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Originally by: Raem Civrie
Originally by: OReilly Edited by: OReilly on 04/02/2005 10:36:58 News Corporation proudly announce the first independent news journal in eve. Settled to be the first global media conglomerate News Corporation is committed to release the first edition of the "Eve Independent Journal" within one week from today.
Also our company launched negotiations for founding [of] the first news television in eve. We seek to accreditate all our journalists to all the areas in eve, in order to cover all the stories.
We ask for public support in this boldly action and we seek for agreements to all the alliances for allowing our journalists to travel free and be able to document their stories.
Further more News Corporation will produce an documentar about the history of all the alliances, therefore we ask for cooperation.
The first number of "Eve Independent Journal" will cover the war in the south, trying to show impartially and in a professional manner the actions that are taking place there.
Also we welcome all the talented journalists with a strong sens of honor to join our great quest. Hoping our company will be in short time number 1 in keeping all the people of eve informed we wish you all a long and prospere life.
Respectfully yours, OReilly - General Manager News Corporation
Blatantly wrong things [non-grammatical] are shown in bold. Typos and grammar errors are shown in italics. Bizarre choices of words are shown in underlined.
First of all, the Independent News Organization [INO - RiP] was the first independent news journal in EVE.
Most of the words shown in italics aren't so bad that they are not at least understandable, but some of it made me cringe nonetheless.
The underlined words... yeah. I realize that english is most likely not your primary language, but if you intend to set up a news organization, for the love of god, use Word and it's lovely spellchecker. I wouldn't care one bit if this was yet another mining corp recruitment post, but as a news organization...
Of all the many pleasures in life, I think I enjoy nitpicking the best.
err.. calm down lol
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