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James Lyrus
Lyrus Associates Interstellar Starbase Syndicate
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:22:00 -
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Let me share with you all a secret. If you write something on the internet, that you're hoping a lot of people will read and respond to it, then it's far more likely to be so, if it's well written.
It might seem like a drag, but your English teachers were right. Punctuate, form sentences and paragraphs, and your writing is much more readable.
And it's more readable, then people are more likely to read it.
I've run into a number of situations where I've seen a block of 100 lines of text, with barely a full stop (period for those in the US) between them.
I appreciate that there are those who don't have English as their first language, and those that suffer dyslexia. The sad fact is, the worst examples of English I've run into are those who do not have these problems, and it's technically their first and only language.
So here's a few thoughts on how to make your post read:
Paragraphs. Double lines between them. A paragraph is for outlining a 'thought' or 'concept'. Keep one of these in each paragraph, and people will read it.
Punctuate. Commas and full stops (periods) are essential parts of sentence flow. They allow you to put the string of consciousness into blocks that are possible to interpret easily. Oh, and put capital letters where they're needed, and not where they're not.
L33t/txt. Just don't. There's a very, very few situations where l33t or txt spk are acceptable. Mostly in an environment where you're limited in your character count (e.g. a text message). And even then, if you're using txt spk to send me 20 character message, I'm going to be annoyed. (The limit on SMS messaging is, if I recall correctly, 160 characters). Otherwise, there's really, truly and honestly very little 'speed difference' between 'txt' and proper typing. Especially when what you're trying to do is have a conversation or interaction with someone, when your 'txt' slows down their reading.
I'm also a lot more tolerant about 'abbreviated' English in a time critical medium, e.g. gang chat, where you might not have a lot of time to write. But on a forum, there's really no excuse for not taking a _little_ bit longer to write something that the other 100 people you're hoping will read it don't have to struggle through.
Spelling. It helps a lot if you spell stuff right. Mostly people don't tend to mind, although the prevalence of rouge drones and turrents is a little frustrating. Spell checkers really are a wonderful thing.
It's really not hard to write coherent and legibly. If you suffer dyslexia, I appreciate it's a bit harder. (For those that _are_ actually dyslexic, and not just plain lazy). If English is not your first language, then I'm a whole lot more tolerant (although most non-English people I run into on forums have a standard well above the average).
The thing is, what you're doing when posting on a forum is asking people to read what you've written. If you 'can't be bothered' to do a proper job, and you're just one person, why should they 'be bothered' to read it, and maybe consider, respond and comment? I wouldn't be too suprised to find that the probability of getting flamed increased dramatically on posts that were badly written. If you want someone to do you the favour of reading your posts, then it's only polite to make it as easy as possible to do so.
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spurious signal
Caldari Brainiacs
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:27:00 -
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Far, far, FAR too many commas.
If you're going to criticise other people's punctuation then you really should get it right yourself.
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Sulavan
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:31:00 -
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English isn't the first language for everyone that posts here. Have some tolerance.
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Jaketh Ivanes
Amarr 1st Praetorian Guard
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:40:00 -
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Originally by: Sulavan English isn't the first language for everyone that posts here. Have some tolerance.
You should atleast read the post before replying.
I think it's a great post, though english is not my native tongue.
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Alexi Borizkova
Caldari New Age Solutions
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:45:00 -
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I saw a variety of grammatical errors in the OP( for instance, "And" may not begin a sentence), which detracts from the "message".
If you're going to cast stones, at least open your window first.
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James Lyrus
Lyrus Associates Interstellar Starbase Syndicate
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:45:00 -
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Originally by: Sulavan English isn't the first language for everyone that posts here. Have some tolerance.
I tend to find it's a subtley different case. For those who don't have English as a first language, you generally see an odd syntax in the wording, but mostly they're aware of how things like sentences and paragraphs are supposed to work.
It is to my continual shame that the English Speaking World is so poor at learning other languages, and can't even get our own right. It's been a number of times I've been elsewhere in Europe and been somewhat ashamed that my French or German (being the two that I have _some_ experience with) is so much worse than their English abilities.
