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Bellum Eternus
Gallente Death of Virtue
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Posted - 2008.08.09 07:49:00 -
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I really can't stand the way the Dominix looks. It's a great ship gameplay wise, but in my opinion it's just too damned ugly to fly.
So I've decided to do some concept art and redesign it, making it into a thing of beauty, while still keeping with it's original character and general Gallente style.
The good news is that I've decided to involve the Eve community, so that everyone gets a vote and some say in the art direction, so that the end product is a composite of everyone's tastes and style, not just my own personal asthetics.
To get started I've done three very quick side view sketches to get everyone's imagination going:
Dominix Thumbnail Sketches
So if you're interested in participating, please vote for 1 (left ship), 2 (top right), or 3 (bottom right).
All feedback will be appreciated, and more quick sketches will be forthcoming once I get some feedback as to what people are interested in seeing. After a few revisions and a solid design that recieves over 50% of the votes, I'll be producing a hand rendered perspective drawing of the final design.
If it's popular enough I might consider producing some signed prints for framing.
Anyway, I await your comments. Critiques are very welcome. Please keep it constructive. 
Bellum Eternus
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Doctor Hourai
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Posted - 2008.08.09 07:54:00 -
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The number 2 drawing, in the top right, is the best by far, showing signs of higher technology, expected in a drone boat. It also resembles the more cut edges of ships with the Incursus class hull, fitting right in with general Gallente design ethos.
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Tobias Sjodin
Ore Mongers Black Hand.
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Posted - 2008.08.09 08:01:00 -
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Edited by: Tobias Sjodin on 09/08/2008 08:01:41 Hmm, not too bad, though perhaps a bit too similar to the Vexor (clearly a clam)?
Sea-creature shapes seem to be the gallente way, perhaps there's a more graceful amphibian you could draw inspiration from?
Black Hand.
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Karanth
Gallente Eve's Brothers of Destiny FOUNDATI0N
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Posted - 2008.08.09 08:02:00 -
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Wouldn't mind a mix of an Obelisk and a Moros, that would look sweet if done well.
As it is, aside from #2, there is no real definition to the choices, so any real vote will end up being #2. Just saying.
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PanCizin
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Posted - 2008.08.09 08:03:00 -
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2 looks the best
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Bellum Eternus
Gallente Death of Virtue
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Posted - 2008.08.09 08:07:00 -
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Originally by: Karanth Wouldn't mind a mix of an Obelisk and a Moros, that would look sweet if done well. As it is, aside from #2, there is no real definition to the choices, so any real vote will end up being #2. Just saying.
Stuff like the above is what I'm looking for. More input as to what you'd like to see, so I can have some ideas for new approaches. The above three thumbs are just appetizers to get you going.
Bellum Eternus
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slothe
Caldari Murky Inc.
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Posted - 2008.08.09 08:23:00 -
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Edited by: slothe on 09/08/2008 08:24:18 i like the original. strangely. it is ugly, but w/e i dont fly ships based on how they look.
however your designs seem better than the orgiginal.
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SiKong Ma
Prometheus Unbound Incorporated
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Posted - 2008.08.09 08:28:00 -
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Top right looked best... could add a few more parts, otherwise might look too similar to the vexor. Anyway, beats the current dominix :)
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Lance Fighter
Amarr
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Posted - 2008.08.09 08:32:00 -
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Indeed. Top right could use a few more views of, maybe a full detail picture with 3d model to go straight to CCP so they can change the current one ^^
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Devaira
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Posted - 2008.08.09 08:54:00 -
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don't make it look like an overgrown vexor :(
i also think it looks just fine
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Bellum Eternus
Gallente Death of Virtue
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Posted - 2008.08.09 08:56:00 -
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New sketch, about 5 minutes, incorporating the ideas: Moros, Obelisk and 'sea creature'.
Dominix Redesign Sketch 2
Bellum Eternus
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Karanth
Gallente Eve's Brothers of Destiny FOUNDATI0N
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Posted - 2008.08.09 09:12:00 -
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Originally by: Bellum Eternus New sketch, about 5 minutes, incorporating the ideas: Moros, Obelisk and 'sea creature'.
Dominix Redesign Sketch 2
  
