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Ruby Darling
Federal Navy Academy
Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.28 22:49:00 -
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@Andre II
if you move your head position more to right, I think it will give a better composition. Right now it feels a bit hard to focus on where I should look into your shot. I like the smile. :) 7/10 |
Vagilicious
Center for Advanced Studies
Gallente Federation
29
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Posted - 2012.07.29 09:31:00 -
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Sarah Atkinson wrote:Vagilicious, bit of a wild one here. I keep looking at your avatar and can't make up my mind what I don't like about her; but if I had to guess, I'd say she appears a little overwhelming and nothing seems to match. The red dreads work fine and blend well with her attire, but her make-up seems off and the tattoo is out of place.
As a rule; opposite colours work well. Check out a colour wheel and see if you can improve her make-up a little. I'd also consider removing the tattoo.. but other than that, she has a believable face and both the pose and lighting seem fine too. I want to give you more, but as it stands I think a 6.5/10 is fair.
Thanks for the feedback. I was never happy with the tattoo to be honest, I think it was more a case of getting over excited when the bodymods were introduced, lol. Removed and tweaked the makeup slightly. Let's see if this improves my score 
@Ruby Darling - I'm not sure why, but I do like your avatar. Kinda reminds me of Joanna Lumley. Could use a bit of tweaking in the lighting, but overall pretty good. 8.5/10 |
Tuireann Naari
Emrys Enterprises
33
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Posted - 2012.07.29 09:33:00 -
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Redhead with dreadlock-like hair?
Is confused.
5/10 |
Shalua Rui
FEROX AQUILA
1
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Posted - 2012.07.29 09:58:00 -
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6/10
Pretty generic but handsome... the cemented hair is a bit too much.^^ |
terzslave
Vendetta Rising
22
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Posted - 2012.07.29 10:04:00 -
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pretty........looks like emma stone. 10/10 |
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
473
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Posted - 2012.07.29 10:15:00 -
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Methinks that yer clone hath expired, sir...
I guess that you're loking to be a mean undead capsuleer, and that works admirably. The eyes, the skin tone, the scar, all makes look like soemoen who spat on the face of death and came back to torment his peers. Only so-so it's the hair, really CCP should fix that hairstyle as it looks like a cheap hairpiece. Will say 8/10 because although ti's not bad, it also isn't excellent.
(BTW, anyone who rates me next, please point wether you see me with black hair or red hair, dunno wether the new portrait has gone live)
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Shalua Rui
FEROX AQUILA
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Posted - 2012.07.29 10:18:00 -
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terzslave wrote:pretty........looks like emma stone. 10/10
Hey, that's right! I did aim for an asian Jessica Biel though, but thanks.^^ |
Adalynne Rohks
Tax Evasion Anonymous
109
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Posted - 2012.07.29 10:22:00 -
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@ Ishtanchuk
Lookin alot better now. The angle hides the eye and mouth flaws alot better, and the skin tone looks right in that light. Main knock on this one is that the black top combined with that background makes your head look disembodied. It's a nice head, floating there, but hard to see the shoulders. 8+/10 |
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
473
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Posted - 2012.07.29 10:28:00 -
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Adalynne Rohks wrote:@ Ishtanchuk
Lookin alot better now. The angle hides the eye and mouth flaws alot better, and the skin tone looks right in that light. Main knock on this one is that the black top combined with that background makes your head look disembodied. It's a nice head, floating there, but hard to see the shoulders. 8+/10
Gee, I picked the wrong final picture... *facepalm*
Anyway, on you: I almost like what you did with expression but the image is too dark to judge wether it's a hit or a miss (opening the mouth it's one of the toughest things to do, along with moving the inner eyebrows). Will give you a 7/10 until you can be seen in proper light. 
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Seriously, Team Avatar? |
terzslave
Vendetta Rising
22
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Posted - 2012.07.29 10:30:00 -
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edit :@Adalaynne Rohks, sorry Ishtanchuk I'm not skipping you or anything, you just posted yours in before I did.
