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Junivera
State War Academy Caldari State
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Posted - 2016.08.29 22:40:26 -
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Without doubt one of the best avatars in Eve. Awesome job. 10/10 |
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
453
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Posted - 2016.08.29 23:09:10 -
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I love the lens flair, but I think that background is slightly on the dark side. Otherwise, your portrait does exactly what it sets out to do with no mistake or awkwardness. 9.5/10
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Heinrich Harkkon
State War Academy Caldari State
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Posted - 2016.08.30 02:12:23 -
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Neph wrote:I love the lens flair, but I think that background is slightly on the dark side. Otherwise, your portrait does exactly what it sets out to do with no mistake or awkwardness. 9.5/10 The background and lighting are good, and complement your avatar nicely. The focused stare looks great and the tattoos suit you. 8.5/10. |
Faulker Gath'nor
Templar Directorate Holdings United Interests
560
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Posted - 2016.08.30 14:18:04 -
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Honestly... Yours is a portrait style I am very fond of. , The armor and pose are excellent, very formal, the look, expression and tone communicate a great deal. Good use of soft lighting basically negates the "armor problem"... nicely done btw... and of course since you are a fellow with fine taste in eyewear, you receive a full point extra for that.
A portrait fit to be hung... 9.5/10 |
Clair lunski
Angel's Legion
1
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Posted - 2016.08.31 04:12:51 -
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Faulker Gath'nor wrote:Honestly... Yours is a portrait style I am very fond of. , The armor and pose are excellent, very formal, the look, expression and tone communicate a great deal. Good use of soft lighting basically negates the "armor problem"... nicely done btw... and of course since you are a fellow with fine taste in eyewear, you receive a full point extra for that.
A portrait fit to be hung... 9.5/10 kinda looks like u got a hole through ur face/eye idk (suggest moving light source to avoid?) sick beard, cybernetic makes look more spacey clothing fab background suggest factions fits pretty decently character stands out really well pretty decent overall
8.5/10 would be dazed by the look of hole through face again but overall pretty decent looking |
Iron PumpKing
School of Applied Knowledge Caldari State
0
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Posted - 2016.09.01 12:42:49 -
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5/10 can't really see much and just a bit boring And what's up with the glasses? ;-) |
Fade Azura
Logistics and Salvage Express Services
166
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Posted - 2016.09.01 19:13:49 -
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4/10 your caldari but you look like you got amarr color scheme .... im guessing daddy was a no good blood raider in amarr low sec and mommy was a caldari businesswoman type with a *strong and independent* attitude. |
Altrue
Exploration Frontier inc
2068
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Posted - 2016.09.02 20:21:59 -
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Simple and efficient, but I'd have picked another pose, crossed arms in EVE are rendered in an horrible way, and it shows. I'd also suggest working a bit more on the lighting, the luminosity seems a tad too bright compared to your background.
Still it's not a bad portrait :)
6/10
Signature Tanking Best Tanking
Retired [Ex-F] CEO - Eve-guides.fr
Ultimate Citadel Guide - 2016 EVE Career Chart
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
458
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Posted - 2016.09.03 04:46:30 -
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Wow. I really like this. Sadly, the expression leaves a bit to be desired. You look quite dull, try introducing some character into your face! Staring straight ahead with a half-smile towards an off-frame point is very unengaging.
Otherwise, colors+framing+lighting on point. I'd suggest a *bit* closer framing, but dat armour tho. I really love your facial detail. Gorgeous.
8/10
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Alma Torran
Dark Angel Reconnaissance
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Posted - 2016.09.05 09:39:01 -
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looks good, the shaved head and the clothing along with the pose is very piratey, i like it 9/10 cant really think of anything wrong with it, cool name too |
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Itsukame-Zainou Hyperspatial Inquiries Ltd. Arataka Research Consortium
19489
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Posted - 2016.09.05 14:09:29 -
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It's hard to do a good profile shot - but yours is good! The hair frames the face well, and the colors and shadows work - my only suggestion is that the background might be a little light in comparison to the rest of the shot.
9/10
"A City made of Dreams is built in heaven"
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Nana Skalski
Poseidaon
15403
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Posted - 2016.09.06 07:44:44 -
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Your character reminds me somewhat of Paul Atreides from Lynch's Diuna. Noble face. I see one of the most convincing facial expressions that people could achieve with character creator. The implants dont ruin the face and expression, they fit, and add to the character when paired with shirt, and shirt chosen is top-notch.
