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Jesus Garcia-Lopez
Clockwork Papilio
The Butterfly Effect Alliance
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:31:00 -
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Hello guys I've been trying to make a cute character but I'm a bit stuck right now. So I'm coming here to ask you guys for help!
Heres my progress so far: http://i1307.photobucket.com/albums/s596/hyperxviper/20121227025644_zps7f7855fa.jpg
She should be a smart and pretty girl from a royal family who abandoned her lifestyle to be a capsulier, and one of her distinctive traits is she has a scar on her right temple from an attack by a ferocious predator. |
Kat Sheen
Kaesong Kosmonauts
Test Alliance Please Ignore
1
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:32:00 -
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thats p ******* ugly bro |
Estia Moero
19
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:35:00 -
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See me and take notes on how to make a cute character, you failure! |
Etherealclams
Clams ate my Narwhal
216
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:36:00 -
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jesus christ i almost puked.
(a¦á_a¦â) -á(GîÉGûá_Gûá) (a¦á_a¦á) GÖ¬ GÖ½ GÖ¬ GÖ½ |
Jesus Garcia-Lopez
Clockwork Papilio
The Butterfly Effect Alliance
1
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:37:00 -
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please guys, help me make it better!   |
Helper Pixie
School of Applied Knowledge
Caldari State
1
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:37:00 -
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Real smiles come from the eyes. |
To mare
Advanced Technology
53
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:39:00 -
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Maybe with a salvager II |
Jonah Gravenstein
Holistic Materials Research Council
4610
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:40:00 -
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Kat Sheen wrote:thats p ******* ugly bro
^^ TBQH, looks like the offspring of Sarah Jessica Parker and her clone.
Always bet on stupid, CCP can't patch stupid.
The measure of success in Eve is not monetary worth,
it's how effectively you can bend others to your will. |
Seven Koskanaiken
Deep Core Mining Inc.
Caldari State
38
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:41:00 -
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http://images.starpulse.com/news/bloggers/10/blog_images/pete-burns-1.jpg |
Seven Koskanaiken
Deep Core Mining Inc.
Caldari State
38
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:43:00 -
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Estia Moero wrote:See me and take notes on how to make a cute character, you failure!
dat half white half azn
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Jonah Gravenstein
Holistic Materials Research Council
4610
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:43:00 -
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Seven Koskanaiken wrote:http://images.starpulse.com/news/bloggers/10/blog_images/pete-burns-1.jpg
That's a man? I thought it was Cher on a really bad day
Always bet on stupid, CCP can't patch stupid.
The measure of success in Eve is not monetary worth,
it's how effectively you can bend others to your will. |
Jesus Garcia-Lopez
Clockwork Papilio
The Butterfly Effect Alliance
1
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:45:00 -
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Helper Pixie wrote:Real smiles come from the eyes.
Thanks for the tip!
Do you have any tricks for making prettier faces? I know something feels off but I just can't figure out what it is exactly |
Glathull
Suicidal Panda Tears of Love and Death
14
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:47:00 -
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That thing looks exactly like my last boss. *shudders* |
Mars Theran
Pod Kings
1389
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:49:00 -
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Seven Koskanaiken wrote:http://images.starpulse.com/news/bloggers/10/blog_images/pete-burns-1.jpg
Why did you have to post that? 
Actually, the OP looks a bit like Cher, but only a bit, and it's not that bad. People tend to exaggerate here.
Just give the neck a little more thickness or tone down on the lips. Either will improve it, but not both. Add some body to the face with a cheek pull, and maybe lower the cheekbones a little if you decide to go with the thicker neck rather than the thinner lips. Draw left/right on the top and bottom lips to change their pout. It's a bit much as it is, and you can pull down on the top or up on the bottom to reduce their shape a bit, or from side perspective, push them in or out individually.
Just mould and sculpt.
edit: also pull the brow down above the nose a little to lose the puppy look, and maybe push the sides of the brow out to increase depth. The bottom lip is too big and out of proportion to the top, the nose is fine but I notice it has an arch to it, and it could use a little meat on the end. Far to pointy and incongruous as it is.
Hope that helps. 
zubzubzubzubzubzubzubzub |
Nexus Day
Lustrevik Trade and Travel Bureau
238
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:54:00 -
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Mars Theran wrote:Seven Koskanaiken wrote:http://images.starpulse.com/news/bloggers/10/blog_images/pete-burns-1.jpg Why did you have to post that? Actually, the OP looks a bit like Cher, but only a bit, and it's not that bad. People tend to exaggerate here. Just give the neck a little more thickness or tone down on the lips. Either will improve it, but not both. Add some body to the face with a cheek pull, and maybe lower the cheekbones a little if you decide to go with the thicker neck rather than the thinner lips. Draw left/right on the top and bottom lips to change their pout. It's a bit much as it is, and you can pull down on the top or up on the bottom to reduce their shape a bit, or from side perspective, push them in or out individually. Just mould and sculpt. edit: also pull the brow down above the nose a little to lose the puppy look, and maybe push the sides of the brow out to increase depth. The bottom lip is too big and out of proportion to the top, the nose is fine but I notice it has an arch to it, and it could use a little meat on the end. Far to pointy and incongruous as it is. Hope that helps.
