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Pix Severus
Mew Age Outpaws
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Posted - 2015.12.10 22:47:38 -
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Shiny goggles, and an even shinier head!
Looking good, 8/10.
My lord.
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Nihlus
Pator Tech School
Minmatar Republic
5
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Posted - 2015.12.11 13:29:23 -
[14492] - Quote
I like the greyscale / silver theme, very nice. If the head bent down a little bit less, it should bring out the ominous stare and those eerily blue eyes a bit more. 8/10 |
Morrigan Nighe
Hana-Bi
114
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Posted - 2015.12.11 18:39:22 -
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Move back to your old background, imo.
The contrast was better and the lighting in the old background went very well with the lighting of your face. This background is too busy.
I like the offset, zoomed in positioning of your avatar, which makes it very memorable.
With the old backdrop 10/10
Now 8/10
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Nihlus
Pator Tech School
Minmatar Republic
7
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Posted - 2015.12.14 16:06:43 -
[14494] - Quote
Morrigan Nighe wrote:Move back to your old background, imo.
The contrast was better and the lighting in the old background went very well with the lighting of your face. This background is too busy.
I like the offset, zoomed in positioning of your avatar, which makes it very memorable.
With the old backdrop 10/10
Now 8/10
Sound advice, thanks. I like yours too, nice color theme and creative use of eye shadow. The angle gives an almost spiritual feel, as if you're praying, or communing with the force, or something like that. All the metalwork is a bit much though. 9/10 |
LordOdysseus
Skyfang Inc.
841
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Posted - 2015.12.14 16:46:42 -
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I like how you have a monocle and the other eye left in shadow.Also your position in the frame and the background that emits light appears that it is shining on the side of your face.The spikey shoulderpad is neat too!
10/10
If fire doesn't solve your problem,you're not using enough.
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Mortlake
Devils Rejects 666
910
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Posted - 2015.12.15 11:56:46 -
[14496] - Quote
I like the scar at the corner of your mouth, it's hot. Call me. |
Ralph King-Griffin
Devils Rejects 666
The Devil's Warrior Alliance
13058
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Posted - 2015.12.15 12:26:55 -
[14497] - Quote
Really really like the red theme you got going there ,
Makes me think of one of my favourites Gregor Parud but with more character and a little less like a classical portrait.
the lighting and pose work well together and show the structure and planes of the face off very well.
It's got a really nice feeling of depth (literal sense) to it that these portraits are more often than not lacking.
The angle from solder to shoulder is doing this, combined with the now much more prominent structure of the the face due to the lighting and unified pallet seem to give it a solid presence.
Generally speaking I hate the monoclonal, that particular hair and facial structure and in previous iterations of your portraits I would have held as marks against it but this one seems to work well and despite my subjective dislike of them I really like the end result.
I might play around with the negative shapes a bit but the composition is quite strong as is and I know how finicky it can be to get something that really pops like this.
all told I'd give it a solid 9/10.
Better the Devil you know.
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Mortlake
Devils Rejects 666
910
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Posted - 2015.12.15 12:41:48 -
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Ralph King-Griffin wrote:Deep stuff.
Thanks Ralph. I play with my portrait a lot, mainly because I spend all my money on clothes and I'm vain. I really appreciate the time you took to write your critique and I'll look into what I can do with the negative space (perhaps a parrot?) shortly.
I've always loved your portrait and I take issue with anyone that refers to Nosferatu when describing it. I think it's comforting and homely, a bit like Whistler's Mother but with less crinoline and more footstool. No, you could do with just a touch more footstool, just to raise you up a few pixels. Having said that, I love the fact that the minimal use of color and the well placed lighting really makes your features pop.
9/10 from me too.
Much love x |
Junivera
Republic Military School
Minmatar Republic
0
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Posted - 2015.12.16 12:11:12 -
[14499] - Quote
I'm self-consciously aware of the relative lack of eloquence and insight such a comment must now exhibit.. but still.. awesome, 9/10 |
Hannibal Crusoe
Discoverings
SpaceMonkey's Alliance
218
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Posted - 2015.12.17 08:34:16 -
[14500] - Quote
Nice symmetry with the angle of your face in relation to the facial tattoo.
9/10
Ride a white mare in the footsteps of dawn
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Dusty Sparkles
7
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Posted - 2015.12.17 22:41:41 -
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I can't help myself, but I feel that your goggles are crosseyed. These and your smirk give your avatar a nice humorous touch, imo.
8/10 |
Azda Ja
Meticulously Indifferent
4710
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Posted - 2015.12.17 23:40:29 -
[14502] - Quote
Needs more sparkle. Maybe some glitter?
7/10. I like it, there's just something, 'missing' I can't quite put my finger on. Maybe lighting? Or perhaps positioning. I don't know. The headgear + monocle is cool though, and the smile is creepy.
Grrr.
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Priss Eluveitie
13
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Posted - 2015.12.18 00:44:07 -
[14503] - Quote
Nice positioning, the scar is highlighted very well also. Memorable.
9/10.
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Dusty Sparkles
8
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Posted - 2015.12.20 12:23:40 -
[14504] - Quote
Yeah, she certainly is pretty. The colors match well and I really like your eyes.
What hurts your avatar though, is the ID card like, frontal shot. It makes it feel very generic, imo. There are so many possibilities to make an avatar more interessting with lighting, posing and positionig.
8/10 |
Mina Sebiestar
Minmatar Inner Space Conglomerate
1012
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Posted - 2015.12.22 09:00:26 -
[14505] - Quote
7/10 .
