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Maule
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Posted - 2004.12.29 06:23:00 -
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Wonder when Chapter 2 is comming... it was suposed to get out yesterday :) bet they forgot it heh 
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Maule
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Posted - 2004.12.29 06:23:00 -
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Wonder when Chapter 2 is comming... it was suposed to get out yesterday :) bet they forgot it heh 
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Braaage
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Posted - 2004.12.29 11:22:00 -
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Ruthless is a six chapter novella by Tony Gonzales, released one chapter at a time over the course of six weeks.
Chapter 1 "In the Depth of Space". Chapter 2 available Dec 28th Chapter 3 available Jan 4th Chapter 4 available Jan 11th Chapter 5 available Jan 18th Chapter 6 available Jan 25th ___________________________________________ http://www.eve-tutor.com
Picture based tutorial site for EVE-Online |

Braaage
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Posted - 2004.12.29 11:22:00 -
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Ruthless is a six chapter novella by Tony Gonzales, released one chapter at a time over the course of six weeks.
Chapter 1 "In the Depth of Space". Chapter 2 available Dec 28th Chapter 3 available Jan 4th Chapter 4 available Jan 11th Chapter 5 available Jan 18th Chapter 6 available Jan 25th ___________________________________________ http://www.eve-tutor.com
Picture based tutorial site for EVE-Online |

Maule
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Posted - 2004.12.29 11:48:00 -
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yeah its the 29th today you know...
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Maule
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Posted - 2004.12.29 11:48:00 -
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yeah its the 29th today you know...
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Braaage
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Posted - 2004.12.29 11:51:00 -
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Errr ..... ummmm........
*hides* ___________________________________________ http://www.eve-tutor.com
Picture based tutorial site for EVE-Online |

Braaage
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Posted - 2004.12.29 11:51:00 -
[8]
Errr ..... ummmm........
*hides* ___________________________________________ http://www.eve-tutor.com
Picture based tutorial site for EVE-Online |

Wrangler
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Posted - 2004.12.29 13:18:00 -
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You can't rush an artists creativity. 
[Read the Rules!] - [Email the Moderators] |

Wrangler
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Posted - 2004.12.29 13:18:00 -
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You can't rush an artists creativity. 
[Read the Rules!] - [Email the Moderators] |

Joshua Foiritain
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Posted - 2004.12.29 13:40:00 -
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Argh damni want it! I need it!Aaarrrgggghhhh  ---------------------------
[Coreli Corporation Mainframe] |

Joshua Foiritain
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Posted - 2004.12.29 13:40:00 -
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Argh damni want it! I need it!Aaarrrgggghhhh  ---------------------------
[Coreli Corporation Mainframe] |