GIMME MAH DOMI!
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Tobias Sjodin
Ore Mongers Black Hand.
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Posted - 2008.08.09 09:14:00 -
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Originally by: Bellum Eternus New sketch, about 5 minutes, incorporating the ideas: Moros, Obelisk and 'sea creature'.
Dominix Redesign Sketch 2
I'd fly that any day of the week :D
Black Hand.
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Arthur Frayn
V.O.F.L IRON CORE H E L I C O N
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Posted - 2008.08.09 09:20:00 -
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With a few refinements, getting CCP to use that second sketch would eliminate the only reason I'll never fly a Domi.
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Frug
Repo Industries R.E.P.O.
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Posted - 2008.08.09 09:21:00 -
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Eh, always blows my mind when I see another gallente complaining about how one of their ships looks. Either you don't like teal or you don't like x ship.
Try flying caldari. Then tell me you have anything to complain about.
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Bellum Eternus
Gallente Death of Virtue
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Posted - 2008.08.09 09:23:00 -
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Originally by: Tobias Sjodin
Originally by: Bellum Eternus New sketch, about 5 minutes, incorporating the ideas: Moros, Obelisk and 'sea creature'.
Dominix Redesign Sketch 2
I'd fly that any day of the week :D
Glad you guys like it. See what I can do with a little art direction? 
Give me more feedback and critique and I can refine it or change it. Or give me other ideas entirely and I can do different stuff.
Bellum Eternus
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Bellum Eternus
Gallente Death of Virtue
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Posted - 2008.08.09 09:24:00 -
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Originally by: Frug Eh, always blows my mind when I see another gallente complaining about how one of their ships looks. Either you don't like teal or you don't like x ship.
Try flying caldari. Then tell me you have anything to complain about.
Moa is next on my list. 
Bellum Eternus
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Aakito
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Posted - 2008.08.09 09:39:00 -
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That's some awesome work there. Eve still have so many ugly models im suprised they didn't fix them when relevation premium graphics was worked on. |

Rokima Yashi
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Posted - 2008.08.09 09:43:00 -
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Very nice sketches, I particularly like the second variant. Finally the dominix looks like a ship and not like fat potato 
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Arvald
Caldari Ninjas N Pirates Pirate Coalition
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Posted - 2008.08.09 09:47:00 -
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Originally by: Bellum Eternus New sketch, about 5 minutes, incorporating the ideas: Moros, Obelisk and 'sea creature'.
Dominix Redesign Sketch 2
ill take a dozen
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Grarr Dexx
Amarr Avenging United
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Posted - 2008.08.09 09:55:00 -
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The dominix is a beautiful ship, how dare you redesign it!
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umop 3pisdn
Minmatar Fnck the blob.
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Posted - 2008.08.09 09:56:00 -
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Dominix's Beauty Is All On The Inside.
And i'll Efight anyone who says it isnt pretty.
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The Herrick
Gallente SniggWaffe
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Posted - 2008.08.09 10:12:00 -
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Originally by: Bellum Eternus New sketch, about 5 minutes, incorporating the ideas: Moros, Obelisk and 'sea creature'.
Dominix Redesign Sketch 2
I'd actually bother training for Battleships if it looked like that. ___________________________________________________
Originally by: Blane Xero Screw your stuff, can I have your wife?
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mvndsa
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Posted - 2008.08.09 10:16:00 -
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Originally by: Bellum Eternus New sketch, about 5 minutes, incorporating the ideas: Moros, Obelisk and 'sea creature'.
Dominix Redesign Sketch 2
Nice!!! I love the Domi as in stats and fittings, but i must say the ship is so ugly i have to resist the urge to self destruct it...:)
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Gore Axe
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Posted - 2008.08.09 10:31:00 -
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I like the redesign ideas, although I think we don't want them looking too much like Caldari ships (minimalistic/ rectangular) I do believe Gallente use sea-creature / fish-like shapes in some of their designs. You might wanna keep such accents.
Anyway it should look more like a cool spaceship and less than the doorknob it looks like now. Who is General Failure , and why is he reading my drive ?!!??! |

Nicholas DW
Infusion.
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Posted - 2008.08.09 10:34:00 -
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I like #2 in the original sketch the best; it retains the Domi's shape and feel but adds definition and it does it in Gallente style. Any chance to get a more detailed version of that :P
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Staggerr
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Posted - 2008.08.09 10:39:00 -
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Original Dominix concept art 
Nice sketches, tho I highly doubt CCP will even consider making use of fan made work in their game, keep it up! 
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Tarhos
T.H.U.G L.I.F.E White Core
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Posted - 2008.08.09 11:14:00 -
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Originally by: Bellum Eternus
So if you're interested in participating, please vote for 1 (left ship), 2 (top right), or 3 (bottom right).
#2 of course, but it looks too much like a vexor, not that it would be such a bad thing, but should looks more... evolved, need more work.
About the sketch2, that is not bad, but looks like it still need something, sry i cannot say what :)
Good job btw, i hope ccp will consider it seriously.
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Siigari Kitawa
Gallente The Aduro Protocol
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Posted - 2008.08.09 11:20:00 -
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LEAVE. THE. DOMI. ALONE.
We can't call it space whale or flying turd if we change the way it looks :( and those are homages paid to a wonderful ship.
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Sir Substance
Minmatar Sunspot Requisitions Worlds End Consortium
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Posted - 2008.08.09 11:23:00 -
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the one on the left makes little sense. the top one looks too much like a brutix, and the bottom one looks too much like something from star wars, i cant remember what it was exactly right now.
ok, criticism over.
given that the dominix has a 400m3 hold and a drone bay slightly smaller, i would go for a double-bulb or lobe design, with one a shade smaller then the other. i would make it vertical, somewhat like the nightmare i guess.
sadly, i suck at sketching, but if you like, try incorporating some of that into your sketch. - PvPers always say "GB2WoW". the message is that EVE is hard, and people just need to deal with it. wasn't it funny how when nano's started making it hard for *them*, that all went out the window? |
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