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Grek Forto
THE IRIS
United Freemen Alliance
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Posted - 2008.11.25 00:48:00 -
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Edited by: Grek Forto on 25/11/2008 00:48:09
I admit that for those of you that recognizes the format of the text from the EVE Tribune, I did take my inspiration from their description of the Brutix, Caracal and the Punisher. But I made this whole text myself and I hope you like it.
http://dl.eve-files.com/media/0811/The_Moa.pdf
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Laerise
Amarr
PIE Inc.
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Posted - 2008.11.25 01:23:00 -
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Very nice :)
You might want to submitt it to the Eve-tribune as well, they featured some pretty nice ship "descriptions" in the past.
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Taurus Maximus
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Posted - 2008.11.27 09:37:00 -
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I for one, welcome our new Scribe overlord, Grek Forto!
Well done My friend =)
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Gabrialle
Amarr
Sunspot Requisitions
Worlds End Consortium
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Posted - 2008.11.27 09:40:00 -
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erm, im probably nit picking, but i thought pods were located in modified cargo bays...
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Math'ra Hiede
Amarr
Quality Assurance Inc.
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Posted - 2008.11.27 10:27:00 -
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 that my man, is very impressive, I truly love that - although I may have missed it, with the Moa - was there any mention of the Serpentis corp. stealing the plans for the Moa and making their own version (name escapes me)
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Stitcher
Caldari
Duty.
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Posted - 2008.11.27 11:07:00 -
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 Originally by: Math'ra Hiede
that my man, is very impressive, I truly love that - although I may have missed it, with the Moa - was there any mention of the Serpentis corp. stealing the plans for the Moa and making their own version (name escapes me)
That would be the Guristas, with the Ghila.
Nice work. My only gripe is what you're doing to that poor, abused stable of apostrophes.
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Verone
Veto Corp
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Posted - 2008.11.27 17:28:00 -
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Looks good :D
I've been working on quite a few technical articles myself surrounding ship systems, how they work and how each is related to the other, to go with my character backstory that I put out, however I've yet to release any of them.
A few basic points of reference taken from ship stats before they were removed from the game :
Amarr :
Propulsion : Fusion Thrusters
Sensors : Radar
Armor : Tungsten Carbide Composite
Reactor : Antimatter
Caldari :
Propulsion : Magpulse Thrusters
Sensors : Gravimetric
Armor : Titanium Diborite
Reactor : Graviton
Gallente :
Propulsion : Ion Thrusters
Sensors : Magnometric
Armor : Crystalline Carbonide Composite
Reactor : Fusion
Minmatar :
Propulsion : Plasma Thrusters
Sensors : Ladar
Armor : Fernite Carbide
Reactor : Nuclear
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Marine HK4861
Caldari
Radical Technologies
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Posted - 2008.11.27 17:49:00 -
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It looks good so far, but running a spell check would go a long way to making a 'technical' document look more... well technical. 
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Grek Forto
THE IRIS
United Freemen Alliance
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Posted - 2008.11.27 18:09:00 -
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Originally by: Verone
Looks good :D
I've been working on quite a few technical articles myself surrounding ship systems, how they work and how each is related to the other, to go with my character backstory that I put out, however I've yet to release any of them.
A few basic points of reference taken from ship stats before they were removed from the game :
Thanks, that will prove useful.
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Math'ra Hiede
Amarr
Quality Assurance Inc.
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Posted - 2008.11.28 05:38:00 -
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Originally by: Stitcher
That would be the Guristas, with the Ghila.
Ah thats the one... |
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Manos Soban
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Posted - 2008.11.28 22:29:00 -
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It reminds me a bit of Homeworld. I support your idea btw 
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Verone
Veto Corp
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Posted - 2008.11.28 23:25:00 -
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For reference, the two versions of the CONCORD battleship that are flyable on TQ, that are used by ISD, or have been in the past, are called the "Marshal" (silver/white version seen on regular patrols) and the "Renegade" (black and yellowish DED cersion that's in missions)
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Jericho Taurus
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Posted - 2008.12.09 23:29:00 -
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COuldn't you have done your best description so far out of a far more cool ship, like the Megathron? =)
Awesome work corpie .. RESPECT! =)
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ashellia
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Posted - 2008.12.10 11:06:00 -
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awesomeness!
you know what would be more awesome? schematics of these ships, side view, top view etc.. to bet i suck at drawing 
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Grek Forto
THE IRIS
United Freemen Alliance
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Posted - 2008.12.10 11:36:00 -
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Edited by: Grek Forto on 10/12/2008 11:35:53
Originally by: ashellia
awesomeness!
you know what would be more awesome? schematics of these ships, side view, top view etc.. to bet i suck at drawing
I would not mind trying using Photoshop or something. There is already one for the Apoc though. http://gh-sc.klaki.net/ImpocSchematic.jpg
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