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Zimmy Zeta
Red Federation RvB - RED Federation
21232
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Posted - 2013.06.01 20:01:00 -
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Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:So you can manage to smile without looking psycho? I wouldn't call you cute and not even handsome, but that's an attractive face in that pose/angle. Extreme makeup is extreme and Ish would disapprove, but it's me rating so will say 9/10.
Looking psycho is so 2012.... Cute and likable is the new psycho :)
The hell did you do to Inda? Normally I would say decent picture, but hey, we both know that you can do much better than this gray in gray thing. Inda used to be one of the best avatars here. The pose is rather boring and it's lacking expression. Come on, what's the matter, you are good with making avatars, aren't you even trying anymore? Give her an eciting colour pattern, either zoom out for a more interesting pose or chose an exotic angle and some more expression if you want to keep it as a closeup.
Just think of how bad an average post by me is, and then realize half of them are even worse |

Indahmawar Fazmarai
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Posted - 2013.06.01 21:50:00 -
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Zimmy Zeta wrote:Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:So you can manage to smile without looking psycho? I wouldn't call you cute and not even handsome, but that's an attractive face in that pose/angle. Extreme makeup is extreme and Ish would disapprove, but it's me rating so will say 9/10. Looking psycho is so 2012.... Cute and likable is the new psycho :) The hell did you do to Inda? Normally I would say decent picture, but hey, we both know that you can do much better than this gray in gray thing. Inda used to be one of the best avatars here. The pose is rather boring and it's lacking expression. Come on, what's the matter, you are good with making avatars, aren't you even trying anymore? Give her an exciting colour pattern, either zoom out for a more interesting pose or chose an exotic angle and some more expression if you want to keep it as a closeup.
Challenge accepted. 
I was aiming for something like this, but the eyes couldn't work in a thousand years (thank you, CCP) so I tinkered with it for an hour and... well, you'll see when it goes live. Skip rating unless you see her wearing a white shirt. The Greater Fool Bar-áis now open for business, 24/7. Come and have drinks and fun somewhere between RL and New Eden!-áIngame chat channel: The Greater Fool Bar |

Baby ChuChu
Ice Cream Asylum
1490
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Posted - 2013.06.01 22:47:00 -
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@Ind
I like a lot more than your old one. Can't really think of anything I don't like about it. I mean, a different background probably wouldn't hurt and maybe a smirk/smile might also help a bit, but regardless, it's good. Very good. 9.8/10 |

Macgun90
Cold Nova Industries
3
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Posted - 2013.06.02 05:57:00 -
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Not a fan of the hair style and the lipstick/hair color. The black leather vest is cool though and the lighting good but overall has room for improvment.
6/10 ChuChu Likes: Guns, beer, and Navy Issue ships Dislikes: People who cant dock their ships right "Stop taking up two spaces you moron!" Proud supporter of the Caldari Navy-á
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Akirei Scytale
Test Alliance Please Ignore
3252
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Posted - 2013.06.02 06:52:00 -
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Macgun90 wrote:Not a fan of the hair style and the lipstick/hair color. The black leather vest is cool though and the lighting good but overall has room for improvment.
6/10 ChuChu
I'd say 6/10. The expression is decent but everything feels so generic, from the pose to the outfit to the artificial looking lighting. A little effort could improve it so much. TEST Alliance BEST Alliance |

Kirjava
Otella Redevelopment Agency
16077
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Posted - 2013.06.02 06:57:00 -
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I'm getting that creepy child soldier vibe, the kind that guts people and takes the hands back to prove their kills and get sweets as a reward.
8/10
Haruhiists - Overloading Out of Pod discussions since 2007. Cardinal Kirjava - Redeclaring the Crusade in the name of the Goddess since 2012. /S¦¦GùòGÇ+GÇ+GùòS¦¦\ |

Mahasti
Hedion University Amarr Empire
0
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Posted - 2013.06.02 08:10:00 -
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Newbie butting in!
You remind me of a South African helicopter pilot I flew with once. He was badass. 7/10. |

Selena Brutor
Pator Tech School Minmatar Republic
0
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Posted - 2013.06.02 08:26:00 -
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Mahasti wrote:Newbie butting in!
You remind me of a South African helicopter pilot I flew with once. He was badass. 7/10. 8/10 very smart, competent, tough looking chick. |

Indahmawar Fazmarai
2284
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Posted - 2013.06.02 09:46:00 -
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So what do we have here? An overdone avatar. But that's easy to fix. Tone down the lipstick color intensity and shine, remove all that metal junk on your face and just let your freckles do the job, they're awesome. Tone down the tattoo (like 60% intensity) and give a try to brown, you may like it. Eyeliner could go, but better tone it down a tad. Really, use your freckles instead of make up. Your decoletage is awesome hot and it could get hotter with some lighting tricks, albeit that is way more difficult to pull out so don't touch it. Will say 7/10 but you have a lot of potential there. The Greater Fool Bar-áis now open for business, 24/7. Come and have drinks and fun somewhere between RL and New Eden!-áIngame chat channel: The Greater Fool Bar |

