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Soy Grande
Trade Consortium
Ascendant Frontier
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Posted - 2006.10.03 16:05:00 -
[31]
 Kudos! That was great, keep it up. Finally something else to waste more work time on 
"The art of war is simple enough. Find out where your enemy is. Get at him as soon as you can. Strike him as hard as you can, and keep moving on."
-Ulysses S. Grant |
Sir Erighan
The Syndicate Inc
Ascendant Frontier
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Posted - 2006.10.03 16:39:00 -
[32]
Edited by: Sir Erighan on 03/10/2006 16:39:08
Valiant effort Guard'in. Though, like others have posted, try and stay away from making too many assumptions regarding alliances, battles, dev comments, etc.
Examples:
Yes, Keiron congratulated us on building the first titan. However, Keiron is a PR manager and not an in-game developer. So take his comments with a grain of salt.
MC may have a good relationship with BoB, but that doesn't mean they are allied with them. At the end of the day, they are mercenaries and ISK is their true ally.
Refrain from what could be perceived as derogatory/negative remarks such as calling BoBÆs allies ôbandwagonsö. Even if there is some truth in your statement, it comes across in a negative way and will only create more hatred towards alliances.
DonÆt go to ôextraö lengths explaining simple terms or concepts. You went out of your way to explain what a pendulum does. We all know it swings both directions 
Again, great job though.
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WarlockX
Amarr
Free Trade Corp
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Posted - 2006.10.03 17:11:00 -
[33]
Good show, but practice so you don't look so nervous. It's very unprofessional right now.
"I often quote myself. It adds spice to my conversation." |
Remmington Daniels
Destructive Influence
Band of Brothers
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Posted - 2006.10.04 07:44:00 -
[34]
Good watch, a few inconsistances (explained in this thread so they dont need going over again).
I'm sure it gets better as it progresses.
Nice though all the same
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Destructive Influence
Band Of Brothers
Nice Region, We'll take it |
Mr M
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Posted - 2006.10.04 11:01:00 -
[35]
Welcome to the news business
EVEgeek | EVE Tribune |
Horoc'h Ryydell
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Posted - 2006.10.04 11:15:00 -
[36]
I really like the format! Of course you can make it better, as you allready stated yourself.
I only have to (constructively meant) remarks:
- Try to go for Ingame News instead of CCP-news... guess coverage of wars, tradedeals, stocks etc would be really cool
- Decide for yourself how you want your news to be: so politically neutral or not, propaganda or not, Empire-tied, alliance-tied, completely objective (<= is the most difficult to do i recon)
Have fun making the next show and success!
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d'hofren
Queens of the Stone Age
Chimaera Pact
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Posted - 2006.10.04 11:58:00 -
[37]
Great stuff,
Hang in there and maybe get statements from both sides when covering alliance spats.
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Succurso
Black Veil Company
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Posted - 2006.10.05 12:25:00 -
[38]
Hey gaurd'in
Thought that was great mate. If you keep going I am sure it will start to look really polished and its certainly better than I could manage.
This sort of thing adds another layer of imerssion to the game which is always good.
A purely personal comment is this tho: I think like a poster above mentioned it might be good to just have ingame news.
However its your show mate so do what you want.
Looking forward to the next one
regards
Succurso
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Sheerborn
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Posted - 2006.10.05 13:26:00 -
[39]
Good job! Keep it up.
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Ore Boar
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Posted - 2006.10.05 13:47:00 -
[40]
Am I the only person who thinks that its a bit over the top for a computer game?
A news channel? 
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Spaja Saist
Gallente
The Scope
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Posted - 2006.10.05 13:49:00 -
[41]
 Originally by: Sir Erighan
Edited by: Sir Erighan on 03/10/2006 16:39:08
Valiant effort Guard'in. Though, like others have posted, try and stay away from making too many assumptions regarding alliances, battles, dev comments, etc.
Examples:
Yes, Keiron congratulated us on building the first titan. However, Keiron is a PR manager and not an in-game developer. So take his comments with a grain of salt.
MC may have a good relationship with BoB, but that doesn't mean they are allied with them. At the end of the day, they are mercenaries and ISK is their true ally.
Refrain from what could be perceived as derogatory/negative remarks such as calling BoBÆs allies ôbandwagonsö. Even if there is some truth in your statement, it comes across in a negative way and will only create more hatred towards alliances.