Andre? |
To mare
Advanced Technology
53
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:54:00 -
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Jesus Garcia-Lopez wrote:Helper Pixie wrote:Real smiles come from the eyes. Thanks for the tip! Do you have any tricks for making prettier faces? I know something feels off but I just can't figure out what it is exactly
Make it asian it always work :) |
Jesus Garcia-Lopez
Clockwork Papilio
The Butterfly Effect Alliance
1
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Posted - 2012.12.27 03:59:00 -
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Mars Theran wrote:Seven Koskanaiken wrote:http://images.starpulse.com/news/bloggers/10/blog_images/pete-burns-1.jpg Why did you have to post that? Actually, the OP looks a bit like Cher, but only a bit, and it's not that bad. People tend to exaggerate here. Just give the neck a little more thickness or tone down on the lips. Either will improve it, but not both. Add some body to the face with a cheek pull, and maybe lower the cheekbones a little if you decide to go with the thicker neck rather than the thinner lips. Draw left/right on the top and bottom lips to change their pout. It's a bit much as it is, and you can pull down on the top or up on the bottom to reduce their shape a bit, or from side perspective, push them in or out individually. Just mould and sculpt. edit: also pull the brow down above the nose a little to lose the puppy look, and maybe push the sides of the brow out to increase depth. The bottom lip is too big and out of proportion to the top, the nose is fine but I notice it has an arch to it, and it could use a little meat on the end. Far to pointy and incongruous as it is. Hope that helps.
thanks for the tips!!
http://i1305.photobucket.com/albums/s559/pryox/20121227035724_zpsaa4ec94c.jpg
okay so i tried to follow your directions, and i think it helps! How is this now?
To mare wrote:
Make it asian it always work :)
Sorry I don't really like the asian look. Nothing racist, i'm serious!
-- Jesus Garcia-Lopez |
Acac Sunflyier
Burning Star L.L.C.
361
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:02:00 -
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I could help!
There just isn't anything intresting on the front page of the GD anymore. Yawn! |
Jesus Garcia-Lopez
Clockwork Papilio
The Butterfly Effect Alliance
1
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:04:00 -
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Acac Sunflyier wrote:I could help!
Please do! Im open to all suggestions!
-- Jesus Garcia-Lopez |
Acac Sunflyier
Burning Star L.L.C.
362
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:09:00 -
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One more thing. uman hair, even in old people, don't just have only one color. In dark haired people, you can find different hues and shades. SO I really recommend going two toned in the hairs.
There just isn't anything intresting on the front page of the GD anymore. Yawn! |
Zol Interbottom
Nanotrasen Inc
25
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:14:00 -
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dat bottom lip
Nivin Sajjad > we fly perpetually networked, neural interfaced spaceships yet can't communicate coordinates to each other without physically passing back and forth little pieces of paper. it's weird |
Acac Sunflyier
Burning Star L.L.C.
362
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:15:00 -
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OR! You could just have a lady friend do it for you.
There just isn't anything intresting on the front page of the GD anymore. Yawn! |
Jesus Garcia-Lopez
Clockwork Papilio
The Butterfly Effect Alliance
2
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:17:00 -
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Acac Sunflyier wrote:One more thing. uman hair, even in old people, don't just have only one color. In dark haired people, you can find different hues and shades. SO I really recommend going two toned in the hairs.
Wow, I never noticed that but your right!
Okay so i added another color to the hair. Blue is a pretty cool color don't you think?
http://s1305.beta.photobucket.com/user/pryox/media/20121227041542_zps1aa62f7c.jpg.html
Keep the suggestions coming!!!!
