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Lan Wang
Coreli Corporation
276
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Posted - 2015.03.27 15:04:32 -
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lighting and background doesnt really suit your char, 6/10
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Thilos
Signal Cartel
EvE-Scout Enclave
169
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Posted - 2015.03.27 18:06:28 -
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Bright. Clean. Optimistic. Forward-looking.
I suppose my only two criticisms would be that 1) the piercings don't really fit the character, because she comes across as more straight-laced than punk chick overall, and 2) the background is a rather drab one. A nice light burst background, maybe with a blue filter, would totally make the character pop.
Other than that, she's pretty cool.
7.5/10 |
Tilde Duchateau
The Vendunari
End of Life
27935
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Posted - 2015.03.28 08:34:16 -
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Oooh, I like this version of you, Thilos. Just the right amount of menacing and cool. Maybe use a lighting option with more contrast? I can't think of many ways to improve a portrait that's great already.
9.5/10.
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Elara Zetoya
Ministry of War
Amarr Empire
6217
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Posted - 2015.03.28 10:08:27 -
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It's Tilde. Need I say more? 9.99/10.
When I'm good I'm very good, but when I'm bad, I'm better.
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Fal Shepard
40
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Posted - 2015.03.30 01:28:56 -
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Instead of going for a very generic look, the mixed hair, tattoos, and earings make you look uinque. 7/10
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Mizhir
Matari Exodus
74181
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Posted - 2015.03.30 10:11:59 -
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@Fel
Interesting portrait with many details. But the brown haircolour at the roots look odd. Still a 9/10
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Lan Wang
Coreli Corporation
Mercenary Coalition
280
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Posted - 2015.03.30 10:15:16 -
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all in all nice however id rather see a collar on your toon, maybe a nice jacket or something
7/10
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Falken Falcon
31635
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Posted - 2015.03.30 10:47:09 -
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Lan,
First thing that comes to mind is a minister or maybe a mayor, a person of power and representation.
That makes me doubt if your happiness is genuine (Eve is real).
I like the facial expression and the pose. The background could be something else, it does not fit in your well maintained clothing and hair (Not minmatar or piraty enough). I would also re/move the nose stud, in it's current state, it gathers too much attention from everything else.
Face is good, pose is good and the lighting is suitable
Overall is very good, 7.5/10
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs
Jovian Enterprises
18012
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Posted - 2015.03.30 12:54:49 -
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Really really good- the only thing I'd suggest is a different background- maybe that green-brown-dark-with-a-light nebulous one- I just see the colors matching well- but it's great anyhow :)
9.5/10
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Varik Xavier
Alcoholocaust.
Test Alliance Please Ignore
7
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Posted - 2015.03.31 20:50:40 -
[13900] - Quote
I like that your character seems more like a humorous or devious commander or leader, instead of a dull, and very serious one. It makes him seem dynamic.
9/10 |
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Mizhir
Matari Exodus
74187
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Posted - 2015.03.31 21:09:12 -
[13901] - Quote
@Varik
The overall avatar is rather boring but you do have some interesting play with the light and the background. Also the hair+earring+face+black jacket kinda reminds me of Grease.
7/10
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Azda Ja
Green Skull LLC
3534
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Posted - 2015.04.01 00:46:32 -
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Vherocool. I would play with the lighting a bit personally, it seems a little flat. Otherwise It's pretty cool.
8.5/10
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Fal Shepard
40
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Posted - 2015.04.01 05:14:51 -
[13903] - Quote
Very spooky and ghost like, but the background is lacking significantly. 6/10
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Crusty Waffle
Stay Frosty.
A Band Apart.
18
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Posted - 2015.04.01 06:11:26 -
[13904] - Quote
Emotion in avatar. Your character is saying "I've been in bad places, but hey i'm ok". 9/10 coloration on roots look strange. |
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs
Jovian Enterprises
18016
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Posted - 2015.04.01 18:03:20 -
[13905] - Quote
It's dim and the colors sort of clash... There's a lot of improvement to be made, but there's a ton of potential with the way you look already 
7/10
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Solairen
Matsuko Holding
247
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Posted - 2015.04.01 18:35:26 -
[13906] - Quote
ERRMERGRRAAWD I lost my eye to pew pew in the forums. Beta feature forums asteroid shot my eye out, now I have the Monocle of Doom (tm?) to replace it.