Preferred your last portrait more because I don't like the facial expression, and oh yes I know what your old portrait looks like..........I've been watching you -_-
7/10 but 9/10 for the one you used to have :) |
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Americe Zane
Dovahkiin.
Rebel Alliance of New Eden
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Posted - 2012.07.29 11:38:00 -
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terzslave wrote:edit :@Adalaynne Rohks, sorry Ishtanchuk I'm not skipping you or anything, you just posted yours in before I did.
Preferred your last portrait more because I don't like the facial expression, and oh yes I know what your old portrait looks like..........I've been watching you -_-
7/10 but 9/10 for the one you used to have :)
8/10
Looks like an experienced ship captain that has seen many battles. -2 simply because I don't like the eyes (they kind of creep me out  ), but they fit you avatar. |
Bunnie Hop
Sebiestor Tribe
Minmatar Republic
320
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Posted - 2012.07.29 11:49:00 -
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Americe Zane wrote:terzslave wrote:edit :@Adalaynne Rohks, sorry Ishtanchuk I'm not skipping you or anything, you just posted yours in before I did.
Preferred your last portrait more because I don't like the facial expression, and oh yes I know what your old portrait looks like..........I've been watching you -_-
7/10 but 9/10 for the one you used to have :) 8/10 Looks like an experienced ship captain that has seen many battles. -2 simply because I don't like the eyes (they kind of creep me out ), but they fit you avatar.
I like Americe's appearance, if I were going into a fight I would want someone who looks like you with me. Aside from that the color of the tat really accents the eye colour very well. Its not my style but its cool so 10 at you  |
Rakael Kateloda
State War Academy
Caldari State
32
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Posted - 2012.07.29 12:00:00 -
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Bunnie Hop wrote:I like Americe's appearance, if I were going into a fight I would want someone who looks like you with me. Aside from that the color of the tat really accents the eye colour very well. Its not my style but its cool so 10 at you
A good looking American blond cheerleader ready to go to her regular practice. |
Vagilicious
Center for Advanced Studies
Gallente Federation
29
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Posted - 2012.07.29 12:53:00 -
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A good, solid avatar. Well designed, looks like she means business! Nice use of colour and lighting, the lips look very good in particular. I can't really find anything wrong with it! Good job! 10/10 |
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
473
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Posted - 2012.07.29 13:07:00 -
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Hom... looks like she's cosplaying a undead doll... like the lips but the effect is lost with the scars, they really don't suit. Also the nose is a bit out of proportion, but that ain't easy to fix. Make up is fine, although I would try and dare to use a blue eyeshadow to match the eyes and oppose the ahir and blckground. Kind of unbalanced avatar, will give 7.5/10.
BTW: 300 pages! 
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Rakael Kateloda
State War Academy
Caldari State
32
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Posted - 2012.07.29 17:52:00 -
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Ishtanchuk Fazmarai wrote:
Been in a fight dear? You have some smudges on your face. Otherwise cute enough. |
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
473
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Posted - 2012.07.29 18:11:00 -
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Rakael Kateloda wrote:Ishtanchuk Fazmarai wrote: Been in a fight dear? You have some smudges on your face. Otherwise cute enough.
It's called henna. It's something the civilized Khanid use to create temporary tattoos as a way to improve make-up.
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Rakael Kateloda
State War Academy
Caldari State
32
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Posted - 2012.07.29 18:31:00 -
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Ishtanchuk Fazmarai wrote:[quote=Rakael Kateloda][quote=Ishtanchuk Fazmarai]
It's called henna. It's something the civilized Khanid use to create temporary tattoos as a way to improve make-up.
Fair enough. Pity the small img size doesn't show it well though, it does look like two smudges.
Ok based on previous feedback, I've worked on my AV. Anyone care to rate?