Something about it....sometimes it looks to me it try to hard other times i don't feel all the gold with strong lighting combo.
Can be tweaked further imo. |
Dave Viker
eleet
Logitech Blasters
457
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Posted - 2015.12.22 10:35:36 -
[14506] - Quote
5/10 - I generally dislike those "I am pissed, angry and arrogant" avatars, even if that expression was not your intention.
Sorry :(
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Solecist Project
The Scope
Gallente Federation
28306
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Posted - 2015.12.23 08:22:22 -
[14507] - Quote
Way too dark...
Umar Umarhabib > The bad thing is, every time I die with a juicy Deadspace set up, it becomes harder to fly solo.
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LordOdysseus
Skyfang Inc.
1272
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Posted - 2015.12.23 16:12:39 -
[14508] - Quote
Way too sexy...
If fire doesn't solve your problem,you're not using enough.
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Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
4135
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Posted - 2015.12.25 22:57:24 -
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Way too grumpy...
I think I already raed you in the past, so i will just suggest you to get rid of that background and use a solid color one. Those geometrical backgrounds look so silly-CGI-from-the-80s... Portrait is a 7/10 but could improve.
73% of EVE characters stay in high security space. 62% of EVE subscribers barely PvP. 40% of all new accounts just "level up their Ravens". Probably that's why PvE content in EVE Online is sub-par and CCP is head over heels for PvP...
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Morrigan Nighe
Hana-Bi
115
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Posted - 2015.12.26 11:50:48 -
[14510] - Quote
You have hand for chosing good backgrounds that go well with your avatar. I really enjoy that with your creations.
I picture Ishtanchuk as a chic and vain person, so I think she would try to hide the imperfection that the scar reflects, rather than showing it openly. In my opinion you should get rid of it. It seems like the new thing to do, to make a character a little more "edgy" - pretty girl + a scar. Doesn't usually fit the concept of a character imo.
9/10 |
Fal Shepard
Tungsten Gear Industries
94
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Posted - 2015.12.29 22:50:11 -
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You appear to be a rogue, and one who does not care what others think and doesn't like to talk much. I like the dark look you have about you, and I can sense you having a strong will. 9/10
From the ashes of our defeat, we will be reborn. With these chains with which we are bound, we will become indivisible. To those who showed us no mercy, we will give no sympathy. For the flames that burn our cities, we will douse in injustice's blood
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Taunrich Kaufmann
Caldari Executive Mining and Exploration
39
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Posted - 2015.12.30 05:50:00 -
[14512] - Quote
You look like some kind of chic goth-industrial-cyberpunk hybrid, pretty cool. Very aesthetic photo with good lighting. 8/10
When we first saw the flock, we were surrounded..Brilliant colors, dancing lights...This moment is the first time I understood what it meant to be Caldari: Divinity in the flock...one being, many changes.
- Janto Sitarbe, The Legendary Flock
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Solecist Project
The Scope
Gallente Federation
29362
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Posted - 2015.12.30 22:20:50 -
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Taunrich Kaufmann wrote:You look like some kind of chic goth-industrial-cyberpunk hybrid, pretty cool. Very aesthetic photo with good lighting. 8/10
Stoic.
Disciplined.
Loyal.
Always well shaved.
Good work.
Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:
The game has changed little from my point of view ... yet here I am, playing again with 3 accounts...
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Annemariela Antonela
Pator Tech School
Minmatar Republic
17
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Posted - 2015.12.30 22:37:42 -
[14514] - Quote
156.2 degrees fahrenheit
Would bang.
GÇ£Culture is like a smog. To live within it, you must breathe some of it in and, inevitably, be contaminated.GÇ¥
GÇò Richard K. Morgan, Altered Carbon
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Solecist Project
The Scope
Gallente Federation
29390
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Posted - 2015.12.31 09:27:06 -
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Annemariela Antonela wrote:156.2 degrees fahrenheit
Would bang.
Pissed off, hot lesbian goth chick ready to rock the galaxy.
I agree to your query.
Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:
The game has changed little from my point of view ... yet here I am, playing again with 3 accounts...
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Fal Shepard
Tungsten Gear Industries
96
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Posted - 2016.01.01 18:31:11 -
[14516] - Quote
Interesting appearance, but kinda hard to make out your face and a bit of a boring background. 6/10
From the ashes of our defeat, we will be reborn. With these chains with which we are bound, we will become indivisible. To those who showed us no mercy, we will give no sympathy. For the flames that burn our cities, we will douse in injustice's blood
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Arya Ikahrus
7
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Posted - 2016.01.04 14:36:00 -
[14517] - Quote
You look short and pissed off but still easily in the better half of avatars. Also it reminds me of what my avatar used to look like a while ago so 7/10. |
Azda Ja
Meticulously Indifferent
4788
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Posted - 2016.01.04 17:08:44 -
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I like the blue theme going but don't really like the face piercings. The lighting goes very nicely with the background too.
7/10.
Higher w/o the piercings.
Grrr.
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That Guy Preddz
Pod Goo Extraction Agency
IT'S ONLY PIXELS
2
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Posted - 2016.01.07 13:06:38 -
[14519] - Quote
Cute face, would probably rip my balls off though.
Dat Scar.
7/10 would have a go. |
Taunrich Kaufmann
Caldari Executive Mining and Exploration
53
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Posted - 2016.01.07 17:23:40 -
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That Guy Preddz wrote:Cute face, would probably rip my balls off though.
Dat Scar.
7/10 would have a go.
Background & shirt are pretty plain, interesting head dots, nice moustachio.
Kinda hard to see the mohawk against that background. 6/10.
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