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Reiisha
Splint Eye Probabilities Inc.
Dawn of Transcendence
138
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Posted - 2012.07.27 09:45:00 -
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Rakael Kateloda wrote:I have this constant urge to take a cloth and wipe the smudge from your face. Otherwise decent av I guess.
Don't really like the 'stare somewhere else' thing a lot of people have going on, but otherwise it's a decent avatar. I think the mouth could have used some adjusting, somehow it looks "off", though.
7/10 |
Jax Bederen
Republic Military School
Minmatar Republic
118
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Posted - 2012.07.27 09:55:00 -
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It's well done Reiisha, the face looks natural, but somehow low poly, it's likely the lighting and lack of natural shadows, you sort of went supernova on the lights. 9.0 |
Akirei Scytale
Test Alliance Please Ignore
2190
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Posted - 2012.07.27 09:58:00 -
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Jax Bederen wrote:It's well done Reiisha, the face looks natural, but somehow low poly, it's likely the lighting and lack of natural shadows, you sort of went supernova on the lights. 9.0
I like it. Not exactly my style, but she has attitude, and is unique while still looking good. 9/10.
TEST Alliance BEST Alliance |
Tuireann Naari
Emrys Enterprises
25
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Posted - 2012.07.27 12:19:00 -
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Short hair works well.
8/10 |
Pinstar Colton
Sweet Asteroid Acres
197
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Posted - 2012.07.27 12:38:00 -
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Hair looks like it is molded plastic, doodad on the face looks like a bar code. I think Spaceship Barbie was looking for you.
I guess it works as a theme, though it might not be the one you intended. 7/10
In the cat-and-mouse game that is low sec, there is no shame in learning to be a better mouse. |
BichHa Phan
Intergalactic Better Business Corporation
16
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Posted - 2012.07.27 12:54:00 -
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Very creepy dude 9/10 
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WingDancer
Black Rise Guerilla Forces
Caldari Protectorate Forces
7
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Posted - 2012.07.27 14:56:00 -
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@BichHa Phan
GingerKids are comming 9/10 ! |
Benjamin Eastwood
Air
76
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Posted - 2012.07.27 17:02:00 -
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Emo and bleach is a bad combo 7/10
"Endless ISK, the sinews of war" |
Sarah Atkinson
Federal Navy Academy
Gallente Federation
497
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Posted - 2012.07.27 18:09:00 -
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Benjamin, from a glance you have yourself some sort of hardened, rugged war veteran clich+¬; and it seems to work really well. I pulled up the 1024 version and suddenly changed my opinion. Your avatar has a very masculine and hard face; a strong jawline and cheekbones that would put a certain member of the Verve to shame, but it all seems a little out of place..
The frown, the mechanical eye and the scar all tell me that this character is one nasty piece of work, but then he's smartly dressed, clean shaven and has an immaculate hairline; suddenly he looks rather odd.. I guess the thing that bugs me the most is the earring, which is the most misplaced of the lot.
I know I shouldn't downgrade for your unique approach, but the whole things just doesn't gel well with me. Great face! Great expression and lighting, just a shame about his accessories and attire. I'll give you 7/10.
Pickles! |
Pandora Tau
The Scope
Gallente Federation
6
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Posted - 2012.07.27 18:26:00 -
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yeah, i'd tap dat. i like the smile.
