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Siigari Kitawa
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Posted - 2006.01.20 18:37:00 -
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Well, I went home and refined it, and now I'm happy with the result.
This is the first in a new line of comics, inspired by Winterblink's hilarious work. I will be developing my own style and I hope you all like it.
I'll be uploading it soon hopefully to a server, but for now this is going to be hosted from my Photobucket.
And now, please enjoy Volume 01 - The Gate Gremlins
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Quanteeri
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Posted - 2006.01.20 18:44:00 -
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3 thumbs up. Wait, that's not a thumb!
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minnmirman
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Posted - 2006.01.20 18:47:00 -
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good stuff
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Jenny Spitfire
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Posted - 2006.01.20 18:48:00 -
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10/10. Keep it up. 
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Vegeir
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Posted - 2006.01.20 18:48:00 -
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Been there. Good laugh. Isn't there someone who RP's a gate attendant in EVE? I say we blame him for the hold ups.
btw: much improved over original, presentation of the humor was much more evident and easy to follow.
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Kouh Lehl
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Posted - 2006.01.20 18:49:00 -
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Where is the gate camp with smartbombs? Course that will clear the lag as the newbs are cloned back to station.
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Saeris Tal'Urduar
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Posted - 2006.01.20 18:59:00 -
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Ahh much cleaner.
And I still like it.
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Troye
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:01:00 -
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Nice work Siigari.
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Tarri
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:03:00 -
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Nice one 
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Kurren
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:06:00 -
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It's the exact same comic, it's just been worded differently... honestly, I still didn't find it all that funny...  sorry?
Maybe if you showed the ship running into the jump gate, then the jump gate and the ship blowing up, then a pod or something floating in space, then the loading window, then all the damn ships on the other side of the gate? The pods are back in their ships, too... same dialogue with a few more "AHHH!!"s... maybe... just a suggestion.
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Nyphur
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:16:00 -
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I still don't get it. It's exactly the same as before - the changes are minor and cosmetic.
Try to make the humour in these comics universal to the readers. Something everyone in eve understands. I haven't a clue what's going on there. I thought I got it up until the last panel - I thought it was a joke about how when you lag the autopilot says "jumping" repeatedly but nothing happens. Then the last panel hits me and I haven't a clue what's going on. Instead of a punchline, I'm greeted with confusion.
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Siigari Kitawa
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:18:00 -
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Volume 2 - Better Than Glue
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TFer Atvar
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:21:00 -
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Haha. That's better than the first one.
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Wrangler
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:25:00 -
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First one: I get it now, but I didn't think it was that funny, a lot of others seems to think so, so great job! 
Second one: Laughed immediately!! Great one!
Making it a sticky over the weekend so everyone can see it, you might want to edit the top post to link to your second one as well.
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Benilopax
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:25:00 -
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Edited by: Benilopax on 20/01/2006 19:25:22
Now volume 2 I like!
Im enjoying the improvement hope they keep getting better.
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Arcsine
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:27:00 -
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First Comic: So the joke is that the stargate operator was queing up the ships, then expells them all at once? Maybe it was the change in panel color that was throwing me off? Blue/red background made me think they were in different systems?
Second Comic: To the point and funny - easy for anyone to understand.
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Nyphur
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:30:00 -
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Originally by: Siigari Kitawa
Volume 2 - Better Than Glue
Ok now THAT is funny. Nice, simple humour. *thumbs up*
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Jenny Spitfire
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:33:00 -
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OK, I am ... 
First joke, I get it. Second one, I dont. What is the second one about? I think I do not know the ships there to understand the joke.
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Micia
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:38:00 -
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I didn't get the first one at all. (drawn rather well, though)
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Cerwyn Taraman
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:38:00 -
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The second ship is getting high off the "exhaust" from the first ship Jenny.
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Jenny Spitfire
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:39:00 -
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Originally by: Cerwyn Taraman
The second ship is getting high off the "exhaust" from the first ship Jenny.
CT
Oh...
I didnt know that we could really get high by that. 
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Kylania
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:43:00 -
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hehe, loved them both. I think your reworking of the first comic was much better than the orginal, especially those extra two half frames, think we've all been there!
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Winterblink
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:45:00 -
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Second one's much better than the first, but that's just my worthless opinion. :)
Only thing I can suggest is not trying to crank out too much too fast. Or, try to and find out why I suggest you don't. :)
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Siigari Kitawa
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:48:00 -
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Added Volume 03 - Clinical Depressions
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Nyphur
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:54:00 -
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Originally by: Siigari Kitawa
Added Volume 03 - Clinical Depressions
Not funny. It's another case of ambiguity. I don't know what joke you're trying to imply here and as a result, I don't get it.
Take winterblink's advice and don't make too many too fast. Humour is not a mechanical process. Perhaps one out of every fifty ideas you have will be genuinely top grade funny stuff and those are what you want to make comics of. I'll take quality over quantity any day.
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Siigari Kitawa
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:55:00 -
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Originally by: Nyphur
Originally by: Siigari Kitawa
Added Volume 03 - Clinical Depressions
Not funny. It's another case of ambiguity. I don't know what joke you're trying to imply here and as a result, I don't get it.
Take winterblink's advice and don't make too many too fast. Humour is not a mechanical process. Perhaps one out of every fifty ideas you have will be genuinely top grade funny stuff and those are what you want to make comics of. I'll take quality over quantity any day.
No these are the lot I already had sketched out. I'll release the rest later on though.
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Winterblink
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Posted - 2006.01.20 19:57:00 -
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Originally by: Nyphur
Humour is not a mechanical process. Perhaps one out of every fifty ideas you have will be genuinely top grade funny stuff and those are what you want to make comics of.
This is very true. I have an idea file a mile long, but I'm ridiculously picky over which ones I actually start to develop. Takes a lot of time for some to make it out the door.
Of course some days I'll just have too much coffee and spit out things like the Dippy Frig one. But overall, what you state is pretty accurate.
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Winterblink
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Posted - 2006.01.20 20:06:00 -
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Siig, anyway, I won't steal any fire from ya, this is your sticky. Have fun, and convo me ingame if you have any more questions
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nahtoh
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Posted - 2006.01.20 20:09:00 -
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Liked number 2 but 1 and 3 leave me cold...
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Posted - 2006.01.20 20:16:00 -
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Originally by: Nyphur
Originally by: Siigari Kitawa
Added Volume 03 - Clinical Depressions
Not funny. It's another case of ambiguity. I don't know what joke you're trying to imply here and as a result, I don't get it.
Take winterblink's advice and don't make too many too fast. Humour is not a mechanical process. Perhaps one out of every fifty ideas you have will be genuinely top grade funny stuff and those are what you want to make comics of. I'll take quality over quantity any day.
OMG plez stop analysing the jokes, u realy take the funnynes outa them. You either get them or ya dont....
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