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Zephyr Rengate
dearg doom
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:41:00 -
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Just recently got a Terry Brooks novel, 1st of three I think. Sword of Shannara. Its ok but a bit cliche. The main thing thats really bugging me about the book is the constant use of "several". Its the only bloody number he seems to use. Several moments, several hundred yards, seven years, etc. I'm not joking its really ****ing me off. I've been sighing irl everytime he uses several. Thats about a sigh everyfew pages.
Of all the things going on in the world atm this is the biggest pain to me. 
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Zephyr Rengate
dearg doom
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:41:00 -
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Just recently got a Terry Brooks novel, 1st of three I think. Sword of Shannara. Its ok but a bit cliche. The main thing thats really bugging me about the book is the constant use of "several". Its the only bloody number he seems to use. Several moments, several hundred yards, seven years, etc. I'm not joking its really ****ing me off. I've been sighing irl everytime he uses several. Thats about a sigh everyfew pages.
Of all the things going on in the world atm this is the biggest pain to me. 
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kor anon
Amarr Ministry of War
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:42:00 -
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Its a secret message to the coming of the first emperor of humanity. 7 could be a date no?
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kor anon
Amarr Ministry of War
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:42:00 -
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Its a secret message to the coming of the first emperor of humanity. 7 could be a date no?
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Zephyr Rengate
dearg doom
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:48:00 -
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Originally by: kor anon Its a secret message to the coming of the first emperor of humanity. 7 could be a date no?
Maybe but without a year to go with it.
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Akita T
Caldari Navy Volunteer Task Force
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:48:00 -
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Originally by: Zephyr Rengate Maybe but without a year to go with it.
Maybe several years ? 
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Zephyr Rengate
dearg doom
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:48:00 -
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Originally by: kor anon Its a secret message to the coming of the first emperor of humanity. 7 could be a date no?
Maybe but without a year to go with it.
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Akita T
Caldari Navy Volunteer Task Force
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:48:00 -
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Originally by: Zephyr Rengate Maybe but without a year to go with it.
Maybe several years ? 
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YouGotRipped
Ewigkeit
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:50:00 -
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Edited by: YouGotRipped on 26/08/2008 11:53:07
That is just one of the several adverse reactions developed from reading the novel.
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YouGotRipped
Ewigkeit
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:50:00 -
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Edited by: YouGotRipped on 26/08/2008 11:53:07
That is just one of the several adverse reactions developed from reading the novel.
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kor anon
Amarr Ministry of War
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:52:00 -
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Edited by: kor anon on 26/08/2008 11:52:40 careful analysis of the text has enabled me to put forward a date fortold. Thats being 07/02/1990. Seeing as that date has already gone could it possibly a birthdate?
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kor anon
Amarr Ministry of War
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:52:00 -
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Edited by: kor anon on 26/08/2008 11:52:40 careful analysis of the text has enabled me to put forward a date fortold. Thats being 07/02/1990. Seeing as that date has already gone could it possibly a birthdate?
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Akita T
Caldari Navy Volunteer Task Force
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:54:00 -
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He'll need several days to recover from the several adverse psychological effects this novel has afflicted him with. Several methods of remedy exist, including several ways to not think about it. Several scientists agree that several repetitions can severely severe several neural pathways related to several other important neurological functions of brais in several studies conducted on several patients in several countries across the globe in several subsequent years.
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Davina Braben
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:54:00 -
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So you are dissapointed because he uses the same word several times on a page instead of finding several different ways of saying something.
I can see how this would be disappointing on several levels.
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Zephyr Rengate
dearg doom
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:54:00 -
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Edited by: Zephyr Rengate on 26/08/2008 11:56:42
Originally by: YouGotRipped Edited by: YouGotRipped on 26/08/2008 11:53:07
That is just one of the several adverse reactions developed from reading the novel.
The other 6 tell me! 
EDIT oh ffs. Last 2 pages: several hundred feet. several hours 
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Akita T
Caldari Navy Volunteer Task Force
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:54:00 -
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He'll need several days to recover from the several adverse psychological effects this novel has afflicted him with. Several methods of remedy exist, including several ways to not think about it. Several scientists agree that several repetitions can severely severe several neural pathways related to several other important neurological functions of brais in several studies conducted on several patients in several countries across the globe in several subsequent years.
