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Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.05.15 01:38:00 -
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Hello everyone
I remember seeing, ages ago, a thread where someone was trying to compile a user manual for a Rifter. I never heard anything further on that project. Well I've "borrowed" that person's idea and made a user manual for the Kestrel.
It's still work in progress at the moment but I really wanted to get some feedback on it before I polished it off. Please could you lovely people give me whatever comments and suggestions you feel appropriate.
Download the Kestrel Owner's Manual - updated 2008/05/15
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Orin Valari
Caldari The Sycorax Syndicate The Cooperative
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Posted - 2008.05.15 01:45:00 -
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hahaha this rules.
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Hanneshannes
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Posted - 2008.05.15 01:51:00 -
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Edited by: Hanneshannes on 15/05/2008 01:51:43 Looks really good :)
Btw, isn't Quickfit sort of out-dated?
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Ryuu Katsu
Perkone
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Posted - 2008.05.15 01:53:00 -
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Ahw... Kessie. 
Great manual for Kestrel pilots, good work on that one. ======================== Real men structure tank.
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Katerina M
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Posted - 2008.05.15 01:57:00 -
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pretty sweet :)
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Mazakura
Republic University
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Posted - 2008.05.15 01:59:00 -
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Not bad. Can you do a stabber next?
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Cors
It's A Trap
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Posted - 2008.05.15 04:06:00 -
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Very nice work.
Keep it up, expand to other ships.
Maybe CCP should hire you(Contract out to you) the creation of an equivilent manual for all ships in the game. (HINT HINT CCP)
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Tyria Sharken
Minmatar TalCorp Enterprises Einherjar Alliance
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Posted - 2008.05.15 04:17:00 -
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could also try a 'different' aproach to the Kestrel.. Use it to fire on drones in Fleet engagements (trust me.. unless your shooting at another frigate your light missles aint gonna hurt a bigger ship 'mutch'.. BUT.. people start gettign worried when their support/combat drones start dissapearing. Here's something 'close' to what i have on my kestrel.
[Kestrel, Drone Killer vr2] Ballistic Control System I Beta Hull Mod Overdrive Injector
Barton Reactor Capacitor Recharger I Phased Weapon Navigation Array Generation Extron
Standard Missile Launcher I, Sabretooth Light Missile Standard Missile Launcher I, Sabretooth Light Missile Standard Missile Launcher I, Sabretooth Light Missile Standard Missile Launcher I, Sabretooth Light Missile
useing standard launchers cause im to cheep to buy the better ones =D But it works rather well at poping drones... Being a frigate in a fleet engagement i tend to get ignored unless im warp-jamming someone people always tend to target the bigest 'threat' first so ive been free to fire on drones (managed to pop a few tech 2's and even had someoen in a Enimy fleet STOP repping his buddy and instead started repping his own drones! lol. Could also possibly be used as a anti-fighter platform.. as a Kestral 'can' be a pain to cruisers.. and thats basicaly what a fighter is. and they move slow enough that the light missles whont have any trouble hitting them. --------------------------------------------- "Only two great species on this planet take part in massive, organized warfare. Men, and ants." |

Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.05.15 10:20:00 -
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thanks for all your messages of support, i was a little worried that I was the only person who thought it was a good idea.
Originally by: Hanneshannes Btw, isn't Quickfit sort of out-dated?
that's true, i hadn't checked when i was compiling it. I'll get that removed next edition.
Originally by: Mazakura Can you do a stabber next?
i can try, i only really feel comfortable making manuals for ships I have flown. maybe we could have a convo at some point and you can do some consulting work for me 
Originally by: Cors Maybe CCP should hire you(Contract out to you) the creation of an equivilent manual for all ships in the game. (HINT HINT CCP)
lol, I wish! btw CCP if you are reading this i finish my degree at the end of june...
Originally by: Tyria Sharken Here's something 'close' to what i have on my kestrel.
wouldn't rockets be a better choice on a drone killer? and an AB/MWD?
Azia Burgi http://azia.geekandproud.co.uk BP Profit Calculator EVE Cemetery |

Verone
Veto Corp
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Posted - 2008.05.15 10:36:00 -
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lol, that's awesome 
\o/ EON FICTION WRITER OF THE YEAR! \o/
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Pariah Ptah
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Posted - 2008.05.15 11:03:00 -
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Nice work, even with the "stuff" areas.
Keep up the great work :)
PP
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Morrow Disca
Reikoku Band of Brothers
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Posted - 2008.05.15 11:57:00 -
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This made me smile, i used to fly a kessie alot when i was an empire war dec monkey. Its a great ship to learn the PVP trade. Good stuff.
My opinions are my own, they may not match the opinions of my Corp or Alliance. |

Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.05.15 12:26:00 -
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I have completely finished chapter 2 now. Just slowly working my way through chapter 3, i consider this the hardest chapter because I have to make stuff up that actually sounds believable.
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Jorah Vulture
Minmatar Wrecking Ball Inc.
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Posted - 2008.05.15 12:28:00 -
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Great work mate! Pity I don't plan on training Caldari at all :P
Minnie ship guide some day? ^^ ---------------------------------- Like High Sec PVP? Join Wrecking Ball Inc. Free ships for newbies to learn! |

Rhak Amharr
Minmatar Metafarmers
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Posted - 2008.05.15 12:41:00 -
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Edited by: Rhak Amharr on 15/05/2008 12:41:18 Cool stuff. :)
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Uggster
Caldari FinFleet Band of Brothers
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Posted - 2008.05.15 12:59:00 -
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I think this post is.......
Id like to see more of this sort of thing !!!
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Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.05.15 13:37:00 -
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Originally by: Jorah Vulture Great work mate! Pity I don't plan on training Caldari at all :P
Minnie ship guide some day? ^^
I might have to now so many people have asked for one. let me finish this one first then i can decide.
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Steve Huntington
Arcana Imperii Ltd. Atlas Alliance
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Posted - 2008.05.15 14:01:00 -
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Quote: Despite the rumours, travelling through hyperspace is not like dusting crops.
how good is the kessie at shooting womprats?
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brinelan
Caldari Victory Not Vengeance Intrepid Crossing
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Posted - 2008.05.15 14:01:00 -
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This is awesome. The Kestrel was my favorite ship back in the day. Still use it once in a while for pvp. --------------------------
Some days you're the bug, some days you're the windshield |

Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.05.15 14:35:00 -
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Originally by: Steve Huntington how good is the kessie at shooting womprats?
i believe it can render entire regions uninhabitable from orbit. hows that for womprat ganking?  Azia Burgi http://azia.geekandproud.co.uk BP Profit Calculator EVE Cemetery |

Alz Shado
Ever Flow
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Posted - 2008.05.15 15:29:00 -
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Originally by: Azia Burgi
Originally by: Steve Huntington how good is the kessie at shooting womprats?
i believe it can render entire regions uninhabitable from orbit. hows that for womprat ganking? 
So in other words, it'll do nothing against a cochroach infestation.
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Roy Batty68
Caldari Immortal Dead
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Posted - 2008.05.15 15:41:00 -
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3.3 General Cleaning 
Due to the various cowlings, radomes, launch tubes, launch tube vents, and other various nooks and crannies that cover the front end of the Kestrel, it is highly adviseable NOT to fly through the explosion ball after you pod the **** out of someone. Yes, we know it looks very cool when pilots do it in the movies. But trust me, scrubbing frozen corpse goo out of missile bay 3 is not how you want to spend your Saturday.
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Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.05.15 15:49:00 -
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Originally by: Roy Batty68 3.3 General Cleaning 
Due to the various cowlings, radomes, launch tubes, launch tube vents, and other various nooks and crannies that cover the front end of the Kestrel, it is highly adviseable NOT to fly through the explosion ball after you pod the **** out of someone. Yes, we know it looks very cool when pilots do it in the movies. But trust me, scrubbing frozen corpse goo out of missile bay 3 is not how you want to spend your Saturday.
i like that! can i use it, please?
Azia Burgi http://azia.geekandproud.co.uk BP Profit Calculator EVE Cemetery |

Roy Batty68
Caldari Immortal Dead
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Posted - 2008.05.15 15:50:00 -
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Edited by: Roy Batty68 on 15/05/2008 15:52:21
Originally by: Azia Burgi i like that! can i use it, please?
Of course! 
Edit: Although you might want to run it through a grammer/speel checker. 
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AlienHand
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Posted - 2008.05.15 15:56:00 -
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Great manual!
How to fit the Manticore for covert op?
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Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.05.15 15:58:00 -
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Originally by: AlienHand Great manual! How to fit the Manticore for covert op?
you'll have to wait for Manticore manual for that.
Azia Burgi http://azia.geekandproud.co.uk BP Profit Calculator EVE Cemetery |

