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xXuber-NitsheXx
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Posted - 2016.10.24 18:49:55 -
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You look like my mother......I hated my mother.
You said my father was a drunken bum and deserted you for the Caldari Navy.
Well guess what mum, I joined the other day too.
That's two men YOU drove away with your controlling personality.
By the by ,nice ear rings, and you do look like you will find another guy in your life. 8/9
Thieving pirates discuss INTEGRITY; Anarchist gankers give us LAWS; and Whoring merc's cry then blow off clients with INSULTS.
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Big Lynx
7567
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Posted - 2016.10.25 04:31:51 -
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Well, usually I like portraits like that, where faces are a filling almost the whole picture.
yours looks like you have bought a new smartphone and your are too silly to make a good selfie... 5/10 |
Naimh
3
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Posted - 2016.10.25 20:38:54 -
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I'm really enjoying the pallet you got going on here. The deep turquoise against the vivid red play well together.
It looks like Terry from shipping and deliveries accidentally reenacted a Caravaggio scene while on lunch.
Knock Knock
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Fal Shepard
School of Mabon
110
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Posted - 2016.10.25 20:50:38 -
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A unique portrait with lighting and stance that well matches the mood and gives you an ominous appearance. 7/10
From the ashes of our defeat, we will be reborn. With these chains with which we are bound, we will become indivisible. To those who showed us no mercy, we will give no sympathy. For the flames that burn our cities, we will douse in injustice's blood
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Tritan sTr
GoonWaffe Goonswarm Federation
26
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Posted - 2016.10.25 21:41:25 -
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Fal Shepard wrote: A unique portrait with lighting and stance that well matches the mood and gives you an ominous appearance. 7/10
Automatic 8/10 because of the hairstyle.
Not 9 or 10 because the framing/composition could be better. |
lsukone
School of Applied Knowledge Caldari State
0
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Posted - 2016.10.27 03:42:39 -
[15006] - Quote
[quote=Fal Shepard]
Strong state colours. Solid emotive pose. Subtle facial accents - could play with the lighting a bit more!
FLY SAFE
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Paalrina
State War Academy Caldari State
3
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Posted - 2016.10.27 09:48:49 -
[15007] - Quote
Deep in thought.... sad? angry? can't tell... |
Lan Wang
C.Q.B Snuffed Out
3590
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Posted - 2016.10.27 10:58:47 -
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Paalrina wrote:Deep in thought.... sad? angry? can't tell...
really good expression, you look like fun and cant really think of anything id change, 10/10 would date
Loyalist to Angel Cartel
Your killboard reads like a "how to get farmed 101" - Noah Reese
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
549
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Posted - 2016.10.27 18:30:28 -
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The profile creator can be used to make avatars that look almost life-like. Somehow, you've managed to make your avatar look like clip art. 5/10
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn."
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Lan Wang
C.Q.B Snuffed Out
3597
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Posted - 2016.10.29 03:46:40 -
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Neph wrote:The profile creator can be used to make avatars that look almost life-like. Somehow, you've managed to make your avatar look like clip art. 5/10
understand where you're coming from but yourself is a lot like clipart alson, tattoos ruin it, they just look bad
Loyalist to Angel Cartel
Your killboard reads like a "how to get farmed 101" - Noah Reese
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Omega Jovakko
Caldari Colonial Defense Ministry Templis CALSF
592
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Posted - 2016.10.29 04:17:40 -
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Genuinely attracted, it's a scene of mystery and wit, I'm entranced by what might be on her mind. the light makes it look like they're focusing entirely on something and nothing else matters, the red background doesn't necessarily play to the mystery though, maybe something like a dull grey. It feels like the red is actually drawing attention away from the figure.
"that's just blatant Anti-Caldari Propaganda, this Janitor must be arrested at once!"
püépüépüépüépüépüépüépéôn+Pn+ü
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
552
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Posted - 2016.10.29 05:44:15 -
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Lan Wang wrote:Neph wrote:The profile creator can be used to make avatars that look almost life-like. Somehow, you've managed to make your avatar look like clip art. 5/10 understand where you're coming from but yourself is a lot like clipart alson, tattoos ruin it, they just look bad
grr snuff hat snuff
@Omega: 7/10
Framing's not perfect, but mostly I think you need to find a different angle for your head. Maybe a different expression, too. You look mildly congested.
Lighting's good and background game is on point. Show off those Deteis arms.
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn."