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Adalynne Rohks
Tax Evasion Anonymous
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Posted - 2012.07.29 18:39:00 -
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I think it's tons better than before. The lighting makes your skin look alot more natural, and you don't have that wierd lip thing going on any more either. The thing I'd consider tweaking is your eye/mouth expression. Maybe change something just slightly enough to give you more expression. Right now the face is kindof a blank stare. 8+/10
Also, this is the avatar I was forced to save about 10 seconds before maintenance, so we'll see how this one goes :-)
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Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
474
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Posted - 2012.07.29 18:45:00 -
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Rakael Kateloda wrote:Ishtanchuk Fazmarai wrote:[quote=Rakael Kateloda][quote=Ishtanchuk Fazmarai]
It's called henna. It's something the civilized Khanid use to create temporary tattoos as a way to improve make-up. Fair enough. Pity the small img size doesn't show it well though, it does look like two smudges. Ok based on previous feedback, I've worked on my AV. Anyone care to rate?
Dunno what feedback you got, but, here I go... make up is overdone, blush is too strong and eyeshadow too dark. They make you look unnecessarily rough, although your traits already are strong. Pose is kind of meaningless and backgorund just fits. Will say 7/10 as the make up needs a lot of smothness and softer colors.
BTW, I usually rate from the 512x512 version, as the small forum avatar is almost useless. The easier way to get the 512 px view is right clicking on picture to open character info in another tab, then use the magnifying glass on the portrait.
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Valerie Tessel
Center for Advanced Studies
Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2012.07.29 20:01:00 -
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[Ishtanchuk Fazmarai] Definitely and improvement over many of your recent forays. More formality seems to fit better with that avatar. 7.5/10
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Ami La'belle
University of Caille
Gallente Federation
1
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Posted - 2012.07.29 20:22:00 -
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Valerie Tessel wrote:[Ishtanchuk Fazmarai] Definitely and improvement over many of your recent forays. More formality seems to fit better with that avatar. 7.5/10
Elegant and pretty!
Love the eyes, nice use of makeup. There's something missing though... I can't put my finger on it though =/.
Maybe a more natural lipstick, not purple-y colour? Hmm.
8.9/10
:) |
Baikur
Federal Navy Academy
Gallente Federation
0
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Posted - 2012.07.29 20:26:00 -
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8/10 Best forced smile ever |
Bibosikus
Caldari Deep Space Ventures
Intrepid Crossing
133
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Posted - 2012.07.29 20:52:00 -
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You have my wife's hair and my daughter's beard.
The box said "Requires Windows-á2000 or better", so I installed Linux. |
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
475
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Posted - 2012.07.29 21:50:00 -
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Hum... looks a bit better than randomized but it-í' easily fogettable and dull. Not a lot of work and not a lot of score, say 6/10, -1 for failing to rate the avatar above it's 5/10.
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Seriously, Team Avatar? |
Caroline Grace
Almost Approved
29
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Posted - 2012.07.29 23:56:00 -
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@Ishtanchuk
Decent, 8/10. |
Lilianna Star
State War Academy
Caldari State
2
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Posted - 2012.07.30 01:48:00 -
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@Caroline
8/10. Really cute and good lighting. |
Michelle P1H9A8N1
Intergalactic Better Business Corporation
17
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Posted - 2012.07.30 02:36:00 -
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8/10 Dont like the freckles...sorry |
Katsumi Kaminari
19
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Posted - 2012.07.30 03:22:00 -
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The lighting makes the background look strange. Try making it darker or changing the angle of the light source for a more realistic photo. 7/10
In blossom today, then scattered:
Life is so like a delicate flower.
How can one expect the fragrance
To last forever?
- Vice Admiral Ohnishi, Kamikaze Special Attack Force |
Ivy Romanova
All Your Machariel Belong to Ham
Industrial Technonauts
53
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Posted - 2012.07.30 03:32:00 -
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Katsumi Kaminari wrote:The lighting makes the background look strange. Try making it darker or changing the angle of the light source for a more realistic photo. 7/10
don't get why would you pierce
lighting is fine , angle is fine
but the background clashes with your character's skin tone , making her look sun burned and .... unappealing
and you don't need to sexualise her by letting her buoyancy tanks fly in the wind
cover it up
6/10 |
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