OffBeaT
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Posted - 2008.05.15 16:01:00 -
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a good low sec tank setup for ratting that any noob can do in a kest that i use with my noob account..
noob setup for ratting in low sec with low ship skills.
2 standerd missile lunchers. 2 rocket lunchers for when you get rushed buy the frig rats. 1 meduim shield 1 damp or ecm for defance just incase somone drops in on you ratting. 2 pdu's the best ones you can get.
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Tyria Sharken
Minmatar TalCorp Enterprises Einherjar Alliance
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Posted - 2008.05.15 16:15:00 -
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Quote: wouldn't rockets be a better choice on a drone killer? and an AB/MWD?
Possibly.. but then, with rockets you'd have to actualy get 'close' to the drones.. which likely gets ya withen webbing range once someone realizes your shooting up their drones.. missles give ya a bit of distance and 'safty' And as for the ab.. i couldnt fit one on my current settup as i have a EW module on it as well as the TP =D --------------------------------------------- "Only two great species on this planet take part in massive, organized warfare. Men, and ants." |

AlienHand
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Posted - 2008.05.15 16:21:00 -
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Originally by: Azia Burgi
Originally by: AlienHand Great manual! How to fit the Manticore for covert op?
you'll have to wait for Manticore manual for that.
I'll wait then ;)
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Tyria Sharken
Minmatar TalCorp Enterprises Einherjar Alliance
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Posted - 2008.05.15 16:31:00 -
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Originally by: Tyria Sharken
Quote: wouldn't rockets be a better choice on a drone killer? and an AB/MWD?
Possibly.. but then, with rockets you'd have to actualy get 'close' to the drones.. which likely gets ya withen webbing range once someone realizes your shooting up their drones.. missles give ya a bit of distance and 'safty' And as for the ab.. i couldnt fit one on my current settup as i have a EW module on it as well as the TP =D
Almost forgot to add, with my current skills i can lob light missles 33km so =D i have a long reach hehe. --------------------------------------------- "Only two great species on this planet take part in massive, organized warfare. Men, and ants." |

Azia Burgi
Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.05.16 17:38:00 -
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Just done a small update, added information on the computer systems and i have started work on the cleaning section.
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Azia Burgi
Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.06.24 05:03:00 -
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I have now finished my IRL stuff that prevented me from completing this project. All sections are done, apart from section 3.6 Pod Systems.
Please let me know what you think and I'll also start considering suggestions for a follow up manuals. Bear in mind that I mainly fly Caldari and some Amarr. Gallente /Minmatar ships would require me to consult you guys a lot more during the production of the manual.
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Azia Burgi
Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.06.25 15:05:00 -
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Ok, here it is! the completed version! Please let me know if you spot any mistakes or can think of anything to add.
I had loads of fun making this guide and I hope that at least some of it is useful to you. I'm now open to suggestions on what ship you guys think I should tackle next. Preferably a T1 ship!
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Rhanna Khurin
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Posted - 2008.06.25 15:15:00 -
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cool, great read.
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Ringo Jeicha
State War Academy
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Posted - 2008.06.25 15:41:00 -
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Lol @ starwars reference 
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Azia Burgi
Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.06.25 15:47:00 -
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Originally by: Ringo Jeicha Lol @ starwars reference 
I tried thinking of a Trek reference too but they were all far too obvious and well, crap.
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Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.08.20 02:40:00 -
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I'm thinking of doing another of these, does anyone have any special requests? preferably Tech 1 ships only. Although a guide to a faction ship would be cool 
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Soporo
Caldari
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Posted - 2008.08.20 03:22:00 -
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Scorpion. Excellent in it's role, cheap and versatile. You can solo in this ship, and it's Caldari...astonishing I know.  |

Davina Braben
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Posted - 2008.08.20 03:25:00 -
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Quote: it is highly advisable NOT to fly through explosions during combat. It looks very cool when pilots do it on holo-reels, but scrubbing frozen corpse goo out of missile bay 3 is not how you want to spend your Saturday afternoon.
Hehehhehe |

Ospi Alrath
Lutkat
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Posted - 2008.08.20 09:28:00 -
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Fantastic manual! I have one floating in the pod liquids at this very moment.
Only thing I'm missing is a proper cover sheet, could someone with photomanipulation skills bring the ancient Haynes series feel to it? 
http://www.car-stuff.com/store/images/prodimage/images/haynes/H1668031.jpg |

Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.08.20 14:46:00 -
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Originally by: Ospi Alrath Fantastic manual! I have one floating in the pod liquids at this very moment.
Only thing I'm missing is a proper cover sheet, could someone with photomanipulation skills bring the ancient Haynes series feel to it? 
http://www.car-stuff.com/store/images/prodimage/images/haynes/H1668031.jpg
I'll see what I can do.
So just one vote for a scorpion manual? any other suggestions?
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Red Panda
VMF-214 Blacksheep
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Posted - 2008.08.20 15:49:00 -
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You should add 2 pages of legal text from the builder of the ship. 1 page of safety measures. Dont forget to add that the ship isnt designed to be used in a nuclear power plant ( /emote points to the Windows lisences ) |

Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.08.20 23:05:00 -
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Originally by: Red Panda You should add 2 pages of legal text from the builder of the ship. 1 page of safety measures. Dont forget to add that the ship isnt designed to be used in a nuclear power plant ( /emote points to the Windows lisences )
that would only work if this was the official manual.
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Rawr Cristina
Caldari Omerta Syndicate
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Posted - 2008.08.20 23:36:00 -
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Nicely done This is great, I'm tempted to do one myself ...  |

GallenteCitizen20080615
Gallente Federation War News
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Posted - 2008.08.20 23:37:00 -
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moar  |

Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.08.21 03:09:00 -
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Originally by: GallenteCitizen20080615 moar 
more of which ship though?
Originally by: Rawr Cristina I'm tempted to do one myself
nothing stopping you 
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Sharupak
Minmatar Knights Of the Black Sun
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Posted - 2008.08.21 05:03:00 -
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I am so torn, part of me is going..."Oh god, must be a tech writer." But the nerd in me is going "This is the most awesome thing you will ever read!" LOL! It made me laugh and for that I thank you. |

Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.08.21 06:09:00 -
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i'm glad you liked it. I've never written a tech manual in my life, I do love reading the cut-away sci-fi books though. I kind of wish i had the talent to do that.
long live the inner-nerd 
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Hormone1971
Caldari silvestrus
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Posted - 2008.08.21 06:47:00 -
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Go a Drake or Raven manual.
Also you were the very first person who was nice to me when i was a newbie, so thank you for that. I am nearly 4.3mill SP now.
love the manual! |

Reven Cordelle
Caldari School of Applied Knowledge
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Posted - 2008.08.21 08:11:00 -
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Haha, not bad.
Some of the terminology seems like advertising over an actual user manual however. Most users of a light frigate probably wouldnt need to know that the kestrel can travel over 2000 times the speed of light. Thats generally irrelevant information.
Alongside the stated uses of the kestrel, it seems more like marketing.
What I'd like to see is some more elaboration on the inner functions and working of the ship. How to connect your pod, weapon calibration, sensor cluster maintenance... including diagrams and things. You're on the right track but I wanna see more nitty gritty things. Stuff that isnt generally mentioned ingame, but obviously would exist in one way or another.
Not entirely sure who originally developed the kestrel. You can get creative though, instead of just a kestrel... maybe a "Propel Dynamics K1-A "Kestrel" Light Missile Frigate" .
Just throwing that out there. |

Rawr Cristina
Caldari Omerta Syndicate
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Posted - 2008.08.21 08:17:00 -
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Edited by: Rawr Cristina on 21/08/2008 08:17:42
Originally by: Reven Cordelle Some of the terminology seems like advertising over an actual user manual however. Most users of a light frigate probably wouldnt need to know that the kestrel can travel over 2000 times the speed of light. Thats generally irrelevant information.
That's completely not the point. These aren't IMO serious manuals that you should be reading to know how to fly a ship - just imaginations of what they might be like if you actually owned your own spaceship. 
Anybody remember Frontier? The instructions manual for that game was a Flight Manual for the Eagle Long-Range Fighter. 90% of the info was wrong, outdated or plain irrelevent but it didn't matter since it was great to read  |

Reven Cordelle
Caldari School of Applied Knowledge
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Posted - 2008.08.21 08:20:00 -
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Originally by: Rawr Cristina
That's completely not the point. These aren't IMO serious manuals that you should be reading to know how to fly a ship - just imaginations of what they might be like if you actually owned your own spaceship. 
Anybody remember Frontier? The instructions manual for that game was a Flight Manual for the Eagle Long-Range Fighter. 90% of the info was wrong, outdated or plain irrelevent but it didn't matter since it was great to read 
Well yeah but you know... Gotta get real creative to make it interesting! Serve up some real fantasy in the realms of the inner workings of the ship. There are some neat bits in there, but it needs moar. |

Azia Burgi
Caldari Science and Trade Institute
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Posted - 2008.08.21 11:32:00 -
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Its actually very hard to come up with credible material for the actual ship's inner workings. You are more than welcome to try. Most of this was written at 5am.
I intended this guide to be a cross between a buyers guide and an existing users guide. The first half of the guide is actual useful stuff, section 3, about the ship systems etc is something I added late in the creation for a bit of padding. I'm not sure many people want to read 28 pages of how I think the warp drive works.
I think I will do all the tech 1 Caldari frigates including the Ibis and the Caldari Shuttle. I'll see from there what to do next.
I'm trying to steer clear of tech 2 ships because I feel that they have a rigidly defined role with in the game.
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