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Jim McGregor
Caldari
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:46:00 -
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I dont think people write like they do because of ignorance. They just dont care if the post is difficult to read.
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James Lyrus
Lyrus Associates Interstellar Starbase Syndicate
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:48:00 -
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Originally by: Alexi Borizkova I saw a variety of grammatical errors in the OP( for instance, "And" may not begin a sentence), which detracts from the "message".
If you're going to cast stones, at least open your window first.
Actually, you can start a sentence with a conjunction, although it's generally considered bad form.
As for throwing stones, well, yes. I won't claim perfection, but I'm glad that you did read it. Can I ask if you would have done so, had it all been a single block of 'txt'?
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Ithildin
Gallente The Corporation
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:49:00 -
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Don't do a new paragraph if your next paragraph will continue the previous one's line of argument, and also remeber that you shouldn't begin new sentences with "and" - especially not when it's a new paragraph. Dark skies torn apart Heavens open before me I, the light of death |

James Lyrus
Lyrus Associates Interstellar Starbase Syndicate
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:49:00 -
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Originally by: Jim McGregor
I dont think people write like they do because of ignorance. They just dont care if the post is difficult to read.
Sadly, I think you're right. I've seen quite a few instances where someone's posted a barely coherent opening post, and then bumped it a few hours later with 'anyone gonna respond?'.
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News
Minmatar Slacker Industries Exuro Mortis
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:50:00 -
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While I appreciate your effort to get people to write decently in their posts, I wouldn't bother if I were you. I have given up on expecting proper spelling and grammer on the internet a long time ago. It's just no use.
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Jaketh Ivanes
Amarr 1st Praetorian Guard
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:50:00 -
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Edited by: Jaketh Ivanes on 11/08/2006 08:50:46
Originally by: Jim McGregor
I dont think people write like they do because of ignorance. They just dont care if the post is difficult to read.
True, and really sad. Because that must mean, they don't really care what they are saying..
EDIT: Yeah, that isn't really wrong, it should be an "if". Otherwise the sentence doesn't make sense 
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ArtemisEntreri
Turbulent
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:50:00 -
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I just had to do this.
Originally by: James Lyrus Let me share with you all a secret. If you write something on the internet, that you're hoping a lot of people will read and respond to it, then it's far more likely to be so, if it's well written.
It might seem like a drag, but your English teachers were right. Punctuate, form sentences and paragraphs, and your writing is much more readable.
And if it's more readable, then people are more likely to read it.
I've run into a number of situations where I've seen a block of 100 lines of text, with barely a full stop (period for those in the US) between them.
I appreciate that there are those who don't have English as their first language, and those that suffer dyslexia. The sad fact is, the worst examples of English I've run into are those who do not have these problems, and it's technically their first and only language.
So here's a few thoughts on how to make your post read:
Paragraphs. Double lines between them. A paragraph is for outlining a 'thought' or 'concept'. Keep one of these in each paragraph, and people will read it.
Punctuate. Commas and full stops (periods) are essential parts of sentence flow. They allow you to put the string of consciousness into blocks that are possible to interpret easily. Oh, and put capital letters where they're needed, and not where they're not.
L33t/txt. Just don't. There's a(should be There are) very, very few situations where l33t or txt spk are acceptable. Mostly in an environment where you're limited in your character count (e.g. a text message). And even then, if you're using txt spk to send me 20 character message, I'm going to be annoyed. (The limit on SMS messaging is, if I recall correctly, 160 characters). Otherwise, there's really, truly and honestly very little 'speed difference' between 'txt' and proper typing. Especially when what you're trying to do is have a conversation or interaction with someone, when your 'txt' slows down their reading.
I'm also a lot more tolerant about 'abbreviated' English in a time critical medium, e.g. gang chat, where you might not have a lot of time to write. But on a forum, there's really no excuse for not taking a _little_ bit longer to write something that the other 100 people you're hoping will read it ]don't have to struggle through.
Spelling. It helps a lot if you spell stuff right. Mostly people don't tend to mind, although the prevalence of rouge drones and turrents is a little frustrating. Spell checkers really are a wonderful thing.
