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Fredfredbug4
Kings of Kill EVE Animal Control
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Posted - 2012.01.11 20:48:00 -
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Deviana Sevidon wrote:Ishtanchuk Fazmarai wrote:Houm... there is something unappealing with you, maybe tti's the lips, the lack of expressionm th epose... the onll thing OK are the eyes, which are standard issue with every gallente. Dull portrait that not even the red/gold coat can fix, 5/10. (I am back in my last days... looking for a wall to lean on before have a loong, loong rest...) Hmm, stupid expression, lips to glossy, some serial asia chick. 0/10 for effort. :D
5/10 everything is good except for those dead eyes. They stare into my soul!  |

Fredfredbug4
Kings of Kill EVE Animal Control
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Posted - 2012.01.12 03:31:00 -
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Astrid Stjerna wrote:Rose Valley wrote:Lina Alar (7/10) - Solid character design, perhaps changing the angle of the head to view more straight could work well, focus of direction seems far to the right. The black/white backdrop works well with the top, just wonder if any other backdrop could work as well.
love the character creator CCP have created for EVE <3 Oooh, she wants to play, does she....? ;) 8/10, -1 for such a tight close-up and -1 for the slightly awkward expression.
6/10, -1 for odd facial structure, -1 for overuse of body modifications, -1 for having dead eyes, -1 for awkward pose. |

Fredfredbug4
Kings of Kill EVE Animal Control
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Posted - 2012.01.17 23:35:00 -
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Jace Errata wrote:Sahara Wildcat-
9/10 Niiiice.
8/10 Well done! but I personally feel that removing the sun glasses and modifying your eye expression would make it perfect |

Fredfredbug4
Kings of Kill EVE Animal Control
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Posted - 2012.01.27 22:49:00 -
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Ila Dace wrote:[Lapis Ruptor] Properly creepy: 7/10
Pretty good, but the lighting doesn't seem to match the background. 8/10 |

Fredfredbug4
Kings of Kill EVE Animal Control
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Posted - 2012.01.28 18:48:00 -
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Lady Starfire wrote:ANGRY LOOKING TWO ARM THAT LOOKS TO BE ALL THAT IS WRONG WITH THE WORLD AND THE REASON ONE ARMS HAVE SUCH A HARD TIME!
7/10 pretty funny but trying a bit too hard. |

Fredfredbug4
Kings of Kill EVE Animal Control
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Posted - 2012.01.30 19:55:00 -
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6/10, I see where you are going with things, but the eyes don't seem to match the rest of the facial expressions. Your probably going for a grumpy/sad look but the eyes just make you look bored. |

Fredfredbug4
Kings of Kill EVE Animal Control
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Posted - 2012.03.03 21:35:00 -
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Sensational Mustache wrote:Nyla Skin wrote:Sensational Mustache wrote: Probably wouldn't want the mustache on.
Rather too blatant Freddie Mercury. 3/10 Screw you I'm modeled on manliness not fudgepushing: http://i.imgur.com/nz5h2.jpg
6/10
Looks a lot like what you based it off of but I'm not a huge fan of it either way. |

Fredfredbug4
Kings of Kill EVE Animal Control
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Posted - 2012.03.23 05:17:00 -
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343guilty1 wrote:8/10 Stoic but still menacing at the same time, my applause
6/10. From what I can tell the face looks good but the sunglasses kill the effect. Paired with the lighting and the lack of a shirt you look like the rapist I saw on the news the other day. If this was your intention you did a good job but I think your going for the "badass" look. |

Fredfredbug4
Kings of Kill EVE Animal Control
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Posted - 2012.04.11 21:43:00 -
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Paragon Renegade wrote:Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote: Unflattering pose, but the character is great, 7/10
Generic emo face, however the lighting, background, makeup, and tatoos were well done. 8.5/10 |

Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.05.09 19:17:00 -
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Tedrizze wrote:Markus Reese wrote:"Nice ship, I'll take it"
9/10
Could use slightly different lighting to fix the odd shadowing on the left eye. left eye is pure white anyway... btt nice military style 9/10
Pretty cool, very intimidating. Though, I think you would appear even more intimidating if you fixed the other eye. 8/10 |
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Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.02.20 18:18:00 -
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Mizhir wrote:@Kristopher
As mentioned earlier, you got a Targaryen look. Bright hair, greyblue eyes and a very smug look like you think you own everything.
However aside from that there isn't really much that stands out. So its a 7.5/10
The direction the eyes are looking seems a little off, one is looking at the ground but the other is looking somewhat center. It just feels weird. 7/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.02.22 04:51:00 -
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Sriracha Nighthawk wrote:I remember when I ran my trial, and you where there in Uitra ranting at me in local.
Anyway, out of personal preference, I don't like the hair, the background is unfitting, but everything else is good.
8/10 - Don't be surprised if I show up in Uitra with my Catalyst
Edit: I just remembered that one of your members tried to suicide gank my Merlin a week or two into my trial. I hate everything about your corp. -_- lol
Nice work. Like a battle hardened admiral ready to unleash his devastating master plan. 9/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.02.22 19:50:00 -
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Kristopher Rocancourt wrote:oh Lawd, 18/10 marry me
I like the eyetwitch, reminds me of some anime villain that just got defeated 8/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.02.24 01:12:00 -
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fukier wrote:@indahmawar
8.5/10 needs more emotion in eyes
If you were going for the "Now I'm going to cut you up and record your screams so I can listen to them over and over again for my amusement" look, you certainly got it. 9.5/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.02.24 15:59:00 -
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Eurydia Vespasian wrote:i'll rate you. but only if you tell me how you picked that name. lol
It comes from an old cartoon character, Fredfredburger
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yqlsJx72-MY
He was a lot funnier when you were 12 or 13 years old and bored out of your mind.
Around that time I played Runescape for about a year (a year I will never get back) and Fredfredburger didn't fit. So Fredfredbug4 was what I settled for. As far as I know I'm the only Fredfredbug ever but I settled for the 4 because I liked the alliteration in the name.
Riall wrote:[Indahmawar Fazmarai] I. R. serious pilot, seriously. That portrait looks a bit like you were about to ask where the lens was before the shot was snapped. 8/10
Interesting, I like the expression, but the lighting and background could be a bit better, 8/10. I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.02.27 03:15:00 -
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Fancy Mel wrote:Decidedly average. A little to dark for my tastes  6/10
The character is quite attractive, but I think a less revealing outfit would suit her better. It's great and all that she was on this month's cover of "Sexy State Sweethearts" , but when CONCORD asks you to pull over for whatever the hell you did, I don't think this is the official photo you want to show them.
I mean, you might get one of the more lonely officers to let you get away with ganking a miner in hi-sec or something, but seriously, a more tasteful outfit would look nicer on her than you might think. 6.5/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.02.28 23:37:00 -
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Eurydia Vespasian wrote:your understanding of makeup application is appalling lol
but the lighting is good and the expression looks like someone on hallucinogenics asking "are you seeing what i'm seeing!" is pretty entertaining.
i'll give a 6.5/10
I love the very casual appearance and the fact that this is a full body picture of a female character that is actually wearing clothes. The character herself is also well done and the background and lighting match very well. I would adjust the eyes a little bit though, she looks kinda sleepy. 9/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.03.02 08:54:00 -
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Rotten Tuna wrote:*places a plate of bacon in Alice's quarters and runs away* I like it. Good character design, good lighting, good background and she is able to show a tasteful amount of skin that adds to her outfit rather than looking like the fantasy girl of the creator.
9/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.03.12 04:43:00 -
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Nadia Fey wrote:Achura facial structure is far too round for a bowl cut. Try something with more.... POWER AND MOTION The eyes are a little .... Empty as well. The jacket also doesn't match the red Avenue.
7.5/10
Looks like a classy young lady. But those eyes, they stare into my soul. I need my teddy bear. 8/10
It's not necessarily the eyes themselves, just in that portrait. I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.03.13 01:58:00 -
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Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:Anne Books wrote:I see you go for Ishtas last look now (if I don't mix up names here^-^) The composure along the background is interesting but the hair distorts the overall porcelain-look (if indented) Perhaps a more sleek hairstyle would be better 9/10 To your question: It is an old skin and very unfortunately was being removed on last char-upgrade. I had the same on original Zoe before I made her "white"...still a little sad about it ;) Ah, I knew it! Ishtanchuk's skin color also was removed, with the added offence that none of the current skins is in the red tan palette (so, according to some viking designer in iceland, 23,000 years in the future latin american people no longer belong to human race and are all extinct...  ). I will consider what you say about hairstyle... the current style is what Indah used most of the time and i felt like going back to the sources after using the bangs and being like Ishtanchuk... but now I needed a pure white piece of cloth and this dress is the only one available, albeit Ish is already using it too... won't change it because it haves a lovely effect with Indah's breast size.
A good start, but the background and lighting just feels awkward and broken. 7/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |
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Fredfredbug4
The Scope Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.03.21 00:17:00 -
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Liafcipe9000 wrote:Kaye Shimada wrote:@Liafcipe9000
Very good depiction of a military dictator. 8/10 why thank you  Alexis - not sure if supermodel face or evil woman with an army taking over the universe, but you look somewhat epic. 8 / 10
I like it. It's different from all the "tribal" Minmatar characters we see on here, not that there is anything wrong with them, I actually love the look but it's nice to see a change.
Reminds me of those corrupt African or South American warlords. The only thing I might change is the lighting. Your character blends in a bit too much with the background. Keep the outfit and colors the same, but I think adding a little more light would add appropriate contrast
8/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
Eve Defence Force Tribal Band
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Posted - 2013.03.28 03:16:00 -
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Yiole Gionglao wrote:Alice Saki wrote:10/10
The Hero of OOPE 9 of 10, she's sleepy because Zimmy stole all coffee. Akirei Scytale wrote:Though the blue eyes make her look less asian and more wth. I'd say 8-8.5/10. I've never seen Yiole as being Asian as in "far east", not since the new CC. She already had blue eyes and black hair in the old creator. Albeit her name is totally Asian (Korean inspired, actually), currently i picture her as being from the Mediterranean area, maybe Middle East. Almond eyes are not unusual there, specially mild ones like Yiole's (just compare her eyes to Indah's...) and blue-eyed middle eastern are not unusual neither.
Wow, very classy lady. Good work. 8/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
Eve Defence Force Tribal Band
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Posted - 2013.04.02 23:50:00 -
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Excellent job! Lots of emotion in the portrait. 9/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
Eve Defence Force Tribal Band
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Posted - 2013.04.03 20:15:00 -
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Chloe Kaltana wrote:Great face and expression! The whole pose looks a little "overstretched" but still 9/10 :)
I like it but there is something about it that just bugs me. I think it's the lighting to be honest. 8.7/10 I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
Eve Defence Force Tribal Band
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Posted - 2013.04.08 19:53:00 -
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Sivney Quincannon wrote:Leo DeSeis wrote:6/10. s'alright I guess It is difficult to see/appreciate details of your avatar and the lack of lighting gives the illusion that the tattoos are scars. Not sure if that was intended? Regardless, I think there is potential if you spend a bit more time manipulating the lighting and background. --7/10--
I like it, but the outfit and hair is too dark for the lighting and background you are using. 8/10. I accidentally my assets, is this bad?-á |