10/10 for eyesight lost in the service of bring up to date Jove info to the Forums. |
Crusty Waffle
Galactic Insurgency of New Eden
18
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Posted - 2015.04.04 01:03:28 -
[13907] - Quote
Generic pose. Shoulders seem really wide(from both shoulders) Head seems tiny. 6/10
Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci wrote:It's dim and the colors sort of clash... There's a lot of improvement to be made, but there's a ton of potential with the way you look already 7/10
How about now :D |
Mina Sebiestar
Minmatar Inner Space Conglomerate
858
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Posted - 2015.04.04 05:49:03 -
[13908] - Quote
Zoomed in it can get 8/10 it have enough complexity on him
I do thing more of light or different one can improve it a bit and for some reason background contrast his hair to hard but that can be just me. |
Fal Shepard
40
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Posted - 2015.04.06 00:57:35 -
[13909] - Quote
very plain charecter and background. Lacking in both posture and creativity. 1/10
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Tilde Duchateau
The Vendunari
End of Life
27938
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Posted - 2015.04.06 01:31:08 -
[13910] - Quote
Love the sculpting and posing. Perhaps zoom in just a bit to pull more focus towards the face? 8/10
Jackhammer subtlety. Bitches love cannons. This Is My Jam.
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Jovian Labs
Jovian Enterprises
18018
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Posted - 2015.04.06 01:45:52 -
[13911] - Quote
Fal Shepard wrote:very plain charecter and background. Lacking in both posture and creativity. 1/10
Gotta say, I still love your portrait- maybe just shift yourself up-left slightly (a little more up than left)
It's really basically perfect - 9.9/10
Tilde Duchateau wrote:Love the sculpting and posing. Perhaps zoom in just a bit to pull more focus towards the face? 8/10
Again, seriously great- maybe just turn your body slightly to the right (your left) to give a more looking right at you" face - 9.5/10
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Zuzmaw
Universalis Imperium
The Bastion
24
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Posted - 2015.04.08 07:20:49 -
[13912] - Quote
8/10
seems really happy |
Jade Blackwind
Alexylva Paradox
Low-Class
352
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Posted - 2015.04.08 09:08:17 -
[13913] - Quote
A classic villain! Nicely done, everything fits the theme. I approve. 9/10. |
Mizhir
Matari Exodus
74218
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Posted - 2015.04.09 13:15:01 -
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@Jade
One of the more interesting character designs and certainly a very unique look even for a Vherokior. However the portrait itself could be better. The light and shades doesn't play well and it becomes too uniform IMO. Play abit with contrasts to bring out the unique traits that you character has.
7/10 (Would be 9/10 or 10/10 if it was for the character design alone)
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Elyan Mishi
Vertical.
16
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Posted - 2015.04.10 12:04:29 -
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@Mizhir
Not a fan of noserings or that hairstyle. Perhaps show a bit more than just the face and neck, and it would be better? Remember you having a portrait that I liked a lot more a while back.
6/10 |
Lan Wang
Stillwater Corporation
That Escalated Quickly.
319
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Posted - 2015.04.10 12:09:00 -
[13916] - Quote
hot form what i can see... however let us see your eyes and more of your face, never been a fan of eye mods but just personal preference ;)
8/10
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Mizhir
Matari Exodus
74218
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Posted - 2015.04.10 22:35:04 -
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Elyan Mishi wrote:@Mizhir
Not a fan of noserings or that hairstyle. Perhaps show a bit more than just the face and neck, and it would be better? Remember you having a portrait that I liked a lot more a while back.
6/10
Which portrait was that? I have had alot of them As for the hairstyle and nosering. She has pretty much have had them for a majority of the portraits.
@Lan
A nice corporate look, but other than that not really much special. Still a 7/10
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Quarra Shepard
Time and all Eternity
DeepSpace.
13
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Posted - 2015.04.11 02:32:57 -
[13918] - Quote
Look at the camera more and brighter lighting. 7/10 |
Lan Wang
Stillwater Corporation
That Escalated Quickly.
326
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Posted - 2015.04.11 12:03:56 -
[13919] - Quote
maybe brown eyes would suit you better and no scars and maybe a closer to the camra shot, are you fal sheperds alt?
9/10 :)
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Fal Shepard
41
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Posted - 2015.04.11 12:17:22 -
[13920] - Quote
yes she is :) . I like the angled face and the mixed hair color. It gives you a bit of a tough apperance. 8/10
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