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Drew Dawkins
Eleutherian Guard
Villore Accords
3
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Posted - 2013.10.21 14:36:00 -
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Jade Marbles wrote:Antonius von Oestenkhof wrote:
Thanks for the compliment ,ma'am.
Actually , he is a young gallante with a genetic disease called Werner syndrome.
He's 24 but looks 50.
Portraits with a mini tale. With your description the avatar makes sense. Initially I found it a tad too polished for a bearded fella, but you explained what's going on and with that said I'll rate you a 8/10. The only thing I am not convinced with is the background.
The hair.. for some reason it turns off the whole portrait for me. Everything else is great. And I took your advice and changed by background. Yay or nay?
Still a 9/10.. because of the hair. |
Jade Marbles
Marble Ventures
1
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Posted - 2013.10.21 18:53:00 -
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Drew Dawkins wrote:
The hair.. for some reason it turns off the whole portrait for me. Everything else is great. And I took your advice and changed by background. Yay or nay?
Still a 9/10.. because of the hair.
It's a major improvement, your avatar is much less static. Adds a certain warmth which was much needed.
As for my hair, I'm stubborn.
It makes my avatar look so fresh and light!
I appreciate the feedback though, but I love how Jade turned out, she reminds me of someone  |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Umbrarum Paradisi
73
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Posted - 2013.10.21 22:41:00 -
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Your avatar looks really light, and it almost looks like you're in water I like how all of the colors basically match-and the tattoo is a nice touch!
9/10
"A City made of Wood is built in the forest;
A City made of Stone is built in the mountains;
But a City made of Dreams....is built in heaven."
-Jovian Proverb-á |
Katherine Chivahle
GENERAL DYNAMICS.
Fedaykin.
7
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Posted - 2013.10.21 22:57:00 -
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci wrote:Your avatar looks really light, and it almost looks like you're in water I like how all of the colors basically match-and the tattoo is a nice touch! 9/10
Like that pose. The avatar looks like a European dictator.
8/10 |
Balau
Imperial Academy
Amarr Empire
1
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Posted - 2013.10.21 23:44:00 -
[11345] - Quote
8.5/10
Don't like how some of your face is cut of, but looks good overall. |
Jade Marbles
Marble Ventures
1
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Posted - 2013.10.22 08:54:00 -
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci wrote:Your avatar looks really light, and it almost looks like you're in water I like how all of the colors basically match-and the tattoo is a nice touch! 9/10
Thank you! Yea I like the aquatic vibe alot.
@ Balau: You big meanie. Being sneaky from under your hood.
Very typical for Amarr. Warm colors, nice work with the tints and a expression at ease.
Well done. 8.5/10. |
Pepper Swift
Dark Tribunal Industries
11384
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Posted - 2013.10.22 09:02:00 -
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Jade Marbles wrote:Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci wrote:Your avatar looks really light, and it almost looks like you're in water I like how all of the colors basically match-and the tattoo is a nice touch! 9/10 Thank you! Yea I like the aquatic vibe alot. @ Balau: You big meanie. Being sneaky from under your hood. Very typical for Amarr. Warm colors, nice work with the tints and a expression at ease. Well done. 8.5/10.
from a distance.. looks like someone scribbled on your arms.. instead of tattoos.
7/10 |
Amber Felstone
Marble Ventures
0
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Posted - 2013.10.22 09:37:00 -
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@ Pepper:
Relax the shoulders more, and maybe lose the glasses - they seem to have a weird no-transparency effect (hair doesn't show through it where it should).
I'm also not a big fan of the background, too static. Conflicts too much with the colors of your character.
Lastly, I think you'd look more distuingished with a different shirt.
Face is well done, I like it.
Just not feeling the details at all.
6/10 |
Mr Veda
Federal Defense Union
Gallente Federation
0
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Posted - 2013.10.22 10:16:00 -
[11349] - Quote
@Amber Liking the glasses and freckles, almost expecting to see something reflected in them
The lighting makes your arm appear in a different color but I'm not sure if you can do anything about that?
Since your face takes up most of the space, maybe using a simpler background would be better?