Fredfredbug4
Eve Defence Force Tribal Band
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Posted - 2013.04.30 03:41:00 -
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Lazarus Valkarov wrote:Unique. I like the detail. Lips are just a bit *too* dark, in my opinion. 9/10
Holy crap, this guy is badass! It's like he's made his living off of blowing up ships filled with orphan children and he is perfectly okay with that.
Or sort of like the evil villain in a martial arts film, BUT IN SPACE
I'd personally put a bit more light on the face but other than that well done. 9.5/10 Watch Fred Fred Frederation and stop cryptozoologist! Fight against the brutal genocide of fictional creatures across New Eden! Is that a metaphor? Probably not, but the fru-fru- people will sure love it! |

Fredfredbug4
Eve Defence Force Tribal Band
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Posted - 2013.05.02 04:12:00 -
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Akirei Scytale wrote:Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:Anne Books wrote:@ Indah:
Looks a little bit like your application picture for Brutor Tribe, Indah :P 9/10 because background is to monotone but 10/10 because it makes you look matarian now ^-^ Heh, it should had been pure white to get the appropiate effect... so i just looked for a new background.  Realistic look, body that doesn't look like it was designed by a teenage boy. My only gripe is that the lighting does not fit the background - it is direct and the background lighting is angled. That kills the realism of the image. I'd say 9/10.
I absolutely love the expression and the design of the character overall. I'm not a major fan of the lighting, part of me says it works but part of me doesn't. 9/10 Watch Fred Fred Frederation and stop cryptozoologist! Fight against the brutal genocide of fictional creatures across New Eden! Is that a metaphor? Probably not, but the fru-fru- people will sure love it! |
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