It's really not hard to write coherent and legibly. If you suffer dyslexia, I appreciate it's a bit harder. (For those that _are_ actually dyslexic, and not just plain lazy). If English is not your first language, then I'm a whole lot more tolerant (although most non-English people I run into on forums have a standard well above the average).
The thing is, what you're doing when posting on a forum is asking people to read what you've written. If you 'can't be bothered' to do a proper job, and you're just one person, why should they 'be bothered' to read it, and maybe consider, respond and comment? I wouldn't be too suprised to find that the probability of getting flamed increased dramatically on posts that were badly written. If you want someone to do you the favour of reading your posts, then it's only polite to make it as easy as possible to do so.
If I didn't find something please feel free to add.
P.S. English is my 3rd language
Originally by: Vadoc Trax The only actual players are BoB, everyone else are their alts, and alts of alts.
CCP is also BoB.
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Arron S
Gallente Rampage Eternal
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:55:00 -
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pffffft Coherency
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James Lyrus
Lyrus Associates Interstellar Starbase Syndicate
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:56:00 -
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Originally by: ArtemisEntreri I just had to do this.
Originally by: James Lyrus
*some text*
If I didn't find something please feel free to add.
P.S. English is my 3rd language

Hey, at least I tried.
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Alex Tremayne
Lyrus Associates Interstellar Starbase Syndicate
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:57:00 -
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Originally by: ArtemisEntreri I just had to do this. P.S. English is my 3rd language
In my experience, people who learn English as a second or third language generally write in a more correct manner than those of us who have English as a first language.
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Sulavan
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Posted - 2006.08.11 08:58:00 -
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Originally by: Jim McGregor
I dont think people write like they do because of ignorance. They just dont care if the post is difficult to read.
that may account for some (even many) however the list of actual reasons for poor posting structure are many and varied
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Angry Sheep
Amarr Aur0ra
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Posted - 2006.08.11 09:02:00 -
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I actually enjoyed reading this post.
So the user fell foul of some minor rules and gets 80% compared to the majority of threads grammer score of say 50%. (including mine by the way)
But now compare this thread discussion with other MMORPG forumns - thats another reason I like Eve.
It's a Dog eat Dog World out there and I'm wearing Milky Bone underwear
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ArtemisEntreri
Turbulent
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Posted - 2006.08.11 09:21:00 -
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Originally by: James Lyrus
Originally by: ArtemisEntreri I just had to do this.
Originally by: James Lyrus
*some text*
If I didn't find something please feel free to add.
P.S. English is my 3rd language

Hey, at least I tried.
I didn't mean to demean your point, just make fun of your post. People need to make sensible posts rather than endless paragraph-less and unreadable posts and of course: THINK BEFORE YOU POST.
Originally by: Vadoc Trax The only actual players are BoB, everyone else are their alts, and alts of alts.
CCP is also BoB.
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Kalaan Oratay
The Imperial Commonwealth
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Posted - 2006.08.11 09:33:00 -
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Mine english is well good, and I dont not need no advise on how to tipe properaly thanks
--- Originally by: Archilies Ignore what others say: Fit what you want, with what you have, whenever you want.
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Makaylah
Caldari Infinite Technologies
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Posted - 2006.08.11 09:34:00 -
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On a similar note; I have more problems understanding Brittish people on TS/vent than people who's native language isn't English...
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Kella Mal
Royal Knights of Khanid
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Posted - 2006.08.11 09:55:00 -
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Edited by: Kella Mal on 11/08/2006 10:02:53 Edited by: Kella Mal on 11/08/2006 09:55:51
Originally by: spurious signal Far, far, FAR too many commas.
If you're going to criticise other people's punctuation then you really should get it right yourself.
http://www.james.lyrus.justgotowned.com/
Oh yeah, and the person above me. Why don't you sod off back to Russia or whatever you came from? Not all British people are ******* Welsh you know. ----------------------------------------- www.kellas.sig.justgotowned.com |

spurious signal
Caldari Brainiacs
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Posted - 2006.08.11 10:02:00 -
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Originally by: News While I appreciate your effort to get people to write decently in their posts, I wouldn't bother if I were you. I have given up on expecting proper spelling and grammer on the internet a long time ago. It's just no use.