Enech Felbar
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Posted - 2004.12.29 14:36:00 -
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hehehe, I look forward to the rest of this story aswell
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Enech Felbar
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Posted - 2004.12.29 14:36:00 -
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hehehe, I look forward to the rest of this story aswell
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Scorpyn
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Posted - 2004.12.29 14:49:00 -
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We all do.
gimmegimmegimme 
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Scorpyn
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Posted - 2004.12.29 14:49:00 -
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We all do.
gimmegimmegimme 
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Brady
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Posted - 2004.12.29 15:27:00 -
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damnit I just finished reading it. Gimme more, I need another fix.....
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Brady
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Posted - 2004.12.29 15:27:00 -
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damnit I just finished reading it. Gimme more, I need another fix.....
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Erai
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Posted - 2004.12.29 16:01:00 -
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Originally by: Brady damnit I just finished reading it. Gimme more, I need another fix.....
Maaan, for a moment I thought you were talking about finishing reading part 2  Oh well, by now we should know that on this site "once a week" translates to "once every other month or so". No problem with me (it is just, guys, please just spare us specific ETA's about anything and keep to the trademarked "Soon" statement- at least that one is meant to be a joke) ------------------------------------------ My bio
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Erai
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Posted - 2004.12.29 16:01:00 -
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Originally by: Brady damnit I just finished reading it. Gimme more, I need another fix.....
Maaan, for a moment I thought you were talking about finishing reading part 2  Oh well, by now we should know that on this site "once a week" translates to "once every other month or so". No problem with me (it is just, guys, please just spare us specific ETA's about anything and keep to the trademarked "Soon" statement- at least that one is meant to be a joke) ------------------------------------------ My bio
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Cintas
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Posted - 2004.12.29 16:29:00 -
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Quick! Quickly! No... Quicker...!
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Cintas
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Posted - 2004.12.29 16:29:00 -
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Quick! Quickly! No... Quicker...!
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t0rfiFrans
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Posted - 2004.12.29 17:52:00 -
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It's out...
Linkage
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t0rfiFrans
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Posted - 2004.12.29 17:52:00 -
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It's out...
Linkage
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Eliana Delwyn
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Posted - 2004.12.29 17:57:00 -
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Edited by: Eliana Delwyn on 29/12/2004 17:58:24 Edited by: Eliana Delwyn on 29/12/2004 17:58:04 that just links to Ruthless_Chapter1.pdf
Correct link to ruthless chapter 2
Please update the site link t0rfi 
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Eliana Delwyn
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Posted - 2004.12.29 17:57:00 -
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Edited by: Eliana Delwyn on 29/12/2004 17:58:24 Edited by: Eliana Delwyn on 29/12/2004 17:58:04 that just links to Ruthless_Chapter1.pdf
Correct link to ruthless chapter 2
Please update the site link t0rfi 
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Joshua Foiritain
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Posted - 2004.12.29 17:58:00 -
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http://www.eve-online.com/races/ruthless/Ruthless_Chapter_2.pdf ---------------------------
[Coreli Corporation Mainframe] |

Joshua Foiritain
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Posted - 2004.12.29 17:58:00 -
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http://www.eve-online.com/races/ruthless/Ruthless_Chapter_2.pdf ---------------------------
[Coreli Corporation Mainframe] |

t0rfiFrans
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Posted - 2004.12.29 18:00:00 -
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Originally by: Eliana Delwyn Edited by: Eliana Delwyn on 29/12/2004 17:58:24 Edited by: Eliana Delwyn on 29/12/2004 17:58:04 that just links to Ruthless_Chapter1.pdf
Correct link to ruthless chapter 2
Please update the site link t0rfi 
updated...
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t0rfiFrans
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Posted - 2004.12.29 18:00:00 -
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Originally by: Eliana Delwyn Edited by: Eliana Delwyn on 29/12/2004 17:58:24 Edited by: Eliana Delwyn on 29/12/2004 17:58:04 that just links to Ruthless_Chapter1.pdf
Correct link to ruthless chapter 2
Please update the site link t0rfi 
updated...
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Joshua Foiritain
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Posted - 2004.12.29 18:29:00 -
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Rawr Very nice, cant wait for Part 3 omg w00t  ---------------------------
[Coreli Corporation Mainframe] |

Joshua Foiritain
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Posted - 2004.12.29 18:29:00 -
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Rawr Very nice, cant wait for Part 3 omg w00t  ---------------------------
[Coreli Corporation Mainframe] |

Bsport
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Posted - 2004.12.29 18:36:00 -
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brillant story so far, but the more i read the more i want a whole book  --------
|~~~| I run out of money, so bunny has been | OIL | grounded down to make grease for my |____| rifter- poor bunny
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Bsport
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Posted - 2004.12.29 18:36:00 -
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brillant story so far, but the more i read the more i want a whole book  --------
|~~~| I run out of money, so bunny has been | OIL | grounded down to make grease for my |____| rifter- poor bunny
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Cintas
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Posted - 2004.12.29 19:19:00 -
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agreed 
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Cintas
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Posted - 2004.12.29 19:19:00 -
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agreed 
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Sylia Masters
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Posted - 2004.12.29 20:42:00 -
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When asked about missing a relase date..
Dev: "It will be ready when it's done." Writer: "My soul is torn! The agony I feel is as deep as a canyon!"
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Sylia Masters
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Posted - 2004.12.29 20:42:00 -
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When asked about missing a relase date..
Dev: "It will be ready when it's done." Writer: "My soul is torn! The agony I feel is as deep as a canyon!"
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Vampire Blade
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Posted - 2004.12.29 23:17:00 -
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MARA! my old hunting grounds! hoorah!
bump :) ----- ----- -----
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Vampire Blade
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Posted - 2004.12.29 23:17:00 -
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MARA! my old hunting grounds! hoorah!
bump :) ----- ----- -----
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Alberto
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Posted - 2004.12.30 09:32:00 -
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Yes EVE trade paper back books would be very nice. I would buy them!!!!!! ****ing off society one dumba$$ at a time |

