if you stepped down just enough to make the background one continuous negative shape it might look a bit more pleasing .
i am just nit picking though, (im actually wearing that t-shirt under this coat) 7/10
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Ralph King-Griffin
Devils Rejects 666 The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.06.26 09:31:00 -
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About as bland as they come, 3/10
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Ralph King-Griffin
Devils Rejects 666 The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.06.30 14:33:54 -
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Fantastic eyes, really impressed with the effect they have.
The rest of the pose needs work but I have no doubt you're capable. 5/10 (mostly because of the piercing eyes)
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2015.08.25 10:15:29 -
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asymity is good, rather like it, good smirk, well sculpted(not to my taste but well done regardless).
Love the lighting,could be a little more interesting but it's not a complaint.
Torsos a little flat though, or high I'm not sure but a cool t-shirt or something wouldn't go amiss .
All told is solid, could be fantastic with some tweaking (maby a different background?) the asymmetrical placement sells it for me so a solid 7/10.
Better the Devil you know.
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2015.08.29 23:51:38 -
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oh my, i like this change, much less chest and far more face, very good.
over all i like the general composition but i think all of the constituent elements could be better (still love it though so don't take that to harshly)
you are CODE. wear that, your face is waaaaaaaaaay too neutral for what you are, how you post and what you do, get some character in there.
hair ,angle, lighting and background all need tweaking a bit (not much though) try to get them all playing with each other (yeah easy i know, worth it though).
find subtle ways of saying what you want without painting it on your face.
A Hopeful 7/10
Better the Devil you know.
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Ralph King-Griffin
Devils Rejects 666 The Devil's Warrior Alliance
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Posted - 2015.10.01 21:52:28 -
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Faaaabulous.
6/10
not my taste but effective in what you're doing.
Maby move closer to the face, it's a little small and tall in terms of composition but that aside it's good.
Better the Devil you know.
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2015.10.07 04:52:27 -
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OOOooohhh regal, i like it.
personally i would zoom out a tad so the background forms one big negative shape but that aside fantastic .
8/10 (im a stingy git with my ratings this is damn high for me)
Edit: fal ... little big cat.....just shag already and get it over with the tension between ye is palpable
Better the Devil you know.
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2015.11.06 18:25:25 -
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well sculpted face of an earnest looking young man. toon looks grand and has plenty potential but the pose and lighting are a little uninspired.
4/10
could be much better just isn't.
Better the Devil you know.
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2015.11.27 01:11:53 -
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Ah scipio, one of my current favourites. Fantastic use of light , it's my usual complaint about most in this thread but you actually do seem to get it.
though those goggles cast too heavy of a shadow on your face where the light might otherwise do some interesting things with the plains of it.
That said the heavy cast shadow does give a certain tone to the portrait so while I'm conflicted about it it's hard to hold it against you.
Imo you are placed a tad off, you know about the rule of thirds? I'm actually just nitpicking but if you're going to offset you should move it a little more or come a little closer to the "camera".
Strong as is though , like I said, just not picking, 8.5/10.
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Really really like the red theme you got going there ,
Makes me think of one of my favourites Gregor Parud but with more character and a little less like a classical portrait. the lighting and pose work well together and show the structure and planes of the face off very well.
It's got a really nice feeling of depth (literal sense) to it that these portraits are more often than not lacking. The angle from solder to shoulder is doing this, combined with the now much more prominent structure of the the face due to the lighting and unified pallet seem to give it a solid presence.
Generally speaking I hate the monoclonal, that particular hair and facial structure and in previous iterations of your portraits I would have held as marks against it but this one seems to work well and despite my subjective dislike of them I really like the end result.
I might play around with the negative shapes a bit but the composition is quite strong as is and I know how finicky it can be to get something that really pops like this.
all told I'd give it a solid 9/10.
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Posted - 2016.02.01 16:03:50 -
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my god woman you have a tiny face
err 4ish / 10.
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Posted - 2016.04.01 16:32:54 -
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looks oddly like Steve Buscemi. i like that, stilll needs work though
5/10
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Posted - 2016.04.25 13:57:01 -
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Love the expression, less pouty than i recall makes me think :
just blew someones **** up infront of them , 0.0% ****s given.
8/10 just for that.
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Posted - 2016.04.29 03:20:41 -
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indeed / 10
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Posted - 2016.07.08 13:01:03 -
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I find it legitimatly difficult to articulate exactly why this current one unsettles me , but it does.
I also get the distinct impression thats what you are going for
so 8/10, plese dont touch me.
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2016.08.23 18:26:33 -
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Shahira wrote:Neph wrote:Recognisable and beautiful at a small size, flawless at a large. A rare 10/10. High praise, thank you. As for your avatar, I love how the framing, the lighting, and the background being out of focus around the eyes makes the intense expression jump out. Also, there's plenty of detail at the zoomed in level. 9/10. Very clever, I Love that you managed to disguise how the monocle butchers the cheek and brow bone structure. Which is Legitimately the only reason I don't have one .
Colours are great, gives a good tone , lighting and composition are quite good also which feeds into it.
I don't normally do this but a solid 9/10, well done.
Edit: revised score of 8/10 to offer a point and a half for tweaking the composition some more.
This is one of my current favourites though I would like to be clear on this.
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2016.09.24 18:21:21 -
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oO00o nice change. I like it, you kind of remind me of one of those odd young people you see hanging around with the lesser Royal's in Britain. You know the sort ,seems oddly thorough bread and I can imagine having some title or another vaguely related to an old colony long since declared the Democratic republic of (something) . Duchess of Buzoga or something similar.
Aside from the strange things my mind conjures up sometimes yeah this is a good change. More interesting, works much better now with the Moody heavy lighting.
Good job 8/10
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Ralph King-Griffin
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Posted - 2016.09.29 04:41:00 -
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not bad, but not fantastic either, its a portrait that much i can say. i do like what your trying to do with the lighting but i dont think its there yet.
6/10, as shes looking cute though.
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Posted - 2016.09.29 17:41:28 -
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Interesting pose, head tilted just right, bit central and flatly lit. Could be fabulous with a bit of tweaking, more interesting light and playing with the composition could be enough.
7/10 Has a heap of potential though.
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Posted - 2016.09.29 18:59:54 -
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Shahira wrote:
While a good portrait in its own right, compared to your old portrait, some effect is lost. Ralph used to have this awesome "release the hounds" vibe going which doesn't really work with the monocle (even though it should.. so much). Still, 8/10.
its the eyebrow that gave that effect, wanted the left monocle as that would have retained the right eyebrow but those things are obscenely expensive, which is saying something given were talking about excessive displays of wealth to begin with so ...
ill be playing with this further though
i can be ignored now , do Shahira
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Posted - 2016.11.01 00:01:59 -
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**** yeah/10, you need the matching jacket though.
We're Back in Business ,
have your very own Meeny Faced Bastards on call today
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