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Emily Florence Nightingale
Snuff Box Snuffed Out
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Posted - 2016.07.15 16:59:06 -
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I like the darker and moodier avatars.
i would have gone for a closer zoom
8/10
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Zuzmaw
Yamagata Syndicate Circle-Of-Two
33
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Posted - 2016.07.15 17:48:04 -
[14852] - Quote
You look sad, or worried. other than that,
7/10 |
Morrigan Nighe
141
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Posted - 2016.07.15 17:57:05 -
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Emily Florence Nightingale wrote:
I really like her. You like moody, you made moody. Nicely done mournful expression.
There are a couple flaws though in my opinion. It starts with the nose piercing which looks awkward. Try different models or get rid of it all together. She can wear it, but she also doesn't need to. She has a chic style with or without it. Kudos for the haircut. Works really nicely here.
The eye shadows are a little over the top in my opinion and last but not least the background. The colours don't go too well with the colours you used on her.
8/10
/edit:
Well I took too long again.
I like this one a lot, apart from that ridiculous eye thingy. Looks hideous.
9/10 |
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
393
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Posted - 2016.07.15 19:52:28 -
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I've always loved this one, and the facial implants really help it. Not so sure about that right eye, though... it looks weird: is that just shadow? Messed up clipping?
Not sure what it is, but I wish I could see that other eye a bit better. Love the texture, as always, though. 9/10
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Morrigan Nighe
141
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Posted - 2016.07.15 20:23:47 -
[14855] - Quote
I guess I see what you are talking about. About the upper eye? Where there are no eyelashes? Yeah, I guess I pulled the eyebrow down too much. Fixed it. Thanks.
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Faulker Gath'nor
Templar Directorate Holdings United Interests
533
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Posted - 2016.07.19 13:06:27 -
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The tattoos' and harsh lighting really amp up this portrait. There is a real "Clockwork Orange" vibe going on... and little hope of rehabilitation... Love it. I am unsure of the background, but nothing springs to mind that I would consider "a better fit".
9/10
(And as for Neph, per your rate request, I must rate also as a 9/10 for such a dark, brooding portrait. The heavy facial tattoos are at the same time busy, but provide an indication of waters than run deep and dark inside. This portrait is how "origin stories" get started.) |
Valkin Mordirc
2194
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Posted - 2016.07.19 17:36:02 -
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#Monocle #1%er #Noroomforuspoors
Honestly though, asides from the monocle. It looks very business like. Plain but formal. Fits well with the monocle. However me person am a fan of the more extravagant sorta looks.
8/10.
#DeleteTheWeak
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Jean Luc Clermont
Snuff Box Snuffed Out
20
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Posted - 2016.07.21 14:17:55 -
[14858] - Quote
If robert smith from The Cure lived in New Eden
Like the ink, though your avatar looks totally disinterested..
I statement on the youth of today?
5/10 |
Cosma Karma
7
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Posted - 2016.07.23 07:23:19 -
[14859] - Quote
Your face is splendid, the shadows are nicely done, but your armour is just like every other armour and therefore quite boring. Why you reserve a good 50% of your avatar picture for that armour is beyond me. It completely overshadows your face, in my opinion, because it feels so massive.
7/10 (10/10 for the face, I like his friendly look) |
Morgan Agrivar
Peace.Keepers
376
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Posted - 2016.07.25 02:45:41 -
[14860] - Quote
Cosma Karma wrote:Your face is splendid, the shadows are nicely done, but your armour is just like every other armour and therefore quite boring. Almost 50% of your avatar is reserved for your armour. It completely overshadows your face, in my opinion, because it feels so massive. 7/10 (10/10 for the face, I like his friendly look) Like a queen. Regal in stature and looks.
8/10
This would cure me of the fear...
CCP Explorer liked you forum post. Now my life is complete...
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Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
410
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Posted - 2016.07.25 15:03:11 -
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Framing is... well, really quite bad. You've very very zoomed out--which isn't necessarily a bad thing--but for whatever reason, 70% of your avatar is just background. No details or character are visible. Fill the frame. 3/10
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Uriel Paradisi Anteovnuecci
Itsukame-Zainou Hyperspatial Inquiries Ltd. Arataka Research Consortium
19489
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Posted - 2016.07.26 01:53:28 -
[14862] - Quote
Overall, pretty much perfect imo~ My only suggestion is to maybe change the lighting angle in order to accentuate the face more against the background.
9/10
"A City made of Dreams is built in heaven"
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Vistant
Imperial Shipment Amarr Empire
0
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Posted - 2016.07.27 18:56:57 -
[14863] - Quote
The head tilt and spot light give you a kind of quizzical or confused look.
7/10 |
Morrigan Nighe
145
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Posted - 2016.07.30 09:04:15 -
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The character modelling is good as is. The lighting is ok too. I like all the details on the cheeks. I don't care too much for the chin piercings. I feel they don't fit in with the rest. Maybe try a different kind.
What holds this character back the most though, is the lack of an interesting pose and expression.
