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Ryanaldo24
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Posted - 2008.11.10 13:44:00 -
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Hey guys this is my second vid. The first vid i did was all low sec and this one shows my last scenes from low sec in Filthy S****and then some 0.0 and roaming action from Outbreak
There is no fancy effects just straight up PvP
Ships used are: Curse, Harbinger, Abaddon, Armageddon, Zealot and Sacrilege. It is about 70% curse action
Link: Nightwish 2
15mins long
Enjoy 
Comments welcome
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Osiris Occido
The Nightshift
Lotto Syndicate
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Posted - 2008.11.10 14:30:00 -
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Looked like there were some quality fights there, but quite a few things could be done differently from an editing perspective and I'm not talking about making fancy effects as you put it.
 First piece of advice: slow down  some of those fights were realllllly sped up way too quickly, and you could barely enjoy the fights because they started/ended very quickly.
Another thing is your text windows in regards to viewers reading the whole comment before it disappears. One of the hardest part when it comes to editing is figuring out how long to leave those up because you already know what you wrote/edited in so it's easy for you to read and therefore on-screen time for your text/information is way too short for your audience. For viewers, we have to pause to read it. A good rule of thumb is 5 seconds of onscreen text per sentence.
The last editing comment you may call a fancy effect, but a fade transition or two would go a long way esp. in a video that is so sped up. it was like bam, fight starts, pewpewpew, fight is over, hard switch to 2 seconds of text, bam, new fight starts.
Like I was saying, there is a lot of good pvp in there :D but it moved through at warp speed. If you make a couple changes it would make the video much more enjoyable to follow and watch.
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Ryanaldo24
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Posted - 2008.11.10 14:35:00 -
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yh i only noticed when vid was done it seemed to fast but then the keygen ran out and couldnt go back and change it thanks for comment
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Yago Yuhn
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Posted - 2008.11.10 15:17:00 -
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i like this
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Aesheera
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Malum Crusis
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Posted - 2008.11.10 18:39:00 -
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Good vid, ill try to give some constructive criticism from my POV.
- Text. give the viewers a bit more time to read what youre trying to tell them.
- Duration. More !!!!! \o/
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Ryanaldo24
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Posted - 2008.11.13 10:53:00 -
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thanks for comment will try to make the next 1 longer 
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kribensis74
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Posted - 2008.11.13 11:14:00 -
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Not bad for a nub, not bad at all 
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