I dont know why I would not give 10/10
I give 10/10.
Every part of a game helps to tell a story. =ƒôò
Where is Angry CONCORD guy when you need him.
GëíGïüGëí GÖÑ
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Fal Shepard
School of Mabon
106
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Posted - 2016.09.12 15:37:16 -
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You are dressed very distinctive from other pilots, but your pale skin starkly clashes with your dark clothes and setting. While I do like the pose which gives off an expression that suggests that you'd rather get back to work, you are wearing a rugged vest over a nice shirt. I can't imagine what job you must do, certainly not one working with tools or engines. 7/10
From the ashes of our defeat, we will be reborn. With these chains with which we are bound, we will become indivisible. To those who showed us no mercy, we will give no sympathy. For the flames that burn our cities, we will douse in injustice's blood
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Warzi zouille
The Scope Gallente Federation
5
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Posted - 2016.09.13 10:44:37 -
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much tattoo, such ink, wow tribalz!
i like the pose and dat haircut, solid 8/10 |
terzslave
Caldari Provisions Caldari State
193
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Posted - 2016.09.14 03:36:43 -
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Angsty teen look with the eyeliner.
7.5/10 |
Morrigan Nighe
232
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Posted - 2016.09.14 17:41:45 -
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I do like what you're going for. The greyish green, sick skin, the white hair and the red jacket as a contrast work well in my opinion. The background is ok. It doesn't fit 100%, but I can't think of another right now that might work better. Maybe flip through them, but keep a monochrome feel to it.
What definitely needs improvement is your pose and the lighting, especially around the nose and upper lip. Just makes that part look weird.
8/10 |
Kairavi Mrithyakara
1039
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Posted - 2016.09.15 16:07:32 -
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I've looked at it long and hard and I can't find a single criticism.
She looks like a harsh, cold commander, bordering on cruel. Not a pirate, but a capsuleer who enjoys playing military command structures to her own advantage.
And the avatar itself. You make that background work. And a perfect play of shadows across her face, and I mean perfect, because there's no weird glitches, blemishes; look at that nose shadow... and the way it plays over the left eye...
Great choice of eyes as well, with the tiny irises. That's a thousand AU stare if there is one; cool, empty, deeply awesome.
The expression is what really ties the whole thing together.
And the face augmentations! GÖÑGÖÑGÖÑ The unusual, chiseled quality of the face is all the more spectacular because of it.
Good gravy, I'm having a hard time trying to think of just how to describe how perfect your new portrait is. Its another example of how deeply unique a portrait can actually be made, if someone puts in the effort. And its my new favourite.
...I need to go have a smoke.
Perfection/10.
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miiral
12893
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Posted - 2016.09.15 18:30:31 -
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@ Kairavi: honestly, I'm kind of bummed out... about myself. Looking at portraits like this makes me feel I've not done anything interesting in ages...*sigh*
But about this portrait: calm expression, facial details+augmentations, pose, choice of background and lights, I find those all well done AND interesting.
Only thing a bit overpowering is the prosthetic arm and the way it dominates portrait. If the background would have some kind of off-center focal point - in this case on the left - it would make this more balanced IMO. In any case, 9/10
li'l things about miiral...GÅÄ
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
513
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Posted - 2016.09.15 20:10:24 -
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10/10. No question. This is a spectacular portrait.
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Matar Ronin
1537
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Posted - 2016.09.15 20:13:11 -
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3 out of 10, she was looking for something dropped on the floor when the picture was taken.
GÇÿVain flame burns fast/and its lick is light/Modest flame lasts long/and burns to the bone.GÇÖ
" We lost a war we chose not to fight." Without a doubt this is the best way to lose any war and the worst excuse to explain the beating afterwards.
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
513
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Posted - 2016.09.15 20:22:37 -
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Your avatar's always been a tough one for me. The face is an instant classic, with rich texture and shadow enhanced by the tattooing. The red's a nice touch, too. Expression... well, you goddamn nailed it. Those eyes are stunning.
However, the dreads just kill this. In the thumbnail, the weird off-white makes everything confusing, and blown up, the bizarre pillow-like texture they have ruins the depth of your face.