7/10 |
Fal Shepard
School of Mabon
104
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Posted - 2016.07.30 11:41:55 -
[14865] - Quote
Definitely a unique look with good lighting and posture, and always a fan of facial tattoos. However the thing on your head looks like a bandana and makes you look like something out of the street fighter series. 7/10
From the ashes of our defeat, we will be reborn. With these chains with which we are bound, we will become indivisible. To those who showed us no mercy, we will give no sympathy. For the flames that burn our cities, we will douse in injustice's blood
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Vortexo VonBrenner
Raumfahrer Spiff Rakett Piloot Anslutning
2390
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Posted - 2016.07.30 16:01:19 -
[14866] - Quote
@ fat shepard - Like it a lot. Really gives off a proper minmatar vibe. 9/10
@ morrigan nighe - bladerunner futuristic chic. *thumbsup 8/10
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EvE quick reference pdf
A wise man sums up EvE
Smoke me a Kipper...
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Teinyhr
Ourumur
600
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Posted - 2016.07.31 23:25:32 -
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I really don't know. Lighting is ok, pose is okish, but doesn't just "click" for me. 6/10. |
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
417
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Posted - 2016.08.01 00:01:18 -
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Wow. Very striking. Very orange. I'm... not really sure what to make of your expression? It looks like you're telling off an annoying child? I mean, it's interesting, but...
The best of these types of expressions, you look closer and realize there's actually a lot of character involved. Yours is just, well, confusing, and as dynamic as somebody trying to quietly push out a big poop. 5/10, I guess.
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Teinyhr
Ourumur
600
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Posted - 2016.08.01 10:20:39 -
[14869] - Quote
Wow, that was kind of harsh...
Same as previous, don't find much else to say but I like your eyes. 6/10. |
Jean Luc Clermont
Snuff Box Snuffed Out
25
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Posted - 2016.08.01 11:53:01 -
[14870] - Quote
Big fan of Animated movies here.
As such, i really rather like this Avatar.
Reminds me a little of Ghost in The Shell a little, a major plus.. ironicaly, not sure the face tattoos work so well so 8/10
good work
p.s. Orange is good |
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Taishoku Mayaki
State War Academy Caldari State
766
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Posted - 2016.08.01 18:37:19 -
[14871] - Quote
Commander Shepard with face tattoos 10/10 would ship again. |
Dwai Attic
Infinite Point Test Alliance Please Ignore
9
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Posted - 2016.08.07 16:56:27 -
[14872] - Quote
I like your dress.
8/10 |
Morrigan Nighe
147
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Posted - 2016.08.09 15:32:56 -
[14873] - Quote
Not bad, but not outstanding either. Feels too much like an ID shot.
7/10 |
Vega77
Haze Inc. No Handlebars.
0
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Posted - 2016.08.11 10:13:43 -
[14874] - Quote
The glasses do the work. So sexy :)
9/10 |
Faulker Gath'nor
Templar Directorate Holdings United Interests
548
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Posted - 2016.08.11 11:12:01 -
[14875] - Quote
I say the portrait is excellent, it has an "action movie poster" kind of feel... along with the bold tattoo work, and clean simple wardrobe choices, this is good. Maybe tinker with the lighting a little, but in all honesty you may not improve it much because it is already top end.
9/10 |
Romar Agent
Deep Core Mining Inc. Caldari State
76
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Posted - 2016.08.20 15:29:12 -
[14876] - Quote
Faulker Gath'nor - I'm getting a Ghengis Khan vibe in ways of authority - very distinguished looks on top of a feral base.
An interesting face with multiple layers of details - you have to look more than twice.
Very nice composition of colour.
makes 8/10 |
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
428
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Posted - 2016.08.21 02:32:53 -
[14877] - Quote
Interesting... bizarre angle, not that I mind it. Frankly, I feel like the framing could be worked on--there's a lot of background there, and the lighting is painfully harsh. Little detail on the face. Not bad though.
7/10 zoomed out 5/10 zoomed in
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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Kala Azur
Royal Amarr Institute Amarr Empire
19
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Posted - 2016.08.21 06:50:58 -
[14878] - Quote
To critique first: There's something ever so slightly off with the cheek bones, though that's probably just me.
Now for the praise: Lighting is great, and the eyes are fantastic. While I'm not usually a fan of tattoos, in this case, I will definitely make an exception.
8/10, though teetering on a 9. |
Shahira
Imperial Academy Amarr Empire
7
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Posted - 2016.08.21 14:10:51 -
[14879] - Quote
Kala Azur wrote:To critique first: There's something ever so slightly off with the cheek bones, though that's probably just me.
Now for the praise: Lighting is great, and the eyes are fantastic. While I'm not usually a fan of tattoos, in this case, I will definitely make an exception.
8/10, though teetering on a 9.
Very nice colour theme, and the character looks well sculpted. Perhaps the angle of the head is a bit exaggerated in attempting to emphasize this, though. The background works well with the colours, but its features distract from the character with the current positioning.
Overall, a good portrait with even more potential. 8/10 |
Neph
Crimson Serpent Syndicate Heiian Conglomerate
439
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Posted - 2016.08.23 04:14:18 -
[14880] - Quote
Recognisable and beautiful at a small size, flawless at a large. A rare 10/10.
~ Gariushi YC110 // Midular YC115 // Yanala YC115 ~
GÇ£Sitasutone nabeliwatsa-shogi; Otre Jaitovalte hessami-ettogi useuus sufat. Eika, hakkit garuketsi.GÇ¥
-Yakiya Tovil-Toba-taisoka
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