Chloe Kaltana
Kaltana Industries
276
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Posted - 2013.06.02 10:03:00 -
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Zimmy was right! That's much much better now! (although I really liked the grey one with that rising sun background)
It looks like you..uhm...she's holding the camera with her left arm, that adds great to the liveliness in the portrait. =)
Can't really see anything wrong here, so you get a round 10 ^-^ OOPE Pinup Calendar application thread
The Kaltana Blood Horse Tribe: www.my-eve.com/corporation/Kaltana%20Industries |
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Baby ChuChu
Ice Cream Asylum
1491
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Posted - 2013.06.02 14:48:00 -
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@Chloe
Not one of your better ones, in my opinion. Face is a bit chubby and the whole thing doesn't really have much personality overall. Just kinda boring honestly :(
6/10 |

Saec
Sebiestor Tribe Minmatar Republic
2
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Posted - 2013.06.03 10:15:00 -
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Baby ChuChu wrote:@Chloe
Not one of your better ones, in my opinion. Face is a bit chubby and the whole thing doesn't really have much personality overall. Just kinda boring honestly :(
6/10
You look like a jersey girl lol. Interesting expression though she seems a little confused....
7/10 |

Digi Eristoff
Pavillon Rouge
6
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Posted - 2013.06.03 10:15:00 -
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Baby ChuChu wrote:@Chloe
Not one of your better ones, in my opinion. Face is a bit chubby and the whole thing doesn't really have much personality overall. Just kinda boring honestly :(
6/10
Rally beautiful pic, the makeup makes your eyes really attractive. I'm not really fan of this haircut but on you it looks really good.
9/10 "Playing Minmatar is like throwing anything you find in the opponent's face." - Unknown |

Zimmy Zeta
Red Federation RvB - RED Federation
21283
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Posted - 2013.06.03 14:14:00 -
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Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:words
Why hello there...you cannot fathom how much more I like the new and upgraded Inda. One minor point, still: the eyes are not exactly looking at the camera but slightly too low. Not a big deal, I know how difficult it is and I think Zimmy looks also somewhat too deep. But yeah, 10/10, would rate again
@ Digi: I rated you already, no? But now you haz new haircut, methinks. I still love the use of lights and shadows, maybe you should try to get some more harsh light/dark contrasts into the picture. Something tells me that your avatar should look as if he came straight out of Frank Miller's Sin City, so go for the contrasts! 9/10 Just think of how bad an average post by me is, and then realize half of them are even worse |

Ariel Dawn
F9X
969
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Posted - 2013.06.04 01:21:00 -
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Really like it, getting a smile to work is pretty frustrating in portraits and yours fits very well! |

Commissar Kate
Ishuk-Raata Enforcement Directive
14305
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Posted - 2013.06.04 02:03:00 -
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My eyessss. Thats some bright hair there.
7/10
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Baby ChuChu
Ice Cream Asylum
1493
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Posted - 2013.06.04 02:42:00 -
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@Kate
Nooooooooooo what have you doooooooooooone?! The other one was so much better. Shame, no 10/10 out for you.
No, you only get an 9/10. Seriously though, still has that whole simplistic beauty-vibe going on. Not a show-stopper, but definitely still looks very good. I prefer the old one, but I can live with seeing this one around too. |

Erica Dusette
Caldari State Volunteer Provost
3
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Posted - 2013.06.04 03:26:00 -
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Cute, and somewhat sultry! 8/10  |

Eurydia Vespasian
Nova Insula Mining and Industrial
3390
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Posted - 2013.06.04 03:51:00 -
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Are alts being made just to rate each other these days? To what dark times do we stoop? |

Erica Dusette
Caldari State Volunteer Provost
3
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Posted - 2013.06.04 04:05:00 -
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Nice work, I always found it hard to nail a nice av with black hair, party due to the background options I think. 
Very pretty, maybe coulda zoomed in a touch more to do the face justice though.
Overall 8/10, but I'mma have to deduct a point for failing to rate and another point for inaccurate alt-accusations, so 6/10. |
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Selena Brutor
Pator Tech School Minmatar Republic
0
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Posted - 2013.06.04 04:55:00 -
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Erica Dusette wrote:Nice work, I always found it hard to nail a nice av with black hair, party due to the background options I think.  Very pretty, maybe coulda zoomed in a touch more to do the face justice though. Overall 8/10, but I'mma have to deduct a point for failing to rate and another point for inaccurate alt-accusations, so 6/10. SImple but cute, with a well sculpted face. 8/10.
Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:So what do we have here? An overdone avatar. But that's easy to fix. Tone down the lipstick color intensity and shine, remove all that metal junk on your face and just let your freckles do the job, they're awesome. Tone down the tattoo (like 60% intensity) and give a try to brown, you may like it. Eyeliner could go, but better tone it down a tad. Really, use your freckles instead of make up. Your decoletage is awesome hot and it could get hotter with some lighting tricks, albeit that is way more difficult to pull out so don't touch it. Will say 7/10 but you have a lot of potential there. Overdone is kind of the point though. I did try your suggestions but I ended up liking it less. It's a virtual character, why not be excessive? Changed the eyeliner a bit, lipstick color, clothing, background, and lighting. |