Nice otherwise, I'm a sucker for the hair over the face/glasses look
7/10
dehino 'smin yath-ü dehe kaum-üraß++ yauvanaß++ jar-ütath-ü deh-üntara-pr-üptir dh-½ras tatra na muhyati |
Chiu Lin
School of Applied Knowledge
Caldari State
0
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Posted - 2013.10.22 12:32:00 -
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Mr Veda wrote:@Amber Liking the glasses and freckles, almost expecting to see something reflected in them
The lighting makes your arm appear in a different color but I'm not sure if you can do anything about that?
Since your face takes up most of the space, maybe using a simpler background would be better?
Nice otherwise, I'm a sucker for the hair over the face/glasses look
7/10
Nice foreground shading and pose, but the background contrast kind of kills it.
5/10 |
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Nadia Fey
Perkone
Caldari State
92
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Posted - 2013.10.22 13:17:00 -
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GIRL!
Are you on crash?
Because if you are the state isn't going to like it very much.
7.9/10
Between love and madness lies obsession.
http://s17.postimg.org/5jvjjcp99/TTTT.jpg |
Jade Marbles
Marble Ventures
96
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Posted - 2013.10.22 13:37:00 -
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Nadia Fey wrote:GIRL!
Are you on crash?
Because if you are the state isn't going to like it very much.
7.9/10
I'm afraid to admit it is what I initially thought 
As for you miss Fey, you'd make a straight woman gay.
10/10 |
Yiole Gionglao
415
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Posted - 2013.10.22 14:08:00 -
[11353] - Quote
Good pose, magnificent use of lighting/background, character is like supernatural but tattoo totally wastes the effect. Also, the portrait kind of lacks emotion. Will say 9.9/10 for skillfull portrait, -1 becasue of tattoo, that's 8.9/10. |
Isis Dea
State Protectorate
Caldari State
194
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Posted - 2013.10.22 14:19:00 -
[11354] - Quote
A lot of negative space, wishing you were a little closer to camera. :3
Love your apparel, hairstyle, and overall combination.
9/10 |
Nadia Fey
Perkone
Caldari State
93
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Posted - 2013.10.22 14:24:00 -
[11355] - Quote
NOW THAT IS A GOOD AVATAR!!!
A LOT OF CHARACTER!
MORE THAN JUST A PRETTY FACE!!!
10 BILLION BANANAS OUT OF 20 MILLION DILDOS!
Between love and madness lies obsession.
http://s17.postimg.org/5jvjjcp99/TTTT.jpg |
Commissar Kate
Ishuk-Raata Enforcement Directive
20755
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Posted - 2013.10.22 14:26:00 -
[11356] - Quote
I have not blonde hair this time.
As for the portrait above me.
9/10
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Jade Marbles
Marble Ventures
141
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Posted - 2013.10.22 14:56:00 -
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Commissar Kate wrote:I have not blonde hair this time.
As for the portrait above me.
9/10
A very pretty face.
Perhaps a slightly more playful pose and modestly brighter or more cheerful background would up the prettyness.
8/10.
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Antonius von Oestenkhof
All Your Machariel Belong to Ham
2
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Posted - 2013.10.22 15:26:00 -
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Not sure if gritty tattoo and a rebellious girl fits in with a jade green aether background .
The character setup is pretty nice tho.
The camera and background could use some work to bring out the character.
GÇ£I never lie to any man because I donGÇÖt fear anyone. The only time you lie is when you are afraidGÇ¥ |
Prototype Naveen
Digitized.
34
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Posted - 2013.10.22 15:38:00 -
[11359] - Quote
Antonius von Oestenkhof wrote:Not sure if gritty tattoo and a rebellious girl fits in with a jade green aether background .
The character setup is pretty nice tho.
The camera and background could use some work to bring out the character.
Observation one:
For some reason the subject's head appears to have slightly too out of placel features.
Target(s) of observation:
Ears - tiny.
Eyes - tiny.
Forehead - large.
Observation two:
Light shed on subject's outerwear creates a too stark contrast in comparison to the other tones in the capture presented.
Rating:
Seven out of Ten.
Suggestions:
Place subject infront of a different setting.
Adjust the position of your lightsource.
Exchange your outerwear to one of more distuingished nature - your features permit it.
