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t0rfiFrans
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Posted - 2004.03.15 14:27:00 -
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A new short story has been added to our website. Get yourself a cup of coffee / tea / favorite beverage and set your instant messaging program of choice to away, wait for your boss to leave the room and immerse yourself in "Forsaken Ruins".
In a fight for their lives, three bounty hunters stumble across the ruins of a dark, forgotten age.
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RagnarH
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Posted - 2004.03.15 15:34:00 -
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this story is SOOO long 
32 pages 
This char is perm banned on forums :S |
pshepherd
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Posted - 2004.03.15 15:35:00 -
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excellent story, even if is is really long (took me over 30 mins).
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RagnarH
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Posted - 2004.03.15 15:45:00 -
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torfi, u are icelandic so u will know this phrase "taka minna Ý hverri fer og fara oftar"
Make more storys and just keep them 5 pages or so
This char is perm banned on forums :S |
Discorporation
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Posted - 2004.03.15 15:50:00 -
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Well done, t0rfi :D
[Heterocephalus glaber]
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Jester03
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Posted - 2004.03.15 16:24:00 -
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A fantastic story
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Danton Marcellus
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Posted - 2004.03.15 16:33:00 -
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Edited by: Danton Marcellus on 15/03/2004 16:34:27
I'm not icelandic and it took me all but 20 seconds to transmute this into meaning, take less each time and do it more often.
That being said, can I have a cookie?
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Atandros
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Posted - 2004.03.15 17:01:00 -
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Long indeed!
But good overall. I like how it was used to connect the pieces of the Immensea puzzle and shed further light on them and the whole rogue CONCORD officer incident - lends a lot of immersion.
Make them a bit shorter, but not too much.
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EveJunkie
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Posted - 2004.03.15 17:33:00 -
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Come on guys this is the first new story in ages stop moaning about it being too long. It was fantastic. More stories this length would be great! Certainly helped pass the time traveling.
Sheesh cant please some folk....
More please!
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Danton Marcellus
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Posted - 2004.03.15 18:31:00 -
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Was it just me losing my thread when the station info came smack into the story? I woke up a page later with someones brother in a lubed up Concord vessel, was I abducted? 
Convert Stations
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Keeval
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Posted - 2004.03.15 19:06:00 -
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Excellent story - loved it.
Clean up your EVE Cache quickly and easily
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dalman
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Posted - 2004.03.15 19:31:00 -
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"Short story" - heh.
Very good.
M.I.A. since 2004-07-30 |
tigress
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Posted - 2004.03.15 19:45:00 -
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Edited by: tigress on 15/03/2004 19:46:18
Ah! Great story, sad it's coming after the immensea stations. I would have loved to read it while pounding shields :)
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Bad Harlequin
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Posted - 2004.03.15 20:13:00 -
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oooooooo. Very nice, well written. Too bad the "warpdrive generation" can't stand the time it takes to read a few pages .
More! Autor! Bravo! &c.!
You are in a maze of twisty little asteroids, all alike. |
Hakera
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Posted - 2004.03.15 20:27:00 -
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we dont like saying anything...unless it takes a long time to say....
Great story!!! Liked it a lot and length was good
Dumbledore - Eve-I.com |
GardenerOfEden
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Posted - 2004.03.15 20:31:00 -
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Nice story but now past history ... All players should be aware that most/all conquerable stations dotted around the EVEverse are in territory claimed by one alliance/corp or another who now control them - "sight seeing" is not recommended
EVE is a massive social experiment of human interaction facilitated by computer technology |
Ichabod Crane
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Posted - 2004.03.15 21:02:00 -
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Edited by: Ichabod Crane on 15/03/2004 21:02:56
Aye, a very nice story, I liked it alot
More please!
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Chade Malloy
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Posted - 2004.03.15 21:25:00 -
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Very nice story, it provides a solid (and exciting) background about Immensea.
A must-read!
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Serilla
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Posted - 2004.03.15 21:44:00 -
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great read. thank you to whoever wrote that.
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DigitalCommunist
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Posted - 2004.03.15 22:15:00 -
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That was a very good read, please keep up the good work!
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Perpetually driven, your end is our beginning.
"Can I be a consultant for EVE II?" - WhiteDwarf |
Deep Spacer
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Posted - 2004.03.15 22:17:00 -
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nice nice story
id luv to read more of this stuff, adds alot to this game. and id like to see some longer stuff, that one was interesting enough that i woulda luved to read it for 150 pages
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YuuKnow
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Posted - 2004.03.15 23:04:00 -
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I agree, very well written.
I especially like the use of the "salvage drones."
And can we assume that the actions of the pirates, aggressively patroling their systems, gates, and pursuing intruders even after warping, are a foreshadowing of the upcoming pirate changes of Shiva?
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Pitwebb
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Posted - 2004.03.16 01:45:00 -
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Edited by: Pitwebb on 16/03/2004 01:47:12
Amazing story. The only thing that messed me up was when they transitioned to the Concord General. I had to go back a page to make sure I didn't miss anything.
Hopefully Shiva will include the salvage drones. Mmmmm ... more toys.
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Vlad Damian
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Posted - 2004.03.16 01:47:00 -
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Edited by: Vlad Damian on 16/03/2004 01:53:10
/me looks for the "clap" button
Wow, that was an excellent story with some equally fine writing. I won't say I'm speaking for everyone when I voice this opinion... but I can only assume that many would agree with me: these short stories, along with t0rfi's sketches/pictures add a great deal to the game. They even inspire me to play more!
(I always say this and I'll say it again: things are more than welcome that are written or drawn that remind us that there are actually people and hallways and other things in these hulks we fly around and dock in.) Keep up the good work in this department one and all.
-Thanks
P.S. I agree with Deep Spacer; I could continue reading this short story for many more pages if they were ever to be written!
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Kublai Khan
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Posted - 2004.03.16 02:47:00 -
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excellently written.
i cant quite put into words just how much i enjoyed this, but man, was it worth the length of time it took to read it.
i look forward to reading more of this depth and length
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Follow me if I advance,
Kill me if i retreat,
Avenge me if i fall. |
Hazara Khan
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Posted - 2004.03.16 03:24:00 -
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Great stuff. Thank you.
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CEO, Grand Pasha and Mighty One
Hazara Khan's Haphazard Bazaar
The Finest Camels in all EVE!
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Knefru Khamen
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Posted - 2004.03.16 04:41:00 -
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Edited by: Knefru Khamen on 16/03/2004 04:47:52
Edited by: Knefru Khamen on 16/03/2004 04:42:06
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The transition to the DED office was abrupt (and had me paging back to see if the link was incorrect) but the pacing and tension were excellent. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this author's work.
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Ad honorem,
Knefru Khamen
Omnia mea mecum porto. |
Katz
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Posted - 2004.03.16 07:31:00 -
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Amazing! Great work t0r, keep it up
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Martinus Crimson
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Posted - 2004.03.16 09:14:00 -
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Great story ..!!!!
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Khal St
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Posted - 2004.03.16 11:16:00 -
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Great story torif...
more please!
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