7/10 |
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Shedling
Flashpoint Industries
Imperial Hull Tankers
2
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Posted - 2012.07.27 19:02:00 -
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Loving the hair and tattoo! 8/10 |
Cpt Tirel
NorCorp Security
AAA Citizens
7
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Posted - 2012.07.27 21:20:00 -
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Shedling your face looks horrible but unique so ill give you a 6/10 |
Adalynne Rohks
Tax Evasion Anonymous
94
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Posted - 2012.07.27 22:40:00 -
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Looks like a pretty avatar, but I'm not sold on the yellow lighting with white eyes. Colors aren't matching up too well, and your eyes look messed up, at least in the small version. That hairstyle is hard to pull off, but it looks alright on you. 7.5/10
edit: I really do like it much better in the larger version, but it doesn't look the same at all when it's smaller. |
Rakael Kateloda
State War Academy
Caldari State
30
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Posted - 2012.07.28 05:01:00 -
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Looks like jumped right into a gothic romance novel...monster castle with foreboding tales of ghostly appearances which scares the hell out of the young Victorian princess. |
Jax Bederen
Republic Military School
Minmatar Republic
120
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Posted - 2012.07.28 06:48:00 -
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Actually Cpt Tirel thats a rather fantastic picture, lighting is great, the blue and how it blends with the eye, nice artistic vibe about it. 10
Rakael Kateloda, it's a nice pic, but a bit bland, play with light and the background a bit maybe. 8.0 |
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
473
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Posted - 2012.07.28 06:50:00 -
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Something about you strikes me odd... maybe it's the off-center framing, maybe the lifeless skin... I would try to face the camera and tweak the lips, for a start. Currently it's a 6/10 with something seriously broken in it.
"We want your help to convince management to develop Incarna into 3rd person shooter dungeon raiding with friendly fire in nullsec space..."
Seriously, Team Avatar? |
Jax Bederen
Republic Military School
Minmatar Republic
120
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Posted - 2012.07.28 06:52:00 -
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Ishtanchuk Fazmarai wrote:Something about you strikes me odd... maybe it's the off-center framing, maybe the lifeless skin... I would try to face the camera and tweak the lips, for a start. Currently it's a 6/10 with something seriously broken in it.
Ya rated me already and vice versa, next. |
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
473
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Posted - 2012.07.28 07:00:00 -
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Jax Bederen wrote:Ishtanchuk Fazmarai wrote:Something about you strikes me odd... maybe it's the off-center framing, maybe the lifeless skin... I would try to face the camera and tweak the lips, for a start. Currently it's a 6/10 with something seriously broken in it. Ya rated me already and vice versa, next.
Provided i just changed the portrait last night, i'ts a bit early to claim that anyone rated it yet... 
"We want your help to convince management to develop Incarna into 3rd person shooter dungeon raiding with friendly fire in nullsec space..."
Seriously, Team Avatar? |
Jax Bederen
Republic Military School
Minmatar Republic
120
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Posted - 2012.07.28 07:04:00 -
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mostly nice, background doesn't match,, crazy look in the eyes. 8.0 |
Sarah Atkinson
Federal Navy Academy
Gallente Federation
506
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Posted - 2012.07.28 07:44:00 -
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I really like this one, Jax. Unfortunately the small forum avatar doesn't do the full picture justice. It happens a lot actually; some people make a perfect looking portrait and forget that the forum avatar is downscaled. In this case you can barely notice some of her main character building traits, like her piercings and scar.
That all said, she's still pretty.. but not too pretty. It's a good thing that you have yourself an avatar that's attractive, but not a space barbie. I also love the tattoos and use of eye-liner.
If I were given a shot and bettering this avatars though, I'd sort the framing out; it looks strangely odd that you've centred her body, but not the thing you should be focusing on; her face. I'd move her to the middle and bring her a slight touch closer to the camera, but other than that there's nothing for me to say here. Good work! 8.5/10.
Pickles! |
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Vagilicious
Center for Advanced Studies
Gallente Federation
29
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Posted - 2012.07.28 12:42:00 -
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Love your avatar, I can see you have a real flair in the character creator and an eye for what works! 9/10
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Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
473
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Posted - 2012.07.28 12:47:00 -
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Dunno wether i rated you before, but, i just have to say that i absolutely love what you did with your lips. That may be one ot the most kissable mouths in the forums -a rare feat as the avatar mouths are a nightmare. If i had to object anything would be the dark eyeshadow. Seriously, try a light pink one, Sarah is too young to wear dark eyeshadow. Will give 9.5/10 as she can be improved, but not too much.
PS: try the black tank top, it's not expensive and the black straps are a killer.
"We want your help to convince management to develop Incarna into 3rd person shooter dungeon raiding with friendly fire in nullsec space..."
