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Leotie
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Posted - 2013.02.17 15:15:00 -
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"Watch out! We got a badass!"
9/10
Yet another grumpy, old Amarr - but a good one. |
Leotie
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Posted - 2016.04.15 21:05:42 -
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci wrote:
I like the pose, lighting, background, most of your face and you got rid of your plastic looking skin.
What really drags your current avatar down, is your right eye. I'm sorry, but it is just a mess of clipping and I guess, what looks like someone shoved a planet in your eye socket, is also not rendered right. The deformation from the augments shouldn't be that wide. It might be a cool effect, if the rest of the eye would be fixed (clipping and such). Your touching eyebrows are not very nice either.
I think you should try different eye prosthetics. The one you use sadly generates too much clipping and only works in a very limited range of poses. See Paranoid Loyd for a good use.
7/10 |
Leotie
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Posted - 2016.04.28 15:06:45 -
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A bit too zoomed out for my taste.
You make the crossed arms look good though. Usually they look a bit awkward. I'm talking about the lower hand, that floats on thin air. In your shot it isn't visible.
9/10 |
Leotie
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Posted - 2016.05.08 19:06:18 -
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Zoomed in I really like it.
I'll deduct a point though, because very zoomed out avatars mostly don't work for me, especially if they have a very dark theme.
9/10 |
Leotie
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Posted - 2016.05.14 06:43:22 -
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Very nice.
Maybe get rid of that painted Quafe can you call an eye augmentation :)
9/10 |
Leotie
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Posted - 2016.05.14 16:43:38 -
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Neph wrote:However, that background is awful. Get something that's light and complements and brings out the colors on the rest of you. Additionally, I'd lose or enhance the tattoo. It's a distracting afterthought. If you're going to do anything, do it boldly.
Those were indeed the two things I hesitated with during creation.
There aren't however too many background options, that would give me the same effect.
I wanted a strong profile, like you often times see with Native Americans and their headpiece. Since we don't have cool feathers or other trimming, I thought it would be a good idea to keep the back of the head in the shadow. Most light backgrounds would reveal the shape of my head though or I would have to move the character too far to the left which I don't like.
I changed to one now that at least contrasts the front of the face better. But during character creation I thought the smoke effect takes attention away from the profile line. Also that background is widely used. I would really like a completely black Background here. That would be my favourite I guess.
One: Would be another favourite of mine.
Two: Has slight problem in upper left corner.
Three: Is allright I guess
Four: Too distracting around the armor.
Five: I like green and orange better than blue and orange.
Let's see what you guys think.
Yours is still an 8/10 as I have rated you before at the top of the page.
ps: Holy **** I'm a nerd. |
Leotie
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Posted - 2016.06.10 12:07:48 -
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This is a weird character.
The piercings and make-up suggest a punkish/rebellish character - the haircut doesn't really fit in, though. Same goes for the expression. The eyebrows suggest an angry character, the smirk - or is it even a whole smile - kinda suggest the opposite. One could argue for a "oh really" smirk or a pejorative smile, but then the eyebrows wont fit.
Anyway, I feel like the character has no real concept and is all over the place.
6/10
Persephone Norman wrote:Morrigan Nighe wrote:
I think people skipped you. /rude
Yeah, but it seems like it was an accident.
Definitely. My /rude was meant more playfully than judgemental. |
Leotie
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Posted - 2016.06.19 10:14:48 -
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MECHcraft wrote:Without the tattoos that would be a good looking possible gf  Longer hair and without the glasses and i would like to marry her ! 
So you would marry a totally different girl then? I think I'll save that as a pick-up line: "Man lady, I would marry you, if you had bigger **** and actually looked good." Just make sure you wear a helmet and some protection down south.
Since I think I know what you were going for, I'll give a 10/10. At first I wanted to nag about the different hair and eyebrow colour, but he actually has that. Maybe try to go through the apparel and see if you find a red coat/top. |
Leotie
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Posted - 2016.07.02 10:22:02 -
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eddie valvetino wrote:You look kind of mornful, i like that
also.. a tiny bit like life might have been hard in the past
It is always interesting to see what others read into your avatar.
I've noticed your avatar before. I like the self-confident look that doesn't need an aggressive expression to underline it. The self-confidence seems to come from age and wisdom. He looks calm, collected and knows he doesn't have to prove himself any more. He's done that several time before.
But he also seems to look just under the viewers eyes, as if he doesn't like to keep eye contact...or I'm mistaking the whole thing and you were going for a pondering pose.
I would increase the lighting just a tiny, tiny bit to bring out the details of the jacket and tattoo on the arm a bit more.
10/10 |
Leotie
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Posted - 2016.08.29 20:13:55 -
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She wants to be rebellious, but doesn't have the attitude it seems like. Very lacklustre expression. I also don't know if the clothes would compliment the rebellious face if they were more visible.
Lose the chin piercings, they generally look quite fake and bad. I'd move her up in the frame to show a bit more of your body. It doesn't look very good, if there's only head and a bit of of neck visible.
What I really like, is the lighting on your cheeks. It is already a have way decent effect with the current background. You could expand on that.
Has potential, but you need to do some more work for it to be outstanding.
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Leotie
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Posted - 2016.10.22 08:21:10 -
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Caldari grunt 101. I don't have much to say here.
The framing is a little off. It is slightly off centre and a little bit too low, imo.
The pose could also be improved by turning the shoulders a bit more than now and then look straight into the camera (turn the face towards the camera then).
7/10
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Leotie
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Posted - 2016.11.17 17:02:47 -
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Really like it. Has some uniqueness to it. The only thing that buggers me, is the framing. Could be moved up a bit.
9/10 |
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