Alberto
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Posted - 2004.12.30 09:32:00 -
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Yes EVE trade paper back books would be very nice. I would buy them!!!!!! ****ing off society one dumba$$ at a time |

phaux
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Posted - 2004.12.31 22:08:00 -
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i'd buy them twice Arr!
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phaux
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Posted - 2004.12.31 22:08:00 -
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i'd buy them twice Arr!
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Tyrrax Thorrk
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Posted - 2005.01.04 02:02:00 -
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So, raven prototype ? And talking about the scorpion having been invented prior to the raven ? That doesn't seem to match the backstory.
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Raem Civrie
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Posted - 2005.01.04 02:20:00 -
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Yeah, that bugged the hell out of me. Plus there are some blatant oversights that suggest that the author was rushed.
Quote: The madams who reported to her all had three things in common: Stunning natural beauty, undeniable sensuality, a sharp memory, and origins in repressive poverty.
Yeah...
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Nyphur
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Posted - 2005.01.04 04:29:00 -
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Edited by: Nyphur on 04/01/2005 04:35:23 Well, there are a few gramatical errors, a few confusing parts in the layout of events (though it IS 4:30AM and I'm incredibly sleepy) and such but this is shaping up to be one damn fine story. It's excellent that eve has things like this. I bet no other game goes into this kind of detail on the prime fiction and extensions of the prime fiction. It's one of those things that makes Eve more than just a game.
I do suggest, though, a final proof-read or two by someone other than the writer. Quite often, the writer will overlook simply mistakes like an extra "the" here or a scene that isn't portrayed well in text and thus gives a confusing image in the mind of anyone but thwe writer.
EDIT: Oh, and I think they got the Scorpion and the Raven the wrong way around when they wrote that story, given the description of both ships:
Scorpion: "The first Scorpion-class battleship was launched only a couple of years ago, and those that have been built are considered to be prototypes. Little is known of its capabilities, but what has been garnered suggests that the Scorpion is crammed to the brink with sophisticated hi-tech equipment that few can match." Sounds very much like the Raven from the story.
Raven: "The Raven is the powerhouse of the Caldari Navy. With its myriad launcher slots and powerful shields, few ships can rival it in strength or majesty." This suggests it is in well established use in the Caldari Navy, which the story attributes to the Scorpion.
There's nothing wrong with admitting they've made a mistake and going back and replacing "Raven" with "Scorpion" and the same in reverse, but if they simply leave this, it's going to be damn near impossible to justify, given the prime fiction.
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Istvaan Shogaatsu
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Posted - 2005.01.04 05:14:00 -
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Jesus, let's not turn into trekkies here. A few continuity slip-ups never hurt anyone. Besides, while the Scorpion is described to have been created recently, the Raven doesn't have any such specifics - this doesn't necessarily mean it's older. If I were the Caldari State and I had to make war with the Gallente, I'd first build hilariously tiny, easily manufactured battleships crammed with high-tech EW junk sufficient to shut down a much bigger Gallente BS, and only then, once my fleet was established, would I start cranking out the huge expensive warships.
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Nyphur
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Posted - 2005.01.04 06:13:00 -
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Originally by: Istvaan Shogaatsu Jesus, let's not turn into trekkies here.
Turn into? :D And when will people stop calling me Jesus? Long haired hippy does not automatically mean Jesus :P.
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Tyrrax Thorrk
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Posted - 2005.01.04 08:49:00 -
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Don't think the story takes place recently enough for scorpions to have been in use anyways. Depends on how old the CEO guy is in the current time when scorpions are supposed to be 3-4 years old.
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