Seriously, Team Avatar? |
Adalynne Rohks
Tax Evasion Anonymous
95
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Posted - 2012.07.28 17:23:00 -
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It's much better than a couple days ago. Right now, the worst part is having your left pupil dragged over too far. Makes the avatar look cross-eyed. And the background is kinda meh. 8/10 |
Vagilicious
Center for Advanced Studies
Gallente Federation
29
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Posted - 2012.07.28 20:12:00 -
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I like the facial expression, like something's caught you by surprise. Your face is well crafted, the only thing I'd say is that the picture is a little dark for my taste, and the blue light doesn't really sit well with me. Pretty good though! 8/10
Now lets see if I can get rated this time without being skipped over...  |
lanyaie
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Posted - 2012.07.28 21:06:00 -
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7/10
I dont post often, but when I do i'm probably trolling you Currently offering 100% legit hulkageddon security sponsored by the mittani, send 50m to me and 50m to him |
Sarah Atkinson
Federal Navy Academy
Gallente Federation
556
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Posted - 2012.07.28 21:20:00 -
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Vagilicious, bit of a wild one here. I keep looking at your avatar and can't make up my mind what I don't like about her; but if I had to guess, I'd say she appears a little overwhelming and nothing seems to match. The red dreads work fine and blend well with her attire, but her make-up seems off and the tattoo is out of place.
As a rule; opposite colours work well. Check out a colour wheel and see if you can improve her make-up a little. I'd also consider removing the tattoo.. but other than that, she has a believable face and both the pose and lighting seem fine too. I want to give you more, but as it stands I think a 6.5/10 is fair.
Ianyale; I really don't like those background, but that's just my personal opinion. She has a cute face though and the general structure doesn't seem so bad; she does however have very flat cheekbones, it isn't really a problem, you just need to find your characters good side; try facing her face on to the camera and she where that gets you. I'd also play around with her expression, because right now nothing really jumps out at me.. she seems rather bland.
The hair is fine and the tattoos are okay; just play with her pose a little and I'm sure you can get something much better out of her. 6.5/10.
Pickles! |
Eija-Riitta Veitonen
Unicorn Enterprise
22
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Posted - 2012.07.28 21:26:00 -
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I'm bad at describing faces, so i'll just give ya 9/10 - looks nice and believable.
p.s. i'm also bad at creating characters and taking photos, so don't throw rocks at me, please  |
Sarah Atkinson
Federal Navy Academy
Gallente Federation
557
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Posted - 2012.07.28 21:51:00 -
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I'm not big enough to throw rocks.. so I stick to small pebbles.
I always try and give constructive feed-back though, so I'll have a stab at rating yours for you Eija.
She has a very square face; a somewhat masculine face in actual fact, so the cut off square fringe isn't helping. That hair style is further adding to your characters imperfections, I'd change it for something longer perhaps. While you were creating her I noticed you'd allowed her shoulders to drop down into a slouch; either that or it's just the pose; either way I'd change her pose to something less effortless.
Her eyes and nose seem fine, I can't really grumble there and her lips are good too.. she just needs a smile or some form of expression, right now she looks fixed in some blank emotionless frown.. if that makes any sense at all? Cheer her up and maybe tone down the lipstick and you'll have yourself a nice avatar Eija.
There's potential here, but you might also want to work on your framing. She's too far off to the left. I hope you do decided to take me up on some of these pointers. If you do, you should come back here for a second review! 5/10.
Pickles! |
Adalynne Rohks
Tax Evasion Anonymous
97
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Posted - 2012.07.28 21:56:00 -
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I don't remember getting to do yours, officially, so here goes... It's one of my favorites, too, so any nitpicking is just attempting to be constructive.
I think that you could go with a different iris color to make the eyes really pop. Right now they look good, but in the small version especially, they're just kinda black. Also, if there was a way to rotate your pose/head to eliminate the funky shadow on your shoulder, that would clean it up to just about perfect. Easier said than done, eh? :-)
9+/10 |
Andre II
Thukker Tribe Holdings Inc.
Can't Undock. Won't Undock
75
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Posted - 2012.07.28 22:00:00 -
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She's pretty cute, like a blonde supermodel. Possibly from Germany. 7/10 +1
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