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canna
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Posted - 2004.03.16 11:33:00 -
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great read :)
gimme more :)
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Atar
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Posted - 2004.03.16 14:27:00 -
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Edited by: Pitwebb on 16/03/2004 01:47:12
Amazing story. The only thing that messed me up was when they transitioned to the Concord General. I had to go back a page to make sure I didn't miss anything.
Hopefully Shiva will include the salvage drones. Mmmmm ... more toys.
I had the same problem! Aside from that A+ story! 
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PreTender
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Posted - 2004.03.16 15:26:00 -
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loved the story :)
just wanna know what happened to omen flying girl :) (the ammarian i think)
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Bandus
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Posted - 2004.03.16 17:07:00 -
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I loved this story. I thought the length was perfect.
Captain Bandus, Human Resources Officer
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Gariuys
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Posted - 2004.03.16 19:42:00 -
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It was a awesome read, thanks whoever wrote it :D
~{When evil and strange get together anything is possible}~
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Jeffor
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Posted - 2004.03.16 20:56:00 -
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Keep em coming.
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Morkt Drakt
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Posted - 2004.03.16 22:40:00 -
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I thought it was a very good tale.
The only "issue" I had, as pointed out by others, was the formatting.. upon reaching the "second chapter" i thought it had linked me into a different story.
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Deathblo
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Posted - 2004.03.17 01:51:00 -
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I thought the story stunk!
haha, just kidding. its was good (sorry, didn't seem right to have a post without at least one flame. couldn't resist. )
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Doppleganger
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Posted - 2004.03.17 02:00:00 -
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Where's the printable version?
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archangel sean
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Posted - 2004.03.17 04:21:00 -
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Along with the other short stories...excellent, indeed.
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Muaddid
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Posted - 2004.03.17 04:59:00 -
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MORE MORE MORE :D
that kicked ass, well done :)
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Ametro
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Posted - 2004.03.17 11:22:00 -
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I agree, great story.
/emote takes his hat off to the author
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Elissen
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Posted - 2004.03.17 11:38:00 -
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Very nice story, altough it ended a bit adrupt in my opnion.
We want more! 
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Karol Kei
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Posted - 2004.03.17 12:37:00 -
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I liked it a lot. It was not too long at all for my taste. There is never enough...
Printable versions would be nice, though.
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Isaac Torgen
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Posted - 2004.03.17 20:47:00 -
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It grabs you by the throat and won't let you go until you've read the last part of it. Very nice story!
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Muacha
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Posted - 2004.03.17 23:45:00 -
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MUSIC - that's all it needed to be complete. To add the the story, I opened up the EVE log in screen and let the music play in the background. It really added to the story. Great job EVE team. 
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Fighterpilotjp
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Posted - 2004.03.18 02:29:00 -
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That was the first short story I read, actually, since they're all longer than the EVE Chronicles (which I love), and it was awesome. Gotta admit, I was a little nervous to load the next page and see a picture after reading the part where the Amarr female was frightened by an object floating above her.
Anybody got any favorite Chronicles in particular? I like Kyonoke Pit and Old Man Star the best.
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Negotiator
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Posted - 2004.03.18 03:42:00 -
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formatting sucked, story ruled.
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James McGowen
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Posted - 2004.03.18 03:56:00 -
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Read the top of page 20.
Stop and think.
Cool story  .
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Hamrammur
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Posted - 2004.03.18 13:00:00 -
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Make more story's and just keep them 5 pages or so
Torfi, don't pay attention to RagnarH. His brain can't handle more than 5 pages, even when it comes to toilet paper.
This is a great story, well written, educating and fun to read. If the story is fun the length does not matter.
Good work 
Hamrammur
MASS Director
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Eris Discordia
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Posted - 2004.03.18 15:25:00 -
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de-sticky
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Pitwebb
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Posted - 2004.03.18 16:48:00 -
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Quote:
loved the story :)
just wanna know what happened to omen flying girl :) (the ammarian i think)
She had a mental breakdown during the trip to the cloning facilities. She was taken away to one of the Concord ships. Once she came back to reality, she vowed to never fly a space ship again. She retired from the mercenary business.
-Pit
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