<Off Topic> That's a great sig  </Off Topic>
Um, what were we talking about again? Oh yeah, I remember! Trying to police language, spelling, grammar, punctuation on inernet forums is like ****ing into the wind tbh.
I used to get wound up by it and attempt to correct people (loose! Lose! There! Their! Grrr!!) but I came to realise that it was not only pointless but also dangerous and liable to give me a cardiac arrest.
Fact is that some people simply don't care and never will. It's their loss at the end of the day - did you know that the top reason for instantly rejecting job applications is bad spelling on CVs?
And of course the other thing to bear in mind is that language evolves. What some people today consider gross abuse of language will, in 50 years time, be routinely accepted as correct. Ever tried reading something from 200 years ago? The language is very different. And language now is evolving at a faster rate than ever before.
So don't sweat it dude, s'all good in the grand scheme of things 
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Ignasi
The Merch
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Posted - 2006.08.11 10:31:00 -
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Originally by: ArtemisEntreri I just had to do this.
Originally by: James Lyrus Let me share with you all a secret. If you write something on the internet, (unnecessary comma) that you're hoping a lot of people will read and respond to it, then it's far more likely to be so(I don't like this word here, perhaps 'read' instead?),(unnecessary comma) if it's well written.
It might seem like a drag, but your English teachers were right. Punctuate, form sentences and paragraphs, and your writing is much more readable.
And if it's more readable, then people are more likely to read it.
I've run into a number of situations where I've seen a block of 100 lines of text,(unnecessary comma) with barely a full stop (period for those in the US) between them.
I appreciate that there are those who don't have English as their first language,(unnecessary comma) and those that suffer dyslexia. The sad fact is,(unnecessary comma) that the worst examples of English I've run into are those who do not have these problems,(unnecessary comma) and it's technically their first and only language.
So here's a few thoughts on how to make your post read:
Paragraphs. Double lines between them. A paragraph is for outlining a 'thought' or 'concept'. Keep one of these in each paragraph, and people will read it.
Punctuate. Commas and full stops (periods) are essential parts of sentence flow. They allow you to put the string of consciousness into blocks that are possible to interpret easily. Oh, and put capital letters where they're needed, and not where they're not.
L33t/txt. Just don't. There's a(should be There are) very, very few situations where l33t or txt spk are acceptable. Mostly in an environment where you're limited in your character count (e.g. a text message). And even then, if you're using txt spk to send me 20 character message, I'm going to be annoyed. (The limit on SMS messaging is, if I recall correctly, 160 characters). Otherwise,(unnecessary comma) there's really, truly and honestly very little 'speed difference' between 'txt' and proper typing. Especially when what you're trying to do is have a conversation or interaction with someone,(unnecessary comma) and your 'txt' slows down their reading.
I'm also a lot more tolerant about 'abbreviated' English in a time critical medium, e.g. gang chat, where you might not have a lot of time to write. But on a forum, there's really no excuse for not taking a _little_ bit longer to write something that the other 100 people you're hoping will read it ]don't have to struggle through.
Spelling. It helps a lot if you spell stuff right. Mostly people don't tend to mind, although the prevalence of rouge drones and turrents is a little frustrating. Spell checkers really are a wonderful thing.
<perfect paragraph, cutting to save space>
The thing is, what you're doing when posting on a forum is asking people to read what you've written. If you 'can't be bothered' to do a proper job, and you're just one person, why should they 'be bothered' to read it, and maybe consider, respond and comment?(run on sentence) I wouldn't be too suprised to find that the probability of getting flamed increased dramatically on posts that were badly written. If you want someone to do you the favour of reading your posts, then it's only polite to make it as easy as possible to do so.
If I didn't find something please feel free to add.