End message. |
Antonius von Oestenkhof
All Your Machariel Belong to Ham
2
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Posted - 2013.10.22 17:03:00 -
[11360] - Quote
This should surprise you specimen 9520100A-5 alpha.
It appears your design algorithm is functioning as programmed, however it has also spontaneously created a sense of value judgement... hmmm... interesting.
10/10
GÇ£I never lie to any man because I donGÇÖt fear anyone. The only time you lie is when you are afraidGÇ¥ |
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Alice Saki
Mind Games.
Suddenly Spaceships.
94326
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Posted - 2013.10.22 17:52:00 -
[11361] - Quote
I like the Eyes xD
Good Stubble ^_^
8/10
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Antonius von Oestenkhof
All Your Machariel Belong to Ham
2
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Posted - 2013.10.22 18:58:00 -
[11362] - Quote
Greetings Ms Saki , much honored to be rated be you.
Hmmm.... interesting perspective.
As if it was taken as you were walking past the medical bay fever detector.
In my humble opinion I would prefer to see more of the tattoo.
You didn't spent 500 million isk just to hide it away in some corner did ya?
8.9/10
GÇ£I never lie to any man because I donGÇÖt fear anyone. The only time you lie is when you are afraidGÇ¥ |
Katherine Chivahle
GENERAL DYNAMICS.
Fedaykin.
7
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Posted - 2013.10.22 20:32:00 -
[11363] - Quote
Antonius von Oestenkhof wrote:Greetings Ms Saki , much honored to be rated be you.
Hmmm.... interesting perspective.
As if it was taken as you were walking past the medical bay fever detector.
In my humble opinion I would prefer to see more of the tattoo.
You didn't spent 500 million isk just to hide it away in some corner did ya?
8.9/10
That eye o.O
9/10
10/10 if you would had a monocle to cover that missing left eye. |
Mizhir
AQUILA INC
Verge of Collapse
39861
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Posted - 2013.10.22 20:53:00 -
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@Katherine
I really like the expression and pose. It gives you a very surprised look. The makeup is overdone in my opinion and the hair looks abit glitchy from that point of view.
8/10
We will never forget you Saede!
I bet you dont see things like this so often in EVE |
Leona en Fortuona
ExoGen Foundation
The DEAD Alliance
0
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Posted - 2013.10.23 02:14:00 -
[11365] - Quote
I dunno why but the slightly furrowed brows kind of detract from the portrait imo. Other than that I like all the small touches, I like the hoop earrings (my main uses them too =D)
8/10 |
Antonius von Oestenkhof
All Your Machariel Belong to Ham
2
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Posted - 2013.10.23 03:57:00 -
[11366] - Quote
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OShuN_uvv80
GÇ£I never lie to any man because I donGÇÖt fear anyone. The only time you lie is when you are afraidGÇ¥ |
Ariel Dawn
F9X
1149
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Posted - 2013.10.23 06:43:00 -
[11367] - Quote
The piercing stare of the one lit eye works very well! 9/10 |
Ivy Romanova
State Protectorate
Caldari State
974
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Posted - 2013.10.23 10:45:00 -
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@Katherine Chivahle
You just went overboard with makeup if you ask me .
Ehhhhhhhhhhhh
NEED MOAR DRAMA!
7.9/10
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Leona en Fortuona
ExoGen Foundation
The DEAD Alliance
0
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Posted - 2013.10.24 00:46:00 -
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Antonius von Oestenkhof wrote:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X2LTL8KgKv8
At first that linked to some McDonalds parody about black people. Now you changed it to making fun of my shades.
0/10 offended, nerf blue eyes buff black people with sunglasses at night.
Ivy Romanova wrote:@Katherine Chivahle
You just went overboard with makeup if you ask me .
Ehhhhhhhhhhhh
NEED MOAR DRAMA!
7.9/10
Too scary, looks like a vampire. 5/10. |
Commissar Kate
Ishuk-Raata Enforcement Directive
21059
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Posted - 2013.10.24 03:25:00 -
[11370] - Quote
@Ivy Romanova]
PALE!!!! 8/10
@Leona en Fortuona
8/10 aswell would be higher but I like seeing eyes.
And Kudos to Indah for giving me the idea of this portrait. |
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