Commissar Kate
Ishuk-Raata Enforcement Directive
14341
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Posted - 2013.06.04 05:14:00 -
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Selena Brutor wrote:Erica Dusette wrote:Nice work, I always found it hard to nail a nice av with black hair, party due to the background options I think.  Very pretty, maybe coulda zoomed in a touch more to do the face justice though. Overall 8/10, but I'mma have to deduct a point for failing to rate and another point for inaccurate alt-accusations, so 6/10. SImple but cute, with a well sculpted face. 8/10. Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:So what do we have here? An overdone avatar. But that's easy to fix. Tone down the lipstick color intensity and shine, remove all that metal junk on your face and just let your freckles do the job, they're awesome. Tone down the tattoo (like 60% intensity) and give a try to brown, you may like it. Eyeliner could go, but better tone it down a tad. Really, use your freckles instead of make up. Your decoletage is awesome hot and it could get hotter with some lighting tricks, albeit that is way more difficult to pull out so don't touch it. Will say 7/10 but you have a lot of potential there. Overdone is kind of the point though. I did try your suggestions but I ended up liking it less. It's a virtual character, why not be excessive? Changed the eyeliner a bit, lipstick color, clothing, background, and lighting.
I've used no makeup a lot in the past, If you get the lighting and the pose just right it can look very nice and natural.
@Selena Brutor
7/10 |

Kairavi Mrithyakara
New Sepulchral Monolith
1
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Posted - 2013.06.04 06:22:00 -
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Coming from someone with as beautifully sculpted a character as yours (10+/10 with ease, I might add, love that pose and aloof gaze) that means a lot, thank you! I'll work on finding a more suitable backdrop, one that matches the lighting.
That's a lovely character. I'd like to suggest using a different lighting preset, maybe one that throws sharper shadows. Also maybe change the pose (the current one makes it look like she's hunching). 8.5/10. |

Akirei Scytale
Test Alliance Please Ignore
3280
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Posted - 2013.06.04 06:29:00 -
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Kairavi Mrithyakara wrote:Coming from someone with as beautifully sculpted a character as yours (10+/10 with ease, I might add, love that pose and aloof gaze) that means a lot, thank you! I'll work on finding a more suitable backdrop, one that matches the lighting. That's a lovely character. I'd like to suggest using a different lighting preset, maybe one that throws sharper shadows. Also maybe change the pose (the current one makes it look like she's hunching). 8.5/10.
I like the look. Tattoos and hair dye go very well together. It does seem a little bright for her "attitude" though. I'd say 8.5-9/10 TEST Alliance BEST Alliance |

Indahmawar Fazmarai
2291
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Posted - 2013.06.04 06:42:00 -
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Kairavi Mrithyakara wrote:
Framing - check Lighting - check Pose - check Face traits - check Expression - check Hair & make up - check Background - meh
9.5/10 so far
But then...
- Fugly metal dirt drawing attention and then scattering it across 5 different focus points for no gain at all: -1 - Doing that on a professional looking portrait: -0.5 for poor judgement
That's 8/10.
I don't get it, admittedly. Why do people put so many metal junk on what would be a perfect portrait without it?  The Greater Fool Bar-áis now open for business, 24/7. Come and have drinks and fun somewhere between RL and New Eden!-áIngame chat channel: The Greater Fool Bar |

Akirei Scytale
Test Alliance Please Ignore
3280
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Posted - 2013.06.04 06:45:00 -
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Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:I don't get it, admittedly. Why do people put so many metal junk on what would be a perfect portrait without it? 
Probably because tastes are subjective. TEST Alliance BEST Alliance |

Indahmawar Fazmarai
2291
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Posted - 2013.06.04 06:58:00 -
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Zimmy Zeta wrote:Indahmawar Fazmarai wrote:words Why hello there...you cannot fathom how much more I like the new and upgraded Inda. One minor point, still: the eyes are not exactly looking at the camera but slightly too low. Not a big deal, I know how difficult it is and I think Zimmy looks also somewhat too deep. But yeah, 10/10, would rate again  (...)
Heh, fixed that before Odyssey is deployed. The eyes were right but the camera had slipped up. I already noticed that something was wrong with her attitude but couldn't put my finger on it, now with a lower camera angle she's OK. The Greater Fool Bar-áis now open for business, 24/7. Come and have drinks and fun somewhere between RL and New Eden!-áIngame chat channel: The Greater Fool Bar |

Alice Saki
Suddenly Spaced Out Suddenly Spaceships.
60501
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Posted - 2013.06.04 07:37:00 -
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Very Nice, This women keep the bar stocked and happy. Her Avatar is also excellent... But tell her to stop looking at me so disapprovingly 
9/10
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Sahara Wildcat
Sahara Wildcat Corporation
383
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Posted - 2013.06.04 16:23:00 -
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@Kairavi Mrithyakara - 10/10 flawless beauty Sahara Wildcat |

Commissar Kate
Ishuk-Raata Enforcement Directive
14638
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Posted - 2013.06.04 16:43:00 -
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3 people with the same haircut in a row.
@Sarah
9/10 |
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