-- Jesus Garcia-Lopez |
Mars Theran
Pod Kings
1390
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:20:00 -
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Jesus Garcia-Lopez wrote:Mars Theran wrote:Seven Koskanaiken wrote:http://images.starpulse.com/news/bloggers/10/blog_images/pete-burns-1.jpg Why did you have to post that? Actually, the OP looks a bit like Cher, but only a bit, and it's not that bad. People tend to exaggerate here. Just give the neck a little more thickness or tone down on the lips. Either will improve it, but not both. Add some body to the face with a cheek pull, and maybe lower the cheekbones a little if you decide to go with the thicker neck rather than the thinner lips. Draw left/right on the top and bottom lips to change their pout. It's a bit much as it is, and you can pull down on the top or up on the bottom to reduce their shape a bit, or from side perspective, push them in or out individually. Just mould and sculpt. edit: also pull the brow down above the nose a little to lose the puppy look, and maybe push the sides of the brow out to increase depth. The bottom lip is too big and out of proportion to the top, the nose is fine but I notice it has an arch to it, and it could use a little meat on the end. Far to pointy and incongruous as it is. Hope that helps. thanks for the tips!! http://i1305.photobucket.com/albums/s559/pryox/20121227035724_zpsaa4ec94c.jpgokay so i tried to follow your directions, and i think it helps! How is this now? To mare wrote:
Make it asian it always work :)
Sorry I don't really like the asian look. Nothing racist, i'm serious! -- Jesus Garcia-Lopez
Cuter. Now you just need to widen the chin a bit, bring that brow down in the middle or lift it outside, grab and pull the nostrils out just a bit and maybe add a little thickness to the neck, but not much.
..on second thought, leave the brows alone, they're probably fine now. 
zubzubzubzubzubzubzubzub |
Valkris Arkayne
Perkone
Caldari State
85
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:25:00 -
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'Cute' is going to be difficult to agree on, since everyone has a different set of features they prefer. I do a lot of professional character art and have some suggestions... but please feel free to ignore them all :)
- Firstly, she looks distinctly worried. You need to made sure the inside points on the eyebrows aren't the highest point. Bring down and seperate the inner portions of the eyebrow.
- Second, move the eyebrwos apart a little. You can actually see the worry-wrinkles in her brow - that's not very appealing (imo).
- Next, her nasal bridge is too strong - a characteristic that usually comes with age. If you soften the bridge some, she'll look younger and stereotypically 'cuter'.
- The tip of her nose seems a bit low, another characteristic that appears with age. If you raise the tip up a little, she'll look younger.
- Have her engage the viewer by looking at us, as opposed to looking at some off-camera interest. It's more interesting and engaging if she's looking at us, as if the viewer is the most interesting subject at the moment. It's all about subtle.
- Her teeth are not attractive. I'd recommend closing her mouth a bit more.
- If possible, I'd recommend getting rid of the lines between her cheeks and mouth. They imply more worry/age.
Just a few ideas. Good luck! :) |
Jesus Garcia-Lopez
Clockwork Papilio
The Butterfly Effect Alliance
2
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:27:00 -
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Mars Theran wrote:Cuter. Now you just need to widen the chin a bit, bring that brow down in the middle or lift it outside, grab and pull the nostrils out just a bit and maybe add a little thickness to the neck, but not much.
http://i1305.photobucket.com/albums/s559/pryox/20121227042555_zps63b6dac7.jpg
Okay done!
I can't make the neck any wider, i think its already at max!    |
SmilingVagrant
GoonWaffe
Goonswarm Federation
1115
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:29:00 -
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Looks like an asian downs baby. Gaze upon my mug in awe. |
The Rener
Canadian Operations
Yulai Federation
1
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:31:00 -
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dat lighting, makes her eyes way too dark! |
Mars Theran
Pod Kings
1390
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Posted - 2012.12.27 04:56:00 -
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Narrowing the jaw and cheekbones will compensate for the narrowness of the neck. Also, whatever you did to her eyes took away all the cute. Might want to back track the history a bit. 
Chins too wide now too.
zubzubzubzubzubzubzubzub |
Jesus Garcia-Lopez
Clockwork Papilio
The Butterfly Effect Alliance
2
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Posted - 2012.12.27 05:11:00 -
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Valkris Arkayne wrote:'Cute' is going to be difficult to agree on, since everyone has a different set of features they prefer. I do a lot of professional character art and have some suggestions... but please feel free to ignore them all :)
- Firstly, she looks distinctly worried. You need to made sure the inside points on the eyebrows aren't the highest point. Bring down and seperate the inner portions of the eyebrow.
- Second, move the eyebrwos apart a little. You can actually see the worry-wrinkles in her brow - that's not very appealing (imo).
- Next, her nasal bridge is too strong - a characteristic that usually comes with age. If you soften the bridge some, she'll look younger and stereotypically 'cuter'.
- The tip of her nose seems a bit low, another characteristic that appears with age. If you raise the tip up a little, she'll look younger.
- Have her engage the viewer by looking at us, as opposed to looking at some off-camera interest. It's more interesting and engaging if she's looking at us, as if the viewer is the most interesting subject at the moment. It's all about subtle.
- Her teeth are not attractive. I'd recommend closing her mouth a bit more.
- If possible, I'd recommend getting rid of the lines between her cheeks and mouth. They imply more worry/age.
Just a few ideas. Good luck! :)
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