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Davina Braben
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:54:00 -
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So you are dissapointed because he uses the same word several times on a page instead of finding several different ways of saying something.
I can see how this would be disappointing on several levels.
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Zephyr Rengate
dearg doom
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Posted - 2008.08.26 11:54:00 -
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Edited by: Zephyr Rengate on 26/08/2008 11:56:42
Originally by: YouGotRipped Edited by: YouGotRipped on 26/08/2008 11:53:07
That is just one of the several adverse reactions developed from reading the novel.
The other 6 tell me! 
EDIT oh ffs. Last 2 pages: several hundred feet. several hours 
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Surfin's PlunderBunny
Minmatar Genos Occidere
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Posted - 2008.08.26 13:11:00 -
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Originally by: Akita T
Originally by: Zephyr Rengate Maybe but without a year to go with it.
Maybe several years ? 

Originally by: Lorz0r garmon is 90% Surfin's PlunderBunny, 10% er...Surfin's PlunderBunny
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Wendat Huron
Stellar Solutions
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Posted - 2008.08.26 13:23:00 -
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You've obviously not read Eragon then. *frowns menacingly for no apparent reason*
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kor anon
Amarr Ministry of War
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Posted - 2008.08.26 13:25:00 -
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Originally by: Wendat Huron You've obviously not read Eragon then. *frowns menacingly for no apparent reason*
hahaha. How about because hes menacing or angry? no?
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Wendat Huron
Stellar Solutions
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Posted - 2008.08.26 13:38:00 -
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Originally by: kor anon
Originally by: Wendat Huron You've obviously not read Eragon then. *frowns menacingly for no apparent reason*
hahaha. How about because hes menacing or angry? no?
He's neither, he's a little twink.
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kor anon
Amarr Ministry of War
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Posted - 2008.08.26 13:42:00 -
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Originally by: Wendat Huron
Originally by: kor anon
Originally by: Wendat Huron You've obviously not read Eragon then. *frowns menacingly for no apparent reason*
hahaha. How about because hes menacing or angry? no?
He's neither, he's a little twink.
I didn't think it possible but that just makes the description even more stupid
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Akita T
Caldari Navy Volunteer Task Force
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Posted - 2008.08.26 13:57:00 -
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Originally by: Wendat Huron You've obviously not read Eragon then. *frowns menacingly for no apparent reason*
It could be worse. Like, say, actually watching the MOVIE.
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kor anon
Amarr Ministry of War
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Posted - 2008.08.26 14:00:00 -
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Originally by: Akita T
Originally by: Wendat Huron You've obviously not read Eragon then. *frowns menacingly for no apparent reason*
It could be worse. Like, say, actually watching the MOVIE.
oh the movie was terrible. Nothing really happened
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Danton Marcellus
Nebula Rasa Holdings
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Posted - 2008.08.26 14:58:00 -
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Originally by: Akita T
Originally by: Wendat Huron You've obviously not read Eragon then. *frowns menacingly for no apparent reason*
It could be worse. Like, say, actually watching the MOVIE.
Eragon, that movie should be watched in a pirated asian version, hilarious subtitles!
Should/would/could have, HAVE you chav!
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Benilopax
Gallente Pulsar Combat Supplies Alternative Realities
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Posted - 2008.08.26 15:00:00 -
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I have found several books where repetition of several key words can cause at lot of stress to several readers.
... several.
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Zephyr Rengate
dearg doom
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Posted - 2008.08.26 15:03:00 -
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oh god make it stop 
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Surfin's PlunderBunny
Minmatar Genos Occidere
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Posted - 2008.08.26 15:17:00 -
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I off to the beach for several hours now 
Originally by: Lorz0r garmon is 90% Surfin's PlunderBunny, 10% er...Surfin's PlunderBunny
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Slade Trillgon
Siorai Iontach
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Posted - 2008.08.26 16:51:00 -
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I read several of Brooks novels. In my time reading these books I also noticed that Brooks used the word several, several more time then was necessary. Although he used several quite often, it did not get on my nerves like several other things that I can think of.
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