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Omega Jovakko
Caldari Colonial Defense Ministry Templis CALSF
597
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Posted - 2016.10.29 05:49:50 -
[15013] - Quote
Neph wrote:Lan Wang wrote:Neph wrote:The profile creator can be used to make avatars that look almost life-like. Somehow, you've managed to make your avatar look like clip art. 5/10 understand where you're coming from but yourself is a lot like clipart alson, tattoos ruin it, they just look bad grr snuff hat snuff @Omega: 7/10 Framing's not perfect, but mostly I think you need to find a different angle for your head. Maybe a different expression, too. You look mildly congested. Lighting's good and background game is on point. Show off those Deteis arms.
Love you too m8
"that's just blatant Anti-Caldari Propaganda, this Janitor must be arrested at once!"
püépüépüépüépüépüépüépéôn+Pn+ü
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Freya loke
Physics Says No Brotherhood of Spacers
0
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Posted - 2016.10.29 17:41:30 -
[15014] - Quote
@omega 7/1o |
Omega Jovakko
Caldari Colonial Defense Ministry Templis CALSF
609
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Posted - 2016.10.29 21:09:47 -
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8/10 @Freya, Total control, almost monarch feel to the picture. I feel the pose could be a bit better positioned, it feels more like forced modeling than a powerful pose. It's MAINLY the left shoulder. It's too high up.
"that's just blatant Anti-Caldari Propaganda, this Janitor must be arrested at once!"
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Ishukone LLC
Xiang-Tian Development
19
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Posted - 2016.10.30 10:02:34 -
[15016] - Quote
With looks like that - you could kill pilots just by glaring at them
Good lighting effects, strong chin, beautiful eyes, a hard 8/10
FLY SAFE
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
560
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Posted - 2016.10.31 00:25:33 -
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There's few avatars that make me stop and double-take. Yours is one of the few. Framing's perfect. Colors are great. Lighting's perfect. That angle works beyond belief--I don't know if I've ever seen that before, nice work.
Model is gorgeous without being waxy and lifeless. Expression is full of character.
10/10
Except for the fact that using that blink is confusing. I'm not sure if she's squinting poutily at the camera (looks a bit too congested for that), if she's squinting into the light (too weak an expression for that), if she's unhappily sleeping (too much tension in the face for that), or what's that actually supposed to be.
Personally, I'd try again so that you can see a bit of eye. Give her a flirty schmilky squinty face, that makes the most sense.
But wow. Good work. Also, Ishukone Okusaika best Okusaika. _o/
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn."
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Ishukone LLC
Xiang-Tian Development
44
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Posted - 2016.10.31 08:06:18 -
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Neph wrote:There's few avatars that make me stop and double-take. Yours is one of the few. Framing's perfect. Colors are great. Lighting's perfect. That angle works beyond belief--I don't know if I've ever seen that before, nice work.
Model is gorgeous without being waxy and lifeless. Expression is full of character.
10/10
Except for the fact that using that blink is confusing. I'm not sure if she's squinting poutily at the camera (looks a bit too congested for that), if she's squinting into the light (too weak an expression for that), if she's unhappily sleeping (too much tension in the face for that), or what's that actually supposed to be.
Personally, I'd try again so that you can see a bit of eye. Give her a flirty schmilky squinty face, that makes the most sense.
But wow. Good work. Also, Ishukone Okusaika best Okusaika. _o/
o_o still overwhelmed by your kind words, Neph I really don't deserve them!
The idea behind her take was simply to replicate the face she'd have when the camera's flash was way too bright LOL Background is the only one I use (53) and it works wonders on most portraits by subtly shifting the focus to the player from the background, and forth again. Lovely colours too, can't beat in-game nebulae :) The angle works well because I think it's a simple one and more of anything - the simplistic nature of standing in front of a camera waiting for a picture to be taken, to be taken aback by the flash - was what I was going for. "******* flash" Model is based after my friend irl :) She's quite pretty, I know, better without her armour I think though Her eyes are open, but a tiny fraction - if I have time (and if I'm drunk enough) I may re-do the expression, but I think I just got it right the first time out of luck! Your Pilot put simply, in my opinion, is the backup beef that is called once Fleet Commanders have lost hope in their top ranking generals and commanders.
That unyearning, dead, murderer of a million, enslaver of untold billions look of pure malicious contempt is what causes onlooking pilots and generals alike to recoil in methodical and unspoken respect in your presence.
That is even before they take notice of your facial tattoos, of which undoubtedly speak and label of forgotten memories, truths and pains of which ultimately bracket your pilot's facial features into one that would command instant, fearful attention from anyone smart enough to of already stop speaking over you. Tough/10!
FLY SAFE
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Morrigan Nighe
399
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Posted - 2016.10.31 08:55:07 -
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Ishukone LLC wrote: The idea behind her take was simply to replicate the face she'd have when the camera's flash was way too bright LOL
Sometimes it just needs an explanation. At first I didn't know what to make of your expression and decided not to rate, but after you told us what you were going for, I have to say, you hit the nail on the head. Lighting and expression work very well with what you were going.