P.S. English is my 3rd language
There, I added in a few little details. Overall a great post though-I truly hope that every single player in EVE reads this and takes it to heart. Please don't take my editing negatively-I just love editing. ------------------------------------------------ I buy/sell any and all faction ships. Drop me a line if interested in doing business! |

Rayvonuk
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Posted - 2006.08.11 10:42:00 -
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As well as the errors mentioned above there is also too many commas and too many paragraphs, and sentences should not begin with And. If you are going to be pompus enough to do a post like this at least do it right. Most normal people dont care as long as the "bad writer" is trying his best to make us understand them.
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Jon Hawkes
ISS Navy Task Force Interstellar Starbase Syndicate
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Posted - 2006.08.11 10:49:00 -
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James, you need to get this book if you haven't done so already - it's a superbly entertaining read!
I agree fully with your points; if there are any posts or replies with no capitalisation, paragraphs or punctuation, I won't even bother to read it, regardless of how useful it may prove to be.
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Rangkai
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Posted - 2006.08.11 10:50:00 -
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Stop nitpicking the original post.
I think that a few mistakes here and there are totally acceptable.
It drives me crazy when I am trying to read something someone has written and I have to keep reading it to figure out what they are trying to say, or it makes my brain feel like it is going over a bumpy road.
People seeking jobs at my business even write me emails so badly, I don't even send them a response. Maybe they are an intelligent person with all the right qualifications, but if you spell so badly or use txt/leet speak when you should be trying to be as professional as possible. Then you are not going to get very far anywhere.
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Leandro Salazar
Aeon Industries
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Posted - 2006.08.11 11:06:00 -
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Originally by: Rayvonuk Most normal people dont care as long as the "bad writer" is trying his best to make us understand them.
But that is exactly the point of the OP, and one I wholeheartedly agree with. Most of the 'bad writers' do NOT try their best, and it's usually glaringly obvious. And then they wonder why they get flamed. It is not because of the bad spelling/grammar itself, but because with it the poster shows a total disregard for the people who are supposed to read the post.
I actually find it very fitting that the OP has a bunch of minor mistakes in an otherwise well written and very readable post. That is how it should be. No one demands 100% correctness. But some basic rules that people supposedly learn in their first four years of school should at least be adhered. That cannot be too much to expect, can it? But sadly it apparently is, according to the number of paragraph-less posts about turrents with neither punctuation nor capital letters. :( --------- ZOMG my sig was concordokkened! Link removed due to bad language on remote site. -wystler
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Miss Overlord
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Posted - 2006.08.11 11:10:00 -
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If it can be understood
And well read and by a majority in the language youre using
Then its reasonable but paragraphing, is probably the main element u need to include
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Disco Flint
Caldari
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Posted - 2006.08.11 11:10:00 -
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Edited by: Disco Flint on 11/08/2006 11:11:14
Originally by: Rayvonuk As well as the errors mentioned above there is also too many commas and too many paragraphs, and sentences should not begin with And. If you are going to be pompus enough to do a post like this at least do it right. Most normal people dont care as long as the "bad writer" is trying his best to make us understand them.
That's the problem, isn't it? Most of the time the writer does NOT try his best to make the others understand him.
I don't care if someone misses a comma, makes a spelling mistake or phrases something gramatically wrong. English isn't my native language so it happens to me a lot, too. Hell, it even happens to me in german, which is my native language.
But then come the ... let's call them idiots. There are useless abbreviations (you're -> u r) which wouldn't even be acceptable if you were typing while being shot at, stupid mistakes which would be easily avoidable if you cared and at least proofread once (you're -> your) and 'planned' mistakes to make your post look that much cooler (liek, I wuz totally shot atz whilz writing tihz!)
Of course, form and layout is also important. Anyone who's gotten past 7th grade should know about the basic principles, e.g. keep your sentences as short and clear as possible, use paragraphs to indicate a new point and so on. A post containing just a single paragraph may be totally correct, have several valid points or point out critical mistakes, but if it tires the eyes after two or three sentences then noone will bother reading it.
Anyway, teaching leet-haxor-kids on the net how to type... that's something I gave up long ago. It still annoys me when I see a post that could have only emerged by throwing a keyboard into a random zoo, but meh... for every one you convert there's two growing back.
Edit: That's what you get for proofreading, someone posts the very same thing just a minute ahead of you. No 'first' for me :(
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