The lighting doesn't help the hair--while the strong key lighting works wonderfully in enhancing your face, it just makes your hair even duller and more boring. Additionally, your choice of background is dismal. The dark colors don't help the hair feel unified, and the blue/green colors make no sense against the rich tones of the skin and the red jacket. It's just a really bad background anyways, and it's the final nail in the coffin for this avatar. First impression is one of something just randomly thrown together, and it's only upon closer inspection that the care in the the character is evident.
2/10--it's not fun to look at. Your face is an easy 9/10, but I can't see that in the thumbnail because of the loose framing, and the rest of the train wreck of composition draws my eye away from it when blown up.
My advice? Just... lose the dreads. Go bald and wait for CCP to release a better model. Change your background to one that works. Tighten up your framing once your hair's gone. It'll be really good-looking, but you will lose the "wild mystic dude" feel. If you have to go for that, redye your hair to something that's not the color of dirty socks and maybe works better with your lighting.
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Nihlus
Pator Tech School Minmatar Republic
7
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Posted - 2016.09.23 22:47:06 -
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Intense. The lighting on the far side of the face is very nice. Good angle, too. 9/10 |
compulsatorAAUF shofah
compulsatorAAUF shofah Corporation
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Posted - 2016.09.24 01:10:08 -
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looks like a Vietnamese keuna reeves |
Commissar Kate
NulzSec
407361
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Posted - 2016.09.24 02:42:59 -
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Looks like you have been hitting the boosters a bit too hard.
-k8
My Fanclub
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
517
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Posted - 2016.09.24 14:45:25 -
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Nihlus wrote:Intense. The lighting on the far side of the face is very nice. Good angle, too. 9/10
Great to see you around again. Nihlus is looking sexier than ever before, although I think that lighting might just be a tad too harsh. Something about the hair doesn't quite look organic. 9/10
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Ralph King-Griffin
Devils Rejects 666 The Devil's Warrior Alliance
18237
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Posted - 2016.09.24 18:21:21 -
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oO00o nice change. I like it, you kind of remind me of one of those odd young people you see hanging around with the lesser Royal's in Britain. You know the sort ,seems oddly thorough bread and I can imagine having some title or another vaguely related to an old colony long since declared the Democratic republic of (something) . Duchess of Buzoga or something similar.
Aside from the strange things my mind conjures up sometimes yeah this is a good change. More interesting, works much better now with the Moody heavy lighting.
Good job 8/10
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Matar Ronin
1819
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Posted - 2016.09.24 18:37:35 -
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7 out of 10 on the undead vampire scale. This face looks as if it has gone centuries without exposure to direct sunlight.
GÇÿVain flame burns fast/and its lick is light/Modest flame lasts long/and burns to the bone.GÇÖ
" We lost a war we chose not to fight." Without a doubt this is the best way to lose any war and the worst excuse to explain the beating afterwards.
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
518
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Posted - 2016.09.24 20:20:38 -
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Ralph King-Griffin wrote:oO00o nice change. I like it, you kind of remind me of one of those odd young people you see hanging around with the lesser Royal's in Britain. You know the sort ,seems oddly thorough bread and I can imagine having some title or another vaguely related to an old colony long since declared the Democratic republic of (something) . Duchess of Buzoga or something similar.
Aside from the strange things my mind conjures up sometimes yeah this is a good change. More interesting, works much better now with the Moody heavy lighting.
Good job 8/10
Whoops, just changed it again. Thoughts?
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Nana Skalski
Poseidaon
16493
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Posted - 2016.09.24 20:29:06 -
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You looked more edgy without hairs.
Now you look more cuddly. Like me.
Every part of a game helps to tell a story. =ƒôò
Where is Angry CONCORD guy when you need him.
GëíGïüGëí GÖÑ
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Bellanea Rajanir
Poseidaon
421
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Posted - 2016.09.24 20:47:25 -
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The arm is somewhat weak looking, like a twig. I think you only push buttons and receive bacon with this musculature. But you threw away the bacon like those millions of ISK you won. And where is that carrier you supposedly won? Not in your hands.
You look somewhat funny in those goggles. with that serious pose. I see a small, fragile girl in too large and heavy boots that is operating a heavy machinery, but is very delicate in that. Contrasts. But interesting.
8/10, not the best, but not the worst
"Station atmosphere not yet decontaminated for capsuleer consumption."
Just open the door. Let it ventilate for some time.
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