Sadly you'll probably have to explain that a couple times because not everyone will get it. 0 out 2 have gotten it so far. My first impression was, that you might have had a malheur in your suit and it is all wet and sticky in there.
Nice.
10/10 (8/10 before I knew) |
Khergit Deserters
Crom's Angels
4702
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Posted - 2016.10.31 23:18:25 -
[15020] - Quote
Impactful, definitely. Especially the eyes, combined with the drooping lower face expression. Then with the depressing low-intensity blue-scale lighting, seems to achieve what was meant. 8.5/10
Not to influence the guy below me, but-- Cuba Libre! Soy un cartel Che!
Start the bubble machine!
-Lawrence Welk
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Ralph King-Griffin
Devils Rejects 666 The Devil's Warrior Alliance
18889
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Posted - 2016.11.01 00:01:59 -
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**** yeah/10, you need the matching jacket though.
We're Back in Business ,
have your very own Meeny Faced Bastards on call today
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Omega Jovakko
Caldari Colonial Defense Ministry Templis CALSF
647
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Posted - 2016.11.01 00:14:13 -
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9/10, Definitely getting an "Old wise man" feel from you, the background gives it more of a grim-dark feel. Like maybe you weren't the nicest instructor, but gave good advice and genuinely wanted your followers to succeed. I like how the pose shows the age of your character and makes it seem as though you've just kinda given up.
Pls teach me senpai
I could also be wrong, you could just be a mad scientist who likes to dissect captive victims
"Let them try and come. They've got 3 for every 1 of ours, it'll be a great time"
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Itsukame-Zainou Hyperspatial Inquiries Ltd. Arataka Research Consortium
19511
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Posted - 2016.11.02 08:05:24 -
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Humble in a good way, professional and very calmil style while still expressive~ I might suggest lowering the frame a bit, & maybe some change in lighting, but the light angle already matches the background perfectly as well
9/10
"A City made of Dreams is built in heaven"
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Temba Ronin
316
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Posted - 2016.11.02 08:37:43 -
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Casual confidence is projected with an undertone of responsibility based on the crisp military look with just a hint of swagger. 8 out of 10.
The Best Ship In EVE Online Is "Friendship", Power To The Players!
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
564
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Posted - 2016.11.02 08:45:02 -
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Solid everything. Really good, actually. Normally I don't go for those close zooms but this works really well.
Needs more contrast in the lighting, IMO. 9/10, I really like it
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn."
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Taishoku Mayaki
Black Scorpions Inc Circle-Of-Two
4220
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Posted - 2016.11.02 09:29:28 -
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Mhn, is it mean to say I liked the bald Neph better? That one was stunning.
7/10 for Neph with hair :'(
Bald Neph fanclub is sad.
"Right-O, lets get undocked and see what falls off the ship"
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Itsukame-Zainou Hyperspatial Inquiries Ltd. Arataka Research Consortium
19513
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Posted - 2016.11.02 09:40:39 -
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Red, red, red! Usually that look's used by edgy characters and detracts from them, but in your case you've framed a strong scene with the red-on-black motif. The positioning makes sense, the lighting matches the background (the simple ones rarely work so well), and the character's expression is spot on. The only suggestions I could make might be to get matching arm enhancements, maybe the matte black 'vice' arms, and maybe play with the hair a bit (it's already good tho)
9.5/10
"A City made of Dreams is built in heaven"
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Omega Jovakko
Caldari Colonial Defense Ministry Templis CALSF
676
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Posted - 2016.11.02 15:27:32 -
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10/10, zap brannigan
"Let them try and come. They've got 3 for every 1 of ours, it'll be a great time"
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Keno Skir
867
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Posted - 2016.11.04 11:27:17 -
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7/10
Kinda basic in pose but looks at least fairly smart and lit. Guy looks a bit like he was having his photo taken in dress uniform when he noticed the dog humping his flight boot.
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
590
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Posted - 2016.11.07 20:45:24 -
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I see what you're trying to do and I like the idea, but imo it doesn't work. You're too close, and your collar leads the eye to the corner of the frame. I look at your blind eye, then down your tattoo at your mouth, and then your collar leads my gaze out of the frame. Nothing catches the eye and holds it because of the way you're positioned. I'd recommend a slight zoom out, putting your face more in the center of the frame, and turning so the diagonal of the collar is subdued.
Otherwise, excellent details, great colors, good lighting, nice characterization, etc etc. It's really nice but hard to look at. Also, you've got some bizarre clipping coming out of your right cheek.
7/10, needs work
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
"Orte Jaitovalte sitasuyti ne obuetsa useuut ishu. Ketsiak ishiulyn."
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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