DonÆt go to ôextraö lengths explaining simple terms or concepts. You went out of your way to explain what a pendulum does. We all know it swings both directions
Again, great job though.
I believe since he took the initiative to do this himself he can say whatever he wants. Some of you need to get off his back since this was his first effort. Be thankful someone else besides the extremely biased Eve TV guys is making the effort. Just watching the alliance tourneys was painful with all the biased epeeners on Eve TV.
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spiralJunkie
Minmatar
Eve Radio Corporation
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Posted - 2006.10.05 14:23:00 -
[42]
Originally by: Spaja Saist
Be thankful someone else besides the extremely biased Eve TV guys is making the effort. Just watching the alliance tourneys was painful with all the biased epeeners on Eve TV.
where was your application then?
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The pundits in the studio are talking , and despite not knowing what any of this means I am riveted |
Sir Erighan
The Syndicate Inc
Ascendant Frontier
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Posted - 2006.10.05 14:39:00 -
[43]
Originally by: Spaja Saist
Originally by: Sir Erighan
Edited by: Sir Erighan on 03/10/2006 16:39:08
Valiant effort Guard'in. Though, like others have posted, try and stay away from making too many assumptions regarding alliances, battles, dev comments, etc.
Examples:
Yes, Keiron congratulated us on building the first titan. However, Keiron is a PR manager and not an in-game developer. So take his comments with a grain of salt.
MC may have a good relationship with BoB, but that doesn't mean they are allied with them. At the end of the day, they are mercenaries and ISK is their true ally.
Refrain from what could be perceived as derogatory/negative remarks such as calling BoBÆs allies ôbandwagonsö. Even if there is some truth in your statement, it comes across in a negative way and will only create more hatred towards alliances.
DonÆt go to ôextraö lengths explaining simple terms or concepts. You went out of your way to explain what a pendulum does. We all know it swings both directions
Again, great job though.
I believe since he took the initiative to do this himself he can say whatever he wants. Some of you need to get off his back since this was his first effort. Be thankful someone else besides the extremely biased Eve TV guys is making the effort. Just watching the alliance tourneys was painful with all the biased epeeners on Eve TV.
Get off his back...? Where in my post did it sound like I was attacking him or ungrateful for his efforts?
There is nothing wrong with providing constructive criticism or suggestions. And thatÆs all my post was, constructive criticism. Sorry you failed to see the difference between my post and someone saying, ôGuardÆn, that sucked.ö 
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Khajit Smitty
Minmatar
MisFunk Inc.
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Posted - 2006.10.05 16:00:00 -
[44]
Originally by: Ore Boar
Am I the only person who thinks that its a bit over the top for a computer game?
Most likely, as someone said it adds an extra layer of immersion, not too mention the fact that if the reports are concise and short it may prove more useful than reading 30 pages of spams and flames on the alliances discussions threads....
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Pax Althaleen
Amarr
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Posted - 2006.10.05 17:44:00 -
[45]
Guard'in,
That was a pretty good effort for It being the 1st time You've done It. BRAVO !!!
As others have said - Just practise the Material before You tape It and don't let the Camera make You nervous.
It'll take a few times to get it so that You feel comfortable with being on Screen but Hey - What doesn't take a bit of getting used to anyways right ?
Sincerely and Respectfully,
Pax Althaleen
Holder - House Althaleen |
sakana
Purgatorial Janitors Inc.
Knights Of the Southerncross
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Posted - 2006.10.05 18:15:00 -
[46]
not watched it yet, but nice idea. about people complaining about you looking at notes/seeming nervous etc...i think thats pretty natural...i would **** myself if i tried it :P
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Kinomoto Sakura
Amarr
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Posted - 2006.10.05 18:19:00 -
[47]
hehe, great job , the ticker made me LOL
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Game The World.
/me wonders why the character pic doesnt show |
Trypho
Minmatar
AWE Corporation
Ascendant Frontier
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Posted - 2006.10.05 18:54:00 -
[48]
Great job, honestly. Even though there are some things posted before which could be better I must give kudo`s for the idea and the guts to do it - I can say I did enjoy it :)
Keep up the good work!
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Vantoth
Gallente
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Posted - 2006.10.05 19:24:00 -
[49]
Very nicely done. You did good for your first newscast. TAke note but not to heart the suggestions as I doubt anyone else would have done as well. The ticker was a very nice touch, and quite helpful. If you ever need a reporter in the field, or voice over for